FanFic!page 9 *NEW*part 4 updated! ENJOY!

Sorry I m doin it for 1^st time tell me if it is not good! And its confusin! Bear with me!

The story begins with Prem coming to US and his dad's friend (aaki's dad) come to pick him up.

Dad: hey Prem.

Prem: namaste Uncle. How are you?

Dad: I am fine beta.

Prem: Aur aunty nahin aai?

Dad: nahin! Woh tumhare liye gajar ka haluwa bana rahi hein!

Prem: wow chal te hain mujhe plane ka khana pasand nahin aaya!

Dad: Let's go.

(They sit in the car and then drive, so now they are in the way talking)

Prem: Ghar mein sab kaise hain?

Dad: sab thik hain! Aaki tumhe bahut miss karte hain!

Prem: (feelin shy) aww! Meine usse 15 years tak nahin dekha! Abhi to bahut badi ho gayi hogi!

Dad: haan! Tumlog 9 barsh ke the jab hum log yaha aaye the!

(they don't speak to each other for a long time and listen to music. They reach the home. They take off their luggage and then head towards the house. Aaki is impaciently waiting for them. They knock the door and then mukti (aaki's step sister) opens the door.)

Mukti: (Feeling shy) hello!

Prem: hi! Can I know who this is?

Mukti: I Am Mukti Aaki's step sister

Prem: Oh! I see! (He stares @ Dad)

Dad: (feels uncomfortable ) where is Aaki

Mukti: (evil look) I don't know! Anyways I never know where she is! Probably she is in her room.

Dad: prem beta jao aur usse mil lo! Usse achha lagega!

(Aaki is in her own way! She is listenin to Grillz and then putting her make up…..)

Aaki: (Rob the jewelery story tell them to make a grill..)

(prem is staring at her and he thinks that he is weird! Hez in the door staring at her and aaki doesn't know that prem is in the door)

Prem: hmm…..(smiles and coughs)

Aaki: yes

Prem: hey!

Aaki: (yells) chorrr

Prem: stops her by putting his hand in her mouth! I m not a chor I am Prem.

Aaki: Ohh….I! I ! I ! am so sorryyy!

(prem and aaki stares at each other)

To be continued!

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cho chweet aki! 😳 tumhari aur prem ki love story! 😳 very nice. 😛 continue soon. 😃

😆 ohh my my my
what have you done 😆
👏 keep it up 👏 \
i hope that mukti doesn't come on way
but your stroy said taht pream and muki fan fin
changed it and make aki and pream
so that good
😛

sure darling! its damn cute!! I think aki will dance "bani bani bani re bani, prem diwaani bani" 😆

😆 You got me laughing so hard...I thought it was a Mukti-Prem fan-fic but its a Aaki-Prem fan -fic....very nice and interesting, I hope ur evil stepsister doesn't end up marrying ur prem 😉 😆

akki really its funny wow i cannot controll my laughing oh GOD. 😆

😆 tumhari aur prem ki love story vah vah kya bhaat hai

Omg Yaar!
Brilliant! Continue!
Really Good!
😃
You Should really name your fanfic 'Prem Ki Premika' or 'PremAaki'
😆


Anjali

Recap: Aaki and Prem are staring at each other. And Aaki apologizes.

(There is background music while they are staring "pehala nasha pehela khumar……naya pyar hain naya intazarrr….."

Just then Poo (poonam) and Julu (juleka) enters the door and glaze at them [prem and aaki]

Poo: *ahem* *ahem* yeh kya ho raha hain?(smiles)

Julu: haan haan yeh kya hain?(both laughing)

Aaki: kuch nahin! Sahib jade humse flirt kar rahe hain (all giggles) (all of them Hug but not prem)

(Aaki looks in the mirror and fixes her hair and makeups!)

Aaki: poonam yeh prem…yeh juleka! Mere bachpan ke dost.

Aaki: poo aur julu bahut pretty lag rahi ho!

Prem: haan!

Aaki: tumse kisne poocha? (Laughing)

Poo: thx yaar…

Julu: prapty aur meine kal mall pe kharida!

Aaki: waise prapty nahin aaye?

Poo: woh bahar gadi mein hain….chal chalte hain...

Prem: waise tum log kaha jar ra ho? (flirtin way)

Julu: hum log picture dekhne jarahe hain!

Poo: tum bhi chaloge?

Prem: umm...(There is a silence)

Aaki says to herself in mind! O godddd!! I hope he says yes!

Prem: No…I have lots of work…sorry guys next time!

I promise.

(Just then mukti comes and then everyone is mad and stare at her! L)

Poo: (whispering to Julu) aaj ye kuch na kuch to karegi!

Julu: (giggles)

Mukti: hey prem, tum picture dekhne nahin jarehain?

Prem: nahin! Mujhe bahut kam karna hain!

Aaki: o come on! Plz… bahut maja aayega!

Prem: umm… ok! (smiles)

Poo: mukti, tum bhi aareheho?

Mukti: (evilly) duh…

Poo: wah! Hum ne kaha to ek hi pal mein NO

Julu: (continues) aur aaki ne kaha ho ek hi pal mein YES!

Poo: kuch na kuch to gadbad hain!

Aaki: (feels shy) ok ok stop now! Chalte hain prepty bahar intazaar kar rahi hain!

Poo: ok lets go!

(They all leave the room and then they go and talk to their parents)

Aaki: Dad, Mom mein picture dekhne ja rahi hoon! Prem bhi hamare saath aaraha hain!

Mom: ok! Magar jaldi aana!

Poo: Don't worry aunty… hum yu gaye aur yuin aaye!

Aaki: ok buh bye!

Prem: bye uncle and aunty!

(They both go outside and then meet prapty)

Prapty: heyy….

Aaki: hey prapty…(they hug)

Prapty: aur yeh sahib jade kaun hain?

Aaki: oh yeh! Yeh Prem hain…

Prapty: oh! Woh wala prem? Hmm…….

Prem: woh wala matlab?

Aaki: kuch nahin! (pinches prapty) yeh to kuch bhi bakti hain!

Prapty: owww! O really! Sab kuch bata du?

Prem: o god someone explain it! I m soo confuseddd!!

Prapty: there is nothing to explain! Its all about love!

Ends in Prem's face!

To be continueddd…

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wow aaki.....superb....brilliant job...you actually do write well....keep it up and hurry...i am waiting for the next part and to see the chulbuli me, poonam, juleka, you and prem of course!!!!!
hehe.... 😆