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Come on ppl please has my fanfic gone boring
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Great job Noori! I wish he tells her soon:((
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Pyar Hai Zindagi - continued

* Next Day *

rishabh is still asleep while noori has just come out of the shower wearing a black sari then she see's rishabh still asleep

Noori: ufffff he's still asleep he needs to go to work rishu chalo get up your late for work

Rishabh: noori five more minutes please

then noori puts her wet hair on his face

Rishabh: noori

then rishabh pins her down and noori squeals

Noori: rishu someone might come in

Rishabh: so what ( he smiles)

Noori: rishu please choro

Rishabh: begins to kiss her forehead then her nose and then her cheeks

Then their was a knock on the door but noori and rishabh were lost into each other's eyes

then sukhi enters

Sukhi: di i was wondering ( then looks up)

and see's rishabh pin down noori

Noori: sukhi tum

then noori lifts her head up but bangs her head againest rishabh's head

Noori: ow rishu

Then rishabh rubs noori's forehead

Sukhi: i will come back later bye ( she says embarressingly)

then rishabh sits up on the bed

Noori: arre rishu kya howa kya baath hai

Rishabh: noori i have to tell you something

Noori: kya bolo nah rishu

Rishabh: noori i have been drinking again and this time its gone worse i have been coughing up blood

Noori: i know

Rishabh: KYA

Noori: haan dr mehra neh mujhe phone

Rishabh: leekan noori

Noori: rishu main tumhare saath hoon main tumko help karoge ( she says while smiling)

Rishabh: i luv u so much jaan tum itne understanding hoo

Noori: i know ( she says in a show off style)

Rishabh shakes his head

Noori then gets up and rishabh grabs her sari

Noori: rishu choro mera sari ko choro

Rishabh then gets up and comes face to face with noori

Noori looks down then rishabh lifts her chin and noori smiles

Rishabh: tum bohot khoobsurat lagte hoo iss kala saree main bilkol preity zinta especially
with the dimples

Noori Laughs

Rishabh: whats so funny

Noori: priety zinta is way prettier then me and the dimples no way

then noori turns around to make her way out but then realises rishabh is still holding her saree

Then rishabh pulls noori towards him and noori's hair is in the way of her face and rishabh removes her hair from her face

rishabh: your way prettier (then kisses her on the cheek) i better get ready for work

Noori nods her head

Then Noori makes her way downstairs and smiles to herself

Noori: Good morning beautiful people

All: Good morning

Sukhi: di rishabh jiju kaha hai

Noori: he is getting ready for work kyon

Sukhi: i wanted to ask jiju when we are going to maldives

Noori: arre haan main tou bhool gaye

Sukhi: yeah i bet you did

Noori's eyes widen and she mouths sukhi shhh and sukhi sticks her tongue out and then
bursts out laughing and so does noori

Uncle rahul: whats so funny girls

Sukhi and Noori: KUCH NAHI

Uncle rahul: main baas pooch ra tha chill

then rohit and rishabh walk downstairs togeather

Noori and sukhi look up and smile

Rishabh and Rohit: Good Morning

All: Morning

Sukhi: jiju when are we going to Maldives

Rishabh: were not i couldn't get the tickets

rohit tries not to laugh

sukhi: oh

Noori: arre sukhi he is joking we are going next week

Sukhi: wicked aur tum rohit kuch nahi bole

Rohit: joke tha nah anyways i wanted to see your chera and it was priceless

To Be Continued

Luv Noori XxXxXxXx

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Posted: 19 years ago
that so romantic noori oh my gosh i think ur fanfic is better then curent kzk track gr8 work 👏
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guys please read my fanfic please
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guys please read my fanfic please
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Pyar Hai Zindagi – continued

Rohit and Rishabh discuss about going to goa while Noori and Sukhi are having breakfast

Rohit: rishabh the hospital is nearly complete they just have to add the furniture and stuff

Rishabh: that's great to hear

Noori: sukhi ( she whispers )

Sukhi: Kya hai di

Noori: dheere bolo paagli

Sukhi: kya hai ( she whispers)

Noori: lagta hai rohit has forgotten your birthday

Sukhi: I know he is so stupid I can't believe him

Noori: I haven't forgotten your birthday the present is in the cupboard when they leave i will give u

