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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHAPTER EIGHT

Introduction

She was overwhelmed with happiness,but she also knew her limits and responsibilities ,and so she had to tell her parents soon about this relationship.She considered this love as a blessing from God and she respected Nihaal's love for her😳.By, accepting his love,she has chosen her life partner for this life and all other lives to come.Love happens only once and she was in love,true love and true love always blossoms,as God is always present in it.😳True love is not between two bodies,but between two souls.Nihaal fell in love with her not because she was beautiful,even if she was ugly he'd have done the same thing,and she fell for him not cuz he was the best in everything,but cuz he was the one(her eternal soulmate decided by God)just like for one Krishna😳 there's only one Radha😳,and for one Shiva😳 there's only one Parvati😳.And you never fall in love,you only rise in love.And there love too was heavenly.😳




Scene 1: Oberoi Mansion
Prerna's room

She was smiling to herself thinking about him.She starts humming a song.She turns and her parents were standing there.She was petrified😕fearing that her parents might have seen Nihaal.😕
"Maa!! Pappa!!"😕
They both look perplexed and frown at her in doubt😕.
"Prerna,what are you doing here at this time in the night?You should have slept by now."
"Ma,...Pappa...I was ...😕"
But,before she could tell them about what happened exactly,her father came near her and hugged her.
"Princess,we need to give you a good news...😃"
Suddenly her mother interrupts him,and says,
"Rajive,not now...we'll talk abot it to her some other time...when every thing is decided."
Prerna didn't understand what her parents were talking about.Her mind was pre-occupied with fear of having been caught.She was relieved that her parents hadn't seen Nihaal.
She sighed and asked,"Pappa,is there any problem?"
"No,Princess nothing!!It's already very late...Now you must go to sleep.Goodnight Princess."
"Goodnight Pappa."
"Goodnight Beta"her mother kisses her on her forehead.
"Goodnight Ma"
Her parents go away,but she feels a bit uneasy.She decides to tell them about Nihaal as soon as possible.

Scene 2:Nirmalyam
Hall

All the family members ,his kaka-kaki,grand parents,buas,their children,all have returned...
After meeting Prerna he reaches home.He tries to sneak into the hall through the kitchen window.He tip-toed through the kitchen and reaches the hall😆😆.But,unfortunately when he reaches the hall,the lights in the hall and the courtyard are switched on,and unexpectedly the entire family was waiting for him in the hall.He looks around and finds everyone's curious eyes fixed upon him😕😕.He had never done any such thing which made him seem so guity and helpless.He didn't know what to say to everyone,cuz he didn't wanted to tell them about their love in such a circumstance when he was being scrutinised for wrong doing.For him his love was the most pure and divine thing that happened to him,and he didn't wanted to insult it.
He was nervous and suddenly his father Rudra Pratap Shastri asked,
"Nihaal where were you?You didn't tell anyone in the house that you were going to be late.You know how much worried everyone was,especially your mum...aaj kal kitne bike accidents ho rahein hain,and tumne ek phone bhi karna zaroori nahi samjha."
He felt ashamed of not telling his mum.She looked very worried and still had tears in her eyes😭😭😭.She ran to him and hugged him crying,
"Beta,i was so worried...please aisa kabhi mat karna...bike leke raat ko jaate ho toh bata diya karo ki you will be late..warna bahut ghabra jatein hain ghar mein sab.Tum mere dil ke tukde ho,aur agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh...😭"
Nihaal asked sorry to everyone,and he was speechless,but he had to tell them something.He couldn't tell a lie,but he also wanted some time for this relationship before he could tell everyone.So,he said,
"Baba,i had a very urgent work,it means a lot to me,and i couldn't avoid it.I know i should have called you,but us waqt kuch yaad hi nahi raha."
In this way he didn't lie and also gave them an answer.His father trusted him, and therefore believed him.but,he had doubts regarding what his important work was ,and when he started to ask him about that,BUDDY(his grand father) interrupted and took control of the entire situation by sending everyone to their rooms.He tells Gauri to serve him the dinner.
"Nihaal,we'll talk in the morning."
Nihaal felt guilty,but he had to take a decision.He is a very responsible boy and he would never allow his parents to feel ashamed of him.He decided to tell them everything when the right time comes.
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CHAPTER NINE

