Fan Fic - Page 2

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Hey thank -you guys for all of the great comments. Heres the next part tell me what you think.=]

*This is now 3 years since Mukti has left the Bajaj House. In her absence the Bajaj family has gotten to know the real face of Debonita. Prem has kicked her out of the house but the two are still not divorced.

The scene starts with Mukti remembering Sneha. She misses her best friend so much, every time she wants to call her she stops her self from doing so but today Mukti is unable to stop herself from calling Sneha. She just wants to hear he best friends voice once again.

Sneha: Hello?
Mukti cannot speak she starts to cry.
Sneha can hear this and is trying to figure out who is on the other end.
Hello? Kyon hai?
Mukti: sss…ssneha
That is all that could come out of Mukti's mouth but that had said a lot
Sneha is shocked to hear whose voice it is and starts to cry
MUKTI?? Mukti tum kaho ho? Tum theen salo mein kaha thi? Mukti??
Mukti starting to clam down starts to speak with Sneha
Sneha tum kassie ho?
Sneha; main teek ho tum sanou… theen salo mein mere yaad kassie aye?
Mukti; tumari yaad tha bar bar athi thi mujme himmat nehi thi key main tumke saath baat karu I just couldn't do it Sneha
Sneha: fer aaj kassey?
Mukti: aaj muje tumari bahot yaad athi thi I just couldn't stop myself
After a lot of crying and catching up Sneha had to tell Mukti some good new
Sneha: Mukti chal mere mendhi ceremony hai
Mukti; Mendhi ceremony? Mathlab tumari…
Sneha : haan mere shaadi honi hai saying in a very shy way
Mukti: OHMYGOD!! Sneha I'm so happy for you. Congratulations
Sneha: thank you yaar ab tumko mujile kuch karma hai
Mukti: kya?
Sneha: tumko aana hai
There was silence for a moment
Mukti: Par….main…kassey…??
Sneha: please mukti please….

Mukti thinking to her self: So much time has passed I have moved on maybe I should go back and see how everyone is…I miss choti maa so much and everyone else….maybe it's time for me to go back..it's not like I'll stay ther forever after everything is finished with sneha I'll come back.

Mukti: okay sneha I'll come tommrow
Sneha: oh my god mukti ab main bohot kush hu I can't wait to see you
Mukti:okay sneha see you tomorrow bye
Sneha:bye mukti

Mukti thinking to her self: What have I done???

The next day Mukti makes her way back to the Bajaj house.It was just the same as it was they day she left. Mukti didn't want everyone to know that she had arrived so she decided to call Sneha and tell she had arrived and was outside the house.

Mukti: haan Sneha I'm outside
Sneha: ek mint ter I'll be there

Sneha thinking to her self: I haven't told anyone that Mukti is coming. I'll surprise everyone especially Maa. Ussko mukti the bohot yaad athi thi ab who uske samne hogee.

Sneha goes out side and sees Mukti near the garden and runs towards her
MUKTI!!!
They both hug each other and start to cry a little
Sneha: ab bas tujko surprise dene hai
Mukti looking confused surprise? What surprise?
Sneha: you just turn around and you'll see
Mukti: okay and she turns around

Sneha's on her phone with someone then that person comes out of the house
And Sneha tells that person to turn around she put Mukti and the person back to back
Sneha: okay turn around
Mukti turns around and sees her choti maa
Prena: MUKTI!!!!
They both hug each other and cry some more.


After everything has clamed down they go into the house. In the house Prena tells everyone to come down and see whose here. Mr. Bajaj, Tushaar, Doris, and Kuki come to see whose here. Everyone but Prem. They see Mukti and everyone is so happy to see her. There is some crying and hugging going on. After everyone has chance to meet Mukti things start to clam down. Mukti gets up and looks around making it look like she is just looking at the house but is really looking for someone.

After a while guest start to come to the house for Sneha's mendhi ceremony.

Prena: mukti beta ek kaam karogi?

Mukti: haa choti maa

Prena: Prem ke room se Sneha ka ek set leker aogi?

Mukti:par…choti maa…she was very scared of going into Prem's room

Prena was sensing her fear

Prena:Prem yaha hai nai who office main hai

Mukti:okay choti maa I'll go and get it

Mukti makes her way to the very familiar room. She opens the door and head for the cupboard and starts to look for the set. She could smell Prem's sent from the clothes in the cupbored those smells brought back memories of Prem to her. She couldn't take all those meories coming back to her so she found the set had started to leave the room when something caught her eye. There on the night stand there was a picture of HER. She picked up the picture. What was this doing here? As far as Mukti knows she still thinks Prem and Debonita are still married.

Hey who are you? And what are you doing in my room?

A familiar voice arose from the doorway but Mukti couldn't bear to turn around and face her past.

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omg dat was great plz update soon i can't want till prem finds out dat it's none other than his basanti who is in his room 😳

its really good.. continue soon!!

hey guys thanks for those comments
i left out the part of why mukti goes into Prems lol
i've put it in now enjoy =]

lols good u guys have good imagination.

plz update soon i can't wait any longer

its soooo good ... continue soon 😃 😃