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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Piku*

adorable, cute, and hilarious

i love the pov from baby krishna, its so cute ๐Ÿ˜ณ hehehe..ya it is..

please write soon trying to

thank u ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great start. thanks
liked it.
story for baby's pov...great....it was so funny ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† more fun is on the way๐Ÿ˜‰
plz cont. soon trying to

thank u๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

Helloo.. my twinee hellooo dear

as wwe both are always.. at the same place hehe lolzz hehehe thats right


omg.. i loved that.. part.. it was so cute..yap he is. beta kiska hai๐Ÿ˜‰

aww krishna... actually talking so sweet..

aww stupid doc.. hitting krishna..very bad doc

so not cool at all..agjaktly๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

hehe lolz zbani is funny..

aww jw.. is so cut.e.

contine soon

PS: now.. be ready to be blackmailed into updating.. ur SS hey thats not so cool๐Ÿ˜‰ lols

thanks for ur lovely (blackmail bhari) comment

Originally posted by: davia389

woowww i loved it the way u presented the ffr and krishna specially.. ๐Ÿ˜† it was rockign when he sasy go mamma go and scold ๐Ÿ˜† hehehe..he wants mamma to teach that Doc a lesson๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

haial it was rockign...
๐Ÿ‘

thank u๐Ÿ˜ณ

waitihng u to continue pls post the enxt aprt soon.. trying to๐Ÿ˜›

i lvoe the way us aid he smile liek a fool at times for jai ๐Ÿ˜† hehehe..

pls cotnineu soon
davia

Originally posted by: damilola

๐Ÿ˜†

dats so cute !!!

bani mad at d dr for thumping krish's ass ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ofcourse.๐Ÿ˜‰after all her 1st sweet cute little baby๐Ÿ˜ณ

and jai smiling like a fool LMAO ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† i see many ppl liking that line

love it
ctn soon

thanks for commenting

Originally posted by: nikitaic

Hey really good..
Please continue sooon...

thanks for ur comment

Originally posted by: divan

Tropa...cute..but you should have started from the time he start to make his way out in the world...it would have been even more hilarious.haila!! Di i wanted to. but couldnt come up with the dialouges๐Ÿ˜• so started from tehre..I thought for a moment Bani's bum was being spanked...or she was dreaming. what!!!!!!!LMAO

It's funny and so I love it...we need some fun. ๐Ÿ˜† true

thanks for ur comment di

Originally posted by: tam2

๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ... hey Tropa.hii...wonderful...loved it so far... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ...... i m hapy u liked it

It's funny too....Poor Krisna... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ... ya..poor little

Krishna can recognize people's true nature by looking at them.ofcourse he can๐Ÿ˜‰..he is so right he's dad is a fool... ๐Ÿ˜† hehehe agjaktly๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†... and his mom is cutest.... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ..... right๐Ÿ˜ณ

Do cont with it when you have enough time to... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ... will wait for next part.... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ... trying to๐Ÿ˜ณ

Do cont soon.... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ...

thanks for ur lovely comment๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: Hritzfan

its so cute ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘.cont soon

thanks for ur comment ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: queenidda

wow just too tooo cute plz continue ... i luve dit it ws soo interesting... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

luv nida โค๏ธ

thanks for commenting dear

a biiiiiiiiiig thanks to aaaaaaaaalll of them who read & commented & also to the silent readers๐Ÿ˜‰

i m at my cousin's place now..will try to update while back at home๐Ÿ˜› um not sure though๐Ÿ˜‰

preview: Part 2: My large family

"he is glaring at me!! omg!! look!!"

"come on. he is a little baby. how can he 'glare' at u??"

"but he is!! aaaaaaah!!! oh nooooo!!"

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† thats it

take care

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww... that was soo cute I Loved it.. little krishna sounds adorable...

ples update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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love the preview...want some zippy moments with jigs bhua.... ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey... sorry... fell asleep y'day... so dint read...

wow Krishna is gonna be damn sweet... like Kanta di..expecting some mirchi moments with jigs bua ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I also demand some mirchi, masti moments with the following characters, i agree with kanta, and Abhilasha

jigs and karuna bua

pia massi and meera aunty(if they are there, other wise dont bring it in)

the preview sound hilarious, who is he glaring at Jai or is it Jigs, i think its Jai ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 17 years ago
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...Ur twiniee.. demands an update..

today.. u got.. that.. missiy..

or do i need to blackmail u..

but.. u know.. what it never works..

when i do it..

like.. it does work on piks.. at allarghhh
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Posted: 17 years ago
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waithing for ur update kahan ho tum?

