SS: I, KW Part 7 pg11 29.4.08

I, Krishna Walia

Disclaimer: the main concept of the story is not mine. Its from a book which I read loooooong time ago. I don't even remember the whole story. I just choried the main idea from that book.

I will try to update whenever I can. I cant promise when. & I m also not sure how many parts it would take. I wanted to put smilies. But don't have enough time right now.

updates : 1,3,5,7,9,10,11

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Part 1: My Mom & Dad

*Thamp*

Ouch..why r they hitting me. I opened my eyes again & looked at the people who r thumping on my butt. The Doctor is frowning like hell & the nurse is also looking very worried. Whats their problem??

*Thump*

Waaaaaaaaawaaaaaaaaaaaawaaaaaaaaaaa

I couldn't stop crying out loud this time.

Omg!!!! Can u believe this??!!!! The doctor & the nurse are looking relieved!!! They r actually smiling!!! Human being!! They r sooooo complicated!! Here I m crying in pain & they r smiling!!!

Now hey nurse where r u taking me????!! I wanna go to my mom. Hmm.. I think she is taking me to my mom……mom….I m coming…

Wow!! who is that woman wearing pink?? She is sooo cute!!! Wait..the nurse is taking me to that woman…..she is smiling

The smell is familiar. Yes!! This is my mom's smell!! This is my mom!!! Omg omg omg she is soooooooooooooooo cute!!!! My mom is the most beautiful woman in the world!!!!! Awww….myyyyyyy moooom. Her kiss is so sweet!!!

Suddenly a man rushed into the room.. Who is this man?? He looks handsome….

"Bani….."

"Jai…..humara Krishna."

So this is my Dad. He took me in his arms. He is strong & handsome. But he is grinning like fool at this moment!! I will become handsome like him when I grow up !!! Wow…….

But where is the rest of the family? I heard soo many people's voice when I was in my mom's tummy..

Oyeee Doc!!!! Why u r here!! Gooooo!! I m with my Papa now.. U cannot thump on my butt now!!

Doc: "Congrats Mr & Mrs Walia"

JW: thanks Doc. Are both of them alright??

Doc: Yes they r. but at first I was worried about ur son. He wasn't crying. But then I thump in the butt & he started crying. Now every thing is normal.

BW: what!! U thumped my Krishna' butt???!!!!! Omg!!!! My sweet little Krishna. I will not spare u Doc if my baby is hurt!!

Doc: no no Mrs Walia..I was just…it was just..

Bani was giving him killer look.

"hahaha….go Mamma go….scold him….how dare he…look he thumped me….scold him scold him…."

JW: thank u doc. don't worry. Now would u excuse us for sometime?

Doc: oh ya Mr JW.

The Doc left in a hurry.

BW: Jai….I wanna hold Krishna..

JW: (smiling) here u go.

Hmm…so my name is Krishna….. Sweet name….& these are my Mom & Dad… I m sooooo happy now!!!!!!!

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Comment plz

adorable, cute, and hilarious

i love the pov from baby krishna, its so cute 😳

please write soon

Great start.
liked it.
story for baby's pov...great....it was so funny 😆 😆
plz cont. soon

Helloo.. my twinee

as wwe both are always.. at the same place hehe lolzz


omg.. i loved that.. part.. it was so cute..

aww krishna... actually talking so sweet..

aww stupid doc.. hitting krishna..

so not cool at all..

hehe lolz zbani is funny..

aww jw.. is so cut.e.

contine soon

PS: now.. be ready to be blackmailed into updating.. ur SS

woowww i loved it the way u presented the ffr and krishna specially.. 😆 it was rockign when he sasy go mamma go and scold 😆

haial it was rockign...
👏

waitihng u to continue pls post the enxt aprt soon..

i lvoe the way us aid he smile liek a fool at times for jai 😆

pls cotnineu soon
davia

😆

dats so cute !!!

bani mad at d dr for thumping krish's ass 😆 😆

and jai smiling like a fool LMAO

love it
ctn soon

Hey really good..
Please continue sooon...

Tropa...cute..but you should have started from the time he start to make his way out in the world...it would have been even more hilarious...I thought for a moment Bani's bum was being spanked...or she was dreaming.

It's funny and so I love it...we need some fun. 😆

👏 👏 👏 ... hey Tropa....wonderful...loved it so far... 😃 😃 😃 ......

It's funny too....Poor Krisna... 😆 😆 😆 ...

Krishna can recognize people's true nature by looking at them...he is so right he's dad is a fool... 😆 ... and his mom is cutest.... 😳 😳 😳.....

Do cont with it when you have enough time to... 😳 😳 😳 ... will wait for next part.... 😃 😃 😃 ...

Do cont soon.... 👏 👏 👏 ...

wow just too tooo cute plz continue ... i luve dit it ws soo interesting...

luv nida ❤️