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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey rooj Kein Problem u are doing a fantastic job by writing such lovely and entertaining ff 😊 😊 ... so i feel i should defintely compliment your good work...keep em coming 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oye rooj..gussa nahi karte 😛. Nachu and Pia are great...line maarne ki koshish 😆. The fight was sweet..calling names and quarreling for every possible reason like nursery kids 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry for not commetn it was awesome and doo pls continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks guys...

now here's the deal: the people who left me comments will get my next update via pm and i expect you guys to respond back with bad or good comments and well that way i would know if someone likes my SS or no...so next update will be via pm.

That brings me to my next point i trust you guys not to send it forward just i like i wouldn't do it if someone asked me to do so.

Now Mods, when i ask you to close this topic please do so and i will ask you either tomorrow or the day after.

Thanks to those who commented and as for those who only read and didn't leave a comment well good luck reading other stuff.

rooj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks guys...

now here's the deal: the people who left me comments will get my next update via pm and i expect you guys to respond back with bad or good comments and well that way i would know if someone likes my SS or no...so next update will be via pm.

That brings me to my next point i trust you guys not to send it forward just i like i wouldn't do it if someone asked me to do so.

Now Mods, when i ask you to close this topic please do so and i will ask you either tomorrow or the day after.

Thanks to those who commented and as for those who only read and didn't leave a comment well good luck reading other stuff.

rooj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey that is not fair..sending PM's only.. I just read all the parts. Please do continue..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi i just found this found fanfic...please continue cant wait to find out wat happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i just read u fanfic
plz cont
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry guys i can't update tonight or tomorrow night...but i'll try for tomorrow if i get my organic chemistry work done early. 😆

sorry but till then could you guys wait for one more day and also i need help with JB's next meeting...does anyone have any idea as to what their next meeting should be like and what more cooking words they should imply to? please do pm me if u have some idea as to what u want the next update.

thanks for understanding

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok so here is the next part...sorry don't have time to send it via pm but next one will def. be via pm. so here it is...enjoy!!!

Hopefully my hard work will pay off...btw if u don't like it then blame it on my college i didn't have time to do a good one this time but next one might be good and u will know why by the end of this update. and please ignore my mistakes.

Enjoy!

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Part 3
A week later…

Pia dragged in her feet through the door, threw her bag on the sofa, took off her heels and flopped on the sofa and started massaging her feet. Bani on the other hand placed her bad on the table, went to change in something more comfortable and then went in the kitchen to prepare dinner.

"You know di we wouldn't be having these problems this week if you hadn't…" Pia complained.

"Piaaa…don't start again," Bani groaned from the kitchen.

Pia walked in the kitchen, "Oh come on Di, don't deny it. Sach hi toh keh rahi hoon. If you would've taken the money from that Mr. Hot-in-sexy-black-gorgeous-hair-brown-eyes-the-devil-may-car e-attitude-the-most handsome-man-on-earth," she sighed dreamily, "then we wouldn't be in this mess. Because of our damaged car, we can't go anywhere without creating noises and," stretching on the 'and', "we have to work double time to pay for this damage. Do you know how many wrinkles I'm getting because of that?!"

"Pia, just shut up, will you?!" Bani turned to face her sister, "You've been ranting the same thing over and over again for the whole week. So what if I didn't take the money from that Tinda, the bloody-idiot-arrogant-pig-headed-with-no-brain-or-class-at all...all…all…Tinda!" Bani crushed the tomato she was holding in her hand, "And yes I refuse to call him anything but that, so don't even bother trying," Bani turned back to her work, "Besides we've been living off by ourselves with no ones help for a long time now. It didn't make a difference then and it doesn't make a difference now if we don't take the money. We'll manage on our own."

"But di, I can't work these long hours and on top of that live in this chawl (she looked around the house)," Pia whined, "all these things are ruining my beautiful complexion and ruining my chances of getting married to a handsome guy. It's also making me age before my time and look like you, no offense di."

"Hey! What is that suppose to mean?" Bani playfully hit Pia on the back of her head, "I'm not old or ugly. I don't have wrinkles or anything of that sort. Besides why are you worried about that stuff? You're not some maharani that needs to be looked after every minute or second. You're not going to age at all and you have a long life ahead of you. Your skin is as fair as it can get and you will find a nice boy. So you still have time."

Bani went ahead to prepare the daal(lentil) and boil rice.

