SS - O Re Piya update pg 19 28th dec - Page 9

Breaking news guys i wont be able to update till the end of the week now cause i have a major assignment to hand in and my dead line has been bought forward, please bear with me and i will be back soon !!!!

Sharan XXX

Originally posted by: shaz81

Breaking news guys i wont be able to update till the end of the week now cause i have a major assignment to hand in and my dead line has been bought forward, please bear with me and i will be back soon !!!!

Sharan XXX

Ok I let you off...I am busy at work too...didn't even get chance to read update at lunch....never mind writing anything...😕

Originally posted by: divan

Ok I let you off...I am busy at work too...didn't even get chance to read update at lunch....never mind writing anything...😕

PHEW it was you i was worried about the most and *COUGH* have you read the promo !!!!!!!!😉

Originally posted by: shaz81

PHEW it was you i was worried about the most and *COUGH* have you read the promo !!!!!!!!😉

quickly this morning...sounds hot...😳 now I will have to open the window to cool down.

Originally posted by: divan

quickly this morning...sounds hot...😳 now I will have to open the window to cool down.

GOOD at least i know i can write HOT now 😆😆😆!!!

Thanks for Thanking us....now be a goody goody girl 😃 😆

you are most welcome darling............ 😉 well be waiting

Originally posted by: ree_views

Thanks for Thanking us....now be a goody goody girl 😃 😆

yep i will on sunday !!!!!! HEHEHE

Hello my lovely readers, I'm sorry for the delay in this update BUT i had the most difficult time getting it right, i'm not use to writing this sort of update and when you read you will understand what i mean 😳, i hope you enjoy reading this very different update from me and i have decided to go on strike unless i get lots of comments this time 😆😆😆!!!!

Sharan XXX

PS like always please ignore my spelling mistakes.



O Re Piya part 4

With every one's blessing including the all mighty, Bani is one her voyage of self discovery in Mumbai, as well as her self, who else will she discover in amchi Mumbai


RECAP

Bani was immensely jealous of this Jai Walia, all week Dadi had been dropping not so subtle hints about his likes and dislikes, his work , his family and this hobbies, while Masi gave the impression that Jai was her favourite above all else.

Bani hugged Masi tightly and waved them off from the front porch of the guesthouse, and made a promise that if ever in her life she met this Jai Walia, she will not only give him a piece of her mind for neglecting his family but also tell him how lucky he was to have them.

Little did Bani know that the Walia's had set in motion a series of event's that conspired to do just this, and un-know to the Walia's and even Pia and Rano, even god approved of this meddling.


"Excuse me Madam, aapka station a gaya hai, hum Mumbai paunch gaye hai".

The stationmaster gently tapped Bani out of her dream and she stood up and stretched her arms up, while yawning. Quickly picking up her extremely heavy suitcase, and flinging her handbag strap over her shoulder, she confidently stepped on to the platform and nearly jumped out of her skin. The hundreds of people, the noise, the heat, but most of all the unfamiliarity of the place shook her.

Raising her hand to shield her eyes, Bani looked left and right in the deep crowd, praying for a familiar face. Spotting none, she sadly tired to lift her heavy case from the train to the platform. Struggling for a moment, Bani lost her footing and fell backwards, nearly falling onto the platform, if not for the strong muscular arms that saved her. Bani lost her breath and after catching her breath back, immediate lost it again on examining her saviour.

Bani noticed, the muscular arms were attached, to an equally muscular and well-built man; his hair was thick and lusciously dark, his jaw heavy set with stubble and his eye's, fiery with a burning desire for life. However, Bani found his smile the most devastating of all, it went from sulky to annoyed to mischievous in one full move, "Aap teek to hai", said the hand some stranger.

Bani blushed heavily in the Mumbai heat, her face glowed like a Lux soap Advert, and the stranger could not help but think it made her look pretty, if only she was his type cursed the stranger, he might have been interested, he thought as he lied to himself. Because looking at her mustard coloured salwar kameez with navy blue polka dots, her wretched plaited and oiled hair, smudged from the heat kaajal and horrid glasses, she was a pretty thing.

Bani meekly replied she was fine, as they both continued to stare at each other oblivious to the whispering crowd, "Yeh dono miya, biwi lagte hai", they mistakenly thought. Bani aware of her shallow breathing and gently tried to pry his hands off her waist and shoulders.

A white-hot heat surged through the man's body when Bani gently touched his hands; her light touch aroused a strong and powerful emotion in him. He wanted to scoop her up and run away from the maddening crowd at once, looking deep in to her beautifully shaped almond eyes, his heart skipped a beat, Bani continued to try to prise his fingers apart.

Letting her go gently Bani took out a pink hand kerchief that Dadi had gifted her before she left, Bani wiped the sweat from her brow while the stranger looked on.

"Yeh, tumko kaha mila", said the stranger.

"Meri, ek acche dost nai diya ta", replied Bani wondering were this conversation must have been going.

The stranger broke out in to one of his trademark killer smiles, which floored the already smitten Bani more,

"So you're Bani Dixit, your not wearing your glasses in the picture I saw that's why I didn't recognise you".

Stretching his hand out for her to shake, he continued,

"Mein Jai Walia hu, Masi aur Dadi have told me lots about you".

Bani broke into a wide smile and shook his hand rather enthusiastically. Happy in the knowledge that some one had come to take her to Masi and Dadi, She went to pick up her suitcase at the same time as Jai, and their hands touched again. Lighting bolts of electricity went of between them and Bani quickly let go and straightened the strap of her handbag on her shoulder. avoiding Jai's lingering looks, this is going to be interesting thought Jai, scooping up the bag like it was nothing, he grabbed Bani's hand, bought her close to him and gently pushed her through the heaving crowds.

Bani felt like she was sleep walking. Instead of looking ahead for people, her eyes were transfixed on Jai Walia. She liked the way his forehead scrunched up when he was concentrating, he had pulled her quite close and his aftershave was intoxicating. She examined his face again, she liked the way a few strands of hair covered one of his eye's and had to stop herself from wanting to move it out the way. His nose was lean and beautifully shaped just like the rest of him she quipped, again looked at his lips, Jai was biting his lower lip in concentration, Bani thought he looked adorable and absent mindedly kept on staring.

"Will you please stop staring at me and concentrate, varna I will lose you in the crowd", said Jai with gritted teeth.

The statement had the desired effect and she pulled her self-closer to Jai and paid attention to the crowd ahead.

Jai's senses were working overtime, he was holding her wrist so hard he could feel her heart beat quicken. She smelled of white lilies, his favourite and he noticed an eyelash hovering over her beautifully sculpted cheek. Jai Walia groaned and out of frustration. Spotting a gap in the crowd he surg3ed forward and pulling Bani even closer, their faces almost touching, into a disused corridor. He roughly pushed her against the wall and locked eyes with her, his intense glare made Bani melted like a ice cube in the Mumbai heat, he moved closer and dropped her bag with out taking his eyes off her, moving even closer. Bani was on the edge of her seat, she had never been this close to such a devastatingly, deadly and handsome man before, she wanted him, but at the same time felt scared of the consequences. Jai reached out and Bani closed her eyes, he gently picked the eyelash off and with the other hand placed on her right hand. Jai could feel and see her trembling; she pursed her lips together and blew the eyelash in to the humid heat of the station. Jai out of weakness and emotionally caught up in the moment cupped her face and gently kissed her.


TO BE CONTINUED ……