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Posted: 17 years ago
Lovely update Tam Thanxs

who is going to kill jai?..uffff dear bani dont worry..nothing will happen to jai..hai na Tam 😉 😳

plz do continue
sonam
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Posted: 17 years ago

yayy u r back.

no prob sweety 🤗

hehehe....Jai is soo sweet

😆😆 Ranu's sleeping habit 😆😆

damn you stupid doctor… may ur wife make u drink karale ka juice every morning and night…

🤣

poor Jai 😆😆

aww.....Bani worried about Jai.

what Doc said? Jai is being naughty naughty 😉😆

loooooooooovely update 👏

plz cont soon

Edited by moonlitnight - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
haha 😆....can't stop laughing.....I thought Bani will punish him for calling the girl sexy but she ends up crying, maybe Jai made the right decision to come late though he doesn't know Bani will be waiting for him 😉.....very cute couple......please continue soon, don't make us wait for years 😉
Edited by niruba - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Tammie..

first of all.. i know i have told u this already

but i am telling u again..

not fair.

u update after such a long time.. and than u update this short.. updates

that is not fair..

aww.. rano's sleeping.. habit.. hey dont make fun of her..

hehe lolzzz

aww who is trying to kill jai.. baby..

and btw.. i thought bani found out that someone told doc to tell jai and her that jai cant have any physical relation

contiue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
You updated!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗 Even though you could have been resting!!! 😆 😆 😆 Thanks so much Jaani! 😳 Yes this update was very juicy indeed! 😉 But as for the length.... 🤔 it's acceptable i guess. 😉 😆 Jai is so badmaash! 😆 😳 The way in the beginning how he was pulling Bani so close to him and then once she gets up from the bed and comes back, he's sleeping on the couch. 😆 😆 😆 He's going to have to make up big time to Bani for that sexy comment. 😆 Last scene was my favorite! 😳 It's good to know that Bani cares so much for Jai! 😃 Kuch to hua hai! 😉 😆 😳 Jai is a duffer... 😆 he's only going to make Bani mad all over again by bringing up the red marks. 😆 😆 😆 He's a dead man. lol!

Thanks once again for updating! Absolutely loved it! and as for my update... 😆 will try to start writing on it. I've been so busy for the past 48 hours... 😕 😭 I'll make sure to make it long and very juicy, since i've promised a whole heck of people for an update and they will kill me if they aren't satisfied. 😕 😆

Lots of love,
Dil-Jaani 😉
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

that was a good part......thanks....😃

abb naughty jai phirse se shuru kardiya .

pls cotnineu soon...will do ....

dav


Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Finally!!! You are here. ...yeah 😆...Fabulous update Tam!!...thanks Ranjana... They are too sweet.😳😳😳....
Jai has become a full Joroo ka gulam!😆

Bani is crying. So sad. She must be scared when she could not reach him.

Thanks for the update Tam
...u are welcome...

Love,
Ranjana


Originally posted by: jeenal20

plz cont soon
gr88 part ...Thanks Jeenal ...will cont soon...😃😃😃...


Originally posted by: SonamKHAN

Lovely update Tam Thanxs

who is going to kill jai?....u will find out very soon.....uffff dear bani dont worry..nothing will happen to jai..hai na Tam 😉 😳 ...yes nothing will happen to him...main hoon na...😆....

plz do continue ...will do...thanks Sonam for ur comments...😃
sonam


Originally posted by: moonlitnight

yayy u r back.....thanks for such lovely welcome...😳...

no prob sweety 🤗...u are so sweet and very understanding...Thank you sooo much...🤗🤗🤗...

hehehe....Jai is soo sweet🤗...

😆😆 Ranu's sleeping habit 😆😆

damn you stupid doctor… may ur wife make u drink karale ka juice every morning and night…

🤣

poor Jai 😆😆...he can't even eat because of that doc...so it's fair enough for him to curse the doctor to have karela juice every morning...😆😆😆...

aww.....Bani worried about Jai....yeah poor thing...

what Doc said? Jai is being naughty naughty 😉😆

loooooooooovely update 👏

plz cont soon...will do...thanks for ur lovely comments Tropa...😃


Originally posted by: niruba

haha 😆....can't stop laughing.....I thought Bani will punish him for calling the girl sexy but she ends up crying, maybe Jai made the right decision to come late though he doesn't know Bani will be waiting for him 😉.....very cute couple......please continue soon, don't make us wait for years 😉

Hey Niruba...thanks for ur comments and will cont soon...in fact will be updating the next part sometime today...so won't be taking ages...😆...thanks for the comments...😃😃😃...


