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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
that was gr8!plz continue sn!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
here's third part thanx for the support
sc of hospital morning time.
prem is sleeping like a little baby and still holding his mom's hand all nite and bcz of that prerna didnt went to sleep. in the morning she was really sleepy byt she is watching her son sleeping like an innocent baby and she was thinking about all the things happened last nite and she is happy too to see dat her son has bin changed alot frm last nite 😃

while prerna was watching prem prem woke up and he opened his eyes lowly and looked at her mom watchng him. and then he relized that he didn't let his mom sleep bcz he was sleeping all nite holding her hand. he let the hand go suddenly says: woh iam sorry actually mujhe pata hi nahi chala kab main so gaya. meri wajeh se aap bhi so anhi payin. i ma sorry
Prerna: it's ok beta. pata hai prem maine kal tum me
ek aise prem ko dekha jo pata nahi kahan choopa hua tha. main yeh jaan ke bhut khush hun ke tumne care karna seekh liya hai.
Prem:par mujhe to mukti ki koi care nahi aise time pe toh koi bhi madad karta. i just helped her bcz u like her alot{trying to hide his real expresion}.
prerna smiles and undersatnd dat he dont want to show his reall expressions. mr. bajaj comes in suddenly he says: prerna mukti ko hosh aa gaya hai. woh ab theek hai.
prem hears this and runs toward the room of mukti. but when he reaches there by the door he suddenly stops and thinks that maybe she dont want see him bcz all he did to her and turns back wwith a long face. right behind her he ses prerna who is looking at her and saya: prem tu mukti ko nahi milega.
Prem; no shayd woh mujhse naa milna chahti ho aur is halat mein i dont want to bother her. {and about to leave frm there}
prerna; dekho beta main jaanti hoon ki tumhe pachtawa hai jo kuch bhi tumne mukti ke saath kiya.chlo mere saath tumhe mukti ko milna chahiye.
mr. bajaj: hann prem beta tumhari mann theek keh rahi hai.
Prem: theek hai {and they enter in the room of mukti prem sees mukti in all those bandages and feels really bad that he's about to cry but he didnt. he stops himself and went to mukti. mukti's eyes are closed. prerna comes toward her and sits next to her she looks at her start weeping. one of her tears feels on mukti's hand. mukti opens her eyes slowly and look at her then she smiles and says: chotti maan ab rkyun ro rahe ho. main to theek hun. zyayda chot to nahi lagi bas yeh doctor hain naa waise hi opretion thetre main le jaatenhainmain to bilkul theek hoon. prerna start to smiles and hugs ther and kisses her on her forhead. and left frm ther cring. mukti looks at mr. bajaj and says
"sir aap hi choti maa ko samjahiye naa. woh to chotti chotti baton par ro padti hain. aap dekh to rehen main zindan hoon theek hoon. aap samjhaiyte naa unko plz.
mr. bajaj smiles at her talks and puts his hinad on her hand and left frm the room. now prem and mukti are alone in the room. prem looks at mukti who is crying and her teras are fallinf frm her eys to her cheeks.prem wipes tose tears with his hands. and syas: "mukti ab tum kaisi ho?"
mukti: theek hoon prem. thanx!
prem: kis liye?
mukti: sir nemujhe sab kuch bata diya. thanx for saving my life.
prem try to smiles a little bit. mukti suddenly see the badage on prem head and ask: "prem yeh chot kaise laggi"
prem touches it and says: woh kal ki aftra taffri mein ummmmm lag gayee. i am ok{and try to smile agian}
ok mmukti ab tum aram karo. i have toumm go somewhere.
and he leaves the room while wiping his tears and mukti sees it and start to cry too. while she was crying prem sees her thru the window and feels bad. and went to his mom.

