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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys. Thank u thank u very much for ur comments. I am really sorry for taking this long days but I was busy. I thought I would update it during weekend but I couldn't even realise when weekend pass away. I was like"Weekend's gone. Tomorrow's school". I was working from morning 12 to 11 night. My home works I did that on train while going to school. And another thing, my dad, he deleted everything from my computer saying that it was making computer slow. I was searching and searching and my sister told me that "OH! It has been deleted". Ok I wont bore u anymore here is the next part.

Early morning with the first ray of sunlight Jai woke up. First thing he saw was tear strained face of his beautiful wife sleeping wrapped on his arm clutching his shirt and snuggled to his chest. He slightly lifted his other hand and stroked her hair. From past many days he was cursing the day when he said yes for his marriage and forced Bani but today he knows why he did that. Whatever happens, happens for good. And today Jai Walia realised its true. Today he has to bring his wife out from her past, from that horrifying incident. May be he has applied for divorce but he has at least 6 months with him and in this period he will give his wife her life which she has lost somewhere. He doesn't care whether Bani will stay with him or not but he will make her coming days beautiful. He will connect the thread, which has been cut between her and life after that fateful accident. He will bring Bani back.

Jai was lost in this thoughts stroking Bani's hair when he felt Bani moving. He suddenly removed his hand and closed his eyes so that Bani wont feel awkward facing him after last night incident. She needs time, May be after she freshen up. Slowly Bani opened her eyes, her head felt heavy. She tried to move but she couldn't and found own self on the arms of her husband. As she looked at his face all the last night moment flashed in front of her eyes how she ran away from the restaurant, her crying and how she said everything to him. She didn't know how to face him now. She had never wanted him to know her past and feel weak in font of him. She didn't want anybody's sympathy or pitiful words. She was going in her life and she doesn't want any changes now. Slowly she came out of the bed and went to freshen up.

45 minutes later Bani came out from bathroom rubbing her hair and first thing she saw was her husband continuously staring at her. He got off the bed and walked towards her. Bani didn't know what to do so she keep on rubbing her hair and wet towards dresser. Jai went closer to her, stopped her hand, removed the towel, placed it in the chair and turned her towards him. Bani was everywhere but him.

"Bani meri taraf dekho"

Slowly she looked at him and there she saw seriousness and sincerity on his eyes.

"Bani I am sorry for what happen to your sister. Maine kabhi soche bhi nahin that ki itni kam umar main tumhe itna kuch jhelna parha."

Bani got the same response as she had expexted and she wasn't liking this a bit. Sympathetic words, she was fade up with it.

"Mujhe patah hain meri bate tumhe achi nahin lag rahi hain. Mujhe bhi achha nahin lagta koi mujhe ya kehta to kyunki baaton main kya hain jo bhi face kiya hain wo to tumne kiya hain, Lekin support naam ki bhi koi cheese hoti hain jo insaan ko apni dukh ko bhulane main madat karti hain. Wo dardnak pal jo tumne gujare hain wo tumhe bhulane main madat karte hain. Apni zidagi ko us insaan ki wajeh se mat barbad karo jo zindagi ke kabil bhi na ho"

"Maine meri behen hoya hain" said Bani with anger and hurtful voice.

"Jainta hoon lekin kabhi socha tumhari didi ko tumhara ye jivan achha lagta hoga. Kitna dukh hora hoga ye soch kar ke unke wajhe se tum aaj tum aesi ho."

Bani didn't reply anything.

"Bhalehi us din Pushkar tumhe physically kuch kar nahin paya lekin wohara bhi mahin apne maksad se aur ue jitane wala aur kohi nahim tum hi ho"

Bani raised her head and looked at him unbelievingly.

"Main tumse yeh nahin kehta ki sab kuch bhul jao aur age bado lekin zindagi main jo daere tumne apne aap ke liye banaya haim use bahar niklo. Dekho ki zindagi main aaj aur bhi bahut cheese hain jeene ke liye. Apne liye na sahi apne maabaap ke lie, apni didi ke liye. Jo kuch bhi ho zindagi akele to jiya nahin jata na. Main ye nahin kehta ki mere saath meri patni banke raho lekin mujhe apna dost to banasakti ho jis se tum apna kushi aur dukh dono baat sakti ho?"

Bani keep on staring at him with tears on her eyes.

"Bolo banaogi mujhe apna dost? Karogi mujhse dosti?"

"

Bani didn't say anything simply rushed to his arm and hugged him tightly sobbing quietly. Jai slowly rubbed her back comforting her. After sometime when her crying as a bit stopped. He said

"Chalo ab ache bache ki tarah apna muh thik karo aur tayar hojayo. Niche jana hain sab intazaar kar rahe hain. Aur hain meri clothes nikaldena office ke liye mujhe ganto lagte hain choose karne main"

Bani simply nodded and he went to bathroom not before patting her cheeks.

