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Posted: 17 years ago

Kya Tam,
Lollypop kedhakar behlaane ki koshish kar rahi ho kya. Baccha samajh rakkha hai? bas promo parhe ja rahe hai itne dino se.


update, update,update, update,update, update,update, update,
update, update,update, update,update, update,update, update,

Okay chal theek hai, Friday is fine by me. Just this time okay!!
Remember no update from me until you update yours. Koi humse update maange aayega to tumhara pata dedenge, they can have a strike here, along with me! You are make sweet, innocent 😈 me blackmail you!!

Sorry, just kidding. I loved the promo and you work hard on your assignment. Make the best out of it!!!

Bye
Ranjana

p.s. did you pass for your last exams?

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Indian_Goddess



i know i can't push it.😭 so i'm not even trying to bug u to do so-- too afraid of you changing ur mind.😆😆😆 have fun updating jaani!😉 make it juicy and lllllllloooooonnnnnggggg!!!!😉😳😆 and it better be up by friday!😡😃



Good idea Dil-Jani 😉...now don't bug me so much that I have to delay the date further more... and remember I update and you update too....😉....so don't just tell me to update on Friday... 😡...keep ur update ready as well...😉 😈...that tooo a veeeerrryyyy llllooonnnnggg one.....understood....😉....

Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Kya Tam,
Lollypop kedhakar behlaane ki koshish kar rahi ho kya. Baccha samajh rakkha hai? bas promo parhe ja rahe hai itne dino se. ....you tooo😭..


update, update,update, update,update, update,update, update,
update, update,update, update,update, update,update, update,..I will write same thing on ur FF...😆....


Okay chal theek hai, Friday is fine by me. ...bohot bohot meherbani...Just this time okay!! ....KYA 😡....😆...
Remember no update from me until you update yours.....how mean 😡...well in that case keep ur update ready by Friday...otherwise I will strike
😈😈😈....Koi humse update maange aayega to tumhara pata dedenge, they can have a strike here, along with me! You are make sweet, innocent 😈 me blackmail you!!... aare yaar yeh Dil kya kam thi jo ek aur add ho gayen...😭....kitna blakmail karte ho yaar......

Sorry, just kidding. I loved the promo and you work hard on your assignment. Make the best out of it!!! ... dara diya...😡....itna sab kuck likhne ke baad it's ok...😡....oh well thanks for understanding yaar...even I don't like keep you guys waiting....😳😳😳...will update soon...I better go back to boring assignment now....bye....

Bye
Ranjana

p.s. did you pass for your last exams?... I thought I was the one with short memory...😆...u forgot....I even PM you saying I passed...and u even congratulated me...😆... I guess you forgot....never mind and yes I did pass...😃😃😃...


Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: davia389

udpate kab milega? aayein aap ki hi kami thi😆...aare yaar bola na Friday ko update mili gi...I came here for sometime to refresh my mind from my stupid assignment ... and here you all are after me...... Davia do one thing you update ur FF and I'll read...it's a better option...😳....what say......sorry for keeping u waiting ... but samjha karo na...only one more day to go....and Friday will come soon...😃😃😃....

davia

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Posted: 17 years ago


Originally posted by: RANJANA_RRJ

Kya Tam,
Lollypop kedhakar behlaane ki koshish kar rahi ho kya. Baccha samajh rakkha hai? bas promo parhe ja rahe hai itne dino se. ....you tooo😭..


update, update,update, update,update, update,update, update,
update, update,update, update,update, update,update, update,..I will write same thing on ur FF...😆....


Okay chal theek hai, Friday is fine by me. ...bohot bohot meherbani...Just this time okay!! ....KYA 😡....😆...
Remember no update from me until you update yours.....how mean 😡...well in that case keep ur update ready by Friday...otherwise I will strike
😈😈😈....Koi humse update maange aayega to tumhara pata dedenge, they can have a strike here, along with me! You are make sweet, innocent 😈 me blackmail you!!... aare yaar yeh Dil kya kam thi jo ek aur add ho gayen...😭....kitna blakmail karte ho yaar......

