EK DUJE KE LIYE(Nihaal and Prerna)ch - 24 updated

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I am PJ⭐️ and i wish to start an" ff "on Nihaal and Prerna (from the KZK serial).The story is different and i hope everyone likes it.



WELCOME EVERYONE TO THE MAGICAL WORLD OF LOVE
Just like E.M.Forester explained in his essay " Aspects of Novel " that love😳 is the most important fact of life interpreted in fiction(others being birth,food,sleep and death),as it is the aspect we know and can relate to the most and in the best possible way😳.

My story is also about true love😳.It's about two people Nihaal and Prerna.I won't talk about it here.The story would unfold itself within the course of time.Please do read and give me ur comments.😃






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CHARACTERS

Nihaal Shastri







Prerna Oberoi



They both are the two main protagonists😳...I don't have time to add the photos of other characters,which i'll do later...So please don't complain.
There would be three main families in the story.And they would become more clear with the movement of the fiction.I don't want to confuse everyone,so i might just introduce them gradually,but i'm sure you'll be able to relate to them.

NIHAAL's Background and Family
Nihaal is the grandson of a joint family with ten other grandchildren,five younger ones and five elder ones.In his family are his father,mother and a younger sister.He also has a kaka,kaki,2 buas and 2 chachas.They all live in the same house.They all are very closely knit together in each other's happiness and sorrow.Nihaal also has his grand father and grand mother living with them.The house is an old ancestral house far away from the city in the suburbs.The house had many rooms,a large courtyard in the centre.

It was an old Indian archetectural wonder.There was a river behind the house

and orchards of grapes,oranges,leechi and papaya.

There was a huge garden also in the front with loads of colourful blossoms, and a small pond.


The family was very traditional,and religious.The women in the house ate only after the men ate.But,everyone respected eachother and also believed in the modern living,but only the positive side.


HOUSE-NIRMALYAM

Family

Grand father-Dhairya Pratap Shastri(an old zamindaar who has lost all his power and property)
Grand mother-Parvati Shastri

Kaka-Vishnu Pratap Shastri(a lawyer)
Kaki-Jyoti Laksmi Shastri
Children-Rahul,Vidya,Kartika/Kritika

Bua1-Vaidehi
unmarried
Bua2-Bhoomika
a widow
Children-Jatin,Vidhi

Father-Rura Pratap Shastri(owns a cloth store)
Mother-Gauri Shastri
Nihaal

Sister-Namita

Chacha1-Aditya Pratap Shastri(Professor)
Chachi1-Nivedita Shastri
Children-Rishi and Tina

Chacha2-Madhav Pratap Shastri(Doctor)
Chachi2-Radhika Shastri
Children-Nupur and Akshay

PRERNA'S Family and Background

A big business family.The family consists of only Prerna,her father,mum,two twin elder sisters and a younger brother.All their relatives stay abroad doing some businesses,and visit during vacations or festivals.The house was a huge mansion.Prerna has no grand parents,and she missed them a lot,she always kept with her a small idol of Lord Krishna😳 which her grand mother gave to her.Her parents never had time for her or her siblings.She was very close to her younger brother Puneet who was only 4 years old.She was the one who looked after him.She even though belongs to a rich family is ver simple and humble.

HOUSE-OBEROI MANSION



Family

Father-Rajive Oberoi(a business tycoon0
Mum-Sapna Oberoi,an alcoholic.
Twin Sisters-Priya and Parul(Prerna's elder sisters)
Prerna

Brother-Puneet


The other members are a butler(Vincent)and other hose keepers and maids.

Family #3

Mr. Dhanraj Mehta- Business rival and friend of Rajive Oberoi)
Rupali Mehta-his wife(Prerna's mum's distant cousin and best friend)
Saksham-Their son,Prerna's friend since childhood.

Deepika-his sister(Prerna's best friend...but totally different from her.







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This Fan-fic is especially dedicated to the most gorgeous and the most amazing pair of
❤️Naman and Kritika❤️





special courtesy by Noha😳









Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

😳THE SIMPLE OPENING😳
The two houses Nirmalyam and Oberoi Mansion might be as different as fire and ice,but destiny had already started disclosing its cards one by one.Let's see what's stored in there for these people.

Introduction

Nihaal Shastri our protagonist is the most loved among children of the family😳.He has passed his XII with great marks👏,but he wants to pursue ARTS in college😳,despite being a Science under graduate.To this decision his family,esp. his father had no agreement.He wanted Nihaal to take an Engineering or Medical course.Nihaal's grandparents were supportive and on their instigation he gets the permission to attend the best ARTS and SCIENCE college in the city,"GURUKUL VISHVAVIDHYALAYA" 👏👏His fees would be paid from hais scholarship.His Chacha Aditya Pratap Shastri was the English Professor in the college.Nihaal also loves sports.Basketball and football are his favourites.

Prerna has two elder sisters Priya and Parul,they both are twins.They belong to the outgoing batch of the college along with Saksham.Prerna too joins the same college,and in the same department.Deepika also joins with her.

