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amiee thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very well penned looking forward to read next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very well written

plz do continue


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi all thanks for the wonderful feedback - a short one to set the scene for the end. once again feedback will be appreciated.

Aprajith Deb looked out from the portals of the plane as it touched down in Mumbai. So ironic he sighed. The reasons that he left this country for, the woman he left this country for, where the same reasons that had brought him full circle. He waited until he was the last person to leave the plane, questioning himself for the thousand time the reasons he had come. All those years ago he had come to rescue her and now again it seemed he was rescuing her. Was he on time? Was she rescuable? Did she want to be rescued? These thoughts invaded his mind until the air hostess politely asked him to leave. His attendant had seen to his luggage but AD had not allowed him to touch the briefcase that he clutched so dearly to him, the contents of that bag was far more important to him than his own life. Sitting back in his Benz he reached into his left inside pocket the one close to his heart and pulled out a picture of Bani. Radiant, beautiful, and gorgeous. There was no doubt about it. She will be rescuded.

He had insisted on booking into Walia hotels, securing an entire top floor section for his use alone.After settling down and ordering a light meal he called home and informed his wife and family that he had reached safetly.
Sighing deeply he went about his work, putting in action his days of planning and plotting.
Swirling the golden liquid he laughed at this own genius, Jai Walia had no idea that a storm was about to erupt.

Walia mansion
As promised Meera had fetched Bani and brought her to WM. After she had witnessed the scene at the outhouse, she decided that until she could she will help Bani in any way possible. It was as though she had awakened from a very long and confusing dream, that became absolutely clear to her by the events of that day. She chided herself for being so gullible and nave. She was disgusted with herself for thinking that she could have abused the title of Mrs Walia to her advantage. Feelings of guilt burned her heart and she realized that her redemption would be to bring together 2 individuals that were meant to be, a little girl that longed for her dad, a mother that longed for her son, a friend that lost his way.
Bani's secret arrival at WM today would be the last time it would be shrouded in mystery. Next time she would enter proudly to stand beside the owner of WM in her rightful place surrounded by her daughter and loving family.
As much as it sounded and felt noble to her, Meera felt the tinge of pain and loss for the family she had started regarding as her own. Bani's family had failed her once, it will never be repeated again.
Quietly she allowed Bani and Ganga to say their goodbyes, like earlier today she felt that she was prying into a scene where she had no reasone to be in, yet she felt that she held the script for both scenes to blend into one and complete the full circle.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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If only KS is like this, AD and Meera will not be disliked....I still think there is possibility for Meera to be super-positive but don't think AD will be back.....anyway great update (liked the way you potray Meera's feelings)....do continue please...

omg.....didn't know that I'm the1st one to reply......I broke the record today.....yahooooooo!!!! 😃

Edited by niruba - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wonderful part only if ks would go this way pls cont soon...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Well, I hope you know something that we are not privy to...

If AD is coming and he and Meera are helping - then we have a happy ending... 😳 😳

Please continue soon, it's a very interesting story!

PS: Please edit your 1st part to change the title, and update the page no of the new part...it will be easier for people to know that you updated.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks I am such a novice at this and i really do not know the technical side of updating. but i will play around.
no there is no hidden info that I am privy too. this is purely my own fiction. it is just that I truly feel that KS is being dragged on for so long. and i personally wanted this story to be completd in a fitting and dignified way. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lenmed it's really well written and the story is evolving well. Looking forward to reading the next part. Jai's sense of deprivation and loss was very well done.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3
Walia Towers.
Jai contemplated the decision that he had taken to give Meera a proper place in his home and the rightful title to her name. A name? he mused. Jai Walia! How will giving Meera his name and a bunch of keys change their relationship, he thought. What is in the name of Jai Walia that would suddenly change their non-existent relationship? In fact he should not give her that status of being Mrs Jai Walia, after all did it not spell doom and destruction to Bani? Did his name save his children, did his name save his sanity? Why burden another innocent person with that cursed name he cried?
How could he live everyday knowing that the name Jai Walia could only be joined with Bani. How could he call out for Mrs Walia expecting to see Bani but instead it would be Meera. But most of all did he really want to give Meera that title. A sudden realisation struck him in the depths of his heart. By giving Meera that title and the keys to his home he had effectively replaced Bani. Sitting upright in his chair he looked as though he was a man possessed. How could he do that? For God's sake Bani was still alive, they were not even divorced in a court of law yet. God dammit he screamed "she is still my wife" . but she deserved it he heard himself say. She had left him, married another man and had a kid from him. God how low could she get he cried.
So then Jai, asked his inner conscience, why the outhouse, why the grief and tears you shed everyday, why the ache you feel in your gut when you try to relive the night of your wedding everyday as you hug her wedding sari, why then the ritual of seeing to it that her sindoor is refreshed on her maang stays there , making sure that she was still a wife, his wife. Knock it all down Jai dared his inner self. She was your past remember. You kicked her out, she betrayed you in the worst possible way . No he cried back no. I can't I won't that is my temple of love. Bani is my love, sinking down into his huge leather chair he closed his eyes.
For the first time Jai Walia was at a complete loss as to what he wanted in life anymore.
Unbeknown to him help was soon to arrive. From sources that he would have least expected.

