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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
i guess jai is calling meera.. can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Thanks for all ur comments and I am sorry for my absence.
Well,here goes nothing..

Part-12

Jai enetered the party again, humming to himself. He saw Davia running up to him.

Davs:Did u see Prem?Isn't he soooooooo cute?

Jai:Yeah, he is as cute as the devil himself.

Davs(Narrowing her eyes):jai walia,getting jealous?

Jai:Not for long.

davs:What do u mean?

jai:Nothing honey, and he pecked her on the cheek and went away.

Back to Bani

Bani,pia and Anu r all talking.

Pia:Bani, u won't believe how Pushy got jealous of prem.

Bani: same as Jai

Anu:bani mami,if mamaji is jealous and pissed off, he is going to give u tit for tat

Bani(smirking):Tell him to bring it on!

Pia:Ummmm,Bani,I think he already has

Bani:What do u mean?

Pia pointed somewhere and Bani and anu looked there and gasped.There was the witch standing and flirting with Jai

Bani:Who on earth invited her????????

Anu:Mamaji of course

Bani walked upto Jai and tapped him on the shoulder.

Jai:Oh,bani,I was looking for u.

Bani:Didn't look like it

Jai:Bani, isn't meera looking gorgeous today?

Bani gave a murderous glance in meera's directon and meera smirked

Bani:Jai,don't u think Prem is looking so HOTTTTTTTT????????

jai:Not really

Bani:ha ha.He is the hottest hunk in this room

jai:U mean the hottest tempered man.Or should I say virus(I call a bully in my school virus cause his name is varis😉)

Bani:Ummm,meera there are a lot of men who want to know u,so please excuse me and my huuuuuubbbbbbbyyyyy, while we talk a little.

Bani dragged Jai into a room and locked the door

Jai(innocently):Kya hua jaan?

Bani:Kuch nahi, mera praan

Jai(huskily):Oh, I see can't wait until this party is over so u want to go wild right now.And he took hold of her and started kissing her whole face and neck and he was about to kiss her in the mouth,when Bani pulled back

Bani:Jai is there a need for meera to be here

Jai:yes.She doesn't think I am old

Bani(lovingly):Jai, I am so sorry,I didn't mean it.Jai I was just joking,I didn't mean it.i am so sorry

Jai:held bani by the waist and made her sit on his lap and silenced her with a loving,passionate kiss.After what seemed like hours,they broke apart.(sorry,I am not in romantic mood today).

jai:Bani u r so innocent.The way u were saying sorry and everthing.

Bani:Well, u r a handsome hunk, so I want to be special for u.

Jai:U r, u were, and u will always be Bani

Bani:Good,now let's go before they start a search party for us

jai:Bani, let's go on our honeymoon right now so that they CAN have a search party for us

Bani was really surprised by this

Bani:Jai,Before we go on a honeymoon,let me pack first

jai:If u bring any clothes except for the one u will wear when we travel, I will burn all the clothes.U won't need any clothes while I am around.

Bani blushed

Bani:We will think about that later and we can't go on a honeymoon right now because prem is here

Jai:Yeah, we can't because meera is also here and we need to look after her.
With that Jaii stuck out his tongue at Bani and left the room.bani was fuming

Bani:I hate THE NAME PREM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I know this part was boring,but I promise to make the next part more interesting.Bye and please comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

haila jai bhi na..

too much kick that meera out and send jb to honeymoon jaldii

pls continue soon.varan mein naughty jai and abni ko drag karke plane mein daldoongi

pls cotnineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 17 years ago
ridizzz thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
Great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
ffern022 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Serves Bani right, mera hero hoti hui is Prem pahi atka, but Jai please don't flirt with that chural to much, varna zindiagi bari nahi choodange. 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
Hey great part 👏

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
😆
loved the whole part
😆 😆 did Jai catch Bani's last sentence??
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88

Part-13

Jai was scanning the crowd for the person who was supposed to be he but wasn't here.Then he saw her at the doors and alked up to her

Jai:finaly,u came

Ridhi:I said I wuld.So hat's ur problem?

Jai whispers something in her ears and she nods he head

Ridhi:Jai do u have some faded jeans?

Jai(taken aback):Of CORSE!But why ridhi?

Ridhi:Just listen and she told him something.

Jai:I knew I could always count on u

Ridhi gave him a sweet smile and told him to hurry up.

The party was going on in full swing, when suddenly the lights went off and there was a wierd sound.Everyonre looked at the stage and there they saw a man wearing a T-shirt and jeans, dancing

Then the music started:

dhoom again and run away with me
on a rollercoaster ride
dhoom again and see your wildest
dreams
slowly come alive
dhoom again and gotta break the
rules
and party all the time
dhoom againwe gotta steal the
show
you know that ain't no crime
so steal all that you can
the magic you begun
let's shout,break out
comes on once againlets hear it
dhoom machaale.........

dhoom againand feel the beat of
the rythem
rythem of the night
dhoom again and hear the voices
calling
creatures of the night
dhoom again and see the shadows
dancing
in the pale moonlight
dhoom againa and feel your
heartbeat pumping
now the time is right
so go walk out the door
get down....get on the floor
let's shout break out
come on once again let's hear it
dhoom machale

and when love comes your way
you'll know its here to stay
you'll steal the chance 'cose you're
the thief of hearts yeah
you'll win with a galance
walk away with your romance
there's no more ther's no backing
out now

dhoom again and make the whole
world crazy
set your spirit free
dhoom again anf take a break right
now
come celeberate with me
dhoom again 'cos all wanna do
is steal the showsomehow
shoom again 'cos all i wanna say
is hey the time is now
let nothing get you down
go out and paint the town
let;s shout break out
come on once again lets hear it
doom machale....
The man was Jai and the female was none other than........................

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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Hey loved that song and jai is dancing to it 😉 even better😳 but who is it with....erm with Ridhi to get bani jealour 😆 was that the plan


plz cont soon


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90

The man was Jai and the female was none other than........................

The woman was meeraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Everyone clapped and Jai took a bow.Bani went over to him and hugged him and started punching him for dancing with meera.Jai laughed and hugged her

Guys this FF is leading nowhere so I am deciding to close it.I am starting a new ne which akready has a story.So bye bye.And SOrry.

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