Pyar hai zindagi plz read new part added - Page 25

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Posted: 19 years ago
Awwww!! They lost their child?!! :((( Carry on!
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Pyar Hai zindagi - continued


Rishabh is shocked that noori has lost the baby and tears stream down his eyes

Rishabh: your lying dr your lying

he says while grabbing dr mehra's collar

Dr mehra: Hosh main aao mr bajaj

Then rishabh lets go of his collar

Rishabh: kya yeh noori ko maloom hai

Dr mehra: haan leekan she has gone into shock and if she doesn't cry her health could go worse

Rishabh: KYA

dr mehra: haan mr bajaj you and your parivaar have to make her cry some how

Rishabh: teek hai

then rishabh makes his way to see sukhi and rohit to tell them whats happened tears stream down
his face as he remembers discussing baby names and happier times

then rishabh knocks on the door

Sukhi: arre jiju come in

rishabh: their's something i need to tell you guys

rohit: whats wrong rishabh tum bohot parishaan lagte hoo is noori ok

Rishabh: um noori has ( then he clears his throat) lost our child

Sukhi and rohit: KYA

Rishabh: haan aur woh shock main hai

Sukhi: begins to cry

Rohit: ajj kismat hamare saath ik boora khel kiya first bauji aur abh noori aur tumara baacha

rishabh: i am going to see noori now so i will see u guys later

Sukhi: teek hai jiju

rishabh makes his way to noori and wipes his tears as he is now standing by the door as he see the nurse feeding
noori

rishabh: i will do it nurse

Nurse: teek hai

Rishabh: chalo noori kanna kalo

Noori: i am not hungry

Rishabh: please noori

Noori grabs the plate full of food and smashes it againest the wall

Noori: maine kaha tha i am not hungry

rishabh: leekan noori

Noori: bas leekan kuch nahi main haath jhoor thi hoon
mujhe akela chorni doo rishabh please leave me alone

then rishabh leaves with tears streaming down his face
and makes his way to the car

outside the hospital

Rishabh: DAMNIT YEH KYON HOWA KYON

then he bangs on the car roof and begins to cry

rishabh: yeh kyon howa yeh saab kyon ( he says while crying)

to be continued

Luv noori XxXxXx
Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awww...my Rishabh:((( Please let this be a night mare:(((( Awwwwwwwwwwww:((((((((((((((((((((((((((
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Pyar Hai Zindagi - Continued

3 weeks later Noori is home from the hospital and is just too quiet and doesn't have anything to eat and always in her room

Rishabh: abh main kya karo noori is not eating anything and her health is getting worse by the week

Sukhi: jiju fiqaar maat karo please saab teek ho jaye ga

Rishabh: i hope so sukhi i hope so

sukhi thinking: gosh i hope noori becomes ok soon

Rishabh: i got an idea

sukhi: kya idea jiju

rishabh begins to tell sukhi the idea

Sukhi: do u think it will work jiju

Rishabh: i hope so

sukhi: lets do it now

Rishabh: haan chalo

Rishabh and sukhi make their way upstairs to Noori then they look through the door and see noori sitting in the chair in the dark then they come in then they make their way behind noori and blindfold

Noori: choro mujhe take this off damnit choro mujhe

sukhi tries to hold noori down

Sukhi: jaldi karo jiju

Noori: choro mujhe sukhi main tumko kabhi nahi maff karoge

Sukhi: hurry jiju

rishabh whispers: tum jao abh

then sukhi leaves and noori removes the blindfold

then noori looks around and see's baby posters and toys on the bed

Noori: yeh saab kya hai

rishabh is quiet

then noori looks and see's the baby scan picture on the desk and then becomes angry and begins to tear the posters down and throws the toys on the floor and grabs the baby scan picture and just as she was about to tear it she drops to the floor

Noori: hamara baacha iss duniya main hai

Rishabh: sits beside noori

Noori: deekho nah humara baacha bohot pyaara lagta hai nah deekho

Rishabh: noori hosh main aao

then noori rips the scan photo up

Rishabh: NOORI

then he slaps her to make her cry

noori looks on shocked then a tear drops down noori's cheek and then hug's rishabh

Noori: hamara baacha ( she says crying)

then rishabh takes out the real copy of the baby scan and kisses it

Rishabh: shhhhh noori shhhhh saab teek hoga

Luv Noori xXXXxXxXxX
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was really gud... continue it 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
You know what...I read all the stories in one go...it makes it even better...now write the next part soon yaar
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Pyar Hai Zindagi - Continued

Noori: yeh kyon howa yeh kyon howa ( she says crying)

Rishabh: noori shhh please shh

rishabh has tears in his eyes

then noori gets up and wipes her tears and puts all the toys into a box to give to sukhi

Noori: i will just come i will give these toys to sukhi

Rishabh: Noori leekan

Noori: rishabh please

then noori makes her way to sukhi and rohit's room

Rishabh thinking: god please make everything ok please

Noori knocks on the door

Sukhi: arre di come inside

Noori: thanks

sukhi: arre di iss box main kya hai

Noori: baby toys ( she smiles)

Sukhi: oh thanks di

Noori: arre paagli khush nahi hoo that i am giving u these toys

Sukhi: leekan di

Noori: please take them please

Sukhi: ok

Noori smiles

Noori: i will see you later

Sukhi: teek hai di

Meanwhile at Kunal and Neetu's room

Neetu is asleep while kunal is thinking what to do next

Kunal thinking: abh noori kah drama kyon hogya damnit abh sochna paari gha kaise yeh saab karo gha ahh idea hum saab maldives jayege mere aur neetu ki shaadi hoge phir put plan to action ( he smirks)

