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Posted: 17 years ago
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I planned to write the next part yesterday but i didn't get the chance to so i am writing it now at 1:15 a.m. 😆 😆 what i'm bored.

Anyways this one is dedicated to Kantaben for adopting my Ff idea and writing on it thanks ben, Ree for the Tinda explanation, and Rivs for something very good and secretive! 😉 Rivs if you are reading this then you know what i am talking about! 😆

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Part 2A

Bani cursed the shopkeeper through out the whole ride, while Pia was too busy wondering why Bani di insulted that hot and nice looking man by calling him Tinda.

Bani went on, "I can't believe that man, I mean how---"

"Di, why did you behave with him like that?"

Bani was taken aback by Pia's question, "What do you mean Pia? That man deserved to be treated that way."

"Di, why did you call him that? Why did you insult him like that?" Pia went on.

"Pia aren't you listening to one word that I have been saying for the past 10 minutes? That man sent the wrong followers to the house and then he behaved as if he didn't do anything. So he deserved to be insulted like that!"

"Oh ho di, I wasn't talking about the shopkeeper"

"Pia, don't talk to me like that first of all. And secondly, who are you talking about then?"

"Oh di, that Hot and tall and handsome guy or should I say man dressed in black!" Pia went into her dream world, imagining the guy giving her a kiss on the hand, "He is so handsome and charming I can just imagine him right now giving me a ki---"

Pia was cut off abruptly by Bani, who's blood suddenly shot up, "That Tinda?! Are you out of your mind?! He deserved even the biggest insults! Those insults were nothing compared to the ones I have right now! If I ever see him again I would give him the piece of my mind on how to behave when in public. That batameez insaan has no manners what-so-ever about dealing with others and the crowd in general. He w---"

"Oh di, that…that…that…Tinda," Pia turned on her seat to face her di, "or whatever his name is, is probably by far the best looking man I have ever set my eyes on and you insulted him by calling him Tinda when he doesn't even deserve that! He has no resemblance of any kind with that stupid sabzi! He looks nothing like it! He doesn't deserve names like that! If you want to give him names related to food then give him something good like apple or mango or something else but definitely not a Tin---"

"And you think I deserve that kind of treatment from him? Why should I back down when someone calls me name? I didn't deserve the name he gave me but he does! He is," her blood pressure kept on rising with every passing second, "arrogant, egotistical, a Tinda! He insulted me! Me! Bani Dixit! How dare him!"

"Oh di, get over yourself! He didn't do anything wrong in calling you that name, now that you think about it."

"What!? You have definitely lost your mind now. First you were only mildly crazy but now you are completely crazy! If I ever see that man again I would---"

Baam came the noise from the rear, it seems someone hit their car.

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next part will be up soon...good news for you guys this might stretch into a long SS 😉
but will try to wrap it up in 3-4 parts.
hope you like this part...it's a tad bit boring but next will hopefully be good.
Edited by rooj-i - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Oye rooj do you know the first thing that I did after reading the first part was that I asked my mother which vegetable is commonly known as Tinda...then I made a search on wiki..I have heard about it but never got the opportunity to eat it.....


anyway..yeh Bani madam ko itna kyun gussa aa raha hai? 😉 hota hai hota hai...and Pia...well Bani shut her brilliantly.....ab car kisne thoki? waiting for some hot curry 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
Why is Pia defending the Tinda, I know the answer, because he was a great looking guy!! 😉 😉 😉

He hit her with his car from the rear...oh oh!! He is big doo doo now.

Poor Bani, first she gets called Karela, and then she receives no sympathy from her own sister.

Rooj Billi...Keep it going! I like it... 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks for the dedication rooj... 🤗

Pia abhi se tinda ke sapne dekhne lagi.... 😡

I think the tinda gave a wrong name to Bani...suchmujh mirchi hai...that mouth is non stop....

abhi kya hoga...kiski gadi ne accident kiya....

more tinda/karela recipes please........
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Rooj again an awesome part 😆 😆 😆

Yaar why can't Pia be blind 😕 😕 I mean she is the first one to lay her dirty eyes on our superhero.. 😡 😡
She doesn't sympathize with her sister being called names, but is supporting the "TINDA" 😆 😆 😆
Yaar this Bani is non-stop hit 😆 😆 Yeh koi karela hai ki kuch aur?? iskeliye tho doosra naam sochna padega abhi

oh..ho..looks like our Tinda has hit karela's car from the back 😉 😆 😆...anyway I am ready with my notebook n pen to copy down the next hot-hot recipe 😆

Rama
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
😆
again bump?!! 😉

gr8888 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
You guys are cracking me up with your comments. 😉

thank you so much and here is the next part. will answer everyone of you in a second. Please forgive my mistake.

