FF The chain of destiny..epilogue on pg 43

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Sasila

@sasila

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Posted: 17 years ago

#161

Thanks for the wonderful update..hope we dont need to wait for too long for the next part.

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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 17 years ago

#162

Very nice update, Bani is taking care of Udai Walia, she is very formidable opponent when it comes to making him eat what he should be eating and very conniving... 😉 😉 😉

Jai walia is slowly falling for Bani rani...

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anarghya

@ANARLA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#163

i liked the gulaa jamoon part 😆
so jai has decided to resign and join his father's office good.

to ab jb ka kareeb ana time hain...
update offenly pls

continue soon

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hearme21

@hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#164

Nice update. Finally they are thrown together, I was wondering what would bring them to it? Loved the interaction between Bani and Uday Walia. Esp the Gulab Jamun part, awesome update.
Cant wait for more 😉

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#165

Last two parts were awesome gr8 Kamy! 👏 Raj did a nice job to get Jai thinking about Bani! 😆 Poor Uday, he got another attack! But he's doing better now. Bani is taking good care of him! 😉 The hospital scene with the two was touching...like a father-daughter bonding! 😃 The Gulab Jamun part was funny! 😆 😆 Hmmm now that Jai want's to stay Uday is telling him to go?! Maybe because he feels Jai is staying out of guilt. Wonder what Jai'll do now. Do continue soon; looking fwd to the JB scenes. 😛

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jeenal

@jeenal20

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Posted: 17 years ago

#166

gr88 part
loved it
wow bani is caring towards uday
plz cont sooon

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nishi

@nishiraju

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Posted: 17 years ago

#167

hey dear kamy.......... 😉 wonderful update........ 👏 thanks for the longggggggg update.......eagerly waiting for the next.......... 👏

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pooks

@pooks

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Posted: 17 years ago

#168

The interaction between Bani and Uday Walia is always not direct but is heartwarming. Loved how bani took care of him. And the nouk jhouk between the dada and poti over the gulab jaums was very, very cute 😆

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popeye

@popeye

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Posted: 17 years ago

#169

Hey kamy,
I loved the update it was absolutely brilliant.. I loved the way bani handles everything without anyone knowing. I loved the gulab jamun part and the way bani sent her message through neha to ensure maximum impact 😆 Jai and Bani both feel guilty for udays situation and so does uday. Uday has told Jai to go back and that he is free. Im wondering now what Jai will do .. Im waiting for the Jai and Bani updates. I cant wait for their love story to start.
Please please please update soon.
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