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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
I read all da parts from a beginning till now.Keep it up!Davia...ur very lucky 2 be dancing wid JW.I feel like da Jealous queen. 😆 😉 Plz update soon!




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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-9

Recap:I nside,aftre calminng down,jai remembered his meeting with davia a nd how hyper she had been.

Flashback

Jai went to davia's house.He had known davia since college and they were always making fun of each other.Davia also knew Bani,as she worked in Bani's office

Jai ringed the doorbell and Davia opened the door.She was wearing a plain pink T-shirt and jeans.When Davia saw who it was ,she shrieked

Jai:Davia,I am not a ghost

Davia:Sorry Jai,it's just that u haven't been around for a long time

Jai:Aren't u gonna tell me to come in?

Davia:Sorry,please come in Jai

Davia brought Jai some coffee

Jai:Wow Davi,I never knew u could even boil water

Davia stamped on his foot."Shut up Jai"she told him.Jai was clutching his foot and yelling in pain

Jai:Davia if I tell Bani what u did to me,u can be fired

Davia:ha ha ha!Bani will thank me and give me a promotion for that act.But if I kissed u or anything,than she would fire me

Jai:EWWW!Don't even think about kissing me

Davia:I am not stupid to kiss u.U r such a show-off

Jai:And u r such a know-it-all,not to mention bossy.
Davia took a heavy book that was near him and hit him on the head

D:U haven't changed at all

Jai:Yeah I am the same as before,but u have changed from bad to worse.
At this,Davia started chasing him around and around her house.Jai was laughhing and Davia was shrieking her head off.In the end,Davs caught him and started beating him,and they both fell on the sofa(don't ask me how)

Jai:Davia get off
Davia got off and was trying to catch her breath.
Davia:Jai Walia,tell me why on earth did u come to my peaceful house?

Jai:To break ur peace.
Davs:ARGHHH!!!
Jai(laughing):ha ha ha!OK.I wantu to dance with me for the party
Davs(shrewdly):What type of dance?
Jai whispered something in her ear

Davia:Does Bani know?
Jai:Relax Davia,u won't get fired or anything for dancing with ur Boss's hubby
D:She is also my best friend.
Jai:Davi,do u know Prem
D:Of course,he is so cute

Jai:cuter than me?
D:U will find out.
Jai:Don't u want to dance in front of him?
D:NOO!!He is in love with Taj,ever since he knew her.Well,that's what Bani told me
Jai:SOO>>He still flirts with girls
D:U will find out
Jai:So davi,r u gonna perform
D:Of corse,what r friends for?
Jai hugged Davs and went away.

Back to the present

Jai was inside his Bathroom and taking his shower.When he got out,he saw that Bani was already downstairs

Sorry,Davi,but Prem is for Taj>U shoul d share ur luck.


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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
aww that was really.. sweet.
jai is so mean.
calling.. my davs.. she has gone.. from bad to worse.
jk jk.
davs.. u didnt.. read anything..
ok.. someone.. else is typing.. this.. this is not nir..
okkk
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
pls cotnineu soon heyhey i chased jai?

davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Hey
awwwww i feel sooo honored to be included in ur ff thanx
seems like Jai is all set to make bani all jealous lol

plz cont

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
just read all your ff and i loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
omg divs.. i cant believe u.. u chased jai.. hahahhaha.. and prem is taj.. awwn dont worry divs.. heheh.. nice part.. continue soon yaar.. that was hilarious..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Great part.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
Thanks for all ur comments guys.
I will update after I go home 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

Here it is:

Part-10

Jai started getting ready.He decided to wear a black suit and a red shirt.He gelled his hair back and put on his rolex watch.He examined himself in the mirror,and decided to keep the 1st 2 buttons open.Helooked dashing and jai knew that vert well.He came down the stairs looking for Bani.He saw her at the bottom of the stairs.Her back was to him.He hurriedly came down and and put his hands on her shoulder and made her look at him.Next moment he regrreted it,causse his heartbeat seemed to have stop.She had some light makeup and simple jewellery.Her hair was done in soft curls and her creamy skin seemed to glow.Jai couldn't take his eyes off her.Jigs came and waved her hand in front of him

Jigs:Jai bhaiya,kya hua?

Jai(snapping out of his thoughts):Voh..umm....ew...uh..

Jigs:Cat got ur tongue?

Pia came in and joined them

Pia:Noo Jigayasa aunty,Bani got his tongue

Jigs:With hers?

They laughed at this and jai and bani blushed.Bani was thinking that Jai looked so HOTTT!She wanted to go to him and run her hand through his body and.......and...She realized what she was thinking and snapped out of her thoughts

Pia:Bani u do look gorgeous u know that?

Jai rolled his eyes and put his arm arpond Bani's waist:DUHH!!She is JAI WALIA'S WIFE!!

Jigs:U mean to say Bani became gorgeous after marrying u?

Jai:Of course!She got the L.H.A.S. virus from me

Pia and Jigs::the WHAT??

Jai:The L.H.A.S virus.The abbreviation for Looking Hot And Sexy

Bani playfully punche him

Bani:Jai I was hot and sexy even before I married u

Pia:Yeah Jai,U didn't see her in miniskirts and shorts.

Jai and jigs:WHATT??Bani and mins?

Pia:Yeah!!

Bani:Jai my dad owned a huge empire.I was a spoiled brat.

Jai:How come u don't wear mini skirts now?

Bani:I am married.

Jai:Honey,u can wear anything u like.U can even walk around Mumbai na**d.I wouldn't care.Give ur clothes to anybody but give ur heart to me.

Bani:U think I will walk around N*K*D

Pia and Jigs burst out laughing and Jai smirked.

Pia:Jai u r so sweet.Did u see Pushy?

Jai:NO.Missing him already?

Pia:Yeah.Bye I need to look for him

Pia and Jigs went.Then a beautiful lady came up to them

Bani:Oh Jai,This is Florina.She is Anu's friend and she is taking care of all the music and stuff.

Jai:Nice to meet u

He immediately started flirting with her and joking.

Guys,I need to pack for my camping trip right now.I can't update for 3 days.Bye

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