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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome noorie tis reallygood i read all da capters n its fantastic keep it up da hard work ,,,,,,,,sorry i mtoolate to reply buti read all ur fictions so dont mind???????? due to some probs i m not able t visit if so dont mind ........i enjoya lot ur fanfic 😆 its good
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Pyar hai Zindagi – continued

Sukhi is in the shower while Neetu and Noori are packing sukhi's and rohit's clothes

Noori: jaldi karo jaan quick

Neetu: it won't shut

Noori: kya

Neetu: haan di

Noori: sit on the suitcase

Neetu sits on the suitcase while Noori tries to close the suitcase

Noori: ok ok hogya

Neetu: thank god

Sukhi: hey guys can you give my clothes

Neetu: uh oh um ok di

Noori: shit her clothes are in suitcase abh kya

Neetu: except for this sari di u got her

Noori: give it to me I will give to her

Sukhi: arre jaldi karo

Then Noori quickly gives her clothes and Neetu quickly takes the suitcase into her room

Sukhi: thank you

Then Noori sees the time and realises its half past 7

Noori: arre Rishabh aur Rohit kaha hai they should be home now

Then Noori decides to phone Rishabh

Noori: come on pick up kaha ho

Rishabh: hello

Noori: kaha ho tum

Rishabh: I am on my way

Noori: jaldi karo nah

Rishabh: kyon missing me

Noori: nahi tou kyon

Rishabh: acha teek hai I will just you know go to dinner with nitya then

Noori: ok have fun bye

Rishabh: wait wait

Noori: kya howa (she tries not to laugh)

Rishabh: main tou mazaak khara tha

Noori: I know stupid

Rishabh: I can never live without u

Noori: yeh tou mujhe maloom hai

Rishabh: ok bye jaan

Noori: bye

Meanwhile kunal has comeback from training and is in a very angry mood and makes his way to the bedroom

Neetu: hey jaan do u enjoy training

Then kunal ignores Neetu and makes his way to the shower

Neetu thinking: arre kunal si kya howa he has never ignored me before

*10 MINS LATER*

Kunal comes out of the shower

Neetu: kunal kya howa ajj

Kunal: kuch nahi ok

Neetu: kunal tell me

Then Neetu sees bruises on Kunal's knuckles and then grabs Kunal's hand

Neetu: kunal yaha bruises kya howa training main

Kunal: nothing ok leave me alone

Neetu: kunal tell me the truth damnit

Then kunal pushes Neetu against the wall

Kunal: kuch nahi now stop asking so many questions

Then kunal lets go and Neetu and is scared

Kunal thinking: oh shit yeh Maine kya kiya oh no

Then Neetu leaves the room

Kunal: Neetu rooko tho

Neetu: go to hell (she says while crying)

Kunal grabs the lamp and smashes it on the floor

Kunal: DAMNIT

Then Neetu makes her way to sukhi's room and is wiping her tears and then puts a fake smile on her face

Noori: hey jaan is kunal back

Neetu: yeh (she says while smiling)

Then the doorbell rings

Noori: I will get it

Neetu and Sukhi: ok

Noori leaves to answer the door

Neetu thinking: shall I tell sukhi or not no I won't because then she will tell rohit and rishabh jiju and Noori di then me and kunal won't get married no its best I don't

Meanwhile downstairs

Noori: aw wow you going today

Rohit: yeh I can't wait to see her face

Noori: I will call her now

Rohit: ok thanks

Noori: SUKHI COME DOWNSTAIRS

Sukhi: chalo Neetu

Neetu smiles then sukhi and Neetu make their way downstairs and Neetu sees kunal and ignores him and goes downstairs and kunal follows

Sukhi: hey what's up di?

Noori: don't ask me ask your hubby

Sukhi: what do u want rohit?