Sukhi: great

Rishabh: what are you two whispering about

Noori: nothing

Then rishabh and rohit make their way out

Noori: rishabh rooko

Rishabh: kya howa

Noori: tell rohit ajj sukhi ka birthday hai

Rishabh starts to laugh

Noori: chup

Rishabh: he forgot

Noori: yes now go

Rishabh: kiss please

Then Noori gave rishabh a goodbye kiss

Rohit: hey sukhi where's my kiss

Then sukhi walk's off

Rohit: arre rooko tho

Rishabh: um rohit I will you everything in the car

Rohit: kya matlaab

Rishabh: chalo

Then Noori takes sukhi upstairs to give her present then Noori hands sukhi her present sukhi rips it open

Sukhi: wow di this sari is beautiful

Noori: I saw u look at it in the mall aur Maine socha chalo tumhare liye leekhe doon

Sukhi: so sweet

Then Neetu enters

Neetu: happy birthday di

Sukhi: thank u sweetie

Then Neetu hands over her present

Sukhi: yeh jewelry tum kaise afford kiya

Neetu: yeh baath choro it goes perfectly with your sari

Meanwhile at the gym Kunal is working his Anger off and he keeps having flashes of the blast that took place in Athens

Man: eyyyyyyy get off the running machine its my turn

Kunal ignores him

Man: eyyyy maine kaha get off now

Kunal still ignores him

Then the man shoves kunal off and kunal drops to the ground and in anger kunal looks up and then the man laughs

Man: idiot mujhe ignore karta hai

Kunal: heyyyyyyyyyyyy

Kunal then grabs the guy from his collars and begins to beat him up and throws him out to the glass door

Man: mujhe maff kardo jannab please

Kunal: if you mess with me again I will kill u samjhe

Man gulps

Kunal: SAMJHE

Man: yyyes

Then kunal made his way to the locker room

Then the trainer comes

Trainer: are you ok how did this happen

Man: I fell

Trainer: lets get you to the hospital

Then kunal bangs on the locker

Kunal: mujhe prerna aur anurag and humara pyaara sa uncle will not be returning with us when we come back

He laughs evilly

To be continued

Luv Ya

Luv Noori
Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago
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Hey guys

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment on i need to know to continue or not
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Posted: 19 years ago
Heyyy Noori~!!!

Awesome stuff yaar!! Really enjyed reading it! Do continue it quick!

Love-
Sukhi:))
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Pyar hai Zindagi – continued

Meanwhile at BTN Rohit feels guilty for forgetting sukhi's birthday and doesn't know what to do

Rohit thinking: damn it how could I forget sukhi's birthday abh kya karoon

Rishabh sees rohit looking parishaan then rishabh clears his throat

Rohit: arre rishabh come sit

Rishabh: thanks so what have u thought to buy sukhi

Rohit: I dunno

Rishabh then waves an envelope in his face

Rohit: arre yeh kya rishabh

Rishabh: koolo tou sai

Then rohit opens the envelope and sees plane tickets

Rohit: yeh tou Maldives ki hai

Then rishabh interrupts him

Rishabh: yep your right leekan tum aur sukhi are going today 4 days earlier then us I changed yours and sukhi's dates but these aren't from me these are going to be from you to sukhi

Rohit: awwww thanks bro

Then rohit hugs him

Rishabh: you're welcome

Then rishabh phones Noori and tells her everything

Noori: wow really ok then don't worry I will tell Neetu to distract her

Rishabh: great idea ok jaan bye

Noori: bye sweetie

Rishabh: wait

Noori: kya howa

Rishabh: kiss doo nah

Noori: paagal hoo kya

Rishabh: please

Noori: come home phir doo ghi

Rishabh: tum bhi nah always playing hard to get

Noori giggles

Rishabh: your laugh is so cute and sexy

Noori: jaldi ghar aj Jana ajj ok

Rishabh: ok bye jaan

Noori: bye

Then Noori disconnects the phone and smiles to herself

Noori: NEETU (she shouts)

Then Neetu comes rushing in

Neetu: kya howa di

Then Noori tells Neetu everything

Neetu: cool idea di

Noori: abh jao

Neetu: ok

Then Neetu sees sukhi bored watching TV

Neetu: hi di what u doing (while standing in front of her)

Then Noori quickly grabs her suitcase and runs back out

Sukhi: Neetu move out the way
Then Neetu moves and then Noori signal's to her to get her in the shower and then Neetu grabs sukhi's hand and puts her into the shower Noori sneakily grabs all her clothes and stuffs them in

To be continued

Sorry feeling sleepy

Luv Noori

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