Originally posted by: Hritzfan

long time u updated.cont soon
Hey will do...😃


Originally posted by: nir_jaanu

Hey Tammie.. ...hey Nir...

first of all.. i know i have told u this already

but i am telling u again.. ....yeah I know 😆...

not fair. .......

u update after such a long time.. and than u update this short.. updates
....but I had this assignment to do...so I couldn't update...kitna gussa karti ho yaar.......
that is not fair.. ....again not fair...ok will be updating today...hope that will be fair...😃...

aww.. rano's sleeping.. habit.. hey dont make fun of her..

hehe lolzzz

aww who is trying to kill jai.. baby..

and btw.. i thought bani found out that someone told doc to tell jai and her that jai cant have any physical relation ...that was the promo...I'm slowly but surelyu getting there...😆...

contiue soon ....will do...😃...


Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess

You updated!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗 ....I had to...... Even though you could have been resting!!! ....thanks to you all....😆 😆 😆 Thanks so much Jaani!...you are welcome... 😳 Yes this update was very juicy indeed! 😉...thanks... But as for the length.... 🤔 it's acceptable i guess. 😉 😆 Jai is so badmaash! 😆 😳 The way in the beginning how he was pulling Bani so close to him and then once she gets up from the bed and comes back, he's sleeping on the couch. 😆 😆 😆 ...he thought Bani won't realize...😆...He's going to have to make up big time to Bani for that sexy comment. 😆 Last scene was my favorite! 😳 It's good to know that Bani cares so much for Jai! 😃 Kuch to hua hai! 😉 😆 😳 Jai is a duffer... 😆 he's only going to make Bani mad all over again by bringing up the red marks. 😆 😆 😆 He's a dead man. lol! ...you will find that out in next chap...may be something different might happen...😉😉😉....

Thanks once again for updating! Absolutely loved it! and as for my update... 😆 will try to start writing on it. I've been so busy for the past 48 hours... 😕 😭 I'll make sure to make it long and very juicy, since i've promised a whole heck of people for an update and they will kill me if they aren't satisfied. 😕 😆 ...Don't worry Jani you can update when you have enough time to...so will not come after you for update...take your time...😃😃😃...but don't take too much time...😆...will wait for ur update and thanks for your wonderful comments....😃😃😃....

Lots of love,
Dil-Jaani 😉


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

update kab milega?

davia



Very soon... 😃😃😃...
...am working on it... about in 3-4 hours...Can u wait that long...😉😆...


hey guys I know I haven't been updating regularly...so will be posting another update today to compensate the waiting....thanks for ur patiences...🤗...
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you guys so much for ur lovely comments and here goes the next part... Do let me know how it was....Thank you...I wasn't going to update today...But Nir is gussa with me for a short update... ... but I thought that was my longest update ever... 😆... anyways...hope u will like it...Thanks... 😳 😳 😳 ....

Chapter 36

Jai:...Bani itna kyun darti ho... mujhe kuch nahin hoga...bata nahin ush Pushkar ne tumse aisa kya keh diya ke tum ro pari...

Bani: ...Jai agar app ko kuch ho geya tu...mein...saying that she started crying even more...and held him tightly with all her strength...fearing something might happen if she lets him go...

Jai: ok. Baba…chup…ssshhh… now listen to me carefully and tell me what exactly Pushkar told you…. If you don't tell me how am I suppose to know Bani…

Bani: Jai… who I was angry at you in the morning that's why I went ot Mom's place with Rano… and I had decided to stay there over night…

Jai: I knew it you were going to stay there tonight as Masi told me about it… but I am glad you came back…. Said Jai making his grip tighter on her……

Bani: Jai listen to me… I'm not joking… please…

Jai: hhhmm o.k… I'm listening…. What happened after that…

Bani: around 8pm I got a call from Pushkar… and he gave me some information regarding your accident that took place during our engagement party… Pushkar told me they are 100% sure that there is someone who wants to kill you and it's more like a woman… Jai I was so horrofied listening

To that… I tried calling you several times but your phone was switched off…

And ur secretary didn't pick up the phone either… I guess she left the office before you… since u were so busy… saying that Bani started crying again…

