FAN FICTION - BY SHAINA - Page 14

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: NasH20

WOWOWOW shaina yaar u are the best...i missed u'r stories while i was away....that hospital wala part was the bestest...loved it...especially those slaps to idiot Anuj 😉 😆
now you keep going like this n continue soon...iam waiting for more. 😃

Thnx a lot yaar!!! but where were u?????????..I missed u very much!!!😭..........& I also luved the same prt yaar!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Ronitlover_4eva

😆😆😆Arre mera next prt nahin ana meri FF ka next prt kal aye gaa!

abey shaina wahi yaar 😭 meera mazak uda rahi hai😭aaj tune bhi mera mazak kiya chal jaaaaaaa mei ntere se baat nahi kartiiii ab chup rehna no need to send me pm warna cm ko tere ghar bhej dungi warna tujhe amrne mein khud aaogii samji😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow great 👏
do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

abey shaina wahi yaar 😭 meera mazak uda rahi hai😭aaj tune bhi mera mazak kiya chal jaaaaaaa mei ntere se baat nahi kartiiii ab chup rehna no need to send me pm warna cm ko tere ghar bhej dungi warna tujhe amrne mein khud aaogii samji😕

LOLZ!!! 😆😆😆................. Luv u yaar!
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Posted: 19 years ago


PRT 35


THE NEXT MORNING
@ ANUJ'S HOUSE...............
(Anuj is getting ready for the hospital ................and then he thinks totalkto Anuja)
Anuja's cell rings.....
Anuja--"Hello..........."
Anuj--"Hello Anuja...............I am Anuj"
(Anuja is going to cuts off the call & then Auj interfares)
Anuj--"Anuja plzz. listen to me.."
Anuja--"No I dont want to....Bye..................cutts the phone off"
Anuj--"Hmmmm.!! But how can she soo normal"
(Then leaves)

@HOSPITAL.....
(Mayank is sitting in a bed & doctor is examining him)
Doc--"Mayank...U r fine now"
Mayank--"Thnxx Doctor.....Iam sure that now I can go my home"
Doc--"I say u r fine......Hv'nt said absolutly fine.......U hv to wait till 2-3 daysto go home"
Mayank--"Oh no doctor...Thats not fair!!!"
(Just then Mayank cs @ the door & is shell shocked)

(Anuj enterz the room...............Mayank & Himself both r shell-shocked to c each other)
Mayank--"Anuj,.............."
Anuj--"Oh....man.......Thats y she was so normal"
(Then the other doctor leaves)

Anuj--"Hey.............wat happened man???"
Mayank--"Nothing.............just a little accident"
Anuj--"& where is Anuja & ur family..???"
Mayank--"They dont know abt it"
Anuj--"Wat......................."(Just y she was soo normal.......)
Mayank--"Anuj...wt r u thinking..???"
(Anuj comes out of his fantacee world....)
Anuj--"Wo Iam calling to ur house...............somebody must b herefor u...."
Mayank--"No........Na"
Anuj--"Comeon.............they r ur family membersz"
(Mayank is failing to stop him as Anuj is dialing a number...............suddenly .somebody takes away the cell from his hand)
(Anuj isshocked to c the face & Mayank is smiling)

Its Surween............................
Surween--"It seems to that u r a doctor....& the doctor's responsibilty is to heal & make the patient comfortable not to give him tension...............& U r right somebody hs to b wid him for his care..............I am here.& u can leave"
(Anuj's just hates her & leaves)

(Surween luks @ Mayank & smiles& then she sits next to him)
Surween--"Hu r u feeling now???"
Mayank--"Iam fine now...thnx to u"
(Surween smiles & holds his hand....)
Surween--"No.Its not needed here...............Its a formal word & is use when u r talking to a stranger"
( Mayank is lukking @ her continusly)
Surween--"And v r not stranger.............."
Mayank--"I know"
Surween--"Oh no Iam getting late...........I hv to leave Mayank"
Mayank--"Plz sit here for some time.............I wnt to talk to u"
continus.................


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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW...finally "LOVE IS IN THE AIR" 😳 n jealousy bhi buhat hai 😉 😆
Good shaina keep it up yaar. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
shaian ki bachii mayanki ki baat too prra akrtii 😭 when he said sit here i want to talk u than y u stop 😭 jaldi next part post kar i want to se love (mayank n surveen love 😆 😆 😆 )
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Posted: 19 years ago
shaian ki bachii mayanki ki baat too prra akrtii 😭 when he said sit here i want to talk u than y u stop 😭 jaldi next part post kar i want to se love (mayank n surveen love 😆 😆 😆 ) n keep rocking wid FF keep it up ok 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: aadorboseroy

shaian ki bachii mayanki ki baat too prra akrtii 😭 when he said sit here i want to talk u than y u stop 😭 jaldi next part post kar i want to se love (mayank n surveen love 😆 😆 😆 ) n keep rocking wid FF keep it up ok 👏

Ya I wil sweatheart!
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Posted: 19 years ago

PART 36


(Mayank holds her hand................)
Mayank--"surween..........plz sit down I want to talk to u"
(Surween sits next to him)
Surween--"Ya tell me! Iam late Mayank"
Mayank--"Plzzzz"
Surween--"O.K tell me but plzz hurry up"
Mayank--"Actually I want to thank u for aal u did for me"
Surween--"Wat..........???..U want to say this"
(Mayank cs Surween is getting irritating)
Mayank--"No actually.......I want to ask u that is everything O.K at ur home...........???"
Surween--"Y r u asking this???"
Mayank--"Actually.................U was wid me here till 8:00 PM @ night....& usually nearly 5:00 PM u reaches @ home"
(Surween smiles...............)
Surween--"Oh Mayank.........dont b so tensed! I was not @ home last night"
(Mayank gets a huge shock)
Mayank--"Wat .........???"
(Surween is laughing)
Mayank--"U r trying to say tht u were not @ home last night"
Surween--"Yes... Iam telling u the same"
(Mayank is sooooooooooooo confused)
(Surween laughs & luks @ Mayank who is sitting there wig a big opened mouth& continusly lukking @ her)
Surween--"U plzz sit here & let me go.....I am late"
Mayank--"but......surween......!!!"
Surween--"O.K bye"!!!
(& leaves frm there......................Mayank bows his head in unbeliveabe condition..............and is nodding his head frm here to there..............suddenly someone kisses him on his cheek)
Mayank--(just shocked..........................)
Mayank--"Surween"
Surween--(rubs his cheeks lovly)--"Chweeeeeeeeeeeeeetooooooooooooo,dont b upset.................I wil b here in the evening......wait for me here................."
Mayank--"OMG...........................I wil wait for u for sure"

continus.................

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