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Posted: 19 years ago
u havent continued in such a long time yaar. pleeeeeeeeeeez cont soon. we r all dyin 2 kno waz gunna happen nex
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Posted: 19 years ago
awsome-ly delicious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
way to go, i love this fanfic do update soooooon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Update, update, update, update soon plz.!!!! I am dying to read more!
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Posted: 19 years ago
plz update soon i can't wait 4 ur next update it's been lik 4ever since u updated so plz continue plz 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
very very very interesting please cont
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey guyz em new to diz forum......!!! 😊
and i have read ur fanfic dat iz really really good..!!
and i'll be w8ting 4 ur next part..!!!

plz cont soon 😭
em dying to read....!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago

soory guys for the delay

RECAP: SNEHA COMES TO KNOW ABOUT JYOTI AND MUKTI

IN THE MORNING AT BAJAJ HOUSE
IN PREMS ROOM

SNEHA: PREM I SAYING U Y THE HELL ARE U GOING TO PANCH MANI WATS TTHERE IS THE NEED TO GO THERE

PREM: TUM JANTI HO NA PANCHMENI MEIN MERI KITNI YADDIEN JURI HUE HAI

SENHA: HAA PREM PAR ...........................(IN HER MIND SHE THINKS )AGAR AAJ TUM AIRPORT NAHI GAYE TO TUMHE NAHI PATA TUM KYA KHO DOGE........

PREM: UFF SNHEA MEIN KAHA PURI ZINDAGI KE LIYE JAA RAHA HU BAS DO DIN KE LIYE AUR I KNOW U AND KASAK WILL HANDDLE EVERYTHING(THEN ONLY HIS PHONE RINGS AND ITS HIS MANAGER)

MANAGER: SIR APKI KAL KI TICKET BOOK HO GAYI HAI

PREM: WAT MEINE TO AAJ KE LIYE KAHA THA

MANAGER: BUT AAP NE TO .......................SORRY SIR MY MISTAKE

PREM: MISTAKE ...................U MADE ALL MY PLANS ...........UFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF NEVER MIND TRY TO ARRANGE TODAY ONLY.................

PREM: SHIT IDIOT .....................

SNEHA: AAB TO AIR PORT CHAL SAKTE HO...........................

PREM : HAAA CHALO

THEY BOTH AND HEAD FOR AIRPORT AND ON THE WAY THEY MEET A HUGE TRAFFIC AND MEANWHLIE KASAK KARAN AND JYOTI IS AT AIRPORT WAITNG FOR THE FLIGHT KARAN HAS ALLREADY TOLD TO MUKTI ON PHONE THAT HE HAS FEELING FOR A GIRL(DIDN,T MENTION HER NAME) AND MUKTI HAD PROMISE TO HELP HIM

AND THE FLIGHT LANDS JUST THEN ONLY PREM AND SNEHA COMES SUDDENLY PREM FEELS SOMETHING HAS HAPPEN TO HIM WHILE AT FLIGHT MUKTI SUDDENLY OPEN HER EYES ANS SAYS PREM......................

AT THE AIRPORT

JYOTI AND PREM HAVING THIER FRIENDLY TALK

JYOTI: UNCLE AAP MERI MUMMY SE MILOGE NAA

PREM: HAA BETA

JYOTI THEN SEE HER MOM AND SAYS UNCLE CHALO NAAAAA MUMY AA GAYI PREM OLSO HED TOWARDS THE MUKTI WAY AND....................................JYOTI RUN TOWARDS HER MOTHER HUGS HER FROM BACK....................................PREM STARTED RECOGNIZES MUKTI AND WHEN SHE TURN BACK........................................................ ............................................................ .