Jai: Bani kuch nahin hoga mujhe...mein hoon na tumhara paas.... Don't listen to Pushkar… u know he's a police officer so thing like that coming out of his mouth is natural…. So don't harase yourself…

Bani: But Jai… why would a woman want to kill you… I mean do you have any enemy or any business rival or anything of that matter…

Jai: Bani I have always loved only one women in my life and that's you… beaside you… I only know females of our families… other than that I don't know or don't have any enemity or deep friendship with anyone else…

Bani: but there has to be someone…

Jai: Bani ssshhh… we won't talk about it now….. thik hain…. aacha yeh saab batein choron aur mujhe batao ke ush din doctor ne tumse kya kahan tha woh mark dekh kar...he said adding a grin on his face....

Bani gave him a cold look and remained quiet…

Jai: Bani batao tu…

Bani: No…. I won't tell you anything… here I am talking about something really serious and ur more concern about what that doctor said about the mark given by you… ur impossible…

Jai: Bani look at me plese…please sweetheart… dekho jo hona hai so hona hai….Hain na…. aur kiski itni himmat hai jo mujhe meri Bani se alag kar sake… Bani mujhe kuch nahin hoga… kuch bhi nahin…

Bani: Lekin Jai aap… samajh nahin rein…

Jai: Bani ssshhh please… dekho … for your satisfaction I will myself speak to Pushkar about this matter and see what he has to say … and even if it's necessary will could arrange a private detective to investigate the matter further… ab kush…

Bani: ok … as long as ur safe I don't want anything else…

Jai again gathered Bani close to himself… and asked her …

Jai: that's like a good girl… now where were we, yes… I remember you were going to tell me something…

Bani: but I told you everything regarding what Pushkar said before…

Jai: Bani you silly silly girl… I'm talking about the doctor Jani… tell me what doctor said other day you know about what…

Bani: Jai you don't give up do you? … do u have to know it …

Jai: Bani please tell me… otherwise I won't let you sleep… and started tickilg her… and both started giggling like kids…

Bani: ok …. Ok….Jai please stop… I'll tell you…

Jai: good… now tell me…

She started narrating the incident of hospital:

Flashbaack

Doctor: Mrs Walia plese lie back on the bed and I'll examine you… saying that she was about to remove her saree from the side to lok at her stomach… but Bani held her hand…

Bani: doctor I'm sorry … but I don't want you to look at me… I mean it's a bit personal… doctor went a bit confused as she didn't understand why Bani was saying something like that…

Doctor: Mrs. Walia … there is nothing personal when it comes to ur health … you should not hide anything from the doctor… you know what I mean… otherwise your health might get worsen…

Bani: doctor ur misunderstanding me… I mean u see I am a married women and you know sometimes these husbands do some mischies that put us wives in very difficult situation… and my husband has exactly done the same… and unfortunately my niece has came to know about it… and you know she's still very nave and thought I was stung by a bee… she turned red as she was blushing very badly… thanks to her husband…

Doctor smiled at her knowing what exactly she meant……

Doctor: it's ok Mrs. Walia I understand… I myself a married woman … so I am very aware of what you're trying to say… well wish you all the beat… and may your husban's love for ur only increases day by day…

Bani: thank you so much doctor… doctor can I as you a favor…

Doctor: yeah sure go ahead…

Bani: please doctor don't say anything about our conerstaion in front of Anu or my husband… please…

Doctor: please Mrs. Walia you rest assure… I won't a single word to anyone…

Flashback end

Jai: so you doidn't let the doctor see those marks hmm…

Bani: how can I? … it's something very personal and I don't want doctor or anybody else to see it… samjhey…

Jai: accha… are you still angry about that Bani…

Bani: well I was angry with you when you said Malaika Arora Khan looked sexy… but when I received that phone call from Pushkar… all my anger vanished somewhere…

Jai: so someone was jealous… and I must thank that killer guy… sorry lady…. Coz ur not angry anymore….

Bani: Jai please don't talk about that I am scared and ur thanking that stupid lady…. As it is I was going to came back after sometime … I know you love me more than anything and if you call someone sexy it does not mean you love that person…

Jai: ur right Bani I love you soo much… but I was just messing with Rano… u know how she was saying the song was bad… so I was trying to instigate her…

Bani laughed at that comment and said….

