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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
love the fanfic, u definatly know how to write & hv great ideas

But can u plz continue as evry1 is dying 2 knw wt hapens nxt

Thnx
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
OMG how could you let prem die so easily like this! NOT FAIR Please dont let him die PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue SOon~! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG how could you let prem die so easily like this! NOT FAIR Please dont let him die PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe PLeaSe!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue SOon~! 😭 Good Job w/the fan fic 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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SORRY GUYS I WAS BUSY WITH MY EXAMS BUT WILL BE CONTINUEING IT AFTER 20TH OF JULY
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys sorry for this delay actually me exams are going but today i got some time so i thought to update but after 20th i regularly will update it

SO AT INDIA

TIME IS PASSING AND PREM AND JYOTI ARE GETTING VERY FRIENDLY AND PREM START LIVING HIS LIFE AGAIN EVERYONE IS VERY HAPPY TO SEE PREM SEEING LAUGHING AND ENJOYING AGAIN ACTUALLY JYOTI HAS GIVEN HIM NEW LIFE on other hand karan had started have some feeling for kasak and kasak olso became very friendly with karan and started living again and prena is very happy to see her both childs

PRENA and SNEHA are talking to each other just then prem come with jyoti tanya and amit's daugther and prena see all four of them jyoti ran towards prena and hug her saying dida

PRENA: aa gaye tum log jao fresh ho lo tab tak mein snacks tyaar kar wa deti aur ha prem office se karan ka phone aya tha aur tum to jante ho kal unke company ke do aur mem aa rahe so u have to go pick them up

PREM: are yes but kal to mujhe ak din ke liye panchgani jana hai but .............

kasak: dont worry bro i will go with karan to pick them up

prem: thats fine waise bhi kal to ...............(and think in his mind on this day only mukti left prem so on this he always go to panchgani becoz it was the start of thier lovestory)

sneha : so it is done achha now u both go to office and comp the work see you

prem: haa mein fresh hoke ata hu

PREna: kitna kush lag raha hai prem kuch din se

sneha: haa ma he is very happy and its all becoz off jyoti u know mom when ever i see jyoti i remember mukti's childhood same smile wahi chanchalta

prena: haa tum sahi keh rahi hu just then kasak say bye to everyone and leave

sneha: ma aapne ak chhez aur gor ki hai kasak aaj kal bhout kush rehti hai and i think it all becoz of karan apko nahi lagta hai hum un dono ke bare mein kuch karna chahyie

prena: mein bhi yahi soch rahi thi waise hum kasak se bhi pooch lena chahiye kya lagta hai aur karan kya sochta hai uske bare mein....................

sneha: mujhe to lagta hai he olso have some feeling but leave it to me i will take care for them mein kasak ki zindagi mein phir se kushiya lana chahti hu

prena: aur apne sneha

sneha : feel sad but just then doris comes and says snacks is ready where are the small girls and prem

girls come and jyoti say i will call dost uncle and hed for prems room doris olso smile and follows her......(sneha goes and hug tanya and khushi)

prena: thinks ak dim tumhari zindagi mein bhi koi aye ga zarror ...........................

AT UPSTAIRjyoti is about to open the doorbut cant able to then doris comes behind her and open and they enter prems room

jyoti is all shocked to see her mom's photo i mean mukti ans say mom..................................

DORIS: is all shocked and says come again jyoti

JYOTI: unty y my moms pic are here in uncles room

doris is all shocked just turn and and sees sneha had listion everything

sneha: bhabhi jyoti mukti ki beti hai.........................................

doris: mujhe to yahi lagta hai sneha meine tum logo se ak baath chupayi thi mein janti this mukti aus mein hai mere friend ke saath but i didnt knew ki...........................woh kaise hai

sneha: bhabhi aap saab janti thi aur apne kissi ko nahi bataya pechle panch saal se prem jalta raha mukti ke liye apko ak baar bhi taras nahi aya uspe...............................

doris: nahi sneha mein kya karti kayi baar chahti thi mein usko batau par baar baar mujhe mukti ko diya tha

sneha: par bhabhi agar aap ne humhe pehle bataya tha to hum kuch kar sakte the apko pata bhi hai prem pe kya beete gi jab prem ko pata chale ga ki mukti ko ak beti bhi ho gayi aur......................................................... .....ak min ............................jyoti ki age 4 se 5 saal ki aur mukti ko aur mein rahe hue............................................oh my god iska matlab hai jyoti prem ki ..................................beti hai mujhe prem ko batana hoga

doris: ruko sneha mat batao prem ko kuch bhi kyuki mujhe nahi lagta yeh bata ke hum mukti ke saath thhek kare ge aur waise bhi bhout dukh saha hai usne aur kal waise bhi mukti aa rahi hai kal agar bhagwan ne unko milana hai to kal nahi to kabhi na kabhi mila dege aur mukti ko khud hi batane do prem ko aur waise bhi bhagwan ko unko milana nahi hota to jyoti woh yaha nahi bhejte

just then prem comes to his room and shocked to see both the lady so shocked and ask y are u so shocked aur jyotikaha

jyoti who was busy seeing her mom was about to ask but sneha interupt them prem chalo food is ready and take jyoti from there

PRECAP: mukti is coming from one way at airport and prem is going in other way ...................................mukti is all shocked..................................................... ........at the airport

wil they meet

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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
very interestin!!!!! 👏 .....keep goin
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
Finally u updated, but anyways it is a great update 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98
(the last reply that i made it has nothing to do with this story so i'm sorry actually i was also reading another fan-fic where prem might have died so i wrote that, sorry though!)

Thanks for the great update!!!!!!!!!! Continue soon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#99
supop excelet plz continue soooon👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks WOW THAT WAS GOOD A REQUEST DONT DRAG THE SECRET A LOT (WE HAVE ENOUGH OF THAT IN EXTA SHOWS)

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