FF-Perfection:Doesn’t exist/pt9Apg17(8/11)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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My previous FF's

Two Paths-(finished)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/835085/ff-two-paths-ending-pg27-5-5-08

Kyalovestoryhai-(Running)-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/867907/ff-kyalovestoryhai-part14pg-22-7-10-08

Lights...Camera...Shaddi..(new)-

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/917355/ff-lights-camera-shaddi-finale-pg30-8-9

Here it goes...

Quick Introduction

Life is what you make of it, and perfection is the ultimate goal. This is something Bani would say. Ever since she was little she wanted perfect grades, perfect attendance, the perfect career, and the perfect family. All of which Bani believed she had, until one fine day her life came crashing down, ruining her not so perfect family. But before we get to the crashing, lets see Bani's perfect life.

Bani called out 'Sonam', 'Sonam'. Bani rushed into her room,'Wake up sleepy head'. She rummaged through Sonams closet taking her clothes out and placing them on the corner of her bed. 'Come on Sonam, I have to get to court, don't make me late, Did you study for you test?' she asked standing over Sonam's covered head. Sonam immediately got up, and sat in her bed. 'Test? Konsa test?' Bani laughed and dragged Sonam into the bathroom. 'Babhi seriously, konsa test?' she asked repeatedly.

'Koi bhi test nahi hai, relax Jaldi se naha kar ajja'

Bani ran into the dinning room seeing the entire family eating breakfast. 'Good Morning' Bani said chirpily.

'Good morning' replied the entire room full of people, looking up from their breakfast. 'Bhabi, Sonam kahan hai?' said Saagar.

'Tayaar ho rahi hai,breakfast kasia bana hai?'

Bani looked at her watch, it was 900am. She went toward her inlaws, bent down and took their blessings. 'Kush raho' they both replied.

Bani stood up, and her husband rushed by kissing her check, and running out the door shouting 'love you'. Bani blushed alittle, replying to herself 'love you too'. Bani too ran out the door, as Sonam reached the dining room.

'Bhabi kahan hai'

'In the car, jaldi kar'replied Tina.

'Okay, bye guys, love you'said Sonam racing out the door.

'3,2, 1' the door opened, and Sonam sat in. Bani chuckled at her amazing timing.

'chaliyeh babhi.'

'Thank god, tu agayye, ross mujhe late karadethi hai'

'Par app late nahi hote na kabhie, toh bus'

Bani drove Sonam to college and then went to court.

**A typical morning, In Bani's perfect life**

In court

'Jath sab, yeh case bouth hi saaf hai, Mr.Mishra neh Mrs.Mishra ko rape kiya hai, marital rape bhi toh koi cheese hoti hai''Said Bani

4 hours later

Bani-(on her laptop)-God ajj ka case ithna hectic tha!!

She typed some notes on her laptop, as a cup of coffee was put in front of her.

'Hey Jay, thanks for the coffee' said Bani.

'No problem, and Congrats. You won today's court case'

**This was a normal day at Bani's work, she was a student lawyer. This was Bani's dream job, therefore she worked hard, and won almost all of her cases. **

'have a seat, and please if I win you do too, and plus it was my last win in Family court, from tomorrow I start a new life in Business Court'

'So are you excited?'

'Well Jay I think, its another step for me, honestly I'm tired of all these marital rapes and forced weddings'I mean doesn't anyone fall in love anymore, is that word really extinct?'

'that's really funny, love! Haven't heard that one in a while'

Bani wasn't amused by that comment, and Jay continued

'You've only been here for two years, imagine me here for 8 years, I still remember the day you joined, your wedding was the next day right?'

'Ya, it was, and I remembered I invited you, you were 4 hours late, and missed most of the cerimonies'

'Oh come on, I was debating on whether to come or not'

'Well, it's been a great 2 years with you Bani, I'm going to miss you'

'Me too Jay, and the special coffee you make me, that brightens my day'

'But seriously, you think your going find something new, in Business court?'

'Well, at least I will be done with divorce cases, I hate divorces. I really question the morals of people who get divorced, I mean can't they try to work things out?'

'Oh come on Bani, okay fine, lets not even get into it'

'Jo bhi kaho, you've been a great teacher to me'

'And likewise you have been a great student Bani, I'm sure with your talent surely soon you will become an advocate, instead of a learning lawyer'

'Thanks' she got up and hugged him

'So you're not kicking me out of your firm are you?'Bani asks sipping her coffee.

'Of course not Bani, why in the world would I do that? You're the best one in my firm, so how's Sumit doing? And his business?'

Bani sighed 'well I wouldn't call a business, but yeah he's doing okay, and how about Lora the catch of the day'. Bani said teasingly.

'oh, Lora, she was the catch of yesterday 'he said laughing

'Come on Jay your 32, I really think you need to settle down, don't you?'

'Bani! Do you really think I need to settle down? Whats wrong with being single?'

Bani looked back at her laptop, and saw a new list of clients.

'Okay fine leave all that, listen mere 9 new clients hai, so will you please handle them for me, since today was my last day.'

'Yah just email me the list of your clients and I'll look after them'

Bani looked at her cell phone, she had 4 missed calls. Looking at the time she saw it was 100pm.

'Hey, Jay I'm going to take your leave, I'll see if I can catch lunch at home today' With that Bani left immediately she grabbed a taxi and went home.

**The law firm that Bani worked at was owned by Sanjay Gupta, AKA Jay**

So let me know how it is'if its not good, then please tell. I wont continue'This new FF will replace Two Paths'

Nikita...

Please comment if you get a chance..

Suggestions are welcome...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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1st 😃

Sorry for my late comment 😊

Great start yaar 👏

Bani is lawyer 😃 that's what I want to be 😆

So Jay is Bani teacher 😆 interesting 😉

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳

Edited by snsali_pooja - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnks niki...4 letting me knw abt this new FF of urs...or else i wud hv missed it...the title is "superb"...n the way u hv strd is gr8...do continue gurlll :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Nikita
thanx for letting us know u started a new ff 😉
well i like the title of this ff its good
bani had the perfect life i wonder what happens to this perfect life and how does Jai come into this 😕
please continue


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Nikita!!!!!!!! Great new fan fic. I loved it. Its good to see bani with jai but she really isn't with jai. it was a really nice start. loved bani's perfect family. i would really want to know more about the members of the family. please continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So who is mysteryman Bani is married to. Waiting to see how her perfect life becomes imperfect. Good storyline.... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nikki that was grate update...wowwwwwww yeh kiya tumne muje bhi role di appne iss FF's mein "SONAM" 😉 😳so bani is married for 2 years her husband is our muuna JW😉


continue

sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome! soo, i wonder who this mystery-husband is. AND how jai will come in bani's life!

please continue soon!

SA 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great start 👏
really awesome 👏 👏 .......and different 😛
will be waiting for the next part
plzzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good start waiting to read more

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