SS - O Re Piya update pg 19 28th dec - Page 11

Sharan,

"his intense glare made Bani melted like a ice cube in the Mumbai heat"

See, we are all quoting you...the update was awesome...

Pehli mulakaat and dono ki dono are burning with Aag...

Loved th entire update, please continue soon!

-- S

loved it pehli mulakaat and they already kissed 😳 cant wait to read what happens next

Originally posted by: moonlitnight

glowed like lux soap advert

kiss!!!! on first meeting!!!
haila

great part
plz cont soon

I was watching the SRK ad on youtube and thought why not LOL, i'm glad you like i thought it was funny too !!! Thanks for commenting!!!

Originally posted by: phool527

whoaaaa. hoaaaa.. shaccy yeh kya.. ittna der baad itna sa update.. very bad yaar.. and the kiss.. wat?? already.. aaj hi mile or aaj hi kiss.. im sure once dadi and massi fond out they will be jumping with joy.. lol.. anywayz great part jaanu.. continue soon..

jaanu i saucy update for a saucy jodi nah 😉 dadi and masi have a way of knowing these things 😆 , and yes a kiss its not called chemistry for no reason 😉 😆 😳 !!!
PLUS thanks for commenting !!!!!

Originally posted by: ree_views

There is a train - Rajdhani Express!!! The instant liking from both sides was like that...anyway liked the description of the activities in the station and the heat of Mumbai...ekdum natural. Oh do you use LUX soap?

Mumbai express more like you forget Bani is gaon ki chori 😉 , well was 😆 , i dont take credit for the naturalness of the station i travel by train most summers in London and that is ekdum natural enough 😆 😆 😆 , thanks for reading and liking dear !!!

Originally posted by: nishiraju

rocking update ....... gre8 part pls cont sooooooooooon

i will try i only fit in updates when i can but seeing the response i will try harder and thanks for commenting it means a lot!!!

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Haye!!!!! They kissed. after what? Maybe 10 minutes. And she is not your type na, Jai? Wow!! I am jumping here. That was an amazing update!!!
I could visualize the whole thing!!!!
Thank you so much for this rocking and shocking update!!!

Byebye

p.s I hope your assignement went well

Ranjana i was jumping up reading your comment so cute really mad my day i had a big fat grin on my face for the whole day, i seriously had no idea you guys would like it so much thanks and as for my assigmnet *SIGH* i have to re submit !!!!! 😕 wish me luck

Originally posted by: ducky_euro

heyy
im read ur FF 2day. and it was sooo good that i continued till the latest part

haila, a kiss from JW on first meeting i hate u for stopping on that place ***sight***, wished i were in bani's place

but over all, fantastic FF, hope u continue soon

SA

SA thanks for taking the time out to read my ramblings and i warn you i dont update regular and i forget to PM about updates 😆 😆 😆 , but none the less i'm happy you liked it thanks again for comments!!!

Originally posted by: ofcourse

Yaar yeh JB tho super fast train hai yaar...they were attracted the moment they saw and kissed in about 5-10mins!! ..hmm aag dono taraf lagi huyi hai...but it will be good to see the reaction of our "Mission JB" gang when they see the two duffers stealing glances..Great part shaz..pls continue soon..
Rama

Duffers ko Walia gang ki madaat hai, just a matter of time 😉 ,and yes i think a express train is better then the local for JB nah 😉, thanks Rama for reading!!!

Originally posted by: divan

Mei agayi,,,sorry busy at work. What a hot and happening first meet...sets the pc screen on fire.


Love the Lux ad reference by munna...munni is already glowing for him

"Bani felt like she was sleep walking." Spana nahi hai, its a reel deal Bani, don't close you mind, just drink it all in...

"She liked the way his forehead scrunched up when he was concentrating, he had pulled her quite close and his aftershave was intoxicating." Already giving bechara line...aage jake kya hoga...hmmm smells divine does he...is it just the aftershave or his deadly body giving off those a volotile cocktail?


"She examined his face again, she liked the way a few strands of hair covered one of his eye's and had to stop herself from wanting to move it out the way." Go ahead give in and feel those silky locks...you know it's what you really want to do...


"His nose was lean and beautifully shaped just like the rest of him she quipped, again looked at his lips, Jai was biting his lower lip in concentration, Bani thought he looked adorable and absent mindedly kept on staring." saab kuch pasand aya Bani ko...abh toh gayi...drooling at the lips...shameless girl.

