hum ko deewana kar gaye SEE PAGE 15 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

57

Views

13.6k

Users

31

Frequent Posters

Peanutt Butterr thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#31
that was gr8...plz continue soon...
Bookworm87 thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#32
wow, thanks for the update!continue sn!!
reena120 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#33
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon its gr8 👏
karen singh thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#34
plz conitnue soon plz
ur doin a great job 👏
*marhabbagurl* thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#35
hey guyz than for the wonderful comments sorry fopr the dely actually went to america for a few days.
well here is the next part
prem is moving slowly towards mukti's bed. and sits by her on a stool
prerna sees them and decided to go frm there so they can talk
prerna: mukti, ia m goign to see the doctor and make a call to mr. bajaj to tell about ur health{ and touches her cheek}mukti smiles and noded.
prerna left frm there. prem saw her goign out of the room and then looks at the floor. mukti who was expecting prem to look at her but he didnt'
mukti broke the silence: thanx prem.
prem finnaly looks up: for wat?
mukti looks at him and smiles: for everything ud did for me.
prem : looks into her eys and says. well dat's all rite, u just take care of urself ok!!! and he smiles back at her.suddnly doctor comes in.
doctor: how are u miss deshmukh?how u feelin?
mukti: much better doctor thanx. umm docotr when can i leave frm here ihave lots of work to do. i wanna goes as soon as possible.
docot: oh no miss deshmukh i am afriad i can't let u go for another 2 weeks. specialy in this state. this si not gud for u and ur baby.
mukti is shocked to hear this. so is prem
mukti: my baby? but docotr i dont have any kid?
docotr: stared at her for a sec: didnt nurse told u dat?
mukti:tell me wat?
doctor calls for nurse. nurse coimes in room.
nurse: yes doctor.
docotr: lisa didnt' u tolsd her wat i ask u to do?
nurse. oh ia m sorry docotr. i totally forgot about it. actually i was stuck in an emergency case i tottaly forgot about it. i will tell right now and she turnde to mukti who was looklin confused.
nurse: congo miss deshmukh, u r two months pregnent!!!
prem and mukti were stunned prem looked at mukti who was confused and dnt know how o react. she smiled first and then secon moment she start to cry. she cried so hard. prem couldn't see her in this condition. he tried to touch her forehead but she ddint let himn touch her start to hit him prem was getting hurt frm inside while mukti was hitting him and prem let her do this bcz he knew that wat she was thinkin and he got tears in his eyes looin at the mukti's this state. usddnly mukti realized wat she was doing he stop hitting hima dn start to cry . prem looked at her and try toi remove her hands frm her face . she didnt put he hand away frm her face and start to cry even hard then the last time.
prem was loking at here and try to make her stop crying.
prem: plz look at me plz but she didnt listen to him. prem got angery and he screamed and hold her hand so hard and remove from her ace.: mukti!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! listen to me he hols he so toghtly frm here arms. mukti was lookin at him and was frighten bcz prem screamed so ,oud she was still crying and ters were fallin out of her eyes and she closed her eyes. then suddnly prem relisew wat he was doing and he loosen his griffen a litle bit and wipes the ters frm her eyes. she didnt open her eys an d prem liad her down.
prem: docotr i am sorry for that behaviour can u plz got out frm here for a while i need to talk to her. docotr left frm there without saying anything. prem turned to mukti who was cruying quitly so noboday can hear her siskiyaan{ sorry guyz forgot the eng word}. prem sits by her and ask her to pen her eyes and look at him but she didnt. mukti: plz prem dont do this?
prem: yelle: whjy the hell r u doing this to urself haan? cn't u learn how to live?
he puts his hand on his face and start to cry mukti heard him crying. she opened her eys slowly and looked at him she sits up and lookes at him again she was still crying. the she looked at prem again and remove his hands. she ws shocked when she saw prem's eyes were red and he was crying.
preml looked at her and says: mukti i cant; see u like this plz. don punish urself for themistake i did. i noe wat i did was wronmg buit still i ahave a hope that u will forgive me.
mukti: prem it's no aboptu the forgivness anad about the thigs u did to me to hurt me. it's bcz this baby. every women has a dream o ahve some1 who can call her mother. but baby also need a father. and this kid have no father bcz i dont knoe who is the father is u or sharad. i dont want sharad to be this baby father. and....
and she stops. prem knew wat she wanted to say but he remain quite he didnt' say anything and left frm the room . outside he saw prerna crying and lisnting to all the conversation. she gave a look that says he didnt changed at all. he is the same ud and left toward mukti's room woth tears without saying anything. prem comes out the hospital. and start to walking he was getting the flashback of the valentine night and courts with the playback song of kabhi alvida naa kehna.
suddenly he heard the bells ringing frm a church. he went to church and sat on the benches and looked at mary who was holding a kid. he remeber wat docot says and he put his head dow and sart to cry. suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder.