Scene1: (Nirmalyam)
The morning Aarti is going on,and the entire family is gathered in front of the small mandir in the courtyard.The wisps of the incense spreads across the entire house, freshening every soul with divine presence.There in the back stood with wet hair and folded hands a young handsome boy with reverence and devotion.This humble boy is our Nihaal.He takes the aarti from his mum,takes her blessings,and then his fathers,and of all the elders.His Grand mother was his best friend,but only after his grand father.He called him BUDDY .
"Nihaal,today is your first day in college,may God bless you,and help you in starting a new phase of your life."
"Buddy,I love you...now give me my pocket money,and now i won't take the old ten rupees...kuch toh badana hoga"
"Alright,take this ten rupees and fifty paise."
"Buddy!!only fifty paise extra."
"Ab..chal chal,nikal yehan se...if your dadi sees me giving you this,she too would start demanding...aj kal buddi ke demands bahut bad rahe hain😆😆."
"Kya Buddy,you are so kanjoos."
"Arre,my child you don't know some time back if you had asked me more than this,then also i'd have given you the same money even when i had the money to buy a palace...par jab maine tab kabhi apna usool nahi badla,toh ab kaise badal sakta hoon.Insan ko kam mein hi khush rahne ki aadat dalni chahiye...pata nahi kal kya ho..."
"You are right Buddy...and i'd always remember this...😊but kahin yeh bahana toh nahi tha na mujhe ulloo banane ka...Just kidding Buddy...Now i must go,i can't be late on the very first day of my college...Chalta hoon Buddy..."
"Bye Dadi"he shouts while hurrying down the stairs.

"Nihaal,slowly or you'll fall down..." his mum calls behind him.
He says goodbye to every one and takes everyone's blessings😳.
"Nihaal...when you return we all will be gone...We'll return only after a few days...Do you want something from there..." asked his Kaka Vishnu Pratap Shastri.
"Nahi Kaka,aap sab Bholenath ke darshan kar le,and pray from my side also...bas nothing else...Aur haan mere Buddy and Dadi ka dhyan rakhna"

Some of the family members including Kaka, Kaki and their children,two buas and their children,grand parents were going to Uttaranchal (Rishikesh,Kedarnath,Badrinath...)on a pilgrimage.

He leaves for college.

Scene 2: (Oberoi Mansion)

Prerna is getting ready for college.She sits with her legs folded on the carpet,before an idol of Lord Krishna.Her wet hair is carelessly tied in a pink towel,and water drips from the towel on to her back,wetting her dress.She lightens the diya.She prays to her Krishna😳 silently ,the only idol of God present in the whole house,given to Prerna by her father's mother.
"Krishna😳,Today is my first day,bahut dar lag raha he.Dunno what's going to happen.You shall always be with me,won't you."😳The idol twinkles.She gets up and goes down...Priya and Parul are dressed up already and are seated on the table with their father who is busy talking on the phone.
"Goodmorning every one..."
They smile and get busy with their talking...
She asks the butler,
"Mr.Vincent ,Maa kahan hai..."
"Ms.Prerna woh abhi tak uthi nahi hai...kal she came home late after the party..."
"But, i had told her that today is my first day in college,and she had promised me that she'll send me personally..."😭😭
"Oh,Princess,tum bhi kya expect kar rahi ho,You should be accustomed to the life here by now...phir bhi everyday you expect things to change,sachi mein pagal ho.Look at us our parents don't have time for us,and so now we too don't have time for them...other things like party and clubs have taken their place in our lives." lisped Parul.
"Parul,Shut up...Apni behen ko yeh sab sikhate hain...khud toh bigadi ho hi,meri princess ko bhi bigad rahi ho..." scolded Mr.Rajive Oberoi.
"Oh,bye Dad,waise bhi we didn't wanted to stay here...Bye Princess...",they leave.
"Princess,beta...don't feel bad...I'll drop you today...C'mmon quickly finish your breakfast and we'll go."😊
"Alright,Pappa...but,i'll just go and meet Maa"
"Maa..huh!!no need she has specially given order not to enter her room till 12 o' clock...Princess,you know all this,it's better to live life as it is..."
She cries,she cried in her heart every day,every minute,but now with maturity she had learnt to hide her tears...😭

She sits in her father's car...but just before the car was to start,a call comes in Rajive's mobile...After the conversation,he looks at Prerna disappointedly😕...She understands everything in that one gesture...
"Pappa,You go,I'll come with Deepika,waise bhi woh mujhe pick karne wali thi..."she puts up a fake smile😊,when in reality her heart was torn to shreds😭😭.
"Prerna,you keep this."He takes out a bundle of notes and gives it to her.
"No,Pappa,I don't want it.I have enough money with me."She then thinks in her mind,"Pappa joh cheez mujhe chahiye,apne ma-pappa ka pyar,woh toh aap ne mujhe aaj tak nahi diya."


Scene 3: Outside Oberoi Mansion

A car comes and halts in front of Prerna.Deepika puts her head out from the rear seat and opens the door for her.She gets in.
"Sorry yaar,late ho gayi.Gadi kharab ho gayi...and then I'd to ask Saksham for a lift."
Saksham was driving the car😳.
"Hello Prerna,kya baat hai,feeling nervous..."😊
"Nervous,I don't know,par ghabrahat zaroor ho rahi hain.😕"she said.
"Don't worry,after all I'd be your supersenior,and maine sab ko bata diya hai,that u r special...and sab tumhara special khayal rakhein.😃"
"Saksham,Thanks a lot...you are a true friend."
"Arre,friend bhi kahti ho,and thanks bhi bolti ho...wah bhai wah!!"
"Sorry!!😳"
"Again,arre yaar,how many times i've told you Dosti mein no thanks and sorry...Samjhi."
She smiles😊 and looks at him.Deepika is busy with her makeup😆(painting and plastering)...In no time they reach college.The huge welcome banner for the juniors greet them at the gate...After parking the car ,Saksham takes them to their class.Nihaal😳 was seated on the right front seat of the second row.Prerna😳 and Deepika sits on the front seat of the third row adjacent to Nihaal.Nihaaal smiles at her and she smiles back nervously...
"Hi'I'm Nihaal😊."
"I'm Prerna😳."
And Deepika too suddenly jumps from behind and introduces herself,"I'm Deepika."
"Oh!!Hi! Deepika..."
Nihaal looks at Prerna and she smiles.😳