Sorry, just kidding. I loved the promo and you work hard on your assignment. Make the best out of it!!! ... dara diya...😡....itna sab kuck likhne ke baad it's ok...😡....oh well thanks for understanding yaar...even I don't like keep you guys waiting....😳😳😳...will update soon...I better go back to boring assignment now....bye....

Bye
Ranjana

p.s. did you pass for your last exams?... I thought I was the one with short memory...😆...u forgot....I even PM you saying I passed...and u even congratulated me...😆... I guess you forgot....never mind and yes I did pass...😃😃😃...
I'm sorry I have a very short memory!😆 I'm at uni doing borign stuff so my brain is functioning ultra slow.


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey the promo was good.. So when is the update??
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Posted: 17 years ago
finished reading all the parts that i had missed just wonderful and the promo looks so promising cant wait to read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you so much Guys for all ur lovely comments.... I'm sorry I couldn't reply to all the message separately.... again sorry for delayed update....thanks for all ur patients.... and special thanks to Tropa for ur good wishes... 🤗 ...

This part is dedicated to Nir and Taj.... Since I couldn't update earlier ... otherwise I would've dedicated the parts to u guys on ur birthdays.... but never mind....Happy belated birthday guys.... 🥳....

Here goes the next part... Dil-Jani I hope this part is long and Juicy enough .... hope it's not boring .... and Ranjana here is the part as promised...enjoy....😳....

I thought I'll ur memory giving a small recap:
Recap: Bani punished Jai for listening to their conversation and sentenced him to couch... but he couldn't sleep so he decided to sneak into the bed... and now we'll see what happens when Bani finds out.......


Chapter 35

Following morning…

Both Jai Bani were fast asleep… just then Bani stirred a bit trying to make space between her and Jai… in his sleep Jai goes………

Jai: Bani stop moving…sone do na… saying that he pulled her more closer…

Bani: Jai aur kitna sau ge… chalo uetho…dekhiye… she stopped talking realizing she's talking to Jai… how can she speak to Jai… he's sleeping on the couch … she must be dreaming or probably out of habit she said that… but wait a minute she can feel someone's hand around her … so she slowly open her sleepy eyes… only to get shocked in the early morning… she's sleeping by his chest and he's holding her tightly against him… that means he never followed her punishment… anger rose in her … but then again a small smile appeared on her face as she looked at Jai again… he was smiling in his sleep… seeing him smiling like that her anger vanished instantly… pagal kahin ka… so she tried to get out of the bed without disturbing him… letting him sleep peacefully… Bani went to bathroom as Jai kept on sleeping and dreaming away…

After about 30 mins or so Bani came out of bathroom and saw Jai still sleeping but not on the bed… he's sleeping on the couch… seeing that she smiled to herself again… what was he thinking that she never realized he was sleeping on the bed all night… ok may be she didn't realize at the night time…but she did saw him in the morning when she got up…

Jai stirred a bit hearing the door opening sound and looked at Bani in daze…

Jai: hey good morning sweetheart…

Bani: good morning… Jai can I ask you something…

Jai: Bani actually I'm getting late for office and you didn't even wake me up… so we will talk later… ok sweetie… saying that he kissed her forehead and went towards the bathroom grinning … coz he was very much aware of what question she was going to ask him……

Bani: very well Mr. Walia… you certainly know how to avoid people's question… par don't you worry …my turn will definitely come… you just wait and watch…

So after putting his clothes out Bani went towards Anu's room… and she saw both of them sleeping carelessly … one head is near to another one's foot… practically Bani was sleeping upside down…. God knows when will this girl learn to sleep properly… (sighs)

Bani: Anu… chalo uetho… come on girls get up… it's already late… hurry up… Anu opened her eye slowly ……

Anu: aaahhhhhhh!!!!!