Neetu: arre kunal your not asleep ( saying half asleep)

Kunal: huh oh neetu jaan go to sleep i am just drinking water ( HE LIES)

neetu: teek hai

neetu goes back to sleep

Kunal thinking: abh koi nahi humare beech ayye gha

then kunal goes to sleep

Next Day

Noori and rishabh have gone for a drive and neetu and kunal are in their room and sukhi and rohit are downstairs watching tv

Uncle rahul: arre saab kaha hai

Monsook: noori and rishabh have gone for a drive and neetu aur kunal are in their room and sukhi and rohit are watching tv

Uncle rahul: oh acha teek hai

Meanwhile Noori and rishabh

Noori: thanks rishu for taking me out

Rishabh: its ok leekan tum mujhe nahi poocho ghi kaha ja rey hai

Noori looking confused

Noori: kya matlaab

Rishabh: arre poocho tou zaara

Noori: acha baaba kaha ja rey hai

Rishabh: too late abh mujhe blindfold karna hai

just as noori turn's around rishabh quickly covers her eyes

Noori: arre rishu tum bhi na

then rishabh takes her by the garden which is full of roses and takes her blindfold off

Noori smiles

Noori: its beautiful rishu

then rishabh cuts a white rose off

Rishabh: for u jaan

Noori: so sweet

rishabh smiles

meanwhile at the house Rohit and Sukhi are watching Tere Naam and rohit is has tears streaming down his face

Sukhi: kya howa jaan

Rohit: deekho nah salman khan is in a mental asylam and bhomika is praying for him (he says while sniffing)

Sukhi tries not to laugh

Rohit: tum itne questions kyon pooch rey hoo

Sukhi bursts out laughing

Rohit: whats so funny

Sukhi: i have never been with a guy who expresses how he feels before and i think its cute

Rohit: really

sukhi: yes really

then rohit kisses sukhi on the cheek

Meanwhile in the bedroom neetu Kunal ( neetu has her head on kunal's chest) are lying down on the bed talking

Neetu: um kunal

Kunal: haan jaan kya baath hai

Neetu: humare shaadi kab hoge

Kunal gives a smirk without her realising

Kunal: well main soch ra tha kyon nahi hum maldives chale aur waha kare

Neetu: really

Kunal: haan kyon idea acha nahi hai kya

Neetu: nahi bohot acha hai

Kunal: great abh deekna main kya karoga maldives main aur mujhe maloom hai kay tum anurag aur prerna ko zaroor call karoge
aur tumhara pyaara uncle bhi (he starts to give an evil smirk)

To be continued

Luv Noori 😳

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p.s yehhhhhhh Manasi new reader welcome hunny i hope u enjoy it 😃


Edited by nooreenuk - 19 years ago
CrazyNoori thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
AW thanks nirma jaane so sweet of u
ronitfan thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Gr8 job Noori!!! Keep it coming:)
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks sweetie sukhi luv ya jaane

Pyar Hai Zindagi - continued

Everybody is at the dinner table and are happy to see noori smiling and laughing

Noori: chalo rishabh hum shart karte hai

Rishabh: kaun sa shart

Noori: um chalo ajj hum guess karege monsook kaun sa kanna made kiya hai

Rishabh: teek hai

Noori: and if i win then u will have have to um take us maldives

then looks at kunal and neetu and smiles

Rishabh: KYA

Noori: kyon daar gaye

Rishabh: Nahi tou chalo main jeet gaya tou tumko um

Noori looks on worried

Noori: kya karna hai mujhe

Rishabh: hahahaha tumko chilli eat karna hai

Noori Gulps

Rishabh: kya daar gaye

Noori: nahi tou

Then they shake hands

Sukhi: ok guess karo abh

Rishabh: Ladies First

Noori: um Chicken Tikka with Naan

Rishabh smirks

Rishabh: um i think chicken biryani

sukhi: ok so Noori said chicken tikka with naan and jiju said chicken biryani

she says while writting it down on paper

Sukhi: monsook come in and serve the food

Monsook: ji

Then Noori and Rishabh look at each other and smile at each other

Monsook: food is served

Noori gulps

Rishabh: hahahahah main jeet gaya

then monsook puts chicken tikka and naan down aswell

Noori smirks

Noori: haan tum jeet gayo chalo kanna kalo

then rishabh see's the chicken tikka and naan and his eyes widen

Noori: kyon kya howa

Rishabh: chalo hum chalte hai maldives

then kunal begins think

Kunal thinking: abh mera ik part kaam successful hogya
abh sirf part two successful karna hai phir hamesh ki liye mera aur neetu ka beech koi nahi hoga

Neetu: kunal kunal

Kunal: huh oh yeh neetu kya baath hai

Neetu: deekho nah noori di ko abh khush hai

saying while looking at noori eat chilli

Kunal: haan i am so glad they are happy now

Noori: rishu paani paani jaldi karo

then rishabh gives noori a glass full of water she grabs the jug instead and drinks it all in one go

Rishabh: woah easy noori easy

Then sukhi,rohit,rahul,neetu and kunal laugh

Noori: haila tum bhi nah rishu

Rishabh laugh's

Noori: why are you laughing for you have to take us maldives all expencies paid first class tickets and luxery suite hotel rooms

Rishabh stops laughing and noori laughs at him and the others burst out laughing

TO BE continued

Luv Noori

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