Introduction

Nihaal was very upset on what happened.He couldn't sleep the whole night.His love for Prerna blossomed at the very moment he saw her,it was predestined,it was natural😳.But,he never thought of the path he'd have to follow after accepting his love for her😕.Love also means taking responsibility of the feeling and the decision😳.He trusted his love😳,and had immense faith in God,and his family.He decided to clear up matters.Meanwhile Buddy😳 had instructed everyone in the family to be patient,and not to ask him any questions.Everyone trusted Nihaal,and so decided to forget the matter.


Scene 1:Nirmalyam
Dining Hall

Early morning everything was back to normal,and it seemed like nothing happened the previous night😊.The family had already decided not to create an issue of the matter and destroy the family's peace.Nihaal hesitantly😕 came to the dining hall where all the men folk were having a discussion over the breakfast.His father sees him and calls him,
"Nihaal,beta come and sit here...Your maa has made your favourite Aaloo Parantha with curd...it's very tasty.😃"
Nihaal smiles😳 and sits beside his father,and noone asks him anything about the night.After some time the Professor Chachu asks him,
"Nihaal I hope your project work is going smoothly..."
"Yes,Chachu,it's almost done"
"And how are you team partners? Deepika and ..what's the other girl's name?...😉"
"P-r-e-r-n-a!!😃"he spoke with great excitement.
"Oh!!yes Prerna,how can i forget?She's a very nice girl...rich but always humble...Isn't it Nihaal?😉"
"Yes😕Chachu",he responded with an indifference in order to hide his excitement shown before.
"Chachu,now i must leave...I have to reach the City Auditorium quickly for the play'srehearsals.Bye😊"
"Wait,Nihaal...My car broke down yesterday,it's in the workshop.Could you drop me on your bike to the college?Just give me ten minutes and I'll get ready."
"Chachu,I'm really sorry...I have to hurry.Baba aap please Chachu ko drop kar dena..."
"Bhaiyya ki phat phatiya mein jaane se toh acha hai ki mein paidal chala jaoon😆😆😆...Don't worry Nihaal,you go,I'll take a bus."
"Thanks Chachu...Bye"
He then takes everyone's blessings and goes out.On the door he turns and smiles at Buddy😊.Buddy smiles back assuringly😉.

Scene 2: Outside Oberoi Mansion

Outside the Mansion Nihaal stops his bike and tries her mobile number,but it's switched off.He then tries her home number,and to his horror😲 her Dad picks it up.
" Hello,Rajive Oberoi here.Who's this?"
On realising it is her Dad,he deforms his voice into a girlish one and says😆,
"Hello,Uncle this is Sneha,Prerna's college friend.I had some urgent thing to talk to her.Could you please call her?"
"Oh,ofcourse beta,i'll call her, just hold on for a moment."
He then calls Vincent the butler and asks him to inform Prerna that she has a call.

Scene 3: Prerna's Room

Mr.Vincent knocks at her door and tells her that her friend is on the line.Prerna picks up the receiver in her room and says,
"Oh,Hi Deepika,I'm so sorry.Actually my mobile is broken and..."
"Hello,Prerna,I'm Sneha" in the earlier voice😆😆.
"Sneha!!😕"
"But,I don't know you."
"I'm Nihaal's ex-girlfriend,and now i've heard you are his new interest."
"How dare you?😡Don't talk to me so cheaply.😡",and she slams the phone,and thinks,"Nihaal's girlfriend,pata nahi kaun hai😡...Mein apne Nihaal ko achi tarah janti hoon😳.He doesn't have a girlfriend,he's not a that type of boy.He only loves me...😭"
After some time the phone rings again and she picks it up angrily😡"What's your problem??"
"Prerna,it's me...Sorry I was kidding you...😆"
"Kidding...I'll kill you...you know how much worried I was.😡"
"It means you don't trust me."
"Ofcourse i do,that's why i was angry at her and not you..."
"I'm really sorry...Now listen to me...I'm waiting for you outside your house's gate...Come out and meet me.😳jaldi aao."
"What?😲Mere ghar ke bahar.Dimag kharab hainkya.Pappa is at home and if he sees you he'll fry you.I can't come there.He's dropping me at the auditorium."
"I don't know,you'll have to come or I won't go."
"Theek hai you stand there and when my father sees you,answer him,samjhe,but forget that I'm coming down."
"Alright,I have no problems.I'll tell him that Mein aapki beti se bahut pyar karta hoon,and she too is crazy for me..."
"Ah..ha..ha...Crazy for you...I'm not crazy for you,you are...😆"
"Yes,I'm...but your father is not...and imagine if i tell him so...😆"
"No,you won't tell him anything...I'll come down.😕"
"That's like my Prerna.😳"

