FF:Why isn’t the life simple? last part pg 28 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Why isn't the life simple? - I often ask myself this very question 😆 😆 ... g8t title, it got attracted to me so I decided to read your ff, nice intro and Jai already "ready" to marry to Bani in a such breef meeting 😉 nice nice...
cont soon please 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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poor banu got the shock of her life did she 😆 😆 wonder what made jai agree..me thinks bani is not going to let jai live in peace! 😆 pls cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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The title of the FF made me read the story..I loved the title and I am glad I started reading..nice beginning..
So Jai has already said "ok" to the wedding..now lets see how he tames her...I am sure the sparks are going to fly around..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks guys for ur encouraging comments. It really boosts me up to write next part but am very sorry that couldn't write for last two days. Sorry was a bit busy. I wont bore u with my talks so here is the next part.

The Journey from Bani's home to his hotel must be one of the noisiest and irritating rides Jai had ever faced in his life. Laughing, shouting, squealing with joy and asking him again and again same question that what made him say yes to marriage.

"Oh Jai bhaiya come on tell na aap ne ha kyu kaha"(Why did u tell yes?) whined Nachiket.

"Nachiket tu jata hai ki nahin" (Nachiket u are going or not) said Jai raising his one hand as him hitting him

"Jata hu jata hu. Masi aap puchke bujhe bata dena" Saying that in Masi'd ear he ran away.

Masi knew his Nephew inside out. He wouldn't do anything without any reason and for him to say yes to this marriage has some reason and she also knew that he in no way gonna say that to anyone.

Masi was about to say something to him when suddenly

"Masi!! Jigyasa didi ka phone hain" Nachiket suddenly called out.

"aati hoon"(coming) Masi shouted back.

"Hmm Jigyasa usne kaha tha phone karne ko riste ke bare main bhulgayi. Abi batati hu khush hijaegi aur wapas jaldi aaneko bhi bolna hai"(Jigyasa. She had asked me to call regarding this alliance and I forgot. I will go and tell her she will be happy and also have to tell them to come early) said Masi recollecting all the lists that she needs for her Munna nad Bahu for their marriage happiness and enthusiasm dropping from her every action.

"Masi unko disturb karni ki kya jarurat thi. Kitne dino baad sab family holiday pe gaye the hum sadi do tin mahine ke baad rakhenge" suggested Jai. (Masi what was the nedd to disturb them. After such a long time whole family has gone for holiday. We can fix the date after two three months)

"Tu chupkar. Pata nahin aaj ha kardi hain kal phir na karde. Tera mood badalne ne pehle hi mujhe teri saadi karwani hain. Sayad tujhe saadi karni ki jaldi na ho lekin mujhe mere pote poti ka mooh dekhne ki jaldi hain" saying that she ran to attend call leaving smiling Jai. (U shut ur mouth. Who knows today u are saying yes tomorrow u will say no. Before u change ur mood I want u to get married. Maybe u don't want to marry now but I am in hurry to see my grandchildren faces)

Jai Walia had been orphaned in very early age of 18 but had never failed to fulfil any of his responsibility and same time achieving his goals. Even though his sister was much elder than him but it was him who protected her from this world and help lead luxurious life rather than opposite. In his early age he faced the wrath of this cruel world which made him what he is now: strong, powerful, successful, arrogant, shrewd businessman and his father's disloyalty towards his mother always stopped him from showing any kind of emotion or love which made him more stone hearted in front of others.

Today when he had gone to see Bani he had made up his mind that he would directly say no but her stubbornness and fearless nature prevented. First of all when she didn't look up he had thought it to be her shy nature but later on her glaring towards her mother, going garden leaving him alone told him that it was all her stubborn nature and top of that her direct command to cancel the wedding add fuel in it. Never been used to hearing No from anyone today mostly made him say yes. Even he wanted to know this girl his would be wife, challenge her and finally defeat her because he knows it that she cant say no to her family. After all this world has made him able to read and judge people's mind well, hasn't it?

Dixit's Residence

Bani's mom happiness had simply no boundaries. She was hoping and praying that finally her daughter will forget that dreadful past ad move on happily, Her father has already started the preparations and her friend, they have already packed their bags and had come to live in Dixit family but in this jovial atmosphere it was Bani who suffocating every minute.

Nerve of that Jai Walia what does he think of himself. She had clearly stated that she doesn't want to marry but he went further with this stupid marriage thing. If it wasn't for Dad I would have never agreed for it. Why don't they understand that I don't want to marry and its already 10 days he hasn't spoke to me. These were the questions that nowadays always moved on Bani's head and same was the case now when

"Bani beta. Main undar aau," asked his father. (Bani beta can I come in)

Bani was shocked hearing her father talking to her after so long time and happy as well. She looked towards her father with teary eyes and hugged him tight when he gestured her to come forward.

"I am sorry baba I am sorry. Par aap jante ho na main kyu saadi nahi karna chahati. I don't believe in such stuff Baba. It only hurts people. I don't like it. I hate the word love and marriage"

Nishikant knew his daughter view towards marriage but after listening her it shook him inside that what has world made to her daughter. He didn't say anything to her simply rubbed her back letting her cry. He rally missed his daughter and she has as well.

After some time when she stopped sobbing.

"I know that u don't want to marry par beta zindagi ese to nahi chalti nah. We all need a partner to live with, to share our joys and sorrow, to share our deepest secrets and thoughts, to share our fear and apprehensions, and most importantly to share our life. Hamara kya hain aaj hain kal nahi but u have ur whole life u cant live it alone, can u?" Nishikant asked her daughter but Bani just stared him.

Beta main marne se pehle tujhe kush dekhna chahta hoon, aapne parivvar ke saath sukhi dekhna chahata hoon. Beta main apni ek beti kho chukka ho dusra kehi chahate. Kya tu mujhe ye kushi degi, Kya tu apni marji saadi karegi apne os jivan ek aur mokka degi?" (Beta before I die I want to see u happy, content eith ur family. I have already lost one of my childs I don't want to lose u. Will u give me this happiness?, will u marry?, will u give ur life a chance? Will u?"

"Ha baba ha " saying that she hugged him again crying silently on tear-filled Nishikant where as on the other hand Kiran was watching both of father daughter duo wiping her tears happy that her biggest problem has been sort out.


Ok Guys its already One here. If any of my parents will wake up and see me tying at this hour that trust me its gonna be my last update. So if u want me to post further I have to stop here. I hope u guys enjoyed it and I have meet ur expectations. I don't think I will be able to post tomorrow as I have work but I will try my best. Thanksss.




Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yyayy!! u updated!!!!

loved how u displayed both bani and jai's emotions sooo well!!! it was amazing!!!

i can already see the fireworks!!! can't wait for more!!!! 😃

hopefully we'll get to see the meeting number 2 quick! 😃

pls update soooooooooooooooon!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😭 .. awwwnnn im glad bani maan gayi.. anywayz great part pooji.. as usual.. continue sooon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part....so Bani agreed, emotionally 'forced' to agree actually.....but seriously I couldn't find any reason for her to say NO to Jai Walia 😉 this going to be interesting.....please continue...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
hey ...... 😛 nice part pooja.....gre88888 going.. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey,

WOW!! Nice story, what must have happened that bani is against marriage and love, very much eager to know!!
loved jai!!!!

Update soon…

God bless

dhani

Edited by vardhani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part 👏 .......
awwww the father daughter talk was sooo emotional 😭 ........ cant wait to know was was bani's past........that she doesnt want to marry .....
plzz cont.soon

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