MUKTI AND PREM STARE EACH OTHER FOR A LONG TIME........................................AND REMEMBERING THEIR PAST ANS SONG IS PLAYED(WOH LAMHE FROM ZEHAR)ALL ARE SHOCKED KASAK,MAYA SNEHA

JUST THEN JYOTI IS SAYING MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

MUKTI: HUH LOOKS JYOTI YES BETA

JYOTI: AAO MEIN APKO APNE AK DOST SE MILATI HUU AND GOES TOWARDS TO PREM

UNCLE YEH MERI MUMMY

JUST THEN

KARAN: HI SIS

MAYA : HI KARAN AND HUG HIM

KARAN: HI MUKTI MAYA MUKTI THIS IS MR PREM BAJAJ ,KASAK BAJAJ AND SNEHA BAJAJ........

MAYA: HII MR BAJAJ KAFI SUNA HAI APPKE BARE MEIN AND LOOK TOWARD MUKTI

KARAN: SOO LET PROCEED

SNEHA: MAYA I WANT TO TALK TO U...................YOU ALL GO I COME

MAYA: MEIN JANTI HU TUM MUJHSE KYA KEHNA CHAHTI HU PAR MEIN MUKTI KO WAPAS LE JAA RAHI HU I AMM CANCELLING THIS DEAL

SNEHA(IN PROFEESINAL TONE): WAISE DEAL TUM CANCEL NAHI KAR SAKTI TUMHE CR KA NUKSAN HOO SAKTA HAI AUR MEIN SAB JANTI HUU DORIS NE MUJHE SAB BATA DIYA HAI AUR KYA KAHOGI APNE DONO BHAI SE KYU CANCEL KI TUMNE YEH DEAL

MAYA: ITS NONE OF UR BUSSINESS

SNEHA: THEEK HAI PAR MERI PURI BAATH SUN LO AND SHE DESCRIBE HOW PREM IS SINCE FIVE YR WHEN MUKTI LEFT HIM

SNEHA: ABB BATAO KI TUMHE NAHI LAGTA JYOTI KO USKE BAAP KA PYAR MILE MAYA MAINE JYOTI KI AAKO WOH KAMI DEKHI HAI

MAYA: AUR MUKTI KE DUKH KA KYA TUM NAHI JAANTI KI MUKTI KAISE JI RAHI THI PANCH SAAL PEHLE

SNEHA: TO KYA AAB WOH JII RAHI HAI MAYA MEIN MUKTI KO TUMSE AACHE TARIKE SE JANTI HU

MAYA................THINKS AND SAY SHAYD TUM SAHI KEH RAHI HO PREM NE JOO KIYA WOH USE MIIL GAYA HAI AUR MEIN NAHI CHATI MUKTI AUR PREM KI WAJAH SE JYOTI KO NUKSAN

SNEHA: TOO ITSE A DEAL THEN HUM UN DONO KO MILA KE HI RAHEGE

MAYA: ALRIGHT AND THEY BOTH SHAKE THIER HAND

MEANWHILE AT PARKING KARAN AND ALL ARE WAITING FOR BOTH MAYA ANS SNEHA

MAYA: HII WE ARE SORRY

KARAN: KHAH REH GAYE THE GYS WELL LET PROCCED TO OFFICE

MEAN WHILE PREM KEPT LOOKING MUKTI AND MUKTI WAS TRYING HER BEST TO IGNORE PREM

KASAK: MUKTI.........................

SNEHA: CHALE OFFICE

MAYA: MUKTI TUMMM GHAR JAO WAISE BHI TUMHARI TABIYAT THHEK NAHI HAI

MUKTI: THHEK HAI MAYA KARAN MUJHE CHOD DEGA

KARAN: I AMM SORRY MUJHE OFFICE MEIN KAAM HAI SAMJO NAAA

MUKTI: PAR KARAN...........................

PREM: MEIN APKO CHOD DETA HUUU

MUKTI IN HER MIND(YEHI TO MEIN NAHI CHATI THI UFFFFFFFFFFF BHAG WAN MUJHE WAPAS JANNA HAI AAJ AUR ABHI)

SNEHA AND MAY LAUGH EACH OTHER

PRECAP: MUKTI YEELS AT PREM JYOTI MERI BETI HAI SIF MERI

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