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hey gyz sorr about the two dayz dely thanx for the comments actually i was too busy thinkin about the next part of the fanfic.
well i have tried my best to write this 1
hope u njoy it.
[COLOR=RED]it's night time and prem is in his room thinking about the mukti suddenly he heard a knock on the door.
prem: come in
the manager of the hotel comes and say: mr.prem there will be fashion show at evening tonight at our hall and every1 who is staying in this hotel gets a free VIP pass and u r invited too. its an offedr frm the orginizer and designer of this show. hope u will come{ and he give him the pass} and left frm there. prem doesnt say anthing. he was happy and confused dat how did mukti reached in statuse this high and he never herad of her afterall she is one of the best designer in this canada. and he go to bed to have some rest and goes into deep asleep.
it's nine pm and prem still sleeping suddenly he gets a call and he answered it it was some guy frm his office who was asking for some files , prem told him about the files and hung up. suddednly re relises that he is really late tfor the show and really late to see ukti he dont want to miss this chance. he gets ready so fast and went downstaris. but when he reachs there there was no1 except the cleaning guyz.
prem: hey u is show is over?
guy look at him and smiled: it's over an hour ago u r little laste sir {and laughed and get bck to his work}
prem returns to his room with a broken heart and bcz of that chance he missed to see mukti.
prem is in his room and holding the pictue of mukti and start to weeep and ask himself : if he didnt hurt mukti he didnt loose her and they might got married till now and spending life with eachother happily. i think i deserve it. bcz i hurt mukti and didnt accept her when she told me that she loves me. but if mukti sees me today she will only find love for her in me. i have waited for her so long and now i think it's getting even more difficult 4 me to live without her. prem console himself and try to put his mind somewhere else for sometime he turns on the tv andput the local news om. ther was a news coming of some accident that haapened in the city where was prem atr that time.
reporte: this accdent happend about happen an half an hour ago and some of the big personlity got injured really badly in this accident. the person who got injured are. mr robert olenso, miss rita mcguire the top model and mukti deshmukh the top Candain dress desginer.
when prem herad mukti's name he looked at tthe screen atonce. he saw some police officers were taking mukti and other people who got injured he ambulance and try to save life by giving her the first aid. prem turns pale when he saw mukti he a othappy that he found mukti but he saw here condition her eyes were full of tears but he wipes then down aand try o locate the hospital. he herde the ame of the hospitla from a cop which was R.fhospital. he got his caot and went out side and start to look for the taxi but he didnt get any taxui so start to run and ask ppl for the direction of the hospital. in the wasy he found a taxi and ask him to reach ther as soon as possible. whe he reahes at the hospital he runs toward the recepnist and ask her about mukti and she told him that she is the icu and tell him the way toward the ICU. he was so worried and he was running towar the ICU . he fell twice in the way and hurt himself on his head but he didnt notice about it bcz at that time he was only thinkin about the mukti. he reaches at the icu he sawe ukti she was wearing oxygen mask and doctors were trying to get her breath back by giving her treatment. prem was watching her throught the window, he was crying and he out his hand onthe glass like he wanted to tuch mukti and tell her that he was there but he couldn't bcz docor didn't let him in. suddenly doctor comes out and yells : anybody's blood group is O+ bz mukti needs the blood. prem was hearing all this he asked doctor to check his blood goup maybe he got that 1 doctor ceked him but it dint match. prem got sad and fell on his knees when doctor says it's hard for them to save mukti if the didnt got hte matching blood group and prem start o cry. suddely he saw a guy coming toward the doctor and says my blood gropup is O+. i am assistent of miss deshmukh. doctor took him inside and he donted his blood for mukti. after 2 hours doctor comes out and say: miss. deshmukh is out of danger now.
prem got tears of happiness. he goes toerd to see mukti but he stops himself and thinks wat if mukti reacts is negative way after seeing me i dont want mukti to get sick again after seeing me.suddenly he feels darkness infront of his eyes . he fels like everyhthing is moving around and he fells and got unconcious. the doctor took him for the treatment and did the dressing for him. when he woke up he saw himself in a room and his head was hurtin to badly. suddnely remebers about mukti. he got up and run toward the room but he saw no1 is her room. he went inside and look everywhere for her. but he dint find her. prem to himself where is she. is she alright? she was here some time ago. where shud i find her? he sits on the bed and stat to cry agian suddenly he feels that some1 open th room's ddor and he looked at the door and surprised to see some1'.

who' was it ? was it mukti or some1 else.
to be continued
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hey evry1 thanx so much for those great commments. well sorry 4 dely here is the next part.
prem sit on the bed nd thinks about the mukti suddnly he feels that some1 opens the door of the room. when prem looked at the door it was prerna.
prem:{surprised} mother india ????????
prerna got her eyes full of tears.prem: runs toward her: mother india i found mukti she was here from the time she left india. oh i can't tell u mother india hwe happy m i!!
prerna looks down with teras and prem asked her mother india arnt u happy that we found mukti?
prerna lookes up and touches his face and say
prerna: ofcourse i am happy beta. but{she start try cry again and turn around}
prem comes infront of her : mother india r u hiding something frm me?
prerna didn't reply. prem hold her tightly.
prem: plz tell me mom is everything ok?
prerna looked up surprisingly bcz he called her mom.prem was lookin for the answer in her eyes.
prem: plz tell me plz.
prerna: {wipes her tears} prem mukti is in COMA.
prem is shocked he fells on the floor bcz he felt like he can't stand on his feet. he started to cry so hard. prerna sits down and prem hugged him and start to cry even harder. prerna couldn't see him like this.
prerna: prem look at me beta. sambhlo apne aap ko plzplz. if u will be shatterd like this who will take care of mukti?
prem: i always bring bad luk for him i dont know why?i love her so much.

suddely a doctor comes in and says: mukti's heartbeat is sinking. and she is calling choti maa in her unconcious. do u know who's choti maa. maybe it will make her feel better if she would be there with her.
prenra and prem get up.
prerna: i am her choti maan. let's go doctor.
prem follows them with worries about mukti in her mind. prerna opens the door and se mukti who's ws fightting with daseth. doctor were trying to save her. suddenly mukti opens her eyes and looked at prerna: prerna rund toward her and says: mukti, meri bachi, i will not let hapeen u anyhting i promise. it was getting hard for mukti to keep breathin she wants to live but she couldn'tprem was outside the room waiting for prerna to come out suddnly
prerna: muktiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
prem herad the scream and run toward to the room and when he got in he saw doctor's are taking offf the mask frm mukti's face and they hide ther's face with white cloth. prem couldn't belive that prerna was sittin g on the floor holding mukti's hand by her bed.
prem: mom kya hua mukti ko?
prerna lookd at him and noded her head and looked down.
prem feels like everything was gone he lost everything.
he walk toward mukti slowly and shatred frm inside.
prem: no, no, she is joking right mom u alwys support her with her jokes. plz mukti stop doing this i dont belive u plz. mom aap hi bolo naa. tell her to stop this.
prerna gets up : prem beta. mukti is gona far away frm this world. she is no more.
prem gets angry: stop lyin mom u always said that u never lie but now u r.
he removes the cloth frm mukti's face,
prem: mukti plz get up get up plz get sto plyin this stupd joke
prem hold mukti frm her arms and lift it up plz mukti open ue eyz plz mukti plz. dont od this to me. { and he tartto shake mukit with a hope she will get frustrted and will poen her eyz and say saomthin to him. but she didnt. he hugged her and start to cry so hard .
well dat's it for today tell me how u like it
till
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