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CHAPTER 2

Introduction
The classes were going smoothly.Ragging was strictly prohibited,so nothing of that kind took place.Prerna beacame famous in the class as she was the most beautiful girl in the class.Nihaal too was famous in his own way.He was an all rounder,best in studies and sports.His best fan was Deepika.Nihaal had given his name for the Football tryouts.He was to be selected for sure.But,on seeing Nihaal's potential,Saksham became jealous of him,and as he was the captain he didn't select him in the team,but in order to avoid criticism he took him as an extra.Nihaal didn't understand why he was an extra,when he needed to be in the team as a forward,his best position.


Scene 1:
The football ground

Nihaal threw his jersey and changed into his T-shirt😡.Prerna and Deepika were sitting on the podium on Deepika's insist.Deepika wanted to meet him and forced Prerna also to come with her.Nihaal sat on the bench with his head in his hands, disheartened.
"Nihaal,how was the tryout.You were superb!!What's your position?😃"
"Deepika,you...i didn't see you...I am not in the team...I'm just an extra...😕"
Prerna and Deepika are shocked😲.Prerna feels sorry for him.
"How can Saksham drop you...I'll talk to him.😡"speaks Deepika with hatred.
"No need Deepika.Whatever happens ,happens for the best...Aur shayad accha hi hua ki 'am not selected,i'd get time to concentrate more on my studies."
And he walks away,after walking some distance,he stops and looks back at the ground.Prerna looks at him and feels sad😭.She could relate to his pain of wanting something and losing it,which in her case was more painful.

Scene 2: Classroom

Soon Projects were announced.Teams were made.Nihaal was paired with Prerna and Deepika.Nihaal felt a bit awkward to be working with two girls,but he decided to accept the pairing.Something deep within him urged him to accept it...
Nihaal like all the boys in the class was unknowingly attracted to Prerna😳,but he never understood it,or rather he never wanted to understand it as he knew there was a huge difference of sky and earth in between them.He didn't wanted to get distracted from the aim of his life.Prerna too unknowingly started falling for him😳.But,they both never understood it,and thought it was a mere attraction of them towards the most beautiful girl in the class and the all rounder of the class.It was something quite usual to happen.but,little did Prerna knew that her best friend Deepika has too fallen head over heels for Nihaal.
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CHAPTER 3

Introduction

Saksham had selected Nihaal as a forward in the team on Deepika and Prerna's insist.The autumn weather was doing wonders with the bottled up feelings of Prerna and Nihaal😳.The trio of Nihaal,Prerna and Deepika decided to work on the project soon...They had become nice friends by now,and Deepika was on cloud no. 9 after the team was made.She was extremely happy to be with him.But,Nihaal and Prerna were in a dilemma,as they still were unaware of their true feelings...Nihaal tried not to look at her,cuz it then became very difficult for him to concentrate.And Prerna too at every look that Nihaal gave him,felt shy and nervous😳.

Scene 1: College Library

That evening Prerna and Deepika were to meet Nihaal in the college library...Deepika reached in time.
"Prerna kahan hai."
"She must be coming."she said looking away from him,actually she had lied to him.She had given the wrong time to Prerna.As she wanted to be with him all alone for some time.
Prerna was half an hour late.Nihaal got angry and shouted at her for her irresponsibility.Prerna too shouted back and started crying.Deepika consoled her.
She lied to Nihaal that it's cuz of a family problem,she is late.
Prerna looked at her in shock,but she pleaded not to tell him,so she kept mum.
Nihaal was feeling guilty for making her cry.But,soon the air cleared with the taking of notes.They were taking notes on Romantic poets like Wordsworth,Keats and Shelly from the library books.Nihaal couldn't stop himself from stealing glances of her,and Prerna too knew he was looking at her,but was shy to look at him.Then Prerna tells the other two,there is a very old edition of Wordworth's Poetry and Life in the old referential stack in the last section of the library.She gets up and goes to the old section.Books were stacked till the roof,she looked into the catalogue and found the book was somewhere in the topmost shelf.She pulled the ladder to the particular shelf and started climbing it...
Meanwhile,in the reading section of the library,Nihaal was getting restless as it was quite some time since Prerna left.Deepika was lost in him.
"Deepika!!😕"
"Yes!!😲"she exclaimed suddenly coming back to her senses."What happened Nihaal?"
"Prerna hasn't come yet,i think she's having problem finding the book😕.I'll go and see,meanwhile you take down the notes."
"Okay,I'll do that..."she said halfheartedly.
Nihaal reaches the old ref. section and finds Prerna on the top most bar of the ladder.She was pulling out nooks and the dust was immense...They made her sneeze.And while sneezing,Nihaal shouted,"Prerna sambhal kar."
She suddenly turned and slipped her foot and fell ,Nihaal ran to her rescue,and she landed straight into his arms.Their eyes met and they got lost into a realm of oblivion where only they were present,in each others eyes.They heard someone's footsteps and soon realised what had happened.Prerna looks away and Nihaal suppoerts her to get up.The footsteps were of Deepika...
"Gosh,Prerna what happened?Look at your hair,it's all dusty..."
"Oh!it's from the books...Deepika,i think we must go now...it's dark,and everyone must be worried for us." said Prerna.
"Yeah,it's quite late."echoed Nihaal.
But,Deepika wanted to stay,but she didn't wanted to reveal her desperation and called Saksham,and asked him to come and pick up them.

