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Posted: 17 years ago
at last.....at last they found her.......hope Bani is fine.....but I don't trust you πŸ˜†.....please continue....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: banijai19_life

gr88888888888888 update di πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ ,jai is such a duffer dont u understand she loves you goddammit!!!!!! 😳 relax... πŸ˜†πŸ˜† jai already understood that
plz cont soon! 😊



Originally posted by: divan

😭 sad part again...he read how she felt after their lovemaking, her hope of becoming closer. u knew very well that the flashback hasnt ended...


Well good news or bad...will have to find out what is wrong with Bani... πŸ˜• lets c

Happy writing...dil mange more...of this good stuff. πŸ˜ƒ



Originally posted by: jeevikagurl88

Wonderful part.
Jai knowing about what Bani feels for their relationship is so touching.
I think Jai's going to get the news that she is pregnant, am I right?
Please continue soon. Eager to know what is going to happen in the hospital.


thanks jeevika... lets c what happens in the hospital

Originally posted by: mujer

Sorry missed lots of parts. But now read them. Actually feels better this way , one gets to read substantial amount to read πŸ˜† . SorryπŸ˜ƒ. its okay.... sometimes i get to read like that Nice update. The story is moving a little slow but it is fine as the part are dealing with Jai and his discovery of Bani which I guess is necessary too. So Will Jai discover Bani's pregnancy but isn't it too soon as you promised to give us the marriage associated details also. What the hell I am so finicky and all messed up. i can see that πŸ˜†

Update soon.

Well as per my shameless habit I cannot help- weekend par to bada update diya karo nah pleaseee πŸ˜† try kar rahi hoon... lekin ho nahin pa raha hai...



Originally posted by: moonlitnight

Hi Abhi di

ur confused Jai is confusing me also πŸ˜• what does he actualy expect from Bani? he will play with her and .....i dont know what to say i know that... but why are you confused? i thot i am clearing all ur confusions

hope Bani is ok πŸ˜• why everybody is giving such a worried expression

great part πŸ‘

plz cont soon



Originally posted by: mimas_ence

please di a long part .


i am trying dear... 😊

Originally posted by: jeenal20

pllz cont soon
and we want a long part
i think bani is pregnanat kudos to ur positive thought πŸ‘
thats y sheis in the hospital
plz cont soon
gr88 part



Originally posted by: tam2

Lovely update.... πŸ‘ .... well looks like a good news is awaiting for Jai Walia... 😳 ... may be he'll find out he'll be a father soon.... well I'm hoping πŸ˜† ... do cont soon... πŸ˜ƒ ...

do u think so tam πŸ˜‰

Originally posted by: nema123

wonderful uodate..... hope Bani is in good condition... πŸ‘


thanks nema

Originally posted by: suwas

Finally they located bani. Hopeshe is fine 7 may be fainted because of pregnancy.

But then she shouldn't think Jai is taking care of her becaue ofpregnanacy & not because he loves her.They need to have proper talk & clear misunderstanding. BOth dufffers love each other . BUt need tolet other person know. epsecialy Jai. I am madathim for being so inconsiderate of bani's feeling & ignoring her till now. everybody is

Bani's thougts abut their first night together touched my heart. Does Jai remeber how he broke her heart by ignoring her next day? he could realise to some extent...



Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

gr8 upd8...plz upd8 soon


thanks swati...

Originally posted by: khushboo2006

😭 😭 😭 .......Abhi yeh rona dhona kaab tak chalegi dear.... thoda aur... uske baad nahin so duffer JW was trying to find out about Bani and getting confused more and more ..... dont u think he has to??? wondering why he is failing to understand about Bani's love for him and his family πŸ˜• ....hope nothing bad is going to happen with Bani.....can't wait to see what would be Jai's reaction when he would get to know that Bani is pregnant πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› what do you think? πŸ˜‰ .....update sooner than ever πŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: nishiraju

hey abhi...... πŸ˜‰ .. gre8 part once again.....pls cont soon

thanks 😊

Originally posted by: niruba

at last.....at last they found her.......hope Bani is fine.....but I don't trust you πŸ˜†..... i started to realise it.. πŸ˜† please continue....



Thanks Everyone
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Swati and janam...

Thanks you everyone for their wonderful comments... 😳



Edited by abhilashasharma - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey ppl... i am back again. I thought I wont post as the internet connection was irritating me... Can you believe... Google was not opening... I was just 😑 Atlast by 12 it became proper... not so good... but to some extent...

