FF The chain of destiny..epilogue on pg 43

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Wow..another story from you....great😃

Loved the first part...Bani's emotions were written really well....and UW....taking advantage of Bani's love for her niece...

I assume UW made JW marry Bani...and he left to London...

Can't wait to read the upcoming parts! Update soon 😛

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Vanita

@*Guli*

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

haila ur back with a FF and i love it!!!

wow!!!! this is something!!

jai left already?

jerk in part 1?

plz cont soon!

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Nice start Kamy, glad you started another story! So they are married and he left right after?

Can't wait for the next. So it was Uday Walia's other son and Bani's sister who died living the little one behind?

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nishi

@nishiraju

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

hey dear kamy thanks a lot .. 😛 .... really its amazing . 👏 ....gre888888888 story line ......fantastic......awesome.... ..eagerly waiting for the next update dear........ 👏 👏 👏

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

interesting begining kamy
continue soon

nadia 😛

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

Hey Kamy, nice to see here again!!
Nice start for a new story 😊 😊 I'm waiting for the next update 😊 😊

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

hey great start.. plz cont soon

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kooliio

@kooliio

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

hey...
great start 👏 👏 .......
bani's sis and jiju died in an accident 😭 😭 ......poor kid 😭 😭
they got married 😕 how???when???why??? 😆 .....and he left for london without bani 😡
plzz cont.soon

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kamarunnisa

@kamy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

melonie

Welcome back 🤗

And I am first 😆....Ok back to your FF

Beautiful start 👏 Thanks mel

So Bani lost her sister and jij in an accident...and has left behind a baby girl...that is very sad 😭 mmmmm

Hmmm...so UW is a rich man....and Bani is also very stuborn 😃😃

The last two sentence is creating a lot of eagerness in me 😳😳😳...now that Jai married Bani....was it a plan of Uday to make Bani stay in the mansion...and Jai left for London....that's a little suspicious 😕😕😕....he is a good man I hope 😊 let the story unflod by itself . do not frighten me with so much expectations😕😉

Uff...too many questions and I am getting no shanti 😆 he he he

Pls cont soon 😃 thank for being the fisrt one to comment

vardhani

hey,
very well written.
awesome start!!!

i love the pace of your FF.
eagerly waiting for the next part!!!

god bless
Dhani thanks Dhani.. i am glad u liked the writing😃

harshi21

What, why, how... she married Jai just like that and the idiot left her???? he he he😉 Is he taking his anger on his brother getting married to her sister and leaving the family???? can't say that dear may be may be not

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moonlitnight

welcome back 🤗 thanks moony

😭 poor Bani
😕 they got married and he left for good? 😕
ok its Uday's plan. but what about Jai? 😕
Jai? hmm
great start 👏
plz cont soon
give me some time... i'll have to start writing
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sxcdevil

loved the start poor bani jai just upped and left

___thnaks devily..._______________

nema123

Hey Kamy Dear....

Wonderful start.... 👏
Thanks for starting a new FF ... 👏 👏 was missing your light-hearted, witty and romantic stories.... 👏 hi nems thanks yaar.. witty this one? lets c. i'll have to do soemthing😉

Chandani1980

That was a fantastic start!! 👏 👏 👏
I loved it ! I loved it ! I loved it!! thnaks thanks thanks
I simply can't wait to read the next update!! 😳 he hehe
sorry guys if i keep u waiting😕

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nuomi.riceball

@nuomi.riceball

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Posted: 17 years ago

#30

how could bani agreed to the marriage when she knew clearly that uday walia never accepted her sister as his daughter in law? couldn't this marriage happen just bcoz uday walia wanted to use bani so that she can stay at the walia's mansion to take care of the baby.

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