Scene 4: Hall

She hesitantly walks to her father and tells him😕,"Pappa,you don't have to drop me today,I'll go with Deepika."
"But,Princess...you didn't tell me..."
"Pappa,I have to go to the mall for buying somethings for the Play,before i go for the rehearsals...You don't have to wait for me."
Her mother also comes in there and says,"Rajive let her go,she too has to learn to become independent."
"Huh!!😡 independent like you probably.I don't want my daughter to be like you."
And then they both begin to fight and abuse eachother.Prerna stops them and cries😭😭 ,"Please aap log jhagda band kariye,you both don't have to fight for me.Pappa please."
"Princess...😡😡huh!!Your mother...I'm going...You take care."
Mrs.Sapna Oberoi her mum,too leaves in tears for her social meetings with Deepika's mum who tells her that Deepika has already started from home.Prerna prays to her Krishna😳 to make her house also a happy home where only love and no hatred lives.Priya and Parul comes down to the hall.
"These folks,subah subah shuru ho jaatein hain.I hate them."
"Priya di they are our parents😕."
"Huh!! Parents...Prerna please don't start your lecture all over again."
And they both leave for the college.Puneet too comes down and hugs her😳.
"Didi,today's my recitation competition,and I've learnt the poem you taught me thoroughly."
"All the best,my sweetie pie😳.You'll definitely win.Now pick up your bag,your bus has come,it's sounding the horn."

Scene 3: Outside her house

She comes out with Puneet.Nihaal looks angrily at her and gestures her to come quickly.She pleads to him to wait.She sends her brother by the school bus and comes to him.He angrily looks at her 😡like a sulking child with a pouted mouth and frowning look😆😆.She smiles at him😳 and pulls his cheek😳He forgets all his anger on looking into her angelic eyes😳.She looks gorgeous in the blue Bandhini chudidaar,and silk duppatta😳(Blue was Nihaal's favourite colour).The wind blows away her duppatta and it falls over his face😳.She comes to him and removes her duppatta from his face,but he holds her hand and pulls her towards him😳😳😳.
"Nihaal,what are you doing😳?Yeh hum shayad road par khadein hain😕...koi dekh lega..😕"
"Dekhne do,I have no problems😳.This is your punishment for keeping me waiting for so long"
" Tum toh ho hi besharam😳...but mujhe problem hain...And zara batana who's this Sneha."and she pulls herself out of his grip.She puts her duppatta over her shoulder and sternly looks at him.
"Prerna, I told you i was just joking.Sneha weha koi nahi hai."
"I don't believe you..."
"Alright then I'm going...Jab vishwas ho jayega toh don't come to me...okay😡"and he sits on his bike.
"Sorry,naraz kyon hote ho..."and she holds her ears😳.
Nihaal smiles and gets down😳.He holds her hand😳 and looks into her eyes😳,she blushes and looks down😳.He lifts her chin with the other hand and looks into her deep mesmerising eyes😳😳 , she really becomes conscious and looks at him and around them to see if someone else was there.He comes too close to her😳...
"Nihaal😕"
"Prerna,kuch hai on your face."
"My face,kahan pe"
"There,...no no there...😆😆😆"and he lifts his hand and strokes her hair😳 locks spread on her soft face😳 .She feels his touch deep within her heart.He tucks her hair behind her ears😳 and strokes her pink cheeks gently😳.She closes her eyes,and he comes more closer and closer.Her heart is beating faster.He comes too close to her almost touching her face,he then opens his eyes and looks at her closed eyes and smiles at her innocent and nervous face.He then turns his face to her ear and said slowly,"Prerna...😳"
She replied with her eyes still closed,"Yes Nihaal...😳"
"Prerna Deepika humein dekh rahi hai...😳"
" D-e-e-p-i-k-a!!😲"
She pushes him and turns ,but finds none there.
"Nihaal there's no one here."
He starts laughing😆
She becomes angry😡.
"Nihaal...I hate you"and she begins to hit him.
"Prerna,mein mazzak kar raha tha...This was the last one😆😆😆"
She simply pushes him and walks away.He realises his fault and asks sorry,but there were tears in her eyes😭.
"I'm really sorry.I'll never do this again."
"Nihaal,it must be fun for you,but I'm a girl,and you don't understand how i feel about such jokes.I was so scared."