So that was simple yet complicated life of Jai n Bani. Both of them wake up every morning together, Bani used to lay his clothes for him and he without any question use to wears that. His breakfast, lunch and dinner, he wouldn't even dare to forget that otherwise his wife would eat him alive. During weekend strictly no works. . Aditya and Nachiket used to tease him saying that how his wife is controlling his life. Masi, well she was happy that what she couldn't do her bahu could do it but she could still feel something missing in their relation.

And Bani she would stay at home and try new dishes from Dadi and masi and poor them and Tony, who had to face her new foods, Sometime no salts, sometime only salt, sometime burnt roti sometime leather ki roti, sometime uncooked food, sometime no food at all. Slowly Walia's white kitchen was turning to grey.

Jai was happy with what goin on in his life. Everybody would love to have such caring wife and family but still there was some missing puzzle. There was no bitterness left in their relation but love, need a thought. There was no point denying that he loved his wife that also to extreme point but for his wife he was her friend just her friend. He knows today Bani doesn't need divorce from him but she also doesn't need his love. He knows she would be happy to live all her life here in his house being his wife but she doesn't need his love. He knows today the most important person in her life is he but she doesn't need his love.

Ok guys I am done now. Can't think further need a break. Hope u liked it. I will try to update next part faster if not Saturday pakka.

Waiting for all ur replies. 😊

Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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was wondering abt this ff!!! i am glad u've finally updated!!! 😊

it was really beautiful to see JB take a new turn in their relationship!!!!!!!! 😃

can't wait for more!!! pls cont sooon!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part.....this is better, some improvement in Jai and Bani's relationship......Bani is getting used to her life......please continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey,

Long time dear!!!! Where were you!!!

AWESOME UPDATE!!! I simply loved jai!!!

Bani will come round I guess!!
Continue soon………

God bless
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Posted: 17 years ago
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poooji.. yeah thank god u updated.. mujhe tension hon elagi thi.. lol.. anywayz great part.. im glad atleast they r friends.. hehe chal continue soon yaar..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey pooja....... 😛 wonderful update......pls cont soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part.....
caught up with last 3 parts 😳 ......
happy that jb r frnds now 😛 ......
plzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hai Pooja,

Loved the updates 👏 👏 👏

I am sure this sweet friendship will soon blossom into LOVE 😳 ❤️ 😳

It's so nice to see Jai so caring, that was very thoughtful of him. All the best Jai....you can do it 😃 😳 😳

Bani also will need some time, it's not so easy to forget everything that happened to her sister 😭

Time will heal all the wounds and with Jai's love she will surface everything 😳 😃 😛

Pls cont soon 😃
Edited by melonie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great update please update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi! Sorry sorry. I know I had promised to update last Saturday but I got some what busy and thought instead of writing after every 10 days I will write regularly after my holiday will start. My holidays have started from today and I will try my bst to update regularly. Thank u so much for ur beautiful Comments. Here is the next part.

"Bani! Bani! Kya kar rahi hain itni subah subah kitchen main" said masi entering the kitchen where Bani was putting the last roti inside the pot. There was smoke everywhere, sink full of dishpots, vegetables, oils, masala, all over the kitchen slab, and flour everywhere on the kitchen flour. Poor Tony he was looking at his flour filled uniform and praying to god to send Bani away from his dear kitchen.

"Masi dekho maine aloo ke parethe aur tamatar ke pakaya huwa chatni banaya hain"said very excited Bani.

"Ummm to Jai ke liye mehenat kiye ja rahi hain" said masi smiling.

"nahin to masi maine to sab ke liye nasta banaya hain" said Bani with innocent face

"Achha? To bata kis kis ke liye banaya hain. Jaha tak mujhe pata hain aditya town se bahar hain, Sahil apne college tour ke liye gaya hain, Ranveer ka koi barta hain, Anu aur jigyasa ka aloo parathe se sakth dusmani hain fitness ke naam se, dadi ko cholestrlo problem aur mujhe pasand nahin. To bacha kaun? Haaaaa tony ke liye banaya hain to alag baat hain" said Masi as if deep in thought.

"Masi…" said very shy Bani.

Masi simply laughed.

"Masi chakh ke batauna kaisa banahain" requested bani with small voice.

"Jaja jiske liye banaya usise puch" denied masi.

"Plzzzzzz Masi. Agar unhe pasand nahin aya to? Dadt de to?" tried bani hard.

But all her request went to deaf ears as Masi was in no mood to listen her.

"Maine bola na nahin. Ab jati hain ya nahin." Masi Pushed Bani towards stair giving her the food.

Very slowly Bani opened her bedroom room and peeped. There she saw Jai brushing his hair.

"Are Bani aise andar chiha(Peep) kyu rahi ho? Andar ao

Nasta? itni jadi? Aur kamre main? Bani masi ne dekha to chodengi nahin"

"Umm. Umm" stammered Bani. "Wo Masi ne hi diya hain kaha ki aaj koi breakfast nahin kar raha hain siway apke is liye main apko kamre main lake du" lied Bani very carefully.