Pia came around the counter and faced Bani, "Oh di, I don't want a nice boy. Eww! That is an insult to my beauty," Pia gaged while Bani rolled her eyes, "I want a nice, hot, rich man, who could keep my happy. Also, he would buy me nice and expensive gifts to show his love for me. Of course, I'll love him but not as much as his money."

"Pia there is more to life than dreams and money. As far as I am concerned and so are you, you should be thinking about someone of your own status because such huge dreams are not meant for us. Now stop whining about your beauty, which is of no help to me or you and help me with the food, warna hum bhoke reh jayenge."

"Whatever di, you are such a party pooper. Way to break your sister's heart. Anyways I will find my guy, in fact I have already found one," Pia complained.

"Why can't you be more like Rano?"

"I don't want to be like Rano, she is a book-worm. Eww!"

"At least she is a book worm because she has brain, while you are a Desi Bimbo with no brains, who is of no use to me," Bani sighed under her breath.

"Did you say something di?"

"Oh nothing, just hurry up and help me."

So the both girls went to prepared themselves a good dinner.

On the other side of Mumbai, in Walia mansion…

Jai was sitting on the sofa in the study area of the lounge, working on another file for his upcoming project. Masi and Dadi were sitting in the dinning hall, chatting and teasing Jai here and there from time to time.

Nattu walked in with a huge grin, carrying a card and a fruit basket. He placed the basket in front of Jai and threw the card on the table and almost screamed, "Guess who I saw today Bhaiya?!"

Jai still engrossed in his file and without looking up, replied annoyingly, "Hope not Karela and her Chipkali(lizard) friend."

Nattu was surprised to hear this from Jai, "No bhai I didn't."

Jai looked up and smiled, "Good, because I don't like to be disturbed for useless information from time to time."

Masi, who was talking to Dadi a while ago, was now listening to Nattu and Jai, "Who this Karela and Chipkali?"

Both, Nattu and Jai, ignored her, "Bhaiya, they are not Karela and chipkali, they are nice and great girls, who have names," Nattu responded blushingly.

Masi asked again, "Who are you guys talking about?"

"Nice and great? My foot!!!" Jai ignored Masi again and threw his file on table irately.

"Oh don't deny it Bhai, you got the Hots for Miss Karela," Nattu teased him and in return he received an angry glare from Jai, "And they are nice and wonderful people, it's you who is not!"

Masi confused yet happy about this spicy news, asked again, "Koi mujhe bhi batayega kis ki baat chal rahi hai yahan? Jai got the hots for whom?"

Jai stood up to face Nattu, "I do not have the Hots for that Karela!"

Nattue sensing an outburst coming, decided to change the subject, "Anyways, forget that, I was here to tell you that I just met Mohan Khandelwal today and he has informed me that Meera di is getting engaged next weekend. And guess whom she is getting engaged to? Tarun Sablok! Our mutual friend. Isn't that great news?!"

Masi and Dadi squealed with happiness, while Jai tried to sink in the information. Finally when he regained his mind, "This is great news indeed, but why didn't Mohan told me? I mean, we are best friends and he never informed me! Main abhi khabar leta hoon uski. Aur Tarun ki bhi. Pata nahi kya samajhte hain woh apne aap ko…."

Jai moved to go to his study to call both his friends to yell at them. He has only reached the first step of the stairs when his steps halted because as Masi asked again, "So who is this girl that you were talking about Nattu and that Jai has hots for?" Seeing Nattu's confused face, Masi continued to ask in details, "You know the person you guys were talking about before the good news, that Karela girl, who is she? Is she sundar, with good sanskar, a good match for my Munna?"

Nattu grinned from ear to ear and then looked at Jai's back, "Masi, you know I would love to tell you that she is a great girl for Jai bhaiyya and that he likes her too," he paused and looked at Jai again, who has faced them in horror by now, and then looked at Masi again, "but I can't because I don't know myself. Par ek baat toh zarur hai, this girl is probably the only girl to stand up to Jai bhai." He laughed looking at Jai's face and then continued to tell Masi and Dadi what happened a week ago.

Both elderly ladies were disappointed with this information but yet happy at the same time, which led to new hopes and planning for future for their Munna.

Jai wanted to kill Nattu but decided against it thinking that it will worsen the matters and also he didn't have time to acknowledge such useless talks.

Meera's engagement…

"Who's that girl in pink dress?" Jai asked Mohan dreamily…

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Hopefully you will like it...and please no belans...next part...u know it! 😉

rooj
Edited by rooj-i - 17 years ago

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