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Posted: 17 years ago
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PLZ CONT SOON
GR88 PART
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Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey P[ooja,

Just canced upon your FF. Good story. Waiting for next update before I truly comment like a reader
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Thanks guys for ur lovely comment. As I had told, I wasn't able to update yesterday but Here's the new part.

Ten days Later

Dixit residence was full of noise and chatters. People were rushing from one place to another why not after all its their daughter's marriage ceremony. When Panditji had looked their kundalis there wasn't any auspicious date till another 4 months after this one. Dixit family had no problem waiting but Masi didn't want any further delay. Yesterday was Bani's Mehendi and sangeet ceremony all of them were having fun except Bani. Her relatives, friends had come from different parts of country to bless her and attend her wedding. They all were having blast and constantly teasing her making several kind of remarks but Bani, she didn't instead of blushing like all shy brides do bursted on them

"App logo main koi saram baki hain ki nahi. Etne budhe hogae hain, pote potiya ke saath helne ke umra me aap log esi baat karte hain. Agar etna hi saukh hain to apne apne pati ke saath chali kiyu nahi jati agle honeymoon main yaha par apna time waste kyu kar rahe hain" saying that she stormed to her room which brought not so happy end to her Mehendi and sangeet ceremony. (Do u have any shame left? Look at ur age. At the time of playing with ur grandchildren u are talking about sex. If u are so interested in it why don't u go to another honeymoon with ur respective husband instead f wasting ur time here)

All of them were shocked. Her parents were really ashamed but had expected such kind of action knowing Bani and behaviour of their relatives however they said soory on her behalf.

Today when her mother had gone to her room to wake her up she was already awake and was brushing her hair staring at the empty space.

"Beta tu uthga?. Itni jaldi?"(U are awke? This early?) Kiran knew her daughter well so didn't speak anything about yesterday's incident.

"Ha ma wo jaldi aakh khulgae" (Ya I woke up early)

"Tera haath dekhu to. Are kitna achha rang nikla hain. Kehte hain ki jiske mehendi laal nikalta ha uska pati use bohot pyaar karta hain." (Let me see uy hand. Wow its really dark. It is said whoever mehendi comes dark, her husband loves her a lot)

Bani refrained herself from commenting anything to her mother and went to bathroom leaving sighing Kiran.

"Wow Bani u look stunning. Aaj hanmare jijaji ka halat jarur kharab hoga" said Rashi wisteling at her causing laughter to anyone.

"Barat agae barat agae" (Groon has come soory didn't know what we say barat in English) shouted one girl running.

"Think of the devil and devil is here. Chal Bani dekhte hain tera hone wala pati kaisa dikh raha hain" (lets go Bani and see hows ur would be husband looking) said Rano.

"Tum log jao mujhe nahin dekhna" (U all go I am not interested) said Bani.

"Ha ha Bani to ab sirf akele me unhe dekhengi. Kyu Bani?" (ya ya. Now will look at him in private. Isn't it Bani? said Rano refusing the draggers Bani was shooting at her.

All girls ran away to terrace to have a look at groom when Jai was coming out of the car and bent down to take blessing from her mother and father in law. All the girls were left gasping looking at him. He was really looking hot and handsome in his white sherwani with red embroideries and some silver beads in it. The sehera in his head was making him both cute and appealing at same time.

He was brought to the mandap and marriage begun. After sometime the bride was asked to come down. All of them were whispering and doing aah and wow when suddenly Jai turned his head to see his beautiful bride walking down the stairs toward him. She was looking breathtakingly beautiful. Her bridal outfit has enhanced her beauty more. She was looking absolutely gorgeous. The red colour of her lehenga and those beads that were reflecting all the lights were giving her additional glow that he was left staring at her and didn't notice when his bride was sitting near him. The different rituals started and the marriage got finished when they did saat phere around the holy fire and Jai put the red vermilion powder on her partings.

Jai and Bani's bridal outfit.
http://www.amityethnics.com/images/sherwani/sherwani-s-5-p.j pg

It was time for bidaai. Nishikant and Kiran had to go London tomorrow morning regarding his business meeting so Jai's family had thought of returning Mumbai at the same day. There was only two hours left for their flight but his wife was continuously crying clinging to her mother. Both of them were crying totally oblivious to world where as her father was trying to put brave act in front of everyone but once his daughter said baba and cryied on his shoulder the damp broke. The tears, which he had been holding for such long time, started flowing shamelessly.

Jai saw her two friends Rano and Rashi, who nearly bankrupted him while returning, were crying on the corner and indicated them to come to him.

"Rano Rashi main janta hun agar Bani apni mata pita k elawa kisi ke kareeb hain to wo tum dono ho. Tum log to Jante hi ho na Bani neh saadi se inkaar kardi thi" both of them looked at him with surprise at this piece of information but he continued speaking
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Aur uske mummu papa bhi kal hi ja rahe he. Naye seher naye logo ke beech wo akeli padjaegi to me soch raha tha ki agar tum dono kal reception party main aajao aur Bani ke paas betho to use accha lagega."
(I know that if Bani is close any other people except her parent its u to. You must know Bani had refused for marriage and even her parents are going tomorrow so if u could come tomorrow at the reception and stay with Bani she will feel comfortable.)

Both Rano and Rashi smiled through her tears.
"Bani sach me bahut khush naseeb hain ki use aap jaise khayal rakhne wala pati mila. We will definitely come" said Rano and went towards crying Dixit clan to tell them that they were getting late.