Scene 5:Same place
After a few minutes

"😭...By the way tumne mujhe yahan bulaya kyun tha...mazzak karne ke liye na😡...right."
"Aise hi...I wanted to see you😃."
"What😕?Just to see me...Dekh liya na...ab jao..😕."
"Alright right I'll go...but not alone,you too will have to come with me on my Bike."
"Your bike,pagal ho kya,never.You go,I'll come with Deepika."
"Think again you are missing a golden chance."
"Ah..ha..ha...as if all girls are dying to sit on your bike."
"You bet!!😆😆"
"Alright,Mr.Smart and Dashing,now you go,if someone sees us together then they'll make an issue out of it.😕"
"Alright,my highness,jaisi aapki marzi.😆😆"
"Bye,and ride safely.😳"
"Bye.😳"
Just when he starts his bike,Deepika comes there in her car.She calls him,"Hey! Nihaal.You and here.Wow,I never thought you'd be here.😃"
She gets down and smiles at Prerna,who smiles back nervously.
"Nihaal,your bike is so cool...I just love bike rides..."
Prerna looked at her short and revealing dress and when saw Nihaal smiling at Deepika,she became very jealous.
"Prerna,howz my dress?"
"Nice,very nice.."she puts up a fake smile,and says in her mind,"Nihaal,kaise smile kar raha hei ise dekh kar...😡Jhootha,Dhokebaaz😡"
"Nihaal,wow...I always wanted to ride behind a bike...if you don't mind could you drop me at the auditorium."
Prerna looks at her in shock😲.
"Deepika,then what about Prerna?"
"My driver would drop her,waise bhi use bikes ke peeche baithne main dar lagta hain,specially boys ke saath,kyun Prerna."
"No,Deepika,you won't go with him...we'll go in your car...come",nad she pulls her.
"Prerna,chodo mujhe,arre don't worry,aaj you'll have to go alone .He's willing to drop me. Ask him,Nihaal do you have any problem dropping me."
He looks at Prerna😉😉😉,who frowns at him and he smiles😊,"No,I have no problems."
"Deepika,are you crazy,koi dekhega toh."
"Dekhenge toh kya...kahenge he's my Boyfriend.."
Prerna became restless and Nihaal smiled naughtily.
He interfered,"Prerna,it's her choice,i have no probs."
"Theek hai,when you don't have a problem ,why should I?"and she leaves Deepika's hand,and looks at him😭.She smiles at her😊,but Nihaal knew she was very angry😕,and he was just testing her.Deepika got on the bike and held him tightly.Prerna could no longer bear it😭😭😭 and turned towards the car.
Suddenly,Nihaal spoke,
"Prerna,Stop!"
"What happened Nihaal?😕"asks Deepika.
"Deepika,I forgot to tell you,Principal sir wanted to meet you regarding the college beauty contest.You'll have to go in your car.I have to go for the rehearsals.And Prerna if you don't mind,you can come with me,as you too are going there."
"Oh,Prerna dear,you'll have to go with him,cuz i can't miss this opportunity.😕"
Prerna turned and was surprised at this new twist😲.She realised he was all the time,making her jealous.
"No,way.I won't go with him,I'll catch a bus😕."
"Bus,are you mad?What's wrong in going with him?He won't eat you...he's so sweet."she blushed😳.
Nihaal looked at Prerna and lifted his eyebrows up and down with a naughty smile😉😉,Prerna understood his plan very well.But,she was forced to sit with him.They took off...😳






Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago
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Introduction

The roller coaster ride of their love has started...There may be ups and so may be downs...And true love faces all the circumstances as one.Nihaal and Prerna are also one,and life is a big challenge teaching us a lot of things.They too shall learn to deal with the challenges with their growing maturity.Right now our story goes like this.