Scene 2: Outside the college

Saksham reached there in no time.They left the library and reached the gate. After saying the goodbyes they parted.Nihaal smiled 😳 at them and on receiving back Prerna's shy smile😳,something summer saulted in the pit of his stomach.He looked at them going and all of a sudden called Prerna.Deepika had already got into the car and Saksham stared at Nihaal in anger.Prerna walked to him.
He said,"Prerna,I'm sorry.I shouted at you.Pata nahi why i lose my temper quickly...I'm really very sorry."
"Nihaal,you don't have to be sorry...actually galti toh meri hai na...I'm sorry."
That night again something within their hearts got connected,unknowingly.The cupid was doing his part quite well in that midsummer night.



Edited by poohtarang - 16 years ago
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CHAPTER FOUR

Introduction

Nihaal started to realise that with every meeting he was drifting towards her and so did Prerna.But, their minds refused to accept it even when their hearts had.Nihaal was a very responsible boy,and therefore he never allowed his to be affected by these thoughts,or his other responsibilities towards his family too never suffered.But,Prerna's condition was getting worser.Her moum was more and more into alcohol,her parents got into constant fights,and her little brother and her Krishna😳 were her only hopes.

Scene 1: Oberoi Mansion
Night

Prerna is sitting on her table with the pale glow of the study lamp spot lighting a book of poems by Keats.She had puffed up eyes.It seemed like she had spent the whole time studying it.Suddenly,there was a knock at the door,and she opened it.It was her brother,Puneet.

"Di, I was feeling scared...can i sleep with u.😕"
"Puneet,aa jao andar...kya hua,bura sapna dekha kya...😕" she asked him with concern and hugged him.
"Yes, di!! I didn't wanted to go to Maa,that's why i came here.I hate her.😭"
"No,Puneet...aisa nahin kehte,she's our mother..."
She made her brother sleep,and stroked his hair with a motherly affection.She was like a mother to him.She watched his innocent face and felt very sad for him and herself.She thought of her family and how broken they all were.She prays to her 😳,
"Krishna,Will i never be able to live in a happy and loving family?There r so many children who r unlucky,as they don't have their mothers.I have a mother still i am unaware of motherly love...Why is it like that?😭😭😭"

Scene 2: Class room (Gurukul)
Noon
The classes are over and Deepika takes Prerna to Nihaal.
"Hey! Nihaal...we wanted to ask u something about the project."
"Yes,what is it Deepika?Tomorrow and day after tomorrow r weekends,and if u want to do the project work,i am okay with that."
"Yup,actually the first internals are on the verge,and we won't get enough time to do the projects.So,I was thinking we should meet tomorrow."
"Alright,then we'll meet at the college library tomorrow."
"No,...I mean...it's very hard to study there,the library is always hushing us,and it's better to go to a much more comfortable place which is peaceful too.Prerna what do you say?"
"Me😕,I think we should stick to the library...and moreover i don't think there's a place other than it where we can study?"
"We can go to any one of ours homes.But,mine and Prerna's houses r in the city,it won't have a serene atmosphere...So,...How about your place Nihaal?😃"
"Deepika!!😲" exclaimed Prerna.But Deepika was fully prepared with her plan.
"My house,it's in the suburbs,it's very peaceful...but,would you two be comfortable to come there.I mean your parents would give permission..."
"See,Deepika that is what i meant to say..."
But,Deepika interrupted and said,
"Nihaal,don't worry about the permision,so we are finalised on this decision."
Prerna had no choice.She thought there's nothing wrong in going there,then why was she feeling so strange?The meeting was fixed at his place in the evening.

Scene 3: Nirmalyam

At Nihaal's home weekends were like a big deal.All the family got together and the house bustled with children,shouting and playing around.Even though they had planned to meet in the evening,Deepika was so restless that she forced Prerna to come with her to his place in the morning itself.On reaching Nihaal's home,Prerna sees a totally differnt world,which she longed to be in.A happy family...where everyone shared their happiness and sorrow together...Nihaal's mother made the girls feel comfortable.And Prerna was so moved by her motherly affection😭.
"Aunty,where's Nihaal?"asks Deepika.But,Prerna wants to sit with Gauri and talk to her.
"Namita!" calls Gauri.
Namita comes there with other children.
"Namita,Take them to Nihaal's room."and then she turns to the girls,"You both go with her,Nihaal would be in his room."
Namita takes them upstairs to his room and then leaves.There was no one in the room.Deepika is again restless,and tells Prerna to sit there while she goes and looks around for him...She looks at his room,it's a large but simple room...with books,balls,rackets,some shoes and a large study table.She walks to it and arranges the books piled up on the table.While arranging,she finds something,which surprises her.On the table lay an earing of her😳,which she had lost some time ago,in the class.
"Meri earing,Nihaal ke paas,he knew this was mine,then why didn't he returned it to me?😕"
She hears some footsteps and thinks Deepika is coming back.She keeps the earing back and was about to sit on the bed,and before she could realise she bumps into Nihaal and they both fall on his bed😳😳.Nihaal holds her tightly around her waist and they both get lost in each other's eyes.All the welled up feelings overflow from their hearts.Their hearts were beating fast and Prerna could feel his heart pounding against hers and their breaths too met.Nihaal was lost in her big black eyes and she found heaven in his gaze.There was a calm silence in the air exceot for their beating hearts.
Background song:

Aaaaa.....aa..
(Male)
Sajde mein yunhi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aake rukta hoon
Kya yeh sbko hota hain.