Nishicant came toward Jai and said
"Beta bahut pyaar se pala hain mere bache ko ise kush rakhna. Agar koi galati ho to maaf kardena. Mere dil ka kukda tumhe de raha hoon" handing Bani over to Jai. (Beta I have raised her with lots of luv plz keep her happy. If she does any mistake, forgive her. I am giving u my life"

Both of them sat in the car and went towards airport for new beginning for their life.


Ok guys that's for today. I hope u guys will enjoy. Waiting for comments.






Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
gr88 part
wow jb marroed
plz cont soon
ab kya hoga?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
awwwwwwwwwwww..........they got married!!!!!!!! finally!!1 😃

can't wait for the reception!

the outfits were wonderful!!! great pick

pls cont sooon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
Awesome ff.
love it.
Bani forced into marriage....even Jai didn't help the situation...and wow they are married
very interesting...can't wait to read what future holds for them
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hey pooja........ 😉 gre8888 update.......pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Thanks guys for ur comments but I am really upset that some of my daily readers didn't left any comment. Anyway here's the next update.

The reception was gr8 affair. People were enjoying themselves. Party was huge, food and drinks were flowing, music, dance, why not after it was the gr8 Jai walia's wedding reception. Both Jai and Bani were looking like a charming prince and beautiful princess. All of them were complementing Jai for his beautiful wife.

Jai and Bani face were hurting smile at everyone and every time but whenever Jai tried to speak with Bani she would just ignore him. Rashi and Rano had noticed it.

"Kyu Ab tak baat nahin hui?" (Haven't spoken yet?) said Rashi teasing Jai.

"Bahot ziddi hain. Ese asani se nahi manegi. Uske marzi ke khilaf ki hain. Yeh to sirf trailer hain puri picture dekhni to baki hain" joined Rano with rashi. (She is too stubborn. She won't leave u easily. This is just the trailer whole picture is left to watch.)

Jai knew that he has married some stubborn girl but not such bomb. Jai and Bani was called to have first dance but Bani maintained good distance between them. She didn't once looked toward him. All time her head was down. Other thought it was because of her shyness but Jai only know the reason and Yes Rano and Rashi as well. After very long time reception got finished well according ti Jai who was eager to be with his wife alone but hell all the rituals were left as they were directly brought to hotel for their reception. Masi did their aarti, Bani hit the pot filled with rice and both of them entered with their right foot first.

All rituals were done, different games were played and now it was turn to play the game where both groom and bride were needed to find the ring from the bowl containg red water containg some pebbles(I don't know what it is called and also didn't know other rituals of marriage except this one so fast forwarded it). All boys were on Jai's team and girls on Bani's team. All were cheering and shouting, teasing each other. Both Jai and Bani were searching ring with gr8 concentration but unfortunate to Jai and fortunate to Bani, Bani won. All girls cheered and clapped whereas boys were left making disappointed sounds. Rano came near Jai and whispered "Bhagwan bhi Bani k taraf hain ab aap ka kya hoga" and started laughing looking Jai shocked face. (Even god is on Bani's side. I am afraid what will happen to you)

After long time Jai's prayer got answered by god and Masi finally told that its time for bride and groom to rest.

"Bani beta chalo upar kamre main chaltehe. Tum thag gayi hogi bohot raat hochuki hain" saying that she took Bani upstairs to Jai's room after indicating him to wait some time. (Bani beta let's go to room. U must be very tired)

After reaching up she made Bani sit in the middle of the bed with ghungat half covering her face. Masi could clearly see Bani clutching her ghagra tightly thinking her to be nervous. She sat near Bani, hugged her side ways and said

"Ghabrao mat Bani. Sari ladkiyo ko yeh din dekhna padhta hain. Maine bhi dekha tha. Mere munna ka dil sone ke tarha hain. Wo tumpe koi jabarjasti nahi karega agar tumhe koi pareshani ho to tum use batadena Aur main bhi to huna yaha. Thik hain" Bani nodded her head and Masi went downstairs to call her munna. (Don't worry beta everything will be fine. Every girl has to face this day even I had done. Jai has heart of gold he won't force himself on u and if u have any problem tell him besides all I am also here. Ok?)

When Jaii entered his room he could believe it was is room. Dim light of flickering candles, smells of different flowers, windows open with curtains blowing and soft chill of wind, slowly he made his way towards his bed but got surprised on not seeing Bani there.

He heard some noise and looked at that direction where he found his wife taking off her bangles looking breathtakingly beautiful bathing under the moon's light. On her bridal dress he was looking stunning but her she was looking absolutely divine. No makeup just the glow of moon light Jai was left staring at her.
Bani saw him staring at her…

Ok Guys that's it. Sorry if it was short but I didn't feel like posting the rest part now. Hopefully I will post the next part tomorrow as I have work late but who knows if they called. Hope u guys enjoyed reading it.

Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
pooja.. thats not right.. ek tho itni der baad update karti ho aur upar se short.. not fair.. and im first.. 👏 yeah baby... lol.. anywayz great part.. continue SOON.. hhehehe.. bani jai is really not bad.. i wonder wat jai wants to talk to bani about.. ahem ahem.. lol.. continue soon yaaar.. samjhi.. varna ahem ahem... hehehe
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
hooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww meeean!!!! i can't believe u didnt post the next part if u had it done already 😭

this part was amazing as usual.....

.can't believe bani!! wht is her problem????? i cant believe she's acting like tht!!! 🤢

pooor jai!!!feel soory for him...and rano and rashi teasing him 😆 😆 😆

can't waiiittttt to see wht happens next!!!!
pls cont sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!!!

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