Scene 1: On Road
On the Bike

Prerna was silent,and Nihaal wondered why?😕
"Kya hua,itni chup kyun ho😕?"
"Nothing!!tumhe mere chup rahne se kya...tumhari ride miss ho gayi na meri wajah se.😡"
Nihaal understood the reason for her sulkiness.He smiled😊 and said,
"Prerna,Deepika was looking so hot in that pink dress.I just love pink...😆"
"Pink...😕pink kabse tumhara favourite colour ban gaya...tumhara toh favourite colour blue hai na..."she says looking at her blue dress😕
"Han tha,but now i like pink especially after i saw her😍😆😆."
"Oh!!really...bike roko abhi...Nihaal,I said bike roko,I want to get down right now."
"Arre what happened i was just praising your friend...😆After all she is so beautiful."
"Yes,Nihaal she is very beautiful...but why are you so excited?I saw you staring at her...😡"
"So,...are you jealous...Didn't I asked you before her whether you are coming with me or not,and what did you say??You said no...and she grabbed the opportunity...😉😆😆"
"Ahaa...haaa..🤣bol toh aise rahe ho...jaise you are some Tom Cruise...Just stop the bike,I want to get down right now.😡"
At that moment,Nihaal puts the break and Prerna falls on him,and hugs him tightly around his waist😳😳😳.
Prerna blushes and tries to remove her hands from his waist,while adjusting herself on the backseat☺️.Nihaal suddenly holds her hand and places it around him.😳😳and Prerna smiles shyly😳Love was in the air and they both were bubbling with love at that moment.

"Prerna,I love you.And 'am crazy about you😃😳."
Her cheeks become red hot and she smiles😳.
"Nihaal,when are you going to talk to your parents?"
"Soon,most probably today,cuz I cannot wait anymore."
"I'll also talk to my parents today.I wanted to tell them the very night you came to meet me,but they were very happy and were talking about some surprise.So,I thought it better to tell them some other day."
"Nihaal,mujhe darr lagta hai...kahin humare parents ne na kar diya to😕"
"Darr...why?Don't you trust our love?"
"I do trust on it,more than myself.And My Krishna has given me you as the most precious tresure of my life."
He looks at her and says,
"Then tum sab kuch un pe chod do,you know i made a deal with God the day i saw you...that if God has made someone for me,it's you and only you and no one else.And I trust my God a lot...you know he assured me you are going to be mine,you are already mine😳."
She smiles😳 and tears of happiness roll down her cheeks.And she thinks in her heart,"Kitna masoom hai bilkul mere Krishna😳 jaisa😳,kabhi kabhi bachon ki tarah zidd karta hai aur mujhe pareshan karta hai,and kabhi unki tarah rone lagta hai,kabhi mujhe hasata hai aur kabhi rulata hai...aur kabhi kabhi mujhse itna pyar karta hain ki darr lagne lagta hain,kahin main tumhe kho na doon.Hey!Krishna😳mere pyar ki raksha karna."

"Prerna...kahan khoi hui ho...😊we've reached the auditorium.Chalo or we'll be late."