(Female)
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab baatein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

(Male)
Repeat

(Female)
Repeat

Khuda jaane ki mein fida hoon
Khuda jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda.
(Female)
Tu kahe toh teri hi kadam ke mein nishanon pe
Chaloon rukun ishare pe
Tu kahe toh khwabon ka bana ke mein bahana sa
Mila karoon sirhane pe

(Male)
Ohhh...
tumse hi sab batein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh rahein seekhi
Tum pe mar ke mein toh jee gaya

Khuda jaane ke.....

(Male)
Dil kahe ke aaj toh,chupa lo tum panahon mein
ke darr he tumko kho doonga
Dil kahe sambhal zara khushiko na nazar laga
Ki darr hain main toh roh doonga

(Female)
Ohhhh...
Karti hoon sau vaade tumse
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tumse
Yeh tumhe na jaane kya hua

Khuda jaane ke......

(Male)
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
.....

(Female)
Hum ko kya lena hain sabse
.....
Khuda jaane ke mein fida hoon
Khuda jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun hua hain
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere Khuda
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere Khuda...

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Nihaal realised after a moment which felt like ages the real situation and they both broke their eye contact😳(but cupid's arrow❤️ had already done it's wonders)Nihaal loosened his grip around her and carefully got up.Prerna cheeks were burning red hot😳 and she fixed her gaze away from him on the bed.He held out a hand to her and helped her get up😳.She shyly got up and and walked to a side.He looked down and said sorry😳.Prerna was feeling too shy to reply anything.She didn't understand,but she was smiling in her heart and felt like she had got her dream prince about whom she always thought,and about whom her dadi had told her when she was a child.Nihaal saw her blushing😳 and he too smiled and rustled his hair😳.Love was in the air,it was very contagious,and they would have declared their feelings in no time,if Deepika hadn't barged in.
She came in and looked at Prerna's dishevelled appearance😆 and asked,"Prerna,what happened to you?😕"
Prerna adjusted her duppatta,and her hair and said, "Nothing,...I just..eh!..I..😕"
Nihaal soon smelled the situation and knew she would be caught,and interrupted her, "She just slipped from the stair,she was looking for you."
Prerna looked at him in surprise,and he had an assuring smile on his face,and there was a twinkle of love in his eyes...😳
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CHAPTER 5

Introduction

They sit together in his room and work on the project.Prerna avoided eye contact with Nihaal😳,but Deepika was all the time longing for his look😳.After some time Nihaal introduces the girls to his entire family and they were,esp; Prerna was delighted to meet them as she never got the care and love of a true family😭.Then Nihaal took them to their fruit orchards and finally to the river,where the wind was blowing gently,mesmerising their hearts.While looking into the river,Prerna trips over her duppatta and begins to fall,when Nihaal holds her😳 and she nervously gets up😳,feeling awkward😳.After some time the girls leave.Gauri(Nihaal's mum) insisted them for having lunch,but Prerna said her parents would be waiting for her,when in reality they never bothered for her.Nihaal feels elated on thinking about what happened.He knew now he's lost the battle within him to avoid Prerna,he can no longer avoid thinking about her.😳

Scene 1: Oberoi Mansion

Deepika drops Prerna and goes to her house.The house is deserted ,except for Puneet(her bro) who was playing some game on his play station.She comes and hugs him.He too jumps with elation.
"Yeh! Di is back...😃Di,I was so lonely,Priya and Parul di have gone out with their friends,and Mum and Dad are also not home.I was so bored.😕"
"Sorry,mera chotta bhaiyya,Di had some work.Accha,now tell me khaana khaaya ya nahi..."
"Nahi, di.How could i eat without you?"
"Acha mera bhaiya mera wait kar raha tha😳.Okay,chalo phir jaldi se go and wash your hands,then we'll have food together...Mr.Vincent,khana laga deejiye."
They both have the food together.She feeds him,but all the time she was lost in the thoughts about early morning😳.
"Di kahan khoyi ho😕."
"Haan...😲" she looked startled."woh mein...nothing...you've finished ur lunch,now you go to your room and do your homework,i'll come there after some time."
"Di,Home work,it's boring.Aap kar do na."
"Puneet,no bahana...chalo chalo go ,hurry up!!"
She takes the plates to the kitchen sink,and washes them.She always washed her plates by herself.And then she went into her room.

Scene 2: Prerna's room

She sat beside her Krishna😳, on the carpet.She told him ,"Krishna😳,tum yehan pe khade yoon hi muskaate raho, and yeh mere saath kya kar diya...He is always coming in my thoughts.Kya yahi pyar hain?'Am i in love?...no, no..this can't be true...Krishna😳,tum kuch kehte kyun nahi..."
The more she refutes her love,the more she is attracted to him.She remembers how Nihaal gazed into her eyes,and how he held her,and she felt shy.Then she accepted,"Yes,I'm in love...par kya he too loves me...Yes,nahi toh meri kaan ki baali uske paas kya karti.😳😳"
The Krishna😳 twinkled again.😳


Scene 3: Nirmalyam
Nihaal's room.

