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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyz i gonna put down some of my imagination tell me did u like it or not

Ch 1 it been over 3 months since mukti's father died with heart attack. she is livin in Bajaj House. scene Start with mukti in the confrence room with some of her clients waiting Prem to come.

Mukti: (thinking) oof yeh prem bhi naa kabhi time par nahi aata. lagta kisssi ladki ke saath flirt kar raha hoga.

prem comes in

Prem: I am so sorry about dat Gentlemen actually meri gaddi khrab ho gayee thi. ( and then he looked at mukti with a fake smile. and atart his meeting)

{after some discussions meeting is over and everboday left except PM}

Prem: "I am sorry mukti woh umm meri gaadi kharab ho gayee thi."

mukti: "prem its okay i have to leave now. chotti maan wait kar rahi hongi."{well she is till angry with prem for whatever he did with her bcz of sharad}

prem: "tumhe kahan jaana hain? i can give u a lift if u want."

mukti: "it's ok main bus se chali jaoongi." and left [prem stares at her while she left]

prem is coming back suddenly he saw two busses crashed into each other and people who wer in the bus died and got injured really badly.prem left frm there . suddenly he remeber about the mukti and turn back so quickey to the incident spot . he got off frm his car and saw lots of people crying for thier lost one. he started to get really worried and start running searching for mukti. suddenly he tripped over something and fell and hurt himself on his head. he saw that he tripped over mukti who was bleeding really badly and seemed like dead. prem looked at her and got shocked and thought she was dead . he hold her in his arms so tightly and start to cry out.people were looking at him.

Prem:{While crying} "Mukti u cant do this u cant leave me lik this mukti. plz mukti u can't do that to me." and hugged him so tightly and cried out again.

suddenly he feels that mukti was breathing. he looked at mukti and lift her up into his arms and start running toward ambulane on the spot. and took her to the hospital. docter take her into opreation theater and ask prem for the dressing for his injury. he is really quit and not replying and sits in the floor. Prerna and Bajaj Arrived at the hospital. And they saw Prem on the floor with his head on his knees.

well tell me how u gyz like it if u do i will post the next part soon

hope u njoy😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i luv it if only ekta cud think of this
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
its realli goodd, continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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u need 2 giv ekta some ideas!!!! 😆 ...gr8 job! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG great starting please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its awesome...plz cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its gr8 yaar-count soon! plz post ur nxt part today 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanx guyz look like u enjoying it.here is the 2nd part
chat 2 hospital scene

prerna and Bajaj come toward to prem who is sitting on floor with his head on his knees. prerna and bajaj looked at his this state. prerna sits with him and put his hand on prem's shoulder. prem lift his head up and see that its prerna. prerna is really shocked to see him in this state ❓. prem hugs his suddenly and start to cry. Prerna start to cry too and
Prerna: Yeh kya ho gaya prem sab theek to hai naa? mukti kaisi hai?
prem still didnt answer he is crying and still hugged her really tight.
Prerna lift his head up and says
Prerna: Beta dekho meri taraf. tum gahbrao mat sab theek ho jayega.bahgwan par bhrossa rakho.Mr. Bajaj aap hi samjhaeeye naa.Dekho kaise toot gaya hai.
mr. Bajaj: prem beta tumhe to bhut chot aayee hai chlo docter ke paas. chlo
prem have still hugged his mom and dont let her go.
prerna: beta utho beta dressing karvao. main hoon naa mukti ke paas chale.
Prem: woh, woh theek to ho jayegi naa?
prerna: haan beta
Mr. Bajaj: chlo ao prem{prem refuses} plz beta chlo dekho khoon beh raha hai.
mr bajaj take him to docter and left frm there.
Prerna is outside the opration theater thinkin about the condition about Mukti and Prem.
suddenly a doctor comes out of operation thetre
Prerna: Doctoe ab mukti kaisi hai? woh theek to hai naa?
Doctor: dekhiye we are trying our best. khoon bhut beh chukka hai.plz aap apne aap ko sambhaliye. hum koshish kar rahen hain.po abhi bhi chal raha hai.

Doctor left from there and prerna sits on the chair and start to cry again. suddenly Mr. bajaj comes .
Mr. Bajaj: prerna, kya hua, mukti theek to hai naa? kya doctors ne kuch bataya.
Prerna tells him wat doctor told her about mukti . and mr Bjaj hugs her and says, SAB THEEK HO JAYEGA.

Mr. Bjaj: prerna tum prem ke paas jao use tumari zroorat hai plz jao uske paas main yahaan tharta hoon.
woh us kamre mein hai.
prerna wipes her tears and lest toward the room. when she opened the roms she sees prem lying onm his bed with his eys closed and crying. prerna comes toward him and wipes his tears with her hands. prem open his eyes and looked at her and suddenly sits up.
Prem: mom {prerna looks at hm starngly bcz he called her mom for the first time} Mukti Ab kaisi hai?
Prerna: Woh teek hai.
prem start to cry a little bit again
Prerna: beta maine kaha naa woh theek ho jayegi?
Prem: mom maine uisse kaha tha ki woh mere saath aa sakti hai. Par woh nahi aayee. kya main itna bura hoon? i care for her that's why maine usse poocha tha.
prerna:beta tumne kabhi yeh socha hai ki woh kyun tumse door rehna chati hai kyunki tumne uske saath dokha kiya hai. woh tumse pyar karti thi aur karti hai par jabse woh haadsaa hua hai woh pyaar karne se darne lagi hai.

Prem thinks about all the problems he create for mukti with saharad and how he rejected her when she proposed him.
Prem: parmaine to maafi maangi thi naa, to phir uske liya yeh sajaa kyun.
Prerna: shayad tumhe maafi mangne ki zroorat na padti kyunki agar tum uska saath detre aur uske pyaar ko apna letetoh aaj uski yeh halat naa hoti aur naa hi tumhaari yeh.
tumhe pata hai rema tum aaj uske liye itni chn=inta kyun kar rahe ho kyunki tum bhi usko bhut pyar karte ho aur karte the par tumhe iska ehsaas nahi hua.

pem starts to think about everythng and everymoment he spends with mukti with a abckground music of kabhi naa sukoon.

suddenly Bajaj comes in.
MR.bajaj: prerena, opreation ho gaya hai. ab mukti khtre se bahr hai.
prema and prerna smiled.
Prem: dad , kya hum usse mil sakten hain?
Mr. bajaj is confused and surprised that he called him dad and says: abhi nahi beta doctor ne mana kiay hai aur tumhe bhi aaram karna chahiye hum hain naa mukti ke paas, tum chinat mat karo. bas apna khyaal rakho. prerna main doctor se mil kar aata hoon."
and he left frm there prerna look at prem with a smile and prem huggs her again with a little smile on his face.
prerna: Beta ab aaram karo.main abhi aati hoon.{she is about to left prem hold his saadi's paloo and sayas
: mom Mere paas ruk jao naa plz.{prerna looks at him with a surprised look and sits with him and hold his hands and give a mother kiss on his forehead. and prem closes his eyes and tries to sleep while holding his mother's hand.

well tha's another part of today i will post third part tommrrow 😃 😃

njoy 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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dat was really nice n it was also very sad but it was gud plz update soon 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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THanks for the update please continue SooN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

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