Rohit hands over the envelope

Sukhi: yeh kya hai

Rohit: deekho tou sai

Then sukhi opens the envelope and sees its tickets to Maldives

Sukhi: yeh tou Maldives ki tickets hai we are going in 4 days time anyway

Then rohit shakes his head

Rohit: hum ajj ja rey hai

Sukhi: really

Rohit: yes really

Sukhi: hugs rohit

Sukhi: I Luv u

Rohit: Luv u too

Then rishabh gives thumbs up to rohit

Rohit mouths: thank you

Sukhi: leekan Maine packing nahi kiya

Noori: Maine aur Neetu neh kiya abh jao have a good time

Sukhi: thank u

Noori: smiles

Then sukhi and rohit make their way out

Sukhi: see u in 4 days

Noori: yeh bye

Rohit: thanks rishabh

Then rohit hugs rishabh

Rishabh: no prob brother

Rohit smiles

Then they leave and everyone waves goodbye

Noori and rishabh make their inside and just as Neetu was too kunal grabs her wrist

Neetu: kunal let go

Kunal: Neetu I am sorry I will tell what happened at training

Then kunal tells Neetu

Kunal: the guy was saying that I was worthless and everything and I only Luv u for your money

Neetu: awwww jaan

Kunal: yeh

Then Neetu hugs kunal

Kunal thinking: abh sirf char din phir (then gives an evil smile)

To be continued

Kya hoga iss kahaani main

Stay to tuned to Pyar hai Zindagi

Luv ya

Luv Noori

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Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow awsome work noor jaani gr8 work i luv ur chemistry with rishab 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
WOAH! Great stuff Noori! Way to go!!!! 👏
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Pyar hai zindagi - continued

Meanwhile at Airport Rohit and Sukhi are making their way to the check in desk's

Rohit: Sukhi give me the tickets aur passports

Sukhi hands them over

Rohit: thank u

then rohit hands them over

Sukhi: rohit i am hungry mujhe pizza khaana hai

Rohit: ok ok baba hum papa john's jayege

Check in: have a nice flight sir and madam

Rohit and Sukhi: thanks

then rohit and sukhi make their way to papa john's restrauant

Waiter: hello sir and madam welcome to papa john's restraunt here is your menu

Rohit: thank u

Sukhi licks her lips

Rohit: kaun sa chaye

Sukhi: chicken tikka

Rohit: Ok then

waiter returns

Waiter: may i take your order

Rohit: we would like to have the chicken tikka pizza

Waiter: Drinks

Rohit: one orange juice and one pepsi

Waiter: ok then ur order will take 20 mins

Rohit: ok thanks

Sukhi: jaan u know what tum itne romantic hoo

Rohit: why thank u

Sukhi: no seriously yeh suprise thank u

Rohit: anything for u jaan

Sukhi smiles

Meanwhile at bajaj residents

Noori is by the balcony while rishabh is doing paperwork
and then it starts to rain and noori and begins to smile and giggle and Rishabh sees this and begins to smile and goes towards the balcony door and looks at noori without her realising


Rishabh: Mujhe tum chupke chupke jab aise dekhti ho
Achhi lagti ho
Kabhi zulfon se kabhi aanchal se jab khelti ho
Achhi lagti ho

Noori: Mujhe dekhke jab tum yun thandi aahein bharte ho
Achhe lagte ho
Mujhko jab lagta hai tum mujhpar hi marte ho
Achhe lagte ho

Rishabh: Tum mein ae meherbaan saari hain khoobiyaan
Bholaapan saadgi dilkashi taazgi

Noori: Dilkashi tumse hai, taazgi tumse hai
Tum hue hamnasheen, ho gayi main haseen
Rang tumse mile hain saare

Rishabh: Taareef jo sunke tum aise sharma jaati ho
Achhi lagti ho
Kabhi hans deti ho aur kabhi itra jaati ho
Achhi lagti ho

Noori: Mujhe dekhke jab tum yun thandi aahein bharte ho
Achhe lagte ho
Khoye se tum ho kyoon, soch mein gum ho kyoon
Baat jo dil mein ho, keh bhi do keh bhi do

Rishabh: Sochta hoon ke main kya pukaaroon tumhe
Dilnasheen naazneen, maaharu mehjabeen
Yeh sab hain naam tumhaare

Noori: Mere itne saare naam hain jab tum yeh kehte ho
Achhe lagte ho
Mere pyaar mein jab tum khoye khoye se rehte ho
Achhe lagte ho

Rishabh: Mujhe tum chupke chupke jab aise dekhti ho
Achhi lagti ho
Kabhi zulfon se kabhi aanchal se jab khelti ho
Achhi lagti ho

Noori:Achhe lagte ho

Rishabh: Achhi lagti ho

Noori: Achhe lagte ho

Rishabh: Achhi lagti ho

Noori: Achhe lagte ho

Rishabh: Achi lagti ho

then Rishabh lifts noori up and and places her on the bed and turns the lights off 😆

