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If u guys stay tuned u can all have some moments with jai
Twinkle

Gr8 part man! I jsut read almost all the parts!!!

Great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon

Hey brilliant part
awww jai is soooo cute
and who is this 'ahem ahem' person..... ermm prem maybe

plz cont

Taj

that was really.. good.
hehehe.
davs.. kya baat.. hai..
dancing.. with jai.. huh???
continue soon please

Ok,Thanks for ur comments,and all who are getting jealous of poor davia can tell me and I will put some bargains at the end of my FFs and whoever replies first gets to have some moments with Jai.I hope u are reading Tropa.

Recap:Bani:Thank u Jai,for everything,Everyone clapped and Mausi had tears in her eyes.

Someone:AHEM AHEM!!!

Part-11

Everyone looked at the door of Walia Mansion and all the woman seemed to draw breath as one.There at the entrance stood a handsome hunk in a plain T-shirt and jeans but till looking HOT!!!

Bani,Anu and Rano:PREMMMMM!!!!!They ran towards him and hugged him all at once.

Prem:Yep that's me.Buns,Thanks for the surprise party,but it should be for me and maybe ur husband could get all lovey-dovey in another party.

Everyone ggiggled at this.Jai was highly annoyed,for some reason

Prem:Soooooo,I wan some music!!!YEAH!!!

Jai(thinking):Man,they give him a surprise party and he butts in and starts ordering them around.GGGRRRRR!!!!!!

Prem comes over to Jai holding Banni around the waist.Rano and Anu had gone to tell Florina about setting the music and all

Prem:U know Bani,when I first saw u here in this party,my heartbeat went DHUUPP DHUUPP DHUUPP!!!!!!U r looking so sexy!!Na!Sexy is too lame for u.Who gave u this dress Buns?

Jia stepped forward fuming:Well,Prem,I gave Bani this dress

Prem:U have good taste for a man so old.(Prem didn't mean this but he was just afraid the girls in this room would flood over Jaii instead of him.)

Bani burst out laughing

Jai(fuming):Me OLD???

Prem(snigerring):Yeahh.Look into a mirror and u will see

Jai looked at Bani expecting her to tell prem to stop.but whatt she said surprised him more

Bani:It's not his fault prem,the servants don't clean the mirrors enough

Prem(smacking his hand on his head):Of course!!!Looks like they don't clean his clothes either.

That did it.Nobody insulted Jai Walia like this and got away with it.Jai made his hand into a fist and charged ate Prem,but suddenly Tajcame in between

Taj:Prem,u haven't changed since college.u come into a man's house and start insultig him.U don't know anything about respect.U don;t even care that Mr.Walia's repuatiion could be spoiled if any press or media had been here

Prem was really shocked.His innocent ,sweet Taj was saying THIS to HIM.

Prem:It was just a joke babes

Taj:U have a very wierd sense of humour then and stop calling me Babes

Prem:Then stop playing Hard-To-Get Babes

Taj:URGHHHH!!and she stomped off.

jai also went away with plans buzzing in his mind.So,Bani was going to make him jealous right?Well,she had just started a tom-and-jerry game where he was the tom and bani wasjerry and prem could either be the canary friend or the glodfish or the mouse who was jerry's friend or maybe that dog Spike.NOO!!!Prem was a dog in his opinion but if Prem was Spike,jai would be dead meat.It was better if prem was the little dog Tike or Mike whatever.NO!Then prem would haveSpike who stood up for him.Spike might be Bani,heyyy!!Bani was jerry.maybe Taj could be Spike and maasi could be the lady who kept tom.

Okay,His thoughts were getting way out of hand now.Jai knew how to get back at Bani.he would have asked davia to help him,but she had become a Bani fan,ever since she started working for Bani.Jai thought and thought and finally he realized who could do the thing he had in his mind.And best of all,Bani couldn't stand this person.Knowing that he was playing with fire,jai picked up his phone and dialled a number(We can only hear Jai's side of the conversation)

hello?Can u come over to my house right now?It's an emergencey!!HURRY!!

jai put down his phone and another thought struck him and he dialled another number

NOTE:First person to comment gets to be the 2nd person whom Bani doesn't know and will you-know-what with Jai😉.Taj and davia are already in so no 2nd offers.

And tell me if I shoould stop.

ByeTwinkle

Oh no please don't tell me he called that chural 😕 , well Bani does deserve it, letting that overgrown ape (sorry Taz but Prem is an ape) call my Jai old 😡 , hmmmph 😊 . Update soon Twinky I can't wait to see what trouble is brewing.

Great part.
liked it.
this Prem is so much...calling JW old and insulting him...and Bani didn't say anything 😡
plz cont. soon

that was awesome.
all though u r going to have some problems.
as davs.. is first.. this time too hehe

Hey brilliant part 👏
how can prem call jai old 😡 but prem does sound really cute 😳

plz cont soon