FF: Please..help me: LAST PART 10 page 23

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#141

gr88 part
plz cont soon
so jai is in love

Quote

jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#142

gr88 part
plz cont soon
so jai is in love

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

pomegranate

@pomegranate

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#143

OMG.. part 7 was.... just wow.. 😳 👏 you did a very good job. it's 3:44 am right now and I just caught up with all the parts... must say it's very addicting J & B scenes are too hott.

jai loves her too and realized last night was perfect and not a mistake. he didn't regret it but he cherished it.

the parts are tooo short and you have to make it longer next time.

better go or else my mom will kill me if she finds out I'm still awake.

hope to see an update soon.

Edited by 100%-princess - 17 years ago

Quote

RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#144

Hey Sweetu,
I read all the parts in one go. This is truely amazing. They are so much in love with each other its so sweet, but why wont the nutcase admitt it when she is awake?

Great update!!!
Bye,
Ranjana

Quote

sweetu144

@sweetu144

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#145

Knock knock.
Whose there?

I, sweetu have returned!

My dear sweet readers a big apology for making you wait 3 weeks! I have had a lot of things on my plate! But I hope you will be pleased to know, that chapter 9 is on its way! I'll be posting it up in a few minutes! All criticism is accepted!! 😆

I don't know how you'll all find this part, hope it wont be too boring!

Happy reading my dears!
Lots of love and Hapy easter and belated Holi to you all!
Sweetu
p.s. please ignore any mistakes- gramatically and with vocab! I have been slogging away for the past hour and a half 😆

UPDATING!

Quote

sweetu144

@sweetu144

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#146

Come back my dear readers...please do not leave me

Part 9

Come to me in my dreams, and then
By day I shall be well again!
For then the night will more than pay
The hopeless longing of the day.
(Matthew Arnold-longing)

"I love you too" she murmured sleepily, turning her head away from his "and I always have…ever since that Christmas party"

Jai stared at her, unable to respond, shocked beyond wits that she had loved him for so long.

"Who would have thought that a simple kiss would ruin my life and make you my prince charming?"

Emotion caught him; oh he had been such an ass to cause his angel so much heartache. Suddenly a dozen images flashed through his eyes and he remembered all those he had courted in front of her.

"Hush baby, I know…I have been a fool" he whispered, stroking her hair tenderly "If I had known that you were in front of me…I would never have touched another woman"

She laughed softly "you egocentric fool, I doubt you would have noticed me even if I gave you a magnifying glass!!" she replied defiantly, a touch of affection in her voice as she turned to face him "I was nothing more than a friend for you!"

His eyes flashed with anger, but then widened in disbelief.

She was still asleep.

"I have always wanted to ask…w…w…why you kissed me at the Christmas party?" Bani whispered fearfully, a tremor running through her spine, her mind afraid of the answer. She chewed her bottom lip nervously, unaware of her unconscious state.

Jai stared at her, amusement filling his eyes.

She was dreaming.

"I kissed you…because I didn't want Raj to be your first" he whispered gently, unsure of her reaction, knowing fully well that when she awoke she would remember this conversation.

"Wh…what?"

"He wanted to kiss you, but I…I. being the jealous fool couldn't let him steal it from you. Then I didn't understand what had possessed me…but baby I do now"

She didn't reply, and he moved his hand to cup her face. He had been in love with her back then too, but he just hadn't understood its meaning. Instead he chose to label their maturing relationship as "best friends", when all he had really wanted to do all those years was love and kiss her senseless. He mused silently, staring at the sleeping figure that had no idea what was going on.

She was sleeping like a baby, her body relaxed, eyes closed shut and stomach moving up and down in a gentle rhythmic motion. Any idiot would think she was out cold, had it not been for her moving mouth. He stroked it tenderly, amazed at how its simple sight brought out a hungry lust for her.

"I love you…"

Silence. No reply

"I really do love you. Please forgive me baby" he hushed, his eyes closing as his mind fought for control over the pain that engulfed his heart.

