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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
wow great part.........
liked like convo between them........
awwwwwww the kid r soo cute 😛
plzzzz cont.soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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the whole generation is there 😆 who is the prettiest...well I think they must must ask jai walia about this 😳 !!! 😆...and this children are talking a lot in hospital....where is JW and Bani....did they teach their kids about this, not to make noise in hospital 😆 😆 😆 ....just joking....I know they were excited....nice part...please continue....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
lo mein agaye, khush! I read it but totally forgot to comment!!! This ff is different i like it!!! Make sure u continue it....speakin of continuin i should go continue mine!!!! I loved it, the kids are really cute and naughty at the same time!!! its fun when all the family bros and sis's get together!! 😳
update soon!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

lo mein agaye, khush! I read it but totally forgot to comment!!! This ff is different i like it!!! Make sure u continue it....speakin of continuin i should go continue mine!!!! I loved it, the kids are really cute and naughty at the same time!!! its fun when all the family bros and sis's get together!! 😳
update soon!! 😉



Bro. I mean sis wats "lo mein agaye, khush," dont talk 2 me in Indian, u know me n that dont go 2gether. I will update soon.

Guys 2 update, but right at this time I m readin a great book.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mitu1228



Bro. I mean sis wats "lo mein agaye, khush," dont talk 2 me in Indian, u know me n that dont go 2gether. I will update soon.

Guys 2 update, but right at this time I m readin a great book.


Mit shiv said see i am here happy..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
*Part 7

This part is for Tee and Bubble who argue with me making me write like this, I love u both. Happy Birthday baby sister. Love u Tee.

B4 they entered the room Veer thought of something.
V: Wait how can us 4 go in with them?
A: Yo, that's like our family, our sister, n niece
V: I didn't mean that
A: Wat did u mean, then?
V: Atharva, I mean mom's there n she will have questions 4 us
K: O, Bhaiya's got a point, I mean she will have question
A: Then we will tell her the truth of who we r
K: Your, so dum* Atharva, that's like huge news, we can just let mom know like that, plus I don't want her to know who we are nor do I want daddy to know who Pari and Kushi Di are
A: Wow, Krishna, I knew you could b mean to me and Ganga, but even to Pari n Di, don't you think that they have a right to know about who their dad is?
K: O, man will you just stop and tell me talk
G: Di, your mean, that's really not right, I want my mommy
K: Ganga chill, all I want to say is, why don't we all work together to get mom and dad together without them knowing
A: Better idea
K: What?
A: Your d*mb and think that dad will ran away when he finds out that mom is here and that, so are his children
K: Huh
A: Huh? Krishna you do know that dad always looks at that angel frame and the empty frame and then he opens the drawers and gets the picture of mommy and he tells it that he would do anything to get her back and if he finds out where she is he will go and get her back
K: Yea, but things don't work like that mom won't take him back like that, he hurt her to much
A: O, man why am I her twin? Krishna we get dad to work with us, because lord know it, his the only one then can understand mom, even though they aren't together only they both will get want the other wants.
K: O, I guess you may be right.
A: O, now she gets it, please Pari don't b slow like her, I hope Di isn't, what am I saying she won't b nor will you right champ (picking up Jai Jr)
P: Bhaiya… (every1 looked at her with their mouths o'in) wat, y r u all doin that
A: U just 4 the first time called me bhaiya
P: Well you are my brother
A: Yea, it's just really cool
P: Ok, and you call Krishna Di slow, right
A: What?
P: Well you didn't even get that I should call you bhaiya, man even Di knows I have to call her Di
A: Krishna she's not mine and Gangas sister she's yours and Veer's
P: Yea, I am, so wat are you going 2 do huh, stop callin my Di slow
A: Oh, I will c 2 it that Anjali annoys you and your Di n bro., so much
P: And we will c 2 it that Jai annoys you and your sister
A: Oh, ur, so on little sister and Di will b on our side
P: We will c that
Mamta: Guys stop and lets go, Veer please when we go in and Bani aunty ask who you all are only you talk, these people are to much
SD: Mamta b nice
M: Sorry Di

Everyone goes into the room and Kushi is now awake with Anjali in her hands, she has a glow to her face with a beautiful smile brightening up the room even more
A: Wow, she's like mad pretty
P: Who
A: Right and I am slow
P: Bro.
K: Both stop it, thankfully mom is sleeping

All four look at Bani and remember their past with her
Veer remembers the night that Bani told him no one will take him away and that from this day on Bani is his mother, he comes out of it
V: Mom your still just as pretty, you're my only true mom, I really missed you (he has tears in his eyes), I love you mom
Atharva remembers the time that in the mandir when he got kidnapped by those people for money and his mother saved him, he comes out of it
A: Mom you were there for me when I needed you and I promise you that I will never let anyone hurt you, or take you away from us again, I really missed you, and I love you, now he has tears in his eyes
Krishna remembers the time that Bani came to the room threw the window when the people were throwing rocks threw their window and that she was scared
K: You came to save us that time and I promise that I will give you that happiness back in your life, I missed you and love you
Ganga remembers all of her first five years of her life, the music, fun, tears, her cancer, her mom leaving everything
G: Mom you were my mom and dad to me for the first five years and you left me, yet for what you did for me, you gave up everything to rise me, I will make sure that now I do everything for you, I missed and love you momma

Kushi looks up to ace Pari with a lot of people one of whom looks just like her mother
K: Pari, who are all of these people and why does she, pointing to Krishna look like mom?
P: Di, awwwwwwwwww Anjali is really cute
K: Thanks Pari, I know she's really pretty, she looks just like her dad
P: No, Di like me
K: Pari like Rohit and who are they all
P: Sorry, Di and she tells Kushi everything and what they are planning, to wat Kushi says she will help out to, but at the time that Krishna and Atharva have to leave cause mom will wake-up and realize who they all are, but both say that they want to meet and get to know her and they want to hold Anjali, Kushi lets them that once Bani goes home she will call them and tell them four to come and tells Pari to take Anjali out with her, so everyone can meet and see her

Pari brings the little angel out and everyone meets her. Then everyone leaves their own ways and Pari goes to drop Anjali with her mother and Kushi tells her that she has called the driver and that he will take her home, but Atharva who hears this says no as Pari is too young to b home alone and he will take her with them, but Kushi gets upset that she will b the last to meet her dad as her dad as everyone is going to tell him, but Atharva lets her know that being the last to know means that dad will b missing her the most, also mostly cause of the fact being shes the oldest of all her siblings, the child that both their parents wanted a lot, but also he will b happy to have Pari cause shes the youngest and he has missed her a lot, but mostly will b happy that Banis back. With that everyone goes and Atharva takes Pari and Kushi calls the driver back and tells him not to come.

Kk, this may b borin. Sorry. Bein lazy.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57

moi!!!

Di thankuuuuu for updating 🤗 love ya

awwwww sooooo sweet, lovely update

i love the sibling' fight in ur ff. they r soo natural.

hope Bani finds out the truth asap

gr8 part👏👏

now dont be lazy and cont soon

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
nice part Mitu....so the kids are planning to unite their parents......hope their plans will work out......please continue.....don't be lazy! 😉 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

yaar ur ff is soooooooooo cute 👏
i just love it.......... so they r planing to reunite their parent.............hope their plan will be successfull👍🏼
every1 is realy nice and cute.......
plzzz cont.soon 😛

Edited by koolgal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
Mitu my jaan u r the best u updated
Any way liked the part i want bani to knw truth ASAP
And cont soon

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