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Posted: 17 years ago



Part 10-THE END




A gentle brush of his fingers,
Sending shivers down my spine.
In the love I see in his eyes,
Is a love that equals mine.
(Danyka A. Hoover)




6 months later



A beautiful bride descended the red carpeted steps, her face covered by golden net. The people who led her were her cousins, their eyes in constant search for the pathi to be!


She knew that he would be angry and couldn't but help shiver at the passionate wrath that awaited her after the ceremony. There would be no escaping it, and she knew so even more when she spied him from the corner of her eye. The male beast looked ready to roar, his stormy eyes killing.


Jai eyed her approach him, fear rippling through his spine. His father stood to his right, tall and proud, his left arm clasping hard onto his elbow. Once his father made his mind, he had no choice, no matter what he may say. His father powerful demeanour had a certain control over him, one that he himself never understood.


"God, please help me…" Jai muttered, hating the large crowd surrounding him, this was all his fathers fault. If only he hadn't agreed to such a large gathering!

"Damn it papa".


The couple sat the ceremony in silence, focused on following the paditji's orders till the end. When the time came to apply the sindoor, Jai felt her tremor. As the red paint touched her parting, his lips moved subtly to her ear.


"Hush baby…you're all mine now…. Bani Walia."


His playful attitude scared her as he led her 30 minutes later, towards the car, his fingers tickling her waist.


"Jai…" she whispered timidly


"What baby?" he mused


"Mujhe…papa seh…I want to talk to Papaji"


She watched as his eyes darkened momentarily, before letting her go. She moved away from him and slowly walked towards the silhouette of her father in law in the garden.


"Papa…I need to know, Jai never told me?" she began, approaching the slim figure


"HA…beti, your husband is a fool!" Uday chuckled affectionately; turning to face his daughter in law's shocked face "He never really understood that my intention all along was for you to marry him, and not Meera. My angel helped me…like she always does!"


Bani's eyes softened, but them clouded with confusion "But then…Meera?"


"Meera…that was a ploy of mine…it was all a plan. Just to make my fool of a son admit that he loves you! Krishna always knew…but please do forgive me, I was a little slow in understanding this!" Uday stated, a low chuckle vibrating off his lips "Jai loves you Bani, and he always has! I wish you all the luck in the word my dear daughter"


Bani felt her eyes well up, before feeling herself embraced in a tight fatherly hug


"But I do have one request…A couple of grandchildren would be good" he smiled innocently, watching the young woman turn beetroot.




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WARNING---READ AT YOUR OWN RISK!








Lightning coursed up her spine as his mouth travelled across her n*ked body. Bani felt on air, his hands softly sweeping her, leaving traces of fire in their wake.


"Baneeeeee" Jai hushed softly again her br*ast


She gasped as his masculine jaw played havoc on her ivory m*uld, his tongue flitting out as it snaked its way towards her plump lips. Jai drew momentarily back and gazed down at her, amazed at how angelic she looked, basked in white moo
nlight


"You are magnificent sweetheart"


He chuckled softly, before sweeping her into his arms and planting a soft kiss on her quivering lips, devouring them as his tongue stroked her bottom lip.


"You are mine and mine alone baby…I love you" he whispered softly against her neck, before succumbing to his inner desire, ravishing her.


Hours later the two lay entwined in a mixture of sheets and clothes, the only sound being their peaceful breathing of contentment.




THE END
Edited by sweetu144 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago


sweeettttu!!!!!!!

me first.. omg you ended it 😭 that was short but lovely.. the last part was soooooo cute 😳

hmm... uday walia.. very sneaky.. isn't he?

j&b married at last, just loved an awsome ending
Edited by 100%-princess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sweetu..
i some how knew.. that.. u were going to update today.
hehe

hehe uday.. walia.. is smart hehe..
that was really lovely.. update.

Edited by nir_jaanu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooowww u ended it 😭
but it was a lovely ending
so all along uday knew that Jai loved Bani 😳 just getting them to confess it