"Thik hain lagado bhuk lagrahi hain. Kya hain naste main?"

"Aloo ke parathe aur tamatar ke chatni" said Bani swallowing hard.

"Aloo ke parathe. Masi is simply best" saying that he sat on the chair and impatiently waited Bani to lay his food.

As Jai put first bite in his mouth, he instantly knew that it was not made by his masi. Confused he looked at Bani to ask but saw her staring at him nervously then it clicked. He had heard that Bani was learning to cook food but had never tried it and today his wife has him food made by her. He can clearly see how nervous she was and wanting to know how it was. He thought of playing with her some time.

"Bani maasi ki tabiyat to thik hain na?" asked jai.

"Ha kyu?"

"wo khan kuch alag hain aaj. Lagta hain masi bhul rahin khana banana."

"kyu kya huwa"

"dekho na roti kitna sakht(hard) hain. Lagata hain leather ki roti kha raha hoon aur andar ke stuff bhi achha nahin hain. Aloo achi tarah se fry nahn kiya koi koi kache hain" said Jai trying to keep his face straight.

"Khana kya itna bura bana hain" asked bani disapointedly

"ha aur ye chatni. Masale ki badbu aari hain, baut khatte hai aur namak bhi jyada hain. Lagta aaj office main nasta karna padhe ga" saying that he lifted his head to see Bani's reaction but found her eyes filled eith tears.

"Are are Bani ro kiyu rahin ho. Bani..?" said jai standinh to hold Bani but instead of stopping her tears started flowing uncontrollably.

"Now Jai got panicked. "Bani! Main to mazak kar raha that. Khana bahut achha hain."

"Sachi?" asked Bani wth tearful eyes.

"hain sachi. Mujhe to khate hi pata chal gaya that ki masi ne nahin tumne banana isile chida raha tha" saying that he hugged her and kissed tip of her nose.

"Sachi main achi hain." Asked bani again

"Hain bahut achi han. Aur do parathe lado" saying that he sat on the chair to munch his favourite aloo ke parathe.

"To aap mazak kar rahe the?"

"ha"

"mujhe yuhi rula diya?"

"Ha"

"Muje olloo bana rahe the?"

"Ha" said jai without hearing the angry voice of Bani and busy munching his food.

"To phir thik hain koi jarurat nahin hain meri banae hui khana khane ki" saying that she snatched plate away from him.

"Bani!!! Shouted jai and stared dumb folded at her.

"Kya kar rahi ho. Khana dona bhuk lagi hain aur bohut achhi bhi hain."

"Nahin!" said Bani said stubbornly moving the plate in other direction away from her.

"Bani kya kar rahi ho? Dona" said jai trying to get the plate but she wasn't letting.

"Achha baba sorry. Dona plzz"

"Thik hain lekin ek sart par"

"Kya sart"

"Mujhe shopping lejana hoga"

"Ok" said jai instantly forgetting how Bani have made him enter every shop as her porter last time they had done shopping together. Jai had promised he is never gonna go shopping with her but aloo ke parathe made him forget everything.

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"Bani ye shop main to hum abhi 10 minute pehle aaye the na?"

"HA Mr. Walia. Maine socha tha ki dusre shop isse acha milega lekin waha to yehi saman biiisss rupe zyada hain" stressing on word biss.

"Bani biiissss rupe zyada dugi to garib nahin hogi." Said Jai in same way as Bani.

"Bis rupe ke khatir mall ke ek corner ke dusre corner leaae" muttered Jai to himself.

"Mr. Walia bund bund milke hi samundar banta hain agar sabko bis bis rupe zyada dene lagi to bohat jaldi Walia industries main tala lag jaega"

"Bani maine Walia industries bis rupiya main nahin banaya"

"Mr. Walia chaliyena ab abko der nahin ho rahi hain mujhe abhi masi aur dadi ke liye bhi kapda kharidna hain" said Bani as she had no answer to him.

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"Mr. Walia jaldi khaeye na. Abhi 5 minute me shop band ho jaege" Bani said pulling his shirt sleeve

"Wohi to main chahta hoon" Jai muttered to himself. "Khane dona bani. Achha chalo". He had said only that Bani pulled him straight to the shop but fortunately for Jai shop was closed.

"Dekha sab aap ki baje se shop bhi banda hogaya Mujhe aur bhi kyakya kharidna tha" said Bani sulkingly.

"Bani mujhe walia mansion main shopping center mahin kholna. Gadi bhar chuki hain saman se aur tumhe kya kya kharidna tha" said Jai mimicking Bani.

"Mere mahine bhar ka salary khatam kardiya"

"Mr. Walia yaha shop banda hogae aur aap ko paise ki pari he. Jaeye main aap se baat nahin karti " saying that she went to the car and Jai shaking his head followed Bani.

Hope u guys liked it. Waiting for ur comments.😊

Edited by Pooja_fren - 17 years ago

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