Bani: Anu kya hua… why are you screaming for… koi bura sapna dekha kya…

Anu: Bani mami yeh kiska feet? Mere paas tu Rano sau rein this tu phir yeh pare… Rano kaha gayen…

Bani: Anu tub hi na dara deti hai… yeh Rano ki aadat hai… I know she's pretty weird… you just have to get used to her……

Rano opend her eyes in shocked hearing Anu's scream…

Rano: aare Anu subha subha kyun chila rein ho… is this any way of waking up your guests…

Anu: tu aise kyun soti hai… your head suppose to be on the pillow not your foot… I got so scared seeing your feet on the pillow…merit u jaan nikal gayein thi… that's why I started screaming…

Bani laughed at her comment: chalo… now get up both of you and come quickly downstairs I'll be preparing breakfast soon…

Rano: Di only 5 min please… and she started going back to sleep…

Bani: no Rano… no laziness… come on hurry up… she made Rano get up… and pushed her to the bathroom and went towards kitchen……

With the help of Tony everything was set on the breakfast table and one by one every member started to come to the dining area to have breakfast…

Bani started serving Jai…

Jai: Bani yeh kya hai… boiled egg… and rokha sokha cereal … and fruits… I don't want all these… I will have what everyone else is having…

Bani: I don't think so… and this is not boiled egg… it's half boiled egg… and that's not rokha sokha cereal…. It's healthy cereal with a lot of fiber in it and you can add milk to it… am I clear… and as it is I have spoken to your doctor and he told me to give you healthy food without less oil and ghee…

Jai: Bani… it's not fair… please ek paratha tu khane do na…please…

Bani: no… no more paratha for u… especially not during the morning time… look at urself u have gained a lot of weight and u need to lose some so… only healthy breakfast for u… no parath understood…

Anu and Rano giggled at his helplessness… Jai glared at them to shut them up… and it did work…

Masi: haan beta bahu sahi keh rein hai… tujhe healthy breakfast karma chaiyein…

Jai thinking to himself… gr8 ab Masi bhi apni bahu ke saath dene lagi… mere baremin koi nahin sochta… so helplessly poor guy had his breakfast… coz health comes first… If I could I would have killed that stupid doctor… na mujhe khana khane deta hai aur nahin mujhe apni biwi ke paas jane deta hai…aah… damn you stupid doctor… may ur wife make u drink karale ka juice every morning and night…

Aditya: Jai if you are finished shall we go… we have this meeting in an hour… and some preparations have to be done beforehand for the presentation…

Jai: yes Aditya… let's go… aare haan I forgot my phone in the bedroom… I'll just get it…

Bani: I'll get it… you wait here I'll be right back… Bani walked towards the stairs to their bedroom…

Aditya: Jai you take ur time I'll meet u at the office… bye…

Jai turned and sat beside Rano and Anu … who were watching B4U music and a item song from film welcome was playing…

Pankhudiya yeh gulab ki si hai haaye
Mastiyaan yeh sharaab ki si hai

Log meri aada pe marte hain
from lyricsmasti.com
Jaan mujhpe nisar karte hain

To aaja 2
To aaja saath jee le
Honth Rasile tere Honth rasile
Hothh rasile tere Honth rasile
Dil kehta hai mera yeh ras pe le
Hothh rasile tere

wah wah wah kya sawaad loot gaye re dil ke nawaab

lajawab

Jaam jab yeh chalakne lagta hai
Jo bhi dekhe bhekne lagta hai

Seher mein har taraf hai yeh charcha

Tera jalwa bala ka hai jalwa
from lyricsmasti.com
Meri adayein sab se nirali
Dil ko hila ke rakne wali
deewane hai tere sare chail chabile

Honth Rasile tere
Honth rasile tere Hothh rasile

Dil kehta hai yeh ras pe le
Hothh rasile tere
Honth rasile tere Hothh rasile

Meri baaton mein phool jhadtein hain
Dil mere ishq mein bigate hain

Teri baaton mein phool jhadtein hain
Dil tere ishq mein bigate hain

Teri chahat mein jo machlete hain
from lyricsmasti.com
Ban ke parwane wohi jalte hain

Mein hoon bijuriya Baki bijuriya
Kisse milau katil nazariya
Jo teri chahat ki chahat mein je le
honth
Honth rasile tere Hothh rasile
Hothh rasile mere Hothh rasile
from lyricsmasti.com
Dil kehta hai yeh ras pe le
Hothh rasile tere Hothh rasile
Hothh rasile tere Hothh rasile

