FF:Broken Dreams&...Part 18C Pg 147 06/07 - Page 85

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

hey abhi..
update soon.
it is nice.. to see bani's thought.
but i want to see jb.. together.. soon they will be 😳

continue soon please

Originally posted by: siumi

very sad parts, wonderful work 👏

Originally posted by: Miss_Diey

nice part 😉 😉 thanks dear
jai is feeling bad and realising how much he hurted bani 😉

Originally posted by: amiee

feelvery sad for bani i think she has gone to Aligarh because that is where it all started and i think that is where she finds peace cant wait to read more not a bad idea...

Originally posted by: banijai19_life

😭 omg,it was too sad!poor bani,jai is suffering a lot now! 😭
👏 👏 👏 ,gr8 update thanks dear

Originally posted by: swathi

Abhi, Somewhere I seriously feel that Jai's running away has scarred bani very badly. and he did nothing to make it better even after their marriage. In fact I feel that this whole thing is kind of a wake up call for Jai. If nothing is done she might just end up in an asylum as well. Hopefully things should get better from now on. Once again Bani's dependence on Walias came across very nicely. You could make out that she has been very badly affected by all those dialogues.
Nice analysis Swathi... 👍🏼
Swathi

Originally posted by: sangitadas

😭 😭 😭 For Bani i know

👏 👏 👏 For you, for writing this so beautifully and emotionally. thank u

I am sure Jai had not known what the effect of his runing awa would do to Bani, but by now he knows the consequences. Hope he steps in now and corrects the situation before Bani gets lost forever. 😭 thats true...

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Hey Abhi,

that update really touched my heart, I cant say that I can feel the pain of what bani went through but you made it soo real that I felt if it was me.the way Jai is slowly realizing what he really means to her, is just heart-wrenching.lookin forward to readin how you take this forward. 👏
thanks preet 😳
preet 😳

Originally posted by: Pooja_fren

Hi
Your every part touches my heart
I was so happy when I saw ur next updaate
When will u make me happy again 😆 😆 soon... 😉
Poor Bani and Jai as well
Her diary, her sketches all are so beautifully written thanks Pooja
thankssssss

Originally posted by: JAN_SA

Hey Abhi,

Thanks for the pm, much appreciated, 😊 . I feel so bad for Jai, hopefully he will find Bani soon and make things alright between them. Please continue. Good updates 👏 👏 👏

Originally posted by: kpatel123

hey! that was sooo emotional! uve depicted the mental disturbance in bani in such a beautiful way...keep it up!

Originally posted by: culgal86

hey abhilasha...........

lovely part..........

update soon

Originally posted by: swatinarang

wonderful updates abhilasha, really loved reading all the parts and u have written all the emotions in best way.
Hey Swati... welcome to the thread.... thanks for the comments 😳
please continue soon

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part...
hope bani jaldi miljai.. she will be found soon.... dont worry... i think there are enough tears... i dont want to give more than this... 😆 if i separate them for too long... many ppl are already ready with chapals and belans in their hand.. 😛
cont.sooon

Originally posted by: ragamthalam0

Great update,, jai finally knows how important he was to bani pls continue soon thanks dear...

Originally posted by: ofcourse

Abhi, again u left me speechless and ofcourse crying 😭 😭 😭 Its amazing the way you bring out the emotions.. thanks....
So finally Jai has realised that his running away has caused an adverese effect on Bani..she has been totally dependent on the Walias through out her life, inperson n otherwise... yep...
I just hope he does something soon before she breaks down completely.
I am hating these weekdays now..have to wait for 5 long days to read the update 😕 this isnt fair... i tell you 😆
👏 👏 👏 till your next update..
Rama awweee... you are welcome... and thanks 😳

Hey Abhi,
Sorry for being late. but akhir me aa hi gaye. 😉
This part was so sad. Jai finally realized how much his family meant to Bani and how his going away has affected her. Abhi somewhere I am also concerned about Ban's mental state. Kuch theek nahin lagta hai. I dont know why.Or am I wrong? Ho bhi sakta hai😉

Thanks for the update Abhi. Mindblowing writing!!
Bani's anguish through the diary entry is really well defined
Byebye

Originally posted by: Nimmie1'2

hey Abhi,

Thanks for another wonderful update ;) very emotional too. thanks Nimmie

Thanks,

Nimmie

Originally posted by: niruba

that was so touching 😭 not talking to you....you like to make me cry!!! no dear... see like a good girl i am wiping ur tears... 😛

And if Jai doesn't find Bani, I will definately get a flight ticket to find you for sure 😆 😆 Welcome to India 😆

nice part....please continue

Originally posted by: phool527

😭 😭 😭 .. that was sooo sad.. but hun that was tooo short.. update soon.. bani wapas ajao.. tumhara pati tumhe miss kar raha hai.. i hope they find bani.. bani jaldi se ajao.. anywayz great part dear.. continue soon..

Originally posted by: sanam84

Abhi u r makin my Munna suffer a lot me no likey 😭 😭 Munna cry me cry 😭 😭 i am giving u a box of tissue...