Bani; Jai I think it was other way around… it was Rano who instigated you not you… she wanted me to punish you… and get angry at you … that's why she said all those things… and you know why coz why were giving them bad looks when they laughed at ur groaning of not having healthy btreakfast… remember….

Jai: what? How do you know that…

Bani: I heard both Anu and Rano talking about it when you had left for office…

Jai: I won't spare your sister… she is damn clever…

Bani: yes I know she is… now can we get some sleep …

Jai: yes we can… saying that he life himself and kissed her forehead saying…I missed you so much… and we didn't get to speak to each other through out the whole day…

Bani placed her hand on one side of his sheek and said…I missed you too… both were looking at each other intently and with so much love…that Jai couldn't hoild back himself… he bend down his head and toucher her soft lips with his… his lips were careressing hers… both shared a sensual and romantic kiss between each other… sftersome time Jai moved back … and started kissing her shoulder and nuzzling her neck… while Bani lied back holding onto him… his hands were caressing her waist … Just then Bani's eyes flew open as she remembered the doctor's words and stoped Jai from proceeding any further…

Jai: Bani… you ok… kya hua…

Bani: Jai we can't come this close… you know that… don't you… as she hugged him… she knew it both wanted each other but … she can't risk his health can she…

Jai: Bani I understand what you mean… and I'm sorry I got carried away… and as it is I have my routine check up with the doctor tomorrow so we'll ask him again if everything is ok with me…hmm…now go to sleep… after such a long talk they both fell asleep holding onto each other…

Following morning after breakfast both went to the hospital…

At the hospital:

Doctor: please be seated mr. and Mrs. Walia… I have looked at all ur reports Mr. Walia and everything seems to be getting a bit better… if you follow my instructions and take all ur medicines regularly… other than that do you have any question Mr. Walia or any other complications that you are worried about…

Jai: yes Doctor wanted to ask you something… just then Bani held his hand fully knowing what he was going to ask and said…

Bani: actually doctor… he was going to say if he could have variety in his diet apart from eating u know diet food… Jai just glared at her and kept his mouth shut…

Doctor: oh yes… that's not a problem… you can have a bit of everything but not too much…

Bani: thanks you doctor… we'll take ur leave now… saying that both came out of doctor's cabin…

Jai: Bani why did you stop… I wanted to ask him that question…

Bani: Jai I don't think we should do so much haste in this matter … I mean what would the doctor think… he'll think we're desperate or something…

Jai: ok mama whatever you say… saying that both walked towards the parking area... just then Bani remember something...

Bani: Oh God Jai...I forgot your medical report at the doctor's cabin...you get the car out and I'll just go and get it will be back soon...

Jai: ok sweetheart... Jaldi aana...mujhe office bhi jana hai...

Bani: haan baba ... jaldi aan jaunegi... saying so she proceeded towards the doc's cabin...she was about to knock on the door but she stopped as she saw the doctor talking on the phone with someone...so she waited for the phone call to end...she was about to turn when she heard Doctor taking Jai's name...so she stopped and listened to doctor's conversation....

Doctor: please don't worry about anything...Jai Walia and his wife is not aware of the fact that ... he's absolutely fine and they can have husband wife relationship in every sense... they didn't suspect a thing... after all I'm getting paid such huge amount of money from you...and I will ensure they don't come to know of this fact ever....

Bani was shocked 😲 hearing doctor's remark that she couldn't move from the spot...the doctor lied to them about Jai's health.... ...

Sorry for any error...and I really can't write longer update.......sorry if it doesn't fulfill the criteria of long update......I tried....
Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

that was a great update with all requirement ab muje promo chahihey.. as i thought it is a woemn well

who it is?dotn tell em ti is anamika/?😆yaa phir jig ya phri emera ya phir roshni ya phir piaaaaaa ?

soo bani never elft doc see it as we alle xpected ti she wd stopp wahi hua.. nauhgyt jai kabhi nahi suderega.. i thinkk koi hai... par koun😕dont tell me jai has split personality turnign to a women called jamolika😉... 😆

pls contineu sooonnnnnnnnnnn

that was a great update

dav

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part.
liked it.
JB all made up...Bani forgive him...so sweet.
Rano ki bachi trying to get your jiju in trouble...not good.
oh good Bani knows the truth....doc is lieing to them...great
plz cont. soon

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