FF: MIRAGE part 41pg53Updated 20/04

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hearme21

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Posted: 17 years ago

#171

Hey Ezther,
Your updates are beginning to be one of the highlights of my weekends, says quite a bit about how popular both your fanfics are right 😊 Coming to this update, looks like Jai is starting to fall for Bani without even realizing it. And I absolutely adore Bani for standing up to him. I was beginning to get worried, but if things continue this way it will soon be Jai I am worrying for.
I guess things wont move forward until she goes back to WGI. I still want to wring Jai's neck for wanting to use Bani and worse still hurt her for standing up to him. You have to do something to redeem Jai in our eyes Ezther 😭 I guess you will get to it eventually. Until then I shall eagerly await the next weekend, for more reasons than one 😉

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Harpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

#172

great part
wonder what is jai up to......hope he doesnt do anything bad to hurt bani cause i'm sure he will burn himself together
cont soon

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mintfresh

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Posted: 17 years ago

#173

awesum part
jai has finally found his match his.i hope he dosen't ruin everything by hurting her. it's getting more interesting with each part.plz cont soon

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ofcourse

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Posted: 17 years ago

#174

So our arrogant RB Jai Walia has started to fall for Bani unknowingly....Though he thinks he is playing a saint to get back with her n destroy her, but the truth remains that he is falling head over heels with his exact match..I love Bani to be able to stand up against him...I dont want her to give in so easily and join WGI immd..
Rano n Deb's moments were really good..I am loving Rano n her bickering with Krian...The mother-daughter are fun to be with...
Great part dear..
Rama

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RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#175

Ezther!!!!!!!!!! amazing update👏
Kiran and her daughters are hilarious. Any daughter could recognize herself and her mother in that😆😆
Rano and deb. the tension is desribed so well!! Its really amazing.
I dont like Jai, I dont trust him, although i think he is falling for her. Bani you go girl!! Dont let yourself be cornered by JW.

I love the way you describe Bani being bubbly and standing up for herself cos it could be confused for arrogance easily but you handle it so brilliantly.

Thanks for the update, cant wait for next weekend!!

Byebye
Ranjana

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Pooja_fren

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Posted: 17 years ago

#176

Hey
I was waiting for long time and myself got lost later
That was gr88
Really enjoyed
Wa nt to know what is Jai upto or he is genuienly sorry this time
Need to be waiting to know
Make that short plz
Thanksssssssssss

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big fan

@big fan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#177

i hope jai is genuinely soree and interested in bani.. and not trying to get even with her...
do cont. soon
dishita

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Ridhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#178

Awesome updates
loved it...caught up with the whole thing...superb
like the way things are moving.
Haila Bani slapped Jai...twice
and from the looks of it he didn't take it well...he will have his revenge....and he is already working towards it....but hoping in these process somehow Jai also change....change for the good....really hoping against hope that Bani doesn't fall in his trap as it is he is going to destroy her...love to see that he destroy himself with her....glad that she didn't let him talk her into anything and give back as good as she got
awwww...Rano and AD...nice pairing a shy doctor and bold patient...interesting 😉 😆
really want T adn M come to India and be with Bani....trio will be good together
plz cont. soon

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@ragamthalam0

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Posted: 17 years ago

#179

Bani is smart and should not go anywhere near him ,, pls continue soon

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Lilly

@lilly2006

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Posted: 17 years ago

#180

please please please please update update karo 😭 update karo 😭 update karo 😭 update karo update karo

I love this fan fic!! The jb situations are intense!

please update karo 😭 😭 please update karo

I must know what other games are in plan next. I love this jai...he's so sauve, charming, ass (sorry to say), menacing, powerful, and most importantly sexy!

please update karo 😭 pleaseupdate karo update karo 😭 update karo 😭 update karo 😭 update karo

cheers,
Lilly

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