So Jai started singing as well…. Hoth rasile tere hoth rasile…

Rano: Jiju you like this song… look at her she look so yuck… and her clothes… chi … aise kapre koi pehen tha hai bhala…

Jai: Rano chill… it's just a song… and I think she's looking sexy in that outfit…

Bani: sexy… accha… so you find her sexy… do you…

Jai: Bani … when did you come … I mean… she's disgusting… I mean she's not good… I agree with you Rano… yeah this song is not good at all… and she's not sexy at all…… he snatched the remote from rano and changed the channel… and took the phone from Bani and kissing her forehead he left the place as soon as possible before matter went out of control… while driving to office……Jai cursed himself… what was the need of calling her sexy… damn now Bani will be more angry…

Back at WM:

Bani: Rano … I'm coming with you today … I wanted to see mom and dad… haven't met them in ages… I'll just ask Masi if I could go… Just then Masi came inside saying…

Masi: aare Bani … you don't have to ask if you want to go them go…

So both sisters went to their home…

Back at office Jai was getting restless because of his stupid comment… and wanted to talk to Bani so he dialed the number of WM…… and Masi picked up…

Masi: haan Jai… Bani has gone to her maayka… and she might stay there for tonight… haan haan… mujhse pooch kar gayein hai woh… ok bye…

Jai thinking gr8… what's point of going home early so he thought of staying at office and finishing off some of the work… he switched off his phone and told his PM to not to disturb him as he's busy…

Around 11:30 Jai went home and walked towards his room… and it's all dark,,,

He switched on the light and saw a lovely figure standing by the window… and she turned around as the light was turned on and hugged him tightly… and started crying…

Bani: Jai … why are you so late… I was waiting for you for so long… and ur stupid phone was off as well…

Jai wrapped his arm around her and hugged her as well…

Jai: Bani… what happened… I thought u will be staying at ur parents place tonight that's why I came late…ish mein rone ki kya baat hai… please Bani ssshhhh… no more crying… he kissed herr forehead…

But Bani's weeping didn't stop…Jai took her near the bed and made her sit down… Bani please ssshhh… I don't want to see any more tears… do you understand me… please sweetie… sshhh… won't you listen to ur Jai… haan…

Bani stopped crying for some time and made her lie down on the bed… you slep here and I'll just change and come back… ok…

Jai came back from bathroom and joined Bani… she was still awake…

So Jai pulled Bani more closer to him… As Bani is lying over Jai's chest… Jai hold her close to his heart...She started crying again... and after some consoling from Jai… her sobbing has began to fade as Jai's stroking her back...trying to sooth her...calm her...

Jai: Bani please don't cry … kya baat hai… why are you crying… any problem… ghar mein sab thik hain na…

Banii: Jai aaj Pushkar ka phone aayan tha… aur usne kahan ki koi aap ko marana….

Jai:...Bani itna kyun darti ho... mujhe kuch nahin hoga...bata nahin ush Pushkar ne tumse aisa kya keh diya ke tum ro pari...

Bani: ...Jai agar app ko kuch ho geya tu...mein...saying that she started crying even more...and held him tightly with all her strength...fearing something might happen if she lets him go...

Jai: Bani kuch nahin hoga mujhe...mein hoon na tumhara paas.... aacha yeh saab batein choron aur mujhe batao ke ush din doctor ne tumse kya kahan tha woh mark dekh kar...he said adding a grin on his face....

sorry if it was not upto ur expectation...I tried....... do let me know how it was....😳😳😳...I gave the first propmo😆 ... after such a long time....so next promo will also be coming soon....😉.... do comment....😃😃😃....

Edited by tam2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

that was a good part..

abb naughty jai phirse se shuru kardiya .

pls cotnineu soon

dav

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Finally!!! You are here. Fabulous update Tam!! They are too sweet.
Jai has become a full Joroo ka gulam!😆

Bani is crying. So sad. She must be scared when she could not reach him.

Thanks for the update Tam

Love,
Ranjana

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