Coming back to the update, I made it to a moderate size.. not too big not too small... πŸ˜†

Previous Parts:
Part 1 - Page 1; Part 2 - Page 3; Part 3 - Page 6; Part 4 - Page 9; Part 5 - Page 12;
Flashback 1: (1.1-1.3) - Page 16; 1.4 - Page 23; 1.5 - Page 26; 1.6 - Page 30; 1.7 - Page 33; 1.8 - Page 35; 1.9 - Page 38; 1.10 - Page 41; 1.11 - Page 45;
Part 6 - Page 48; Part 7 - Page 53; Part 8 - Page 58;
Flashback 2 - Page 62;
Part 9 - Page 65; Part 10 - Page 68;
Flashback 3 A - Page 73; 3B - Page 76; 3C - Page 79; 3D - Page 81; 3E - Page 86; 3F - Page 89;
Part 11 - Page 94; Part 12 - Page 97;
Flashback 4 - Page 97
Part 13 - Page 103;
Journey into Bani's thoughts: 1 - Page 107; 2 - Page 111; 3 - Page 114; 4 - Page 118

Here goes the next

Part 14

Bani felt alone and she felt strange being in the place. She had always felt that she was always the root cause of many miseries or that she was made to believe so. She was scared of mistakes. She did each and every work of her consciously so that it doesn't become the cause of anybody's misery. Everytime, when she was blamed for something or other, the thought of being a burden to others crept into her mind. That was the main reason she wanted to go away from her parents. Though Pushkar and she shared a cordial relationship, from time to time, she made sure that she did not become burden to him. Mostly it was Pushkar who would approach her for her help. The only work which she did, without thinking was marrying Jai. She always sought Jai or Krishna's help in anything she did. She always believed that even if something went wrong they would embrace her and correct her. Her mind always went to both of them whenever she felt helpless and alone. Hence, when Jai proposed her for marriage, she agreed immediately. She always wanted to belong there and when opportunity arose, she was not willing to lose it. She was so obsessed with both of them that she did not want to lose them. Whatever it be, she wanted to laugh with them, and cry with them. Even if Jai had not proposed her for marriage, she would have been happy with just staying with Jai. Atlast, it was she who ended up crying alone. She ended up hating herself… hating herself because she felt she was the cause of Jai's happiness.

In the morning when she woke up, her head hurted a lot. She felt dizzy with the thoughts crossing and clashing in her mind. She looked at Jai's sleeping figure. It all seemed to be blurred for her. She went into the bathroom and washed her face. All the hurt came back to her in a rush. She clutched her head and closed her ears to stop thinking. She wanted to cry, but she did not know what to cry for. A feeble voice in her mind said, 'Why does she want to cry for, when she had nothing for herself?' Suddenly, she felt scared of being alone. She remembered all the days when she was alone. Her mind said, 'She was meant to be alone.' The words hurted her. But at the time, she did not want to compromise with Jai's happiness when she could never be Jai's happiness. The thought hurted her. She decided she should never have crossed his life.

When she came out of the bathroom, she noticed Jai sleeping in the same position. She silently opened her cupboard and took a paper and pen from the drawer below the lower shelf. She was confused what to write. Later, she wrote and placed the paper in the nightstand. It flew away. She picked it up and placed again. She placed the necklace above it. But necklace would not capture Jai's attention. So she placed the water glass above it. She closed the cupboard and walked towards the door. She did not know what to do and where to go. Suddenly as if remembering something, she turned back to her cupboard and opened it. She took her purse from it and left the room quietly. When she reached the gate, the security wished and greeted him. He asked her whether she was going somewhere. She absently said, she wanted to go out. The security offered to arrange car for her. She refused and left the gate. She walked till the end of the street, after which she caught a taxi and went to Juhu beach, her usual place.

When she arrived at the beach, there were people here and there jogging, walking and doing their exercises. She felt left out. She quietly searched for a secluded place and went and sat over there. She watched the sun rising in the sky. The morning heat of the sun soothed her. Her blank mind started getting filled with thoughts. It started running forward and backward. The over stress in her mind wanted to make itself feel happy. Her mind went back to the days she had spent in Aligarh. A smile came on her lips. She remembered her Krishna aunty, her love, her affection and her smile. She also remembered her mock anger. Her mind wanted her to make her more happy. It started to dwell in the past. Bani's mind filled with the happy memories of Aligarh. Her mind blocked the important thing that Krishna aunty was no more. At times, the thought surfaced, but her mind kept her away from the truth. Bani's smile started to increase as she started to remember the time she spent with Walia family. But the present and past surfaced with each other and made her drained out. Atlast, she was left with the only thought that she wanted to go to Aligarh, if she wanted to be happy. Bani's eyes widened with the thought. Of course, she wanted to be happy. Who would want to stay unhappy?