that;s it for today tell me how u like it

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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
Thnks 4 the update cont sOOn!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
that waz gr8 yaar! Cont. ASAP!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
hey every1 now i am gonna put a new twist in this story or wat u guyz say in hindi? haan KAHANI MAIN TWIST
here we go
part 4
prem sees mukti get upset and go hhis mom. while he was going back to his room he sees lots of wardboyz geeting some1 on strectur. the preson on structures is unconcious and his face is half coverd with the white cloth and lots of police cops suddenly come into the hospital. prem looks at that person and thinks he had seen these eyz b4 but where doesn't remeber. well he left frm there and went to his room. doctor bring that guy into icu and start his teartment. some cops are talkin to eachother
hawaldar1: pata nahin bachga ki nahin. itni goliyaan jo kha lin hain.
hawaldar2: par uske paas yeh neend ki goliyan ayein kaise?
hawaldar1: yaad hai raat bhar jagta rehta tha. aur bimar ho gaya tha. aur kehat tha ki mujhe neend nahi ati yeh woh. lagta hai doctor ne use neend ki goliyaan dee hogi par hame kyaa pata th woh galat istemal karega.
Hawadar1: bade baap ki aulaad hai naa jail mein neend kaise ayegi. reash ke uper sota hoga. humph bade baap ki bigdi aulaad!

suddenly doctor comes i and say : woh ab khatre se bahar hai par haan use abhi kuch din under observation rakhan hoga. yeh to koi karishma hai ko woh itni golyiaan khane ke baad bach gaya.

Police inspector: ky hum us se mil sakten hain.
doctor: nahin abhi nahin woh abhi bhi behosh hai. let him rest for a while.

on other side prem was sitting in his room and thnking about mukti and her condition after that accident. he didn't even relized dat prerna has entered in her room. she brought food from home.
Prerna: lo beta khaana kha lo. yahnn hospital ka khan tumeh raas nahi ayega. sabh tumhari pasand kaa hai sorry mera man raazi hi nahi hua westren food lane ko pata nahi kya kuch hota hai usem abhi tumhare liya ghar ka kahaana hi theek rahega. ia ma sorry bet but u have to eat thins healthy food.
Prem: {tries to bring a little fake smile on her face}
its ok main baad mein khaa loonga. ummm mukti ne khayaa. woh main aise hi pooch raha tha.
prerna: nahi usne kaha ki use bhookh nahi, hai maine bhut koshis ki par nahi maani mr. bajaj ne bhi bhut kaha. bhut ziddi hain naa. tum khaa lo.
Prerna left frm there and prem thinks he shud go to mukti and convice her to eat food. and he took the food box with hi and go to mukti's room. he enters in the room mukti is awaken and lookin at other side and when he hears the door opem he looks at the door there is prem with holding food in his hand.
prem: woh mom ne batya ki tumne umm khana nahi khaya. and woh doctor was sayinf if tumne time per khana na khaya to aur bimaar pad jaogee. wo h doctor ne kaha isliye main food leke ayya.
mukti: nahi prem mujhe bhookh nahi hai[ and trun her face other side]
prem looks down but he decided dat mukti have to eat the food.
prem: mukti delkho tumhari narazgi mujh se hai khne se to nahi naa. plz kha lo agar mere samne nahi khan to main umm i will leave but plz mukti.
Mukti: baat woh nahi hai i just not hungry[get's angry] now can u plz leave{she shouts}
prem stares at her bcz he never saw her dat angry and about to leave frm there wid a long face.
mukti suddenly relises dat she souts at him and feels bad and she stops him.
mukti: prem, i am sorry woh pata nahi kya ho gaya tha.
prem is till sad but
he says;: it's ok
and about to leave again
mukti: prem mujhe bhookh lagi hai.
prem turn around and smiles mukti smiles too
prem open the box 4 her and she started to eat and then she asks: prem tum ne khaya kya?
prem: haan
dat's it for now
reply how u like it
SFatima328 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
aww very cute scenes! please continue sooN!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
tht was really good.. continue soon
sweetazsugar thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
😊 😊 aww luvly so count soon
^PoocHi^ thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
its really gud...plz cont sooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
that was really gud wow 👏

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