HPE U LIKE PLZ TELL ME SHUD I CONT OR NO. ONCE AGIN THAN X FOR THE GREAT COMMENTS
mandy07 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#36
continue soon n thanxs 4 updatin
---Samaira--- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#37
aww its so sweet do count soon 😉
*marhabbagurl* thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#38
hey guyz thanx so much for the lovely comments here's the next part.
prerna went to mukti to console her but she was crying uncontrobly. prerna was trying to distract her by giving the instruction of how to take care of the kid and how to take care of urself but mukti was lost in her own thoughts. suddenly mukti ask herself.
mukti: how's ur father.
prerna who was trying to hide her tears and giving instructions suddely stops aznd looks at mukti.
mukti who was talkin to herself didnt realise that prrna was listing to her.
mukti: who's ur dad? jab yeh bacha paida ho ga to i will be most happy person in the world bcz ur a part of me. but jab yeh bacha bada hoga aur mujhse poochega apne papa ke bare mein to main isko kyaa jawab doogi isse? log ise bin baap ki aulad kahenge and i can't bear this. wat will i do how will i answer ur question? tu is duniya mein mere zariye aaiga. mein teri tqleef nahi dekh sakoongi. isse acha hai ki tu is duniya mein na aaye.
prerna who was lookin down and listing to all the things mukti said suddly looks at mukti with a question in er mind. wat is she saying?
mukti: haan yehi theek hai.i will not let u come into this world bcz i coudn't see u crying for ur whole life for jus to know about ur father.
mukti wipes her tears she got up and went to doctor's cabin. prerna tried to stop her but mukti ignored her.she went to doctor.
mukti: heloo doctor.
docotr looks at mukti: miss wat r u doing here u shud be resting u r not suppse to move frm ur bed atleast not for a week.
mukti who was not able to stand on her feet bcz of weakness. she hold onto the chair and says.
mukti: doctor. i want an abortion.
doctor was surprised to hear this. and so was prerna.
prerna: mukti!!!! yeh kya keh rahi. r u in ur senses?
doctor: miss mukti i can't do this bcz of the accident ur so weak to have an abortion and it even dangereous for u to abort this child. i am sorry i can't do this.
mukti:{got tears in her eys} no doctor i dont care about me. i dont want his child plz help me plz and she start to scream and suddely fell down and become unconciouse. prerna was shocked to see trhis.
prerna: mukti mukti beta utho plz. docotr do something.
doctor clled for help some ward boyz came in and lift mukti and put her on the strtur and take her to her room. prerna was running behind the docotr was was goignt o the mukti's room.
doctor: plz u stay right here, plz dont worry we will try opur best.
prerna was wandering outside of mukti's room. and then she called prem's cell but he didnt' picked up on other hand he was in the church.in the church he was sitting with the father of the church it {it was the sam guy who put the hand on his shoulder in last episode} he told everything to fther and confessed everything infront him about the rape case and hurting mukti's feelings. father listen to everything including the pregnenecy of mukit.
father smiles and looks a prem . prem looked at him and got confused
prem: how come u r smiling.
father: i am smiling at god's miracle and u who can't understand it.
prem who was still confused asked: miracle and me . i dont understand wat is ur mean?
father: look son, u luved mukti frm beg. but u ddint realised it and that's why u hurt mukti.now god have given u a chance to get mukti back in ur life.
prem: father plz tell me clearly wat shud i do?
father: alrite son i am gonna tell u in straight words. after that it's up to u if u wanna take this last chance or not. go to mukti. marry her accept her child. even if it's not urs. u know that u luv her and she knows that she is not able to forget u. remeber it's not her fault for the satause she is in right now. its ur fault. but now u confessed infront of god. he gave u second chance to correct ur mistake. go to her she need u.hurry up else it will be too late.
prem smiles and take father's hand and bend down and says u have helped me. i am eally thankful to u. then u got up and hug him and run towards the hospital. in the way he find his phone which was on vibe was ringing and he lift it up.
prem: ji mom.
prerna: prem beta.... wo..woh muk.. mukti!
prem:[got tensed}wat happen to her?
prerna told him everything he got shocked and hung up and run even faster.
hospital
doctor comes out frm mukti's room.
prerna: docotr, howz mukti now?
doctor: she is stressing about her baby's future.i dont noe why she wants an aboprtion. i think iat this time her husband shud be here with her. where is he?
prerna didnt' reply.
docotr: her husband needs to be here. where is he baby's father. suddnl;y prem came thier running and out of breath.
prem: try to control the beath. i am the father. how is she now? can i meet her [ and about to leave toward the room}
doctor stops him: not right now. she is iunconsious. but u knoe wat she needs u. and i suggest u to try to make her understand. this abortion can take her life away frm her. she is too weak and she need the rest. so u better take care of her.{doctor leavs frm there} prerna looked at prem who was in tears and trying to hide them frm his mom.
prerna:{ put hand on his shoulder} everything will be alrite dont worry. and she hugs him. prem start to cry then he wipes his teras and went to see mukti through the window.


well thats it fr today just tell me shud i cont or not
be honest i wont mind at all seriuosly. till then
take care 😊 😊
mandy07 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#39
wow dat was great mukti wants 2 abort dat child i hope she doesn't hope prem can change her mind
reena120 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
#40
it is gr8 continue soon 👍🏼 i ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ur fan fic 👏

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".