FF- Bani & Jai full circle p4 p4 end - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
thanks for the kind words. I want to do another FF but I am afraid the response to this one has been so little. 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

WOW!!! I read all the parts and it was amazing!!!
You have handeled their situation so differently. AD and Meera actually had a role in your FF.

👏

Please write an other ff. You have a very beautifull style of writing.

Bye
ranjana

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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
Hey Len,

It was a perfect ending..All the emotions were very well penned. Oh...how I wish to see something like this in KS!

Pls do write the other FF..
Rama
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hey Len.
can u please..
write an epi.
please please pretty please
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
hey
awww that was a beautiful ending 👏


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Len,

Just read all the parts.....such a mindblowing story......loved it to the bits.......and the ending was just fantabulous......hope you would come up with a new one soon....thanks for writing this SS 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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len great ending part. I loved the emotions, the guilt Jai feels and he cannot remain angry at her...and admits he behaved wrong with her.

Now if you want to write another one, go ahead. Don't look at the response. There are only a select few who will comment. But they will also be one looking forward to your next ff...I will be waiting for the next one.

The table have turned now..it's not Bani who is sick, it's Ganga and her father also threw her out. so hope you write one this. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

hey Len.
can u please..
write an epi.
please please pretty please

Hi there read Massi begs Jai, I tried my best.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
HI there i wrote Massi begs Jai, tell me what you think of that. I am busy with a FF, and it is very different. it is a take on when Jai was engaged to Pia, so it is a little in the past. 😊

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