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sorry don't have time to...
Here is the next part hopefully you will like it!
please forgive my mistakes and i tried to make it even funnier but it didn't work...neways hopefully you will like it.
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Part 2C
Pia and Nattu, who came out of their respective cars the same time Jai and Bani did, waited for another round of tennis match with bated breath.
Nattu got out of the car to meet Pia of course and Pia got out to catch Jai's attention. Both were about to greet each other when the sound of bang stopped them from doing so. They huddled closer like scarred puppies and Nattu addressed Pia, "I think we are about to witness another round of Tinda-Karela Tennis match."
Pia asked enthusiastically, "Do you want to keep the scores or should I?"
Nattu looked at Pia amusedly, "Does it matte?" Pia looked him in the eye and just shrugged with half smile on her face.
Nattue faced Jai and Bani again just in time to see Jai jumping backwards and clutching his heart like you do when you are about to have an heart attack and commented, "It seems that your sister might take the first serve and take the first set as well."
"Nah, I think it might be your friend who will win this one," Pia responded trying to be in Jai's good books.
As Nattu and Pia made themselves comfortable against their cars, Jai and Bani were ready to play another match.
Back to Jai and Bani:
Bani put up a fake smile when Jai faced her and, "So Mr. Tinda, we meet again and this time with a bigger blunder. Your Tinda-mobile has hurt my car," Bani continued in her sugary sweet voice, "which belonged to my late mother. What would you like to say in your behalf?"
Jai who was still clutching the place where his heart is was now trying to calm him down at the same time was checking the girl out. But as soon as he heard her referring to him as Tinda and his car as Tinda-mobile, his blood rose up again. Oh the nerve of this girl! He thought to himself and decided to retort back but then he remembered his plan and again put a fake smile to address her.
"Oh I'm sorry you must be mistaken because I didn't hurt your Karela-juice over there, you hurt it yourself along with my car, Ms. Karela. This car was my baby because it belonged to my late dad."
Bani gave her sugary laugh and took one look at the car and then turned back to Jai again and addressed, "Haha, you must be joking right? I mean this doesn't look like that it belonged to your late dad. In fact it looks like you just bought it in this century."
Jai lost control of his anger again and, "How Dare You! Tumhari himat kaisey hui ke meri dad ki memory ki insult karo and that too by insulting my car," he took a step toward her, "first you call me names, then you can't drive and now you are blaming all this on me!"
"Oye Tinda, thand rakh! I called you names only because you pushed me and called me a name," Bani stepped forward equally, "I insulted your car only because you insulted mine, and I stopped because the cars in front of me stopped and I was slowing down but you didn't pay attention and banged into my car. Also I know what you just said under your breath back there about how making me feel guilty and getting away with all this. Well Tinda I got news for you I'm not you average girl who will back down without a fight."
Jai just couldn't speak anymore. Color rose on his face due to half shame and half anger.
While Nattu commented to Pia, "See I told you, your sister will get the first round. That was serve and a set"
Jai recovered just as quickly, "Listen Miss Karela, In the last five minutes I didn't call you Karela as many times as you have called me Tinda. But now I think it is time to settle some scores. Your car is already messed up that if you make another hole into it, it won't make a difference."
Bani was left gaping at his arrogance. She opened her mouth to retort but was cut off by Jai, "But then again when the malik of this car is messed up and kadvi and a Karela then the car just reflect the malik's personality. I don't know how you drive this car or who sees something in this car or you to notice that its rear side is messed up."
Pia commented to Nattu, "I think your friend won this set."
Bani was fuming like a volcano which was about to erupt.
Jai continued, "I don't know why I am even talking to a girl like you, you have no decency in you or anything to find out who you are talking to. You are talking t---"
"Save it!" Bani held up her hand, "I don't want to know who I am talking to because that would be an insult to your late father to know that he didn't teach his son something so due to respect to your father I don't want to find out who you are. I have never seen such a rude, ignorant, arrogant, childish, selfish…and all the other things…kind of man in my life. I hope who ever marries you will be able to answer you back with equal standards like you do. You are a disgrace to male spices. I pitty the girl who would be interested in you"
Jai just ignored her, "I don't need your opinion because I know for a fact that that one girl won't be you. You are such a Karela that anyone would want to run away from you. Now you wanted money for your car then here is my card and come to my place tomorrow and I will give you the money."
"Just forget it! Come on Pia and lets go! Hmph!"
Bani stomped her feet and turned on her heels and got in the car and waited for Pia.
Jai starred after her retreat and then just stuck his tongue out. He went back in his car and waited for Nattu. As soon as Nattu got in he drove away.
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don't forget to leave comments...i hope i get more comments this time because it takes a time out of my busy life to write for you guys. it gives me some encouragement to know that people are really appreciating it. if not then i guess the selected few people who have commented, i will just pm them my next part...
rooj
Edited by rooj-i - 17 years ago