Here Nihaal too couldn't get her off his mind.He says to himself,she is not the one,but in the heart of hearts he knew he was madly in love with her❤️.
"No,this relationship is not possible.It is better to forget her now than getting hurt later.We both belong to two different worlds and it's impossible for us to make the odd ends meet....😕"
"Par mein apne is dil ka kya karoon,jo ki uske alava aur kuch sochta hi nahi..." and he looks at her earing😳.
He keeps it aside and tries to concentrate on his studies,but nothing could make her image evaporate from his mind😕.Her silky hair fallen on her face,her twinkling eyes,her magical smile😳...and every thing about her rushed into his mind.He got up and went down for the lunch.

Scene 4: The Dining hall

His sister Namita and his younger cousins Tina and Nupur started giggling on seeing him.Nihaal at the end of the stairs barged into his father.
"Nihaal,what happened?Kahan khoye hue ho...?" asked his father Rudra Pratap Shastri.
"Baba,woh mein...😕"
On which Namita started singing..
"Pehla nasha..pehla khumar...naya pyar hain,naya intezar...kar loon mein kya apna haal,eh dile bekarar,mere dile bekaraar..tu hi bata..."
Nihaal frowned at her,and walked to her and pulled her choti on which she cried,"Sorry!!"
After settling on the table,Nihaal's Baba asked him about his college and friends.Adi Chachu(Aditya Pratap Shastri) who was also his Professor at college told his father that he was the best.His father felt proud of his son,and his mother smiled at him.
When Nihaal's mother,Gauri,came with the rice bowl to serve him more,he stopped her and said, "Ma bas bhuk nahi hai."
On this Namita,Tina and Nupur looked at each other and again giggled.Gauri scolded them and asked them what's wrong with them.Tina replied,
"Kaki,Bhaiyya ki bhuk pyaas sab marr chuki hain,afterall..unhe...😆"
Nihaal interrupted and shouted,"Maa,if they don't stop this I'm going to my room." On this everyone consoled him with a curious smile.Namita was about to say something when Nihaal pulled her choti from behind and frowned at her😡.She pulled her hair back and grimaced at him🤢.And she whispers in his ear,"Don't worry,bhai i'll open ur pole one day or the other.😆😆"

Scenes 5,6,7and 8 are to be visualised going on simultaneously.
Cupid's game of love has begun
Scene 5: Nihaal's room(Night)

In his room he tries to concentrate on his novel,but everytime her face would disrupt his mind😳.He tries to listen music,but it's also of no use.He gets so frustrated😡 that he throws his book and the remote of the music system.
"What's wrong with me?Why can't i get her off my mind?"
He took his shower and got into his PJ's and decided to sleep.But,there too he failed.No sleep chariot came,only her eyes,her face,her lips❤️...

Scene 6: Prerna's room(Night)

Prerna's brother had gone to sleep and she too comes back to her room.She was all alone again in the house.She took her bath and decides to read something for the project,but the project made her think more about him.She bit her finger and layed on the bed covering her face with her palms😳.Then she gets up in surprise, "Oh,my God,yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai,aisa toh pehle kabhi bhi nahi laga tha.Why 'am i feeling shy just by thinking about him?"She went to her table and picks up a book,and pulls out a pen from it which belonged to Nihaal,which she too hadn't returned.She looks at it and holds it against her cheeks gently and closes her eyes😳 and lies on her bed,and she dozes into a dreamy sleep😳.

Scene7: Mehta house
Deepika in her room

Deepika is also thinking about Nihaal.She has also fallen in love with him.
She sings and dances with his photo in her hand which she got from the college magazine.
"Nihaal,i am dying to tell you how much i love you?😳😳😳"

Scene 8: Saksham driving his car

"Prerna,I've told Dad about my feelings for you.And he has promised me he'll talk to Rajive uncle.And soon you'll be mine.❤️"
Prerna had always been his childhood love😳.

Again Nihaal❤️,Prerna❤️,Deepika❤️,and Saksham❤️ are shown dreaming about their love.
Background song:
from the movie Refugee
Aisa lagata hain,yeh dil mera khone ko hai

Prerna is sleeping,dreaming about Nihaal😳.In her dream he comes and kisses her on her forehead😳 while she is asleep.




TRUE LOVE BLOSSOMS❤️
For ever and ever
and
ever!!
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CHAPTER SIX

Introduction

Few days pass and Nihaal and Prerna come close😳,but they haven't expressed their feelings for eachother,and neither have Deepika or Saksham.In the coleege a play on the theme of love and hatred was going to be staged on the Annual Union Day Celebration of the college.The auditions were to take place for the hero and villain and other characters,heroinne was selected,who was Prerna.Prerna wanted Nihaal to be her hero😳,though she never told him so directly,but she indirectly hinted to him that he should come early to college for the auditions.And he understood her concern😳.