Walia Hotel.
AD converted the huge living room into a show case of pictures, notes, tapes, and a radio. He was ready. He felt exhilarated. He was going to war.

When Jai's secretary buzzed him he wanted to take the instrument and fling it against the huge oak door. What he barked down the line. Sorry sir, she whispered I have a Mr Aprajith Deb he insists on speaking to you, he said it was a matter of life and death. To hell with him, he shot back.
Hell is where you are Walia and hell is where you are going to spat back AD. the secretary in her haste to escape her bosses fury put the call through and neglected to tell Jai, hence the conversation taking place now.

What do you want Deb? I don't have time for games not today and certainly not with you. Well well Jai what is it that I always wanted he mocked. As always he went on I want Bani it is a simple as that.
Before Jai could retort that Bani was no longer his concern AD had asked Jai to meet him urgently in his hotel suite. No not asked commanded him. This time Jai did fling that darned telephone against the heavy oak door, needless to say his secretary made a speedy exit.

Jai was surprised by Debs sudden call. Now, this call out of the blue suggesting a meeting and something about wanting Bani. It had all sounded most suspicious.
Jai felt physically sick at the thought of seeing Deb again. But he was on his way nonetheless.
The 2 men glared at each other with pure hatred. Well? Jai asked impatiently you called me. AD grinned, Welcome Walia join me for a drink. Jai was in no mood for niceties, sensing his mood AD conceded his offer and instead took Jai to his adjacent room.
Time stood still for Jai. The room was like some sort of museum that show cased his family members. Pictures of them obviously caught unawares. The were some that he did not recognise and then there were those of Bani. Her eyes seemed to be looking at him from every angle. But the pictures of her were not pleasant ones. In these she had a haunted look, and pain filled expressions. She was caught standing in the rain waiting for a bus. Ones were she tended to customers at the bars. Cooking in appalling conditions. Some playing with Ganga? And then one of massi consoling a crying Bani.
What the hell is the meaning of all this demanded Jai.
what the hell do you think it is Walia? For once just take a close look and see what these pictures on the wall are telling you dammit.
Stop this damn charade of yours Deb, Bani is no longer a part of my life he hissed turning on his heel to leave.

You b****** B****** Jai, you want to k now why I am here. Well let me tell you then. I am here Walia to try and save the life of the woman we both love.


That stopped Jai in his tracks

As AD related the sordid story of Jai's and Bani's life Jai felt his heart constrict. This was all a nightmare to him. He felt light headed with tension." I thought…….he seemed bewildered for a moment. "I had believed all these lies all along, but now it becomes all so clear to me, he murmured.

Suddenly he looked older, tired and defeated. AD was thrown back, here he was ready to destroy this man with all the power he had, but instead he found himself pitying the man before him.
What would Bani think of all this, he demanded. You haven't told her have you?
No. not yet. But she should know Walia, and that is your job.
I'm growing a little tired of appearing the bad one in this story, smiled AD.

To his intense relief, Jai understood. Sorry I was upset but it is a shock to be confronted with so much at this precise time Deb, and I see that you have not lost your dramatic ability to bring a point across, Jai said- amusement in his eyes.


The two titans stood. Each contemplating their thoughts to go ahead. While AD found accomplishment in his actions, Jai faced a more torturous time ahead of him. This man his sworn enemy had handed him a second chance, and he'd be damned if he was going to screw it up again.

So Walia are you going to handle this like a man or a maniac.
What do you think Deb, countered Jai.
Like a man Walia, a man, and for the first time Jai had felt that he had made a friend of a foe.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part
awww finally he know the truth
wonder what will happen now 😕


plz cont soon


Taj

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