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry sorry sorry soooooooorryyyyyyyyyyyyy for being late. just came back home. i m tired to the bone. forgive my weak English.
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Part 2: My Large Family

Okk. Now I m becoming bored. I m dying to see my rest of the family. ๐Ÿ˜” I heard soo many voices for the last couple of months. don't they know that I have come to this world???? ๐Ÿ˜” don't they wanna see me??!! ๐Ÿ˜”

I wanna seโ€ฆ.I m hearing footstepsโ€ฆ..I think they r coming..yayeeeee..they r coming to see meeโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ โ€ฆI will see my familyyyy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

The door is opening. An elderly women came.
"Munna"
Munna?? Who is munna now?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ
JW: Ji Massi..here is ur grandson ( Jai gives KW into Massi's arms )
Oooooโ€ฆ..so its my Dadiโ€ฆ.she looks sweet. But hey, did she call my Papa munna??!! Hehehehehe ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† โ€ฆhahahahahaโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† .Dadi calls Papa Munna. ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›

M: aleleeleleโ€ฆ.mera chhotasa chand ka tukra. ๐Ÿ˜Š Dekh kayse hasrahe hai. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ . U liked me my sweety? Haan? U liked ur Dadi?? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Yap I liked u veeeeeeery much. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ My sweet Dadi. ๐Ÿ˜ณ . Who calls my Papa Munna. ๐Ÿ˜› Hehehe. ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

"arre mere Munni kaysi hai??"

Who is that another elderly woman? ๐Ÿค” Munni?? Hmm..if Papa is Munna, then Munniโ€ฆ.ummโ€ฆ ๐Ÿค” ..erm. ๐Ÿค” .yes!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I got it!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Mamma is Munni!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜› Wow!! They have such sweet pet names. ๐Ÿ˜ณ But wait. Who is that woman?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ

BW: I m alr8 Dadi? Did u like ur grandson? ๐Ÿ˜Š

D: arre kitni handsome hai !!! Abhi itna handsome..when he will grow up he will look like Hrittik Roshan! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Heheheโ€ฆI like this Dadi. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜› .wait..I have a Dadi already. What should I call her? ๐Ÿ˜• Yes! Filmy Dadi. I will call her Filmy Dadi. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

"Hey buddy!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ congrats yaar!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Congrats Bani ๐Ÿ˜Š "
JW: thanks Adi. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
BW: thank u uncle. ๐Ÿ˜Š
M: u wanna take him? ๐Ÿ˜Š
Adi: of course. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Aww how sweet โค๏ธ . U know who I m? I m ur Adi uncle ๐Ÿ˜ƒ . I will always play with u & spoil u. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
I m liking my Adi uncle ๐Ÿ˜› . He laughs in a funny way. ๐Ÿ˜† When he laughs his eyes become almost closed & his shoulders start to shake ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† .. Hehehe..I m gonna have fun with him.
๐Ÿ˜›
"u cannot handle ur own children & u r having fun with him"
Omg!! Who is thisโ€ฆurmm..woman?? ๐Ÿ˜• Nah.. The word woman doesn't suit herโ€ฆ.yes.. I got it. Who is this Rakshasni?? ๐Ÿ˜ก
"Give him to me Adi"
Adi: Careful Jigyasa. He is a newborn.
Jig: I know how to handle kids. I m mother of 2 kids.
This is Jigyasa aunty. Jigyasa..very long name. I need to make it short. Jigs? Nah.. Too short..Jigguโ€ฆthat sounds good!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I will call her Jiggu. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ . Jiggu Rakshasโ€ฆhehehe ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Ewww ๐Ÿคข noooo don't kiss me ๐Ÿคข โ€ฆhave u just had bath with make up? & ur sari feels like paratha!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Jiggu (I m using his word ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ): (in her mind) he is scowling at me..I think I should kiss him.

Ewwwwww ๐Ÿคข โ€ฆ.nooooโ€ฆnot another kiss from u!! ๐Ÿคข

Jiggu: (in her mind) m I imagining? ๐Ÿ˜• Is he realy glaring at me?? ๐Ÿ˜• Yes he is!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

Jiggu: omg!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ He is glaring at me!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Look!!
Adi: have u gone crazy?? ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜† What r u saying?
Jiggu: I m not lying!! He is glaring at me!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Adi: come on .. He is a little baby. How can he 'glare' at u. ๐Ÿ˜•
Jiggu: but he is!! Looโ€ฆโ€ฆaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahโ€ฆ. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ oh noooooooooโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ my saari. ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ He peed on my expensive saari ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Hehehe ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ โ€ฆ.now take itโ€ฆhehe. ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ .(Jigs hurriedly handed KW to Maasi)

Adi: what happened Jigyasa ๐Ÿ˜• . U r mother of two kids. ๐Ÿ˜Š Aren't u familiar with this ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

( Jigyasa gave him a murderous look & stormed out. Every1 burst out laughing)
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PS- those who r wanting Pia & Meera they will come in later parts.
next part: My home & buddies

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I am first again


Haila Dadi called KW HirtikRoshan๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†, why not Salman Khan.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Love the name filmy dadi, it suit Dadi very well.๐Ÿ˜›

Adi Uncle is going to pamper and spoil KW rotten, i wish he was my uncle. I can imagine him and KW being great buddies.๐Ÿ˜‰ Partner in crimes๐Ÿ˜Ž

KW calling Jigs Rakshas, about Bua Rakshas,๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

haha, an newborn glaring at Jigs๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Can;t wait for Meera & Pia entry

This ff always brings an smile to my face, when i read it๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Please write soon๐Ÿ˜›
Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was funyn and rockign munna munni๐Ÿ˜† krishna is soos weet and anughty claling daddi filmy dadi and jig mein kya kii joo sue akrna chahiye after all her saree is his toilet๐Ÿ˜†

it was rockgin par short hai ab ye pia aur meera koo lane ki kay zaroorat hai๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

pls cotninue soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago

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