Very sad parts Abhi but very well wrriten 👏 the drawings were too good...explains Bani's inner termoil esp the caged parrot 😭 😭 u liked it... but ur munna dint notice it 😉

so now Jai is realising the adverse affect his going away had on her...hope he finds her soon...and then it's all hunky dory 😉 a happy JB 😳 of course.. deffo... but before that ur munna had to do some hardwork 😛

as for the comp being slow...i dont hav much idea but when mine is slow it's coz i load too many programmes n then there is very less space in C drive so hav to uninstall few...also delete internet history and stuff from the temp files. thats wot i do n then its fine...also scan for virus...hope that helps...if not ask the experts. 😆 😆 i stayed awake till 2:30 in the morning and reinstalled XP and all the softwares... Now fine... 😊

Originally posted by: koolgal

awesome part 👏 👏 👏
that was soo sad 😭 poor bani........hope they will be together in the next part 😃 ........waiting for the next part
plzz cont.soon

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Hey Abhi,
Sorry for being late. but akhir me aa hi gaye. 😉 welcome 😆
This part was so sad. Jai finally realized how much his family meant to Bani and how his going away has affected her. Abhi somewhere I am also concerned about Ban's mental state. Kuch theek nahin lagta hai. I dont know why.Or am I wrong? Ho bhi sakta hai😉 waise kuch bhi ho sakta hai... 😉

Thanks for the update Abhi. Mindblowing writing!!
Bani's anguish through the diary entry is really well defined thanks Renu
Byebye

Journey into Bani's thoughts – 4

Jai closed his eyes and sat for some time. He remembered Bani's diary lying on floor. He wondered whether he had to read it or not… He took the diary in his hands and flipped the pages. He noticed the diary was that of previous year and only half of the pages were filled. He flipped to the last content of the diary and started reading it…

After nearly 10 months of my marriage, I felt my husband's love for me. I am saying so not because he made love to me or slept with me for the first time, last night. (You know very well I don't believe in only physical love. As you know, physical love without any emotions is useless.) But because I felt love and affection bubbling in his words and the way he called my name… I am happy that I reside somewhere in his mind. Earlier, I was puzzled of why did he married me. In spite of the fact that he was my best childhood friend (Well, you know, I always consider him as my first ever boy-friend… I mean boy as friend), I failed to understand the reason. He could very have refused me, if he wanted it. It was me, who did not have any choice. Now I realize, somewhere behind his 'Yes' lies his love and affection. I thought I lost my friend. But no… He is somewhere alive in him. I still don't know whether I love him or whether my mind has accepted him as my husband and love. But I…. I don't know… How could I love him? We shared very fine relation. In spite of huge age difference of 15 years, he was my friend. But is he now? I don't know. He doesn't even look at me properly. He doesn't cross me. He avoids me to the core. I still don't understand what went wrong. How did I hurt him?

Last night, is it a dream? I don't know whether to write 'Better be not!' or 'Better it be!' I want my friend back. But how do I talk to him? Will he talk to me today? I don't know. But I will keep my hopes positive today.

Bani

Jai looked at the sign placed below. It was signed Bani… Just Bani… He looked at the date. It dated some two months old. He flipped the remaining pages to find anything was written, but he could find none.

He remembered the night clearly. He was not able to get out of the mind that easily. He never imagined that making love with Bani would have that effect on him. But he had understood that he could never make love with anybody except her. Only she could occupy his thoughts throughout the day… One thing he was sure that Bani always considered him the same. But in some way, he expected some different Bani… But in what way? He wanted this Bani… He wanted his Bani… then… why did he do that to her?

He placed the diary on the floor and sat for sometime. He stood up on his feet and collected the things and walked to Bani's cupboard. He opened it and placed her things where they had been earlier kept. He did not want Bani to know that someone had peeped through her memories, even if it was him. He knew Bani would not like anyone handling her things without her knowledge. After keeping the things, his eyes fall on all the shelves for next few seconds. He touched each of them. He took and saw each one of them – her dress, her books, her albums. He opened the drawer below the lower shelf. He found many pencil boxes, pens – old and new, erasers, sharpeners and drawing sheets neatly decked and arranges inside the drawer. Though he looked at each of her things, he failed to notice the pen he had presented her on her tenth birthday with the set of pens and also the embroided duppatta presented by his mother to her. If he had seen it with little more observation, he would have seen the design she had made in her drawing book was in fact the design in the duppatta.

He closed the cupboard with blank mind. He gathered a vague idea of what Bani was and what Bani might be. But he was not able to get a clear picture of her state in his mind. She confused him. He was not able to guess where she might have gone. He had not kept a check on her day-day activities. He never knew where she was going, or was she really going out…?

Jai sat on the bed lost in his thoughts when Pushkar barged into the room without permission.

"Sir, Bani ka pata chal gaya…." He panted, but added quickly, "Woh Nanavati Hospital mein hai…"

Jai stood on his feet with a jerk. His mind and senses alarmed. 'Hospital?' He asked Pushkar, "Hospital?"

"Police se phone aaya, mere mobile mein. Raaste mein batata hoon." And he rushed out of the room inviting Jai, but not waiting for him.

Jai did not make any delay in leaving. He left the room, the next second Pushkar left the room. On his way down the stairs, he looked at his watch. It showed 7:13 PM. It's more than half a day that Bani had gone missing. He nearly ran out of the house to his car, where Pushkar, Aditya and Aparajit were already waiting for him, with Aparajit in the driver's seat. He immediately got into the car. Aparajit immediately started the car. Jai prayed Bani to be in safe condition, but his mind was worried.

Thanks for reading 😳