Haila what is he up to kissing her and Bani already wanting more...abhi toh mile aur kiss pe paunch gaye....haila masi aur dadi kya sochenge...their sweet and innocent Bani being naughty with the munna.



Fab part Sharan...keep it going...we love the chemistry already.

Kanta i will be back to comment on yours later Promise XXX

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part..
wow JB kissed in the 1st meetin itself..
cont.sooon

I will try thanks for reading !!!

Originally posted by: Sheena_Row

Sharan,

"his intense glare made Bani melted like a ice cube in the Mumbai heat"

See, we are all quoting you...the update was awesome...

Pehli mulakaat and dono ki dono are burning with Aag...

Loved th entire update, please continue soon!

-- S

*HAILA* i always get a heart attck seeing you comment but then i smile cause i know if Sheena likes it then it must be good thanks dear !!!!!

Originally posted by: amiee

loved it pehli mulakaat and they already kissed cant wait to read what happens next

Yep super fast cause i dont like to long eyelock sessions without a bit of chemsrty thrown in 😆 😆 !!!


You have really made me think about how i'm gonna top this update, so i have a question for you, i was gonna finish this SS in the next 2 updates or i you can have more updates like this then i can added a couple more, what do you guys think PLEASE let me know i want to update soon as you guys have told me what you want, i have a few ideas but really need your input varna no update till i get a clear idea on how to top the last update!!!

Many thanks in advance !!!!!

Sharan XXX

ooohhh...nnoooo finishing so soon...u just started. More spciy updates like this...got to make munna work to get his munni. 😳

noo please dont stop soo soon,

cuz its a really good FF. i would prefer more updates 👏

SA 😳

Guys I'm like soooo sorry for not updating for like ages its been a long while i know , but work must come first i need a little interest in my pocket before i can be inspired 😆, so as a little sorry gift I'm giving you a preview to the next update PLEASE do tell me what you think, good or bad 😳 !!!!

Sharan XXX

PS please PM me if you would like me to PM a link when i update as i have more free time coming up so i plan to update more !!!!

O Re Piya part 5 preview


Jai expected a big reaction from Masi and Dadi and lots of hint's and comments like always about marriage and the usual leg pulling by his friend Aditya, but he was pleasantly surprised, Masi ignored him and fussed over Bani, Dadi looked over the moon and kept on firing questions at Bani about such and such person. Jai felt left out, they weren't doing it on purpose, but he felt a little neglected by his family. Rashi noticed the look of totally dejection on Jai's face and winked at her father in law and him in turn to Dadi and Masi who increased their attention on Bani 10 fold.

That evening after resting for a few hours and phoning home, Bani walked down the elegant winding stairs to dinner, to her surprise dinner had already started and the whole of the family was their, Bani decided it was best not to disturb them and headed back upstairs, when Masi called out,

"Beta aap kaha ja rahe ho, hum sab tumhara he intezaar kar re hai, aaja varna Nishket phook se maar jayega"

Bani felt embarrassed but didn't show it as she sat on the only available seat between Masi and Dadi and directly opposite Jai, Bani enjoyed dinner the food was great but the company better, Nishket was telling Vidya and his wife silly jokes, Masi and Dadi giggling with Rashi, who Bani liked immensely and Aditya was deep in conversation with his son Ranveer. Only Jai and Bani were silent, Bani pushed the food on her plate around not really eating much, the feeling of homesickness getting worse, Jai didn't fail to notice, silently they both kept stealing glances at each other. Finally after a few more minutes Bani sighed folded her napkin and made her excuses to leave.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Please ignore my spelling mistakes 😳, I'm waiting for your comments 😃!!!!

Oh i love the preview...I see they are playing a game to get Jai jealous. hmmm the two stealing glances at dinner and Bani left early...will our munna go and find out what's wrong with our munni...Sharan...I am waiting for a loooooooong update...it is overdue and you said you had lots of time...so come one.... 😃

gre88888 preview...........now pls update ......kab se wait ker rahe hain........ 😛

o shazooo kahan hoo meri jaanu.. lol.. wow itni din baad.. i should say itne saal baad kahan thi tum.. lol. kahin apne job mein tho kho nahin gayi.. anywayz great preview.. a real update would be very nice hun.. 😉 😆 .. anywayz jaldi se update karo.. samjhi.. 😡 😉 😆 .. where was i. o yeah and i c jai is falling for his guest and this is all the walia clans plan.. nice..im loving this.. heehhe continue SOON yaar.. and yes i want a pm to noe wen ur updating. .now jaldi update.. paisa vasool badmei karna.. 😉 😆 😉