Fan Fic

It starts when Mukti is leaving the Bajaj house forever.

From the window Prem sees Mukti putting her bags in the car. He thinks to himself that he has another chance to upset Mukti. He makes his way down to the driveway and sees his Mother India crying and leaving back into the house. On her way into the house she gives Prem a dirty look.

Prem:Uff is ko kya huya?

Prem makes his way towards Mukti.

Prem: Ms.Basanti where are you going? Woh be mujko sad ke?

Prem laughs

Prem: Callo where ever you're going, jalde vapas anna.

There's a lot of work to do. Aur tum ko ek hur event mere saath organize karna hai.

Mukti: tum kikse hor ko who kam dena, mein nehi karugi

Prem: kyu? Tum mere employee who, jo kam ma deta hu tum karugi

Mukti: ab se nahi…main yaha se hamasha liye jaraye hu

Prem is shocked to hear this.

Prem: par...par..mukti...tum…mukti

Mukti:tum kush rao Prem, hamesha kush

With those words Mukti got into her car and started to drive away, far away from Prem's life. Prem was left standing there until it finally hit him that she had left for good and wasn't coming back.

Debonita was in Prem's room watching everything unfold from the window and laughing to her self.

Debonita:Ab Prem mere hoyga,vho Mukti tho gayee. Nobody can stop me now

Prem enters the room. He looks at debonita.

Prem: tu? Yaha par kya karte hu?

He grabs some beers from under his bed and starts drinking them fast.

Debonita:Prem yeh tum kya karte hu?

Prem: oh just shut up! Don't be all fake around me!

Prem pushes Debonita aside and leaves the room. Debonita is left in Prem's room with an angry expression on her face.

Prem make is way to a secluded area and starts to cry uncontrollably.

Prem: Kyu Mukti? Kyu. Tum mujko kyu sad ke chal je??ab mein kya karu tumari bena??Mukti…Mukti…Mukti…

Prem passes out from all the beer he had drunk and is left lying there on the floor.

Aunrag is driving by when he sees someone lying face down on the ground and rushes to help them. Once he reaches the place he sees that it is Prem and trys to wake him up

Aunrag: Prem beta, Prem utho beta Prem

Prem wasn't waking up, Aunrag carries Prem put him in his car and takes him back to the Bajaj house.

At the Bajaj house, Anurag enters with Prem in his arms.

Prena: PREM…usko kya hua

Anurag: lagtha hai isne bouth beer peth hai, main isko room pe laegatha hai

Anurag places prem on his bed.Prem is lying on his bed, Prena thinks to her self that she knows why he did this o him self, because of Mukti

Prena: mere beta she says while stroking his hair

Tum ne kya keya?

Debonita enters

Debonita: Baggo, Prem kya hua?

Prena: Debonita tum Prem ko dekho mein ube athe hu

Preena leaves the room

Debonita: hah you deserve this

She sits down in the chair and starts to read a magazine, while Prem lays there unconscious.

* I know it sorta the same as how it happend on hte show but from now on it will be different. Tell me what you guys think=]

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Prena returns to Prem's room. She tells Debonita to go get dinner for Prem.

Prena: Prem beta mujko patha hai tum nai kyu yeh sab kitha hai. Mukti liye?
Prem just looks at his mom's face and doesn't say a word.
Prena: beta ab mukti kabie nai vapas iagee. Tum ussko bhool jao.Tum na bhoole tho bahut dard hoga. Ab tumari zindagidebonita ke saath ha who tumara chaal hai.Mukti is your past. Bhool jao ussko.
Prem still hasn't uttered a word. Prena gets up and leaves the room.
Prem: par jisse tum pyaar karthe ho ussko kassie bhool sak te ho?
Debonita was outside listening to what Prem was saying.
Debonita: Hah tumari mukti tho gaye ab main tumari zindagi begarugi haha

The next day everyone in the house are preparing for Prem and Debonita's wedding which will be happening in two days.

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heres the next part

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It starts as the Bajaj family is preparing for Prem and Debonita's wedding.

Prena: Birju kaka decorations door par laou, fir waha par
Prena was saying pointing towards the wedding mandap
Sneha: Mom Debonita ready hai
Prena: Okay beta main Prem ko dek kar athi who

In Prem's room, Prem is seen looking at a picture of Mukti with tears filling his eyes.
Prem: what is happening in my life, everything is going worng? Jis ko main chatha hu voh tho…tears are falling down Prem's face. Prem takes out two beers from under his bed. He does not want to be sober for this day. He does not want to remember the day he marries Debonita. He silently weeps in front of Mukti's picture while repeating her name over and over again.

Debonita is shown in her room laughing at her evil plan unfolding.
Debonita: Haha my plan is successful. Prem is mine and so is his house, money, company. Everything is mine I'm glad I got rid of that Mukti it made my plan easier. Prem's probably in his room crying over his lost Mukti. Haha bechara Prem, he isn't going to know what hits him after I get married to him. The Bajaj family will be on the streets while I rule there no no correction MY house hahaha
Monini enters the room.
Monini: wah Debonite tum kitne kabsorut lagthe ho, hai mera Prem ko kithe ache biwi mille.
Debonita pretends to shy away and flutter her fake lashes.
Monini: Ayo ab shaddi ka waqt aya
Sam enters to help Monini take Debonita down to the mandap.

Prena enters Prem's room.
Prena: beta are you ready?
Prem nods his head.
Prena: oh tumari jooti main abi leke a thi hu
As Prena was leaving Prem's room to go get his shoes she sees Mukti's picture on Prem's bed. She takes it without Prem seeing. Outside of hi room she looks at it and tears and beginning to fall from her eyes.
Prena: yeh mera pas rahuga
She wipes her tears and goes to get Prem's shoes.

Meanwhile in the room Prem is contemplating whether to go through with the wedding.
Prem: main kya karu. Prem spots his phone and without thinking dials Mukti's number.
Mukti is at her new place and sees that her pone is ringing. Her heart stops when she sees Prem's name on the caller ID. She thinks to her self whether or not to pick up the phone.
Prem: come on Mukti please pick up the phone
After a couple of mintues Mukti decides to pick up the phone. She picks it up not uttering a word and on the other end Prem knows that Mukti has picked up the phone he also cannot say anything.
Just then Prena enters the room.
Prena: beta yeh loa apki jooti . Now it's time to go down Prem
Prem puts on the shoes and still has the phone is his hand with Mukti still on the other end. He walks down to the Madap. With tears flowing down Mukti's face she can hear everything that is going on at the house. Prem places the phone beside his self as the pandit starts read out the chants. Mukti on the other end in crying uncontralably but is unable to put the phone. Prem also has tears falling from his eye. Finally they are married, Mukti hears it all and puts down her phone heartbroken. Prem and Debonita have gotten married.

Why did Prem call Mukti? Did he want to destroy her more or wanted her to speak and tell him not get married.
Why did Mukti not put the phone down when she knew what was happening on the other end? Does she still love Prem even though now he is married to Debonita?