This one is dedicated to all my friends who left me a comment here.

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Part 2B


In Jai's car (aka Tinda-mobile) 😉

"I can not believe that Karela-girl for behaving like that with me! Me!? Jai Walia! How dare her! Did she even know who she was talking to?! And how the H*ll---"

"Oh bhai calm down now will you? You have been going on like that for the last 15 minutes about that girl! It is not nice to call her Karela bhai, she has a name you know like you," Nattu tried to calm Jai down, "Waise bhi bhai, the fault was yours. I mean you pushed her aside like that and called her name in the first place just so You can talk to the shopkeeper on wrong order. Why did you need to push her aside and call her that name?"

Jai looked at Nattu, who was seated in the passenger side, with the murderous look. He couldn't believe that his own brother, his own flesh, was taking that girl's side. "Nattu are you for real? Man this must be a joke right? Please tell me that this is joke and you are just trying to get back with me for that little prank I pulled on you yesterday. You are not defending that girl are you?"

Nattu didn't answer him and just starred ahead of him on the road. The traffic was packed and moving slowly. It seems that an accident just happened on the road.

"Are you mad?! I can't believe this! My own brother is defending that Karela! You wanted to know why I pushed her aside and called her that name right? well she was in my way and was hogging the whole space for 15 minutes and I had to leave somewhere. Waise bhi she is of no importance to anyone, especially to me that I should wait for her to finish and then I go ahead. I mean look at the way she was looking. So weird!"

"You know bhai you were wrong in pushing her like that and calling her that name and you know it. And could you please pay attention to where we are going? the traffic is moving slow I don't want you to hit the car in front of us."

"Ok fine, I was wrong in pushing her that hard like that but calling her name? Pfft! She is not some Mahatma Ghandi who needs respect! Besides she looks like a Karela!"

Both didn't say a word for a second because it seemed the traffic started moving again and Jai was again driving methodly so they could get out of this traffic jam.

But then again, "Why the hell are you defending her anyways? I mean you don't even know her like that then why are you defending her? She is no beauty to look at...unless you really do think she is pretty and want her. How Dare You...!"

"Oh Bhai please chill! I have no interest what-so-ever in her. I liked that other pretty girl with her. Now that is one sexy Mama! Beside I know you have the hots for her already!"

"WHAT?!" Jai screamed so loud that it vibrated within the car. He took his eyes off the road and his hands reached for Nattu to choke him that he didn't realized that the car in front of them slowed down and...Bam!

Both flew forward and Jai was cut short of his sentence because it seemed they hit a car in front of them.

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Jai got out cursing under his breath for hitting the car in front of them that he didn't notice who's car they hit, while Nattu was amused to see the same ladies from the store, one supposedly Karela and one the hot young girl.

Nattu thanked his lucky star for saving him from Jai once again and meeting that hot girl again in one day. "Thank You God!" Nattu thanked under his breath, "Hello Ladies! Nice to bump into you again."

This sentenced had Jai on his head like nanosecond. He hoped that he didn't bump into Karela again since he didn't want to deal with her again.

While Bani stood feet apart huffing and fuming. It seemed that smoke was coming out of her nose. She took long and fast steps towards Jai.

At the same time Jai looked up and groaned inwardly for his bad luck. He hit his hand on top of the hood so hard that a second later he yelped in pain, "Ouch! Stupid car and stupid...Ok Jai Play your game and make her feel guilty like she is at fault and you will be out of this mess in no second. And if that doesn't go well then just pay and go."

He turned around with a fake smile ready to face her but he took a step back when he realized that she was right under his nose.

Bani approached him and heard him talking to himself and her BP shot up again like a rocket shooting up in the air. She rolled up her sleeves and put her hands on her hips like when you do in a fight and waited for him to turn himself around. She put a fake smile and decided to play by his rule for few minutes.

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OK guys i know you want me to finish this part and want to know what their conversation is about but I'm really tired and I have college in the morning so i will do this tomorrow and you will get that update. i promise you will see the 2nd meeting soon.

I hope you enjoyed it! Don't forget to leave comments if you liked it!

rooj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
So Tinda-Karela ki phir se takkar ho gayi...And Bani all ready to deal with him, fire spitting out of her... 😆 Can't wait...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Rooj Rooj: Here I am - haila, this is a hilarious FF, he is like a little kid who has a crush on his young friend, and instead of saying that, he hits her on the shoulder, LOL!!

He hit her from the back and is willing to blame her for it, what a plan Jai!!

Bani, what are you going to do with this driver of the Tinda mobile.... 🤣
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
🤣
cant wait for the convo

plz cont veeery soon
Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago

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