FanFic!page 9 *NEW*part 4 updated! ENJOY! - Page 3

its very good akii keep it up 😳

Originally posted by: hamzy

i want to become a devil. 😈

NAHI HAMZY NOT DEVIL PLZ HERO BANANO 😊

Good Going Again Aaki!
This is really funny, and Your little love story with prem.
😆

Trying to steal my man aaki..?HUH HUH HUH? 😆
😆 😆

Only Joking!
Continue please!


Anjali

Hi!
Aakriti, what to sya, you r the best.
Your stories just rocks!!!!
👏
R.j

thx! everyone! and hamzy bhaiya cant be a hero! cuz i m da heroine and hez my brother! 😉 u can definately be my evil brother! 😆 😆

thx pooni (poo) ek hi baat hain, anjali, julu, preprrttyyy and of course hamzy bhaiya!

thx R.j. for da wonderful comment! 😆

love u all!

(my lonnnggg thanks speech) 😆

when i actually recieve a award i will take all ur names! 😆

Part 3

Recap: Aaki, Poo, Julu, prepty, mukti and prem are going to the movies.

They just enter the car and neeti comes by: they all hug her.

Neeti: yeh tum sab kaha jarahe ho?

Aaki: hum movie dekhne jarahe hain!

Neeti: kaun sa?(curiously)

Poo: Hum dil de chuke sanam! (teasingly)

Julu: nahin nahin pyar kiya to darna kya (laughs)

Aaki: stop it guys! (Feels shy)

Prem: huh?(looks confused)

Julu: kuch nahin! (hehe)

Prapty: kaha na prem ka mamla hain! (hehe)

Poo: Aaki mar dale gi!

( all giggles ) and then aaki gets shy!

Neeti: aur yeh handsome man kaun!

Prapty: Handsome nat kaho aaki………

(All laughs)

Aaki kicks her and gives a lil kick as a sign to shut up!

Prem: I think I know wht u guys r talking about!

Mukti gives a evil look!

Mukti: of course u do! Honey!

Poo: honey?? Ohhh baat yaha tak pugchuka hain

Aaki is jealous! And prem looks confused!

Aaki: let's go!(tries to change the topic and has a lil bit of tears in her eyes)

We r gonna watch the final destination 3!

Neeti: wow I wanna watch it too!

Aaki: let's go!

Neeti: whoz driving?

Mukti: me! I wanna!

Aaki: nahin! I will drive! U just got ur license! So no!

Mukti: tumse kisne poocha? Waise mere mummy mein mera naam kyon Mukti rakhdiya! Mujhe is aaki se mukti hi nahin milti!

Aaki: o well! If u want mukti then u can go….b

(everyone is shocked)

Just then her mom comes and stops!

Mom: Aaki(yells) yeh kya aapni behen se is tareke se baat karte hain! Chal idhar aaja! Tu nahin jayegi movie dekhn!

Aaki: I don't care..(she cant hold her tears)

(There is a silence)

Aaki cries and then she slowly comes closer!

Prem is watching all this and he doesn't like it! He feels sorry for her!

Mukti goes inside with her too! She smiles to herself and then thinks that she has done a great job.

Poo: ogod! I hate her! (Evilly)

Julu: yeah she bugs aaki a lot! (Sad)

Prapty: I feel so sorry for her! Her mom is dead and her dad doesn't even know what goes on in the house! (she has a lil tears in her eyes)

Neeti: really? I heard that Aaki is getting married soon!

Poo: really? With whom

Neeti: I don't know!

(Prem feels uncomfortable)

Prem: so….r we going to movies?

Julu: No! We r not going without Aaki!

Prapty: did u know that mukti likes you?

Poo, neeti, Julu all shocked!

Prem: what?

(To be continued)

Do reply!

GOOD ONE aaki!!! hey but u can't take my prem away 😳 ..........just kidding, u can but only in the story 😃 It was a very nice story. Keep writing!

wow it's so good! omg it's really good! good work!

AAAKKKIIII im confused how are u and mukti related are u step sisters or somefink?????


btw gr8 yaar wohoooooooooo