Scene 2: The Auditorium

Saksham sees them and comes to them😊.
"Hi,Guys.Prerna,itni late kyun hui.And where's Deepika?"
"She had to meet the principal...so Nihaal dropped me."
"Nihaal!!"he exclaimed.
"Yes,Saksham...I..."
At that moment their sir calls them for the rehearsals and Saksham couldn't ask much.The scene to be rehearsed was that of a fight scene between Nihaal and Saksham.In one of the stunts Saksham was to protect himself and Prerna from Nihaal(villain)with a dagger,but Saksham was so overpowered by the thoughts😡 of Nihaal dropping Prerna on his bike that he accidently slashes Nihaal's arm and blood spurts out.Prerna is shocked and cries out loudly running towards him😭,
"OMG, Saksham what have you done?😭😭😭Nihaal are you okay..."She almost goes to remove her duppatta for tying it on his wound when Nihaal stops her and says,
"Prerna I'm alright.It's not his fault I wasn't careful."He says so even when he knows it wasn't his fault.He knew she was all overpowered by emotions at that moment and that everyone was watching her...so he tries to get up and move away from her.He says,
"Saksham,Prerna ko sambhal lo...shayad khoon dekh kar darr gayi hai."
Prerna is still shocked and is holding his hand,but soon she realises the situation and leaves his hand😭.Saksham takes her with him.Nihaal goes to the Green Room and dresses his wound.
Prerna asks Saksham to bring her a juice as she is feeling dizzy😕.She takes the opportunity to meet Nihaal.She rushes to the green room and hugs him with all force😭😭😭crying aloud.
"Prerna...Don't cry...I am perfectly alright."
But she hugs him😳😭 even more tightly😳😭.
"O-U-C-H!!😆😆you are hurting me now."
"Oh!! I'm so sorry.😕"She gets away from him and looks at his wound.
"Yeh kya kiya hai tumne...theek se dressing bhi nahi kiya hai...aise toh infection ho jayega...😕"
She took the bandages and tied it systematically around his arm...and tears come rushing out of her eyes😭😭.
"Prerna tum phir ro rahi ho...😕"He lifted her chin...😳
"Nihaal tumhe kuch hota hai toh dard mujhe hota hai...tumhe dhyan rakhna chahiye tha..."
"Yes Doctor!!😆😆😆"
She hits him😡😳 and says,"Mazzak mat karo,I'm serious."
"Acha baba...Sorry...Prerna this is nothing,Mamuli si chot hai..."
"Yeh mamuli..si chot....hai...You'll have to take TETANUS ka injection for this.😕"
"What?...Injection...no way!!😕you just forget it!!"
She starts to laugh😆😆😆
"Ladke hokar injection se darte ho...silly"
"Ladka hoon toh kya hua.I hate injections.🤢"
She again starts to laugh and Nihaal looks at her admiring her innocent beauty. After some time she realises that he is looking at her and she stops laughing and adjust her duppatta shyly☺️.She gets up from the floor and turns to leave😳😳.
Suddenly Nihaal pulls her duppatta and she stops😳😳😳
"Prerna,ruk jao...mein tumhe yoon hi dekhte rahna chahta hoon...zindagi bhar...please stay for me😳😳"
She smiles shyly😳
"Nihaal,Saksham must be searching for me..."
At that very moment they hear his voice...
"P-r-e-r-n-a!!"
"OMG,he is coming here...Nihaal jaane do na please..."
She pulls her duppatta,but Nihaal comes close to her and takes her hands in his and looks into her big black eyes😳.
"Kitni bholi ho tum...I'm so lucky that I found you...aur ab jab tum mujhe mil gayi ho...tumse bichad kar ek pal bhi mein door nahi rah sakta..."
Prerna too looks into his romantic eyes and forgets everything about Saksham...
"Nihaal,mein bhi tumhare bina rahi rah sakti.I've told my Krishna😳and he's promised me that we'll be together for ever...koi bhi hamein juda nahi kar payega..."
He again brings on his naughty smile and says😉,
"Koi bhi nahi...😳"
"Koi bhi nahi..."
"Yeh fasle...😳😳"
"Yeh bhi nahi"and she comes close😳.
"Yeh sansein...😳😳"
"Yeh bhi nahi...😳😳"She undrestands his wish and shyly looks down😳.He comes very close to her😳😳.They both are drenched completely in each others love and are lost in their eyes😳😳.He was still holding her hands,he slowly moves his hands up her arms,shoulder and then takes her face in both his hands😳😳.They were too close,her hair flies over Nihaal's face.He turns his face to one side.She smiles shyly😳 and comes even more closer to him😳,almost touching his face😳.She slowly whispered in his ears😳,
"Nihaal...😳😳I...I..."
"Yes...You...😳"
She suddenly shrieks in his ear,"Saksham!!!😆"Nihaal let go off her and turns around to look at the door.She laughs😆😆 and runs away from there.There was no Saksham at the door,she was lying...Nihaal stomps his feet😡 and knocks his head smiling to himself😳😳.
"Dekh loonga tumhe,kabhi toh aogi mer paas...tab iska badla le loonga..."He again smiles 😳and ruffles his hair.😳😳And just when he turns,Prerna
comes in and kisses him on his cheek😳😳😳.she slowly whispers into his ears,"I Love You!!😳😳"and runs out before he could reply anything.