Scene 1: Nirmalyam
Nihaal's room
Morning

Next day morning,Nihaal is fast asleep,he was sleepimg late till the morning due to staying up whole night as he was thinking about Gauri and also worked on the project.Gauri (his mum) comes and calls him,
"Nihaal get up beta,it's eight in the morning."
He sits upright as if hit by a thunderbolt.
"Eight,..OMG😲...today was the audition day for the play and the audition for the hero was also at Eight o' clock.I missed it...Prerna,i'm sorry."he was muttering while pulling out clothes from his closet and then sprinted to the bathroon,took a quick bath and started dressing up.
"She must be waiting for me...Hey!Bholenath,please help me...😕"
Somehow he got ready in a few minutes,took his books and stuffed it in his bag and camed down and left in a hurry.
His parents and others were in a shock to have seen him like this.The old punctual Nihaal was never late,never forgot to take the aarti,or his elders blessing.But, today something was different in him.He was late which was nothing less than the sun rising in the west.
"Aaj kya ho gaya is ladke ko?aarti bhi nahi li,humse ashirwaad bhi nahi liya...." said Gauri looking surprised.
Namita,Nupur and Tina were ready for school...They saw what happened and Namita interrupted Gauri,
"Ma,Bhiyya ko pyar ho gaya hai."
Gauri got angry and said to her,"Nammu,choti bacchi ho toh bacchon jaisi batein kiya karo...next time i hear anything like this from your mouth,I'll bash you...understood,now go to your school.Go,you both also...😡"
And they three go,making faces🤢.

Even though she has scolded the girls she knew they could be right.And she had to know it at any cost.

Scene 2: Gurukul Vishwavidhyalaya

Nihaal reached college on his bike,which had stopped half way and he'd to drag it the other half way to college.Cursing and yelling he reached college.He parked his Bike and hoped against all hopes that the auditions had not begun.But,luck was not in his favour.

Scene 3: The Auditorium

The auditions had already begun and the hero's audition was over...Saksham was selected as the hero,and Prerna was already selected as the heroinne.Nihaal rushed into the auditorium and saw her with Saksham.She was not even looking at him...And before he could reach her,she left the stage.Nihaal got a role,and ironically it was of the villain😕.Deepika got selected as his lady love,and she was super excited.The rehearsels began.The scene being rehearsed was that where Saksham and Prerna were to tell eachother that they love one another.They were to hold eachother's hands and when they did so, Nihaal felt a monster roaring inside him.Then comes his part where he was to slap Prerna and kidnap her.But, on the stage Nihaal forgets his part and gets lost in her eyes😳 and Prerna looks away from him in anger😕.He knew it was his fault.
During one scene the wires of the mics get entangled in Prerna's foot and is about to fall,when Nihaal and Saksham both rush to her aid(both chivalric knights rushing to help the maiden in distress😆).But,lucky Nihaal was her man.He holds he on time and she falls over him.She looks at him shyly this time forgetting all her anger,and everything around him becomes static.Only she was there before him,her eyes,her face with her long black hair hovering over his face😳😳...Prerna too gets lost in his eyes😳 and forgets her anger.But,then Saksham doesn't like this and helps her get up.She gets up and goes away...The practice gets over...But,he can't find her anywhere.Suddenly Deepika comes from behind and asks Nihaal,"Nihaal why were you late?We both were waiting for you."
"Woh,mujhe..." he stuttered.He was still thinking of Prerna.Deepika when she didn't get an answer from him said,"Acha hua you didn't get the heor's role...it's very boring to play the usual good guy,now we both can be a good pair...you know i think Saksham and Prerna make a very good pair,don't they."Nihaal again felt the roaring monster leaping in him.
"Deepika,i'll see you later,i have to go." and he walks away.



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CHAPTER SEVEN

Introduction

Nihaal still was being haunted by the thoughts of Prerna and Saksham holding their hands and saying they love eachother😡.The monster in him wanted to bash up Saksham the very moment😡,but his sane self controlled his violent self😆😆.He was searching for Prerna everywhere,and wondered what if Prerna loved Saksham and not him.He thought he should have told her about his feelings before,is he late!,has he lost her for ever,and then he's satisfy himself by thinking that No,she too loves me,i,ve seen it in her eyes.After a lot of searching in the library,music hall,classroom,and not even sparing the girls loo(he was so desperate😆😆),he finally finds her in the glass garden behind the gymnasium.

Scene 1: Gurukul
The Glass Garden😳

She was sitting on one of the flower shaped benches and was definitely crying😭😭.Nihaal felt guilt stricken.It was his fault.He came and sat beside her ,and said slowly to her,
"Prerna!!"
On hearing his sound she wipes her tears😭😭 and gets up to leave,but he holds her hand gently😳.
"Prerna,ruko...listen to me,i'm sorry i was late,but i want to tell u something...."
She forces her hand out of his grip and starts walking,but he comes and stands in front of her and looked really sorry😕.But,Prerna was in a very cross mood,as she was to play the lover of Saksham all thanks to Nihaal😕...
She leaves,and Nihaal stomps his feet and hits the bench with his fist.😡😡

Scene 2: Oberoi Mansion
Hall
Night time

Prerna is watching T.V. with her brother and sisters,and also surprisingly tonight her mother was also present,and she wasn't drunk.Prerna was happy for this,but then when she thought of Nihaal,she again became gloomy.Suddenly when she was thinking about all this her mum called her,
"Prerna,beta come here sit with me...😳"
Prerna was overwhelmed with joy,she ran to her and hugged her.After having a happy time together everyone went to their rooms.Puneet went to his room to sleep,as Sapna(Prerna's mum)told him she shall sleep with him,so that he doesn't feel scared and would feel comfy.Prerna was very happy to see her mum so changed.Puneet too was very happy.
"Goodnight di,aaj mein Mamma ke saat sounga...Yippee!!😃"
He kisses her little brother on his soft pink cheeks and says,"Good night!!,Goodnight Maa"

