FF The chain of destiny..epilogue on pg 43

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anarghya

@ANARLA

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Posted: 17 years ago

#181

atlast jai atention is getting more towards sharadda and bani..

ab jayenge office sat saath jb.

hoep they get close . hoep they go beach offenly and play...

continue soon

Edited by ANARLA - 17 years ago

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sunil

@dearsunil1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#182

nice update

but plz plz plz update soon

wating for the next part

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nishi

@nishiraju

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Posted: 17 years ago

#183

hey kamy.............😜.......very well written...............story is progresing so beautifully...................emotions are very well penned.............good job .keep it up ............👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#184

PLZ CONT SOON

loved this part

loved the way UW is trying to bring JB close

he is not wrong in wishing a happy family

bani is getting aatached to jay and uday slowly

plz cont soon

gr88 part

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 👏🏻👏🏻

Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago

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aNsHu

@aNsHu_tEjPaL

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#185

ggrreat update!!! loved it!!!!

can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls cont soooooooooooooooon!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

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kooliio

@kooliio

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#186

hey.....

great part.....

loved the beach scene😜

and i really liked raghu's thoughts😆😆

plzzzzzz cont.soon....

Edited by koolgal - 17 years ago

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btkr

@btkr

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#187

Great part, Kamy. I love the little details u put in that show a loving family - eg Uday's feelings on seeing J and Shadhu playing ball. Poor Bani - she is aware of people talking and how they are going to observe the two of them together.

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hearme21

@hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#188

Glad to see the two are working together now. Uday Walia playing cupid is fun 🙂 Hopefully JB will learn to respect each other and understand each other too.
Looking forward to the next update.