Meanwhile Kunal is sleeping on the floor while neetu is looking at him then neetu decides to sleep with him on the on the floor

Neetu: please sleep on the bed with me jaan

Kunal turns over and see's neetu and then hugs her and gets up and lies on the bed while neetu's head is on kunal's chest

Kunal: i luv u and i am sorry i snapped

Neetu: its ok jaan

Kunal kisses neetu on the forehead

Neetu: i luv u jaan

Kunal: i luv u too

Then neetu closes her eyes whilist kunal thinks

Kunal thinking: sirf theen din phir mr and mrs basu khatum 😆 😆 he smiles evily

To be continued

Luv Noori

Luv Ya

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Posted: 19 years ago
WOW! Good going Noori!!! :)

Keep it up!
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Pyar hai zindagi - continued

2 days later

NIGHT TIME

Noori and rishabh have gone for a drive and neetu has gone shopping and monsook is off sick and its just Kunal and Uncle rahul in the house

Kunal is in the training room on weight lifting while uncle rahul is on the running machine

Kunal thinking: abh yeh acha mooka hai hum doono akele

then rahul gets off and looks at kunal angerly and walks away then kunal becomes angry and walks after him

Rahul: kya chatti hoo tum huh

Kunal: baas hogya abh sirf tum aur mr and mrs basu are after me trying to tell neetu about the real me i don't want her to find out and in order to do that i have to

Rahul interpets

Rahul: kya karna hai tumko huh

Kunal gives an evil smirk

Rahul is confussed and goes up to kunal and punches him kunal gets up and wipes his mouth and sees blood and smile in his little twisted way and takes out a knife and stabs rahul in the stomach 5 times and smiles evilly

Rahul: neetu ko maloom pari gha bas deekhna

Kunal stabs him one last time in his heart and blood squirts on his face and he smiles evilly and wipes the blood from his face and begins to laugh like a maniac

Kunal: abh yeh laash river main ditch karna hai

then kunal rushes to the bathroom and quickly has a shower and puts his clothes in the washing machine and waits for it to finish washing

10 mins later

h puts his clothes and then wraps the body in a carpet and makes his way to the car and looks around to see if anyone can see him and then quickly puts the body in the boot then kunal makes his way to the river

Kunal thinking: abh sirf prerna aur anurag hai and i will kill them too phir main aur neetu saath saath hoge hamesha ki liye

20 mins later he reaches the river and looks around to see if anyone can see him and quickly dumps the body in the river and the murder weapon and smiles and makes his way to the car

Meanwhile at home

Neetu: RAHUL UNCLE ( SHE SHOUTS) arre uncle rahul kaha hai

Then neetu see's kunal

Neetu: hey jaan do u know where rahul chacha is

Kunal: he told me he was going to go goa for a few days for pooja

Neetu: oh ok

then neetu goes upstairs to put her shopping away

To be continued

Kya hoga abh

Stay tuned for Pyar Hai zindagi

Luv Ya

Luv Noori




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Posted: 19 years ago
ohhhh poor rahul uncle 😭 anyway another stunnning part noori 👏
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WOW!! It was WICKED indeed!!! Woohooo!!:)
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Pyar hai zindagi - continued

Rishabh and Noori come back from their drive

Noori: rishabh tum bhi nah ( she laughs)

rishabh: arre saab kaha hai

Then neetu and Kunal come downstairs

Noori: hey guys where's uncle rahul he normally watches the history channel at this time

Neetu: di he has gone for pooja in goa

Noori: leekan maldives humne ik aur ticket bhi hai abh kya

Rishabh: fiqaar maat karo

Noori: ok i am going to bed to tensed

Rishabh: i will go too good night kunal and neetu

kunal and neet: good night

Meanwhile in maldives rohit and Sukhi are having candle light dinner near the beach

Sukhi: ajj raat itne khoobsurat hai rohit

Rohit: ya it is

then a slow song comes on

Rohit: may i have this dance with my beautiful

Sukhi: smiles

Sukhi: u r so romantic do u know that

Rohit: yeh i did know that actually thanks for telling me

Sukhi: tum bhi nah

Rohit: baas deekhna humara baacha ayye gha nah phir humara parivaar complete

Sukhi: you don't want to more children

Rohit: yes leekan not to quick

Sukhi: soooo sweet

Rohit: i will always luv u

Sukhi: me too

then they kiss

To be continued

Luv Ya

Luv Noori

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