Scene 3:Prerna's room

She comes to her room and sits on the bed,thinking about what happened in the hall and also what happened in the glass garden...She went to Krishna😳 and started complaining to him about Nihaal,
"Ek toh late aata hai,aur phir kehta hain,baat karni hain,mein kyun sunoo uski baat...Jab usne meri baat nahi suni and came late...aur kaise Deepika ke saath chipak raha tha,during their scenes...nahi baat karoongi...shayad i was wrong,i anticipated that he loved me,even before he said anything to me...Krishna😳 you also don't talk to me..."and she gets up,and sees the teddy bear that Nihaal has given her during Friendship day.She looks at it and says,
"Tum kya dekh rahe ho,dekha nahi kaise tumhare friend ne mera dil dukhaya hain,I hate you...I hate you..."and she throws the teddy away,but on realising what she had done,she runs to it , picks it up,and hugs it.
"Bahut bure ho tum,but i can't even punish you,cuz it hurts me."
At that moment she hears the windchimes clinging in the balcony.She turns and to her surprise finds Nihaal standing there.She was so surprised that she could not utter a single word,but in another moment he was gone.She pushed her head and smiled to herself,"Ab toh sapno se baahar aakar bhi pareshaan karne lage ho..."she was speaking loudly,"Mein hi paagal thi jo,i couldn't control my heart and lost it to you for ever,even before he said to me..."Before she could finish,she was interrupted by a voice which said,
"I LOVE YOU!!😳😳"
It was Nihaal,but this time she wasn't surprised to see him.
"Oh!! ho!! it's you again...tumhari problem kya hai...why don't you leave me alone...JHOOTHA!!😕"
But this time the Nihaal's image didn't fade away,it was concrete and tangible.Nihaal again said with a heavenly kind of emotion in his eyes,
"Prerna I love you..."He kept gazing at her😳,but she still didn't believe her eyes and kept muttering to herself things like jhootha and tumse baat nahi karoongi kal when i come to college...,but suddenly he came clese to her and held her in his arms,and said,"Sssshhhh...listen to me...."Prerna was silenced and she lifted her hand slowly and touched his face,he was real and she was horrified to find that he was real and not her dream😲😲...
"OMG😲😕..what are you doing here??..My parents are at home....Why did you come here???OMG😲😲😲"
She sat on her bed and started panting nervously as she was very scared.
"Prerna,meri baat suno...I wanted to tell you something...and don't worry no one saw me,i came through the balcony..."
"Balcony😲!!" she exclaimed.
"Prerna,i couldn't resist myself..I had to tell you...that...😕"
"What?😕..I don't want to listen to anything...please go..if someone sees you here...then both of us will be in great trouble."
"Prerna...sshh...😳"She stops and looks at him and he holds her face with both his hands and looks into her eyes😳,
"Prerna,yeh jo tumhari aankhen hain ,yeh mujhe sonne nahi deti hain😳,aur yeh jo tumhare baal hain😳," he strokes her untied hair lying on her face😳 with his fingers and she trembles😳 and closes her eyes😳,"Yeh mere chehre par akar mujhe tumhara ehsaas karati hain..Prerna I LOVE YOU😳"

Prerna is speechless,her heart races fast,and she forgets for that moment that she is in her room,she feels like she is in some other world,away from everyone,where only they both are present...These were the words she was longing to hear all the time,and she felt like flying on the wings of love among stars and flowers and what not⭐️.
"Prerna,i love you...i tried to stop myself,my feelings,but i cannot...i really love you...and i realised this when you didn't talk to me the whole day,it felt like years,I can't live without you,and when you don't talk to me i feel soterrible,as if something is lost within me..."He then looked at her for an answer,but...
But,she was quiet,and didn't say anything,Nihaal realised he was wrong,but her eyes told him that he was right.He removed his hands from her face and her silence was killing him,like a dagger piercing his very heart and soul😭.He turnes and left her standing there like a lifeless statue.But, what he didn't knew was that she was stunned by his look,and whatever he said to her,she was lost .Her eyes only saw him,and her ears only heard those words,making her heart leap up and down.Finally,when he was about to go,she found her speech and called him,
"Nihaal😳!!" and ran towards him and hugged him from his back crying😭,
"I love you too...I love you so much!!!😳😳😳"



Scene 4: Same place
After some time...

"Nihaal you shouldn't have come here😳...dekho kitni chot lagi hain tumhe..."and she soothed his wounds by blowing on them and applied some ointment on them.He lifted her chin and kissed her on her forehead😳.
"Tumse mila toh mere sare dard mit gaye...😳"
And they both look into eachother's eyes😳...
"Prerna,now i must leave...bahut raat ho chuki hain...😳"
Prerna smiled and nodded😳,but she didn't wanted him to go😆.
They both walked to the balcony,holding eachothers hands😳,he then climbed over the railings,and Prerna was not leaving his hands,cuz she wanted him to get down safely😳.
"Nihaal be careful!!😳sambhal kar..."
"Prerna,you now go in,i'll go from here.."
Then she halfheartedly turns,but suddenly he stops her and asks her to come near him,she nervously goes near him.
"Apni aankhein band karo..."
"Annkhein band karoon...😳...alright.."she was confused.
She closes her eyes,Nihaal leans close to her over the railings.She could feel his presence,his warm breath,she quivered,he was about to kiss her,but then kisses her on her cheek instead😳.She opens her eyes and he was gone by then😳.

"Goodnight,goodnight!! Parting is such sweet sorrow,that i shall say goodnight till it be morrow."
~Romeo to Juliet @ her balcony😳.





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