"Ha…a dream!" she pouted sadly, talking like a crazy loon to herself "It always ends like this. He apologises and then confesses….few seconds later POOF dream over."

Jai laughed, opening his eyes to stare at her. What a silly little devil she was, oh but how he adored her!

Bani sighed regretfully "Okay come my Prince, kiss me before I wake and have to face the monster himself….silly dreams, I should really speak to the doctor about those sleeping pills he prescribed."

He laughed again, bending to kiss her lightly "Wake up baby…wake up"

"What do you mean wake up" she grumbled sleepily, her hands clinging desperately to his neck, unwilling to let go.

Oh what a stubborn devil!

He touched her lightly with his wet hair, allowing the thick droplets to cover her naked body as he moved over her, clasping her shoulder and pulling her closer to him

"Princess…"

Bani opened her eyes, irritated by the cold droplets that pelted her skin. She was still reeling from her dream; it had seemed so real…too real.

"Princess"

Electricity jolted through her spine, as she suddenly became aware of her surroundings and that voice. The happenings of the previous night came crashing down on her like a waterfall, and she looked to her side, their eyes meeting. Frightened almond met tender grey.

"I don't bite Bani" he whispered gently, against her neck.

"No…not dream?" she fumbled helplessly, trying desperately to start her brain

"No." He hushed, watching her silently and reading her thoughts like a book.

Bani lay still, unable to comprehend anything, till a few seconds passed. This was not how he was supposed to find out…he wasn't supposed to know all of that. God, what had she said? Embarrassment surged through her, as she fought agonizingly with herself.

"I love you" he murmured, his grip on her like steel "All that you heard was true."

Confusion stuck a cord. He didn't mean it.

"NO" she shouted, trying to push away from him "This…what happened meant nothing to you"

All motion suddenly ceased as he caught her lips in a soul stirring kiss, intending to show her the depth of his love, his mouth first pressing gently, then insistently as his tongue probed her lips. With the back of his hand he pressed her to him, her hands moving up his rock hard chest, feeling every muscle. He plunged his tongue into her mouth again and again in a seductive rhythm. . His kiss was drugging her, stealing her away from reality. Jai's lips slid to her lobe and he whispered "I love you."

He stole a gaze at her, content to find her looking completely harassed and unsure.

"Jai…" she murmured softly "I.."

He tipped her head forward, staring at her eyes in an attempt to free her from her doubts, and show her the truth in his words.

"I don't regret what happened between us Bani. Dammnit I would do it again and again. You mean a lot to be baby, and I have been a fool to not have realized it sooner."

Silence met him and his eyes clouded, unsure of how else to pacify her doubts. This woman meant everything to him. Yet a sudden strangled cry from her throat caught him off guard, his body suddenly attacked by a feminine figure. She had thrown herself at him, hot tears spilling down, as realization struck. He meant it.

"I love you…I love you, I love you…I love you" she hushed over and over again

"I know baby" he whispered remorsefully, enraged at how much pain he had caused her.

It seemed torturous hours till her crying ceased. But he took her pain like a grown adult, knowing that this was his penance. He stroked her back, soothing the gentle hiccups and sobs, murmuring calmly. Oh how it hurt to see her like this, his heart tightened.

"Meera" Bani whimpered suddenly, clinging to him desperately, suddenly afraid "Wh…wha.."

"Don't worry I shall speak to Papa". He replied defiantly, before placing a chaste kiss on her lips, pulling her closer to him.

No one was going to separate them, not even his father.

To hell with the world, the devil was finally his!

Edited by sweetu144 - 17 years ago

Quote

Divya Harji

@divya_123

Rocker

Posted: 17 years ago

#147

👏 👏 great parts sweetu just read the entire thing in one good 👏
dang good story like the way u wrote it all 😃

continue soon

Quote

Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#148

Great part.
loved it.
all the Bani talking in her sleep and dreaming was funny 😆
and Jai was talking to her 😆 😆
but the confession later on was even more beautiful.
plz cont. soon