It was more than eleven o' clock when she got up on her feet and walked towards the road. She, with much difficulty got a taxi and asked him to go to the railway station. The taxi driver took her to the nearest railway station.

On reaching the station, Bani paid the driver and walked inside the station. She searched for the ticket counter. Atlast she found it and asked a ticket for Aligarh. The person in the counter looked at her as if she was crazy. Bani asked again little softly. The person shook his head and told her to go to Lokmanya Tilak station. She frowned and stood at the counter itself. The person, looking at her still standing told in as much as polite way that there were no train to Aligarh from her and she should go to Lokmanya Tilak to catch train if any. It took few seconds for Bani to register and understand his words. After she understood, she thanked the person and ran out of the station as if she would miss the train if she made delay. She caught an auto and asked him to go to the Lokmanya Tilak station. The auto took her to the station. She paid him and ran into the station. On her way, she collided with a lady causing her to lose her balance and dropping her bags down. The lady raised her face to look at Bani and shout at her; instead she was surprised.

Bani gave her hands for the lady to stand. She collected all the bags, gave it to her and said, "I am sorry. Main thodi jaldi mein thi… I am sorry…" and she walked away.

The lady held her hands and said, "Didi…"

Bani looked at the lady with little irritation. This time, when she looked at the lady, she seemed familiar to her. She frowned and tried to remember.

The lady said, "Didi… Main Rano… aapki Junior… college mein…"

Bani's frown cleared and she said, "Hi, Rano… Kaisi ho?"

"Main teek hoon… Aap kaisi hai? Aap toh ek dum gaayab ho gayi… Mujhe bataya bhi nahin…" Rano complained.

"Sorry Rano… Main thodi jaldi mein hoon… Sorry… baad mein milti hoon…" and Bani ran away from Rano towards the ticket counter.

Rano watched Bani running away in daze. This was so unlike of Bani.

Bani reached the counter. There was a big queue. She stood in the queue. Rano watched her from distance. When Bani's turn came, she asked for a ticket to Aligarh. The man in the counter said, "Aaj koi train nahin hai."

Bani's face fell. "Kya?"

"Haan…" The man said again.

"Toh kab hai?" Bani asked with question in her face.

"Parson aana…" and the man started to give tickets for the next person in the queue.

Bani left the queue disappointed. Now how would she go to Aligarh…?

Rano watched Bani coming out of the queue disappointed. She went to Bani and asked, "Kya baat hai, di? Kahaan jaana hai?"

Bani looked somewhere as she replied, "Woh… mujhe Aligarh jaana hai…"

"Aligarh?"

"Haan…"

"Lekin… wahaan kaun hai… Aap toh Delhi ki hai na?" Rano asked as if to clarify.

"Ab main Aligarh kaise jaoon?" Bani said as if she did not hear what Rano was asking.

Rano was confused, "Didi… baat kya hai?"

"Mujhe Aligarh jaana hai…" Bani said looking all around.

"Teek hai. Reserve kar lijiye ticket. Chaliye… ticket lene chalthe hai…" and Rano took her to Reservation counter.

"Mujhe aaj jaana hai…" Bani said.

"Lekin aaj train nahin hain toh break journey karna padega. Aap raasta jaante hai?" Rano asked unsure of herself.

"Nahin… mujhe pata nahin… lekin mujhe jaana hai…" Bani said again.

Rano stopped in her steps. She looked at Bani. She took Bani's hands in hers and asked "Didi… aap teek toh hai na?"

"Haan main teek hoon… Mujhe Aligarh jaana hai…" Bani said again taking her hands from Rano's.

Rano was surprised at her behavior. Something was wrong, she realized. She took Bani to reservation counter and made her sit on a chair and gave all her bags to Bani. She asked her not to get up from the seat and that she would get her ticket and come. Bani nodded her head.

Rano stood in the queue with the filled reservation form, frequently looking at Bani. Bani was behaving rather weird, Rano thought. After thirty minutes, Rano got the ticket and came to Bani. Bani stood and asked her curiously whether she got the ticket or not. Rano said, she had got the ticket, but it fall under waiting list and also, that her train was on day after tomorrow.

Bani's eyes widened, "Lekin mujhe aaj jaana hai…" She said firmly.

"Lekin aaj koi train nahin hai dii…" Rano said patiently.

"Toh phir ticket kyun li…" Bani asked rather rudely.

Rano was taken aback. "Didi… aap ek din rukhkar toh jaa sakti hai na…" she tried to be patient.