😳The love was blooming to it's fullest and the whole of the universe was conspiring to bring them together😳
...but something happened that was gonna change the entire consequences for ever.



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sweetheart ur ff is sooooo sweet.i just love their relation its simply soo angelic and adorable☺️.keep it up jaan👍🏼

mouahh
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Originally posted by: noha450

sweetheart ur ff is sooooo sweet.i just love their relation its simply soo angelic and adorable☺️.keep it up jaan👍🏼 ThanksNohu,they both are two simple people like everyone,but what makes them different is their true love for eachother😳. And they also respect it😳as a God given gift.

mouahh

to you too
Luv
PJ😃

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CHAPTER ELEVEN


Introduction

Saksham sees them together...and he could not tolerate it,as he too is in love with Prerna,she is his childhood love😳but,for Prerna he is only a good friend.

Scene 1: Green Room
In the Auditorium

Saksham comes in and looks at Nihaal who is still lost in her thoughts.😳He stirs him up from his thoughts and asks him,
"Nihaal...ab kaisa hai hath...😕"
"Oh! Saksham...I didn't notice you...my hand is okay...😊there's a bit of pain,but there's nothing to worry about...😊"
"I'm very sorry Nihaal😕...I should have been more careful..."
"Arre yaar...it's not your fault .You are my friend and you don't have to say sorry or anything...This pain is very ordinary...chala jayega."
But ,Saksham thinks in his mind," Ordinary,Nihaal but the pain you've given me is very deep and untolerable....tumne meri Prerna ko mujhse cheen liya hai..."
"Saksham!!What are you thinking?😊Chalo rehearsal karte hain...."
"Yes..I'm coming...😕"

Scene 2: On the stage

A scene where Saksham and Prerna are separating is being rehearsed.
Saksham says,

"You never understood my love...and now you are leaving me for a guy you recently met.😡"
Prerna replies,
"No,you are wrong,I might have met him recently,but I know that i have known him since ages...when he's near me i feel like I'm in heaven,when he smiles,a thousand flowers blosson in my heart...😳and when he touches me...aisa lagta hai...jaise mein sirf usi ke liye bani hoon,aur hamesha usi ke paas rahoon...😳"she suddenly looks at Nihaaland he smiles at her😳."You will always be my good friend...but,pyaar toh sirf ek hi baar hota hai...and I'm in love with him...I really love him mein uski ho chuki hoon.😳"
Saksham says,
"Theek hai...😕I'm happy cuz you are...but I shall wait for you...agar is janam mein nahin toh agle janam mein toh mein tumhe kisi aur ki nahi hone doonga..."
He leaves and the curtain falls over Prernastaring in his direction.😕

Scene 3 : The Auditorium

Saksham comes to her and says,"Prerna I want to talk to you..."
"What Saksham?😕😕...please not now😕...have you seen Nihaal anywhere??😕.."She stopped and again cleared her question to hide her anxiety.😊
"Nihaal!! he is with Deepika...tum meri baat toh suno..."
But,she still is not listening to what he is saying and asks,"Deepika,when did she come?😕"and she hurries away from there leaving Saksham all sad and frustrated.😡

Scene 4: The garden

In the garden they both were talking...
"Nihaal,how should i tell you this...I'm really nervous..."
"Deepika...the flambouyant girl in our class is nervous...i don't believe this...you just tell me frankly..😊"
"Some study problem..."
"No..Nihaal nothing like that!1"
"Then what is it?Just tell me...😊"
"I wanted to tell you that....I...I...😕I think I'm in love with you...😳"
He stood up all shockedand exclaimed,"WHAT??😕""What are you talking about😕?"
"Yes Nihaal,I really love you."
"Deepika look...I don't know what to say? You are a very good girl...but I've never seen you in that way....I can understand your feelings,but i can't hurt you by telling you the lie...I've always liked you as a friend..but not anything more...and i really want to remain so..😕"
"But why Nihaal??Why can't you love me😭?"
"Cuz..I love.."
At that moment Prerna comes there and hides behind the bush...and gestures to him not to tell her anything.
He stops halfway and says,
"I love someone...😕"
"Who?😭"
"That i can't tell you..."
"Oh!! Nihaal!!" and she starts crying😭😭😭
"Deepika I'm sorry...mujhe naf kar do...please understand my feelings.."
"Nihaal tumhi kaho...mein apne dil se kaise kahoon ki woh timhare bare mein sochna band kar de...to forget you..How Nihaal how??😭😭😭"and she goes away.
Prerna comes out and sits next to him.
"Prerna..suna na tumne what she said...How can she misunderstand my friendship as love?Oh!! God...I'm so disturbed...she must be so much pain...Prerna you go and console her..."
"Nihaal...love is blind...she misunderstood your friendship as love...but,she'll soon understand the reality that it was a mere infactuation and would accept it...she's very strong...😭I can't see her like this😭😭😭"
She cries😭 and Nihaal hugs her😳...Saksham sees this and again feels hurt😡😭😭.

Scene 5:The Garden

After some time

Nihaal asks Prerna,

"Prerna did you tell your parents?"

She was sitting next to him with her head on his shoulders and holding each others hands😳😳

"No,I haven't...They are never at home when I need them...😕Did you tell your family about us?😊"

"No!!"he sighed😕.She lifted her head and looked at him😳,he too looked at her😳

"Nihaal we must tell our parents soon...I know our love will over all tests.My Krishna😳 is always with us...par darr lagta hain.😭"

"Main hoon na,chahe kuch bhi ho jaye,I'll never leave you...I'll always be there for you.😳😳😳"

That day they both decide to tell their parents about their love😳.

"Accha Prerna,just imagine once we are married ,how would it be😳?"

"Hmmmm....😳😳😳tum roz office jaoge...and mein tumhara ghar mein intezar karoongi...😳"

"And if i come late..."

"Late😕...maroongi😆😆you'll have to come early and roz mere liye tum red roses laoge...😳😳"

"Aur...?😳"

"Aur...haan...we'll go for long walks in the evening..."

"Aur..?😳😳"

"Aur...han...hum ghanton tak ek doosre ki aankhon mein dekhte rahenge...aur tum mujhe apni bahon bein bhar kar...chilla kar sabse kahoge ki....😳"

"ki...😳nothing..."and she runs away from there shyly😳...

But Nihaal calls her from behind and screams,

"Prerna mein chilla har sabse yeh kahoonga ki...I love Prerna...😳😳"

Prerna runs to him and shuts his mouth with her hand😕😳😳.He holds her hand and they look into each others eyes😳😳.He takes her hand and kisses it😳😳.She blushes😳😳 and he leaves her hand and says😳,"Jao tum...warna mein tumhe jaane nahi doonga...cuz tumse bichad kar ek pal bhi mein rah nahi sakta...go..."And he turns,she smiles and leaves😳...



Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago
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hey caught up wheni got a break..wow excelelnt work..saksham is not utrning evil???....cnt wait to see wat happens next..continue soon pls..
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ouff im soo happy tha deepika knew about nihaal and p2😛
lovely update keep it up👍🏼
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Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey caught up wheni got a break..wow excelelnt work..saksham is not utrning evil???
You never know!!😉
....cnt wait to see wat happens next..
Me too
continue soon pls..


Yup!! I'll update soon.
PJ⭐️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: noha450

ouff im soo happy tha deepika knew about nihaal and p2😛
No!! Sweetie...Deepika still doesn't know about Nihaal and Prerna.He just tells her that he loves someone,and when he is going to tell her that the girl is Prerna,Prerna stops her from doing so.She was hiding behind the bush...She was apprehensive about how Deepika would take their relationship...She was worried for Deepika who was already heart broken...😭😭Prerna comes out only after Deepika leaves the garden with disappointment.😭😭

lovely update keep it up👍🏼
Thanks a lot😃

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