"Lekin mujhe aaj jaana hai…" Bani said again. "Main khud chali jaaongi." And she left Rano alone in the place and walked away.

When Rano tried to stop Bani, Bani had hit herself against the crowd coming with the luggages and she fell down. Rano came running to her for rescue. But Bani had passed out. Rano tried to wake Bani. But she was out of her senses. Rano shouted for help among the crowd. Later, a group of youngsters volunteered to help her. They helped Rano collect her things and Bani's and rushed them to a taxi to a nearby hospital. Rano asked the driver to go to Nanavati hospital as it was her regular hospital. It was only during the drive to the hospital did she see mangalsutra hanging around Bani's neck. She wondered when Bani got married.

As Rano knew many persons in the hospital, Bani was admitted soon. A general doctor examined her and informed Rano that Bani was very weak and that she was not eating properly. They injected glucose and saline intravenously to Bani. Meanwhile, they asked Rano to get her family members. Rano wanted to wait till Bani would gain her senses so that she could enquire about her family. But it became five and Bani was still unconscious. All of a sudden, the doctors became busy with Bani. Rano became worried. After half an hour, when they came out, they said, they doubt whether Bani is pregnant. Rano was shocked. She had wanted to see Bani since a long time, but not like this. Rano gathered herself and called someone over the mobile.

"Hello, Rano… Kahaan ho tum?" The voice in the other side said.

"Ranveer, main hospital mein hoon…" Rano said.

"Hospital? Kya hua... sab teek toh hai?" Ranveer asked.

"Woh… tumhari madad chahiye thi…" Rano said.

"Kya hua?" Ranveer asked softly.

Rano explained about Bani and her condition to him. Then said, "Tumhe hi kuch karna padega."

Ranveer stayed silent on the other end. After a while, he asked, "Any clues?"

"Mere paas kuch bhi nahin hai…" Suddenly she remembered Bani's purse. "Ek minute… Di ka purse hai… Dekhti hoon…" and she searched for Bani's purse in her handbag. She took Bani's purse and poursed down all the contents on her lap. There were some money and ATM Debit card. "Ranveer, purse mein toh sirf ATM card hai…"

Ranveer said, "Tum wahi rukho main aata hoon." And he ended the call.

After half an hour, Ranveer arrived. Rano rushed to him and hugged him, "Kuch karo Ranveer… mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai…"

Ranveer consoled her and asked, "ATM card kahaan hai?"

Rano released herself from the hug and gave the ATM card from the purse. "Lekin isse kya hoga?" Rano asked.

"Isse hum us aadmi ko track kar sakte hai. Hum police hai. Toh bank officials mana nahin kar sakte…" Ranveer told her. He told his mobile and called the police headquarters to find out the details of the cardholder. Within 20 minutes, the contact address was traced, but the address was that of Delhi.

Rano said, "Haan, didi pehle Delhi mein rehti thi…"

Ranveer said, "Oh!" He looked for the contact number. There was a mobile number. He immediately dialed the number. A man answered the call. He asked for Bani. The man asked him what the matter was and that she was missing. Ranveer informed him that she was at Nanavati hospital and asked them to arrive soon. The man said they would be there at the earliest and ended the call.

Ranveer informed the details to Rano and told that they had to wait for her family to arrive. Rano felt a little relieved, but was still worried for Bani. She did not imagine Bani to end up this way.

Thanks for reading 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
ow ... so my guess of good news was correct to certain extent ... 😳 πŸ˜† ...

loved the characters of both Rano and Ranveer... πŸ‘ ... now make Jai come quick!... πŸ˜† ...

Please do cont soon... πŸ˜ƒ ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww...i hope Jai and Bani manage to come together!! and im glad Bani's safe and sound with Rano.
I love ur ff...please continue soon!! xx
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz cont soon
gr88 part
see i told na bani is prgenent
and that wat happened
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice but at the same time such a gloomy update, ab ek hafta isi par gujara karna hoga. Sorry but the weathers all gloomy here and the state of Bani made me even more depressive.

Next time please please thoda sa jyada nahin par thoda sa happy happy update karna.I know KS is not sdo inspirational anymore but when were Jai and Bani ever inspirational post Dubai
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Posted: 17 years ago
I knew it.....I knew that you wouldn't let Jai meet Bani so soon....and 'torture' us more by making us wait for your next update πŸ˜† πŸ˜† I can predict you well now πŸ˜›

anyway, the update was awesome....for that I forgive you πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†.....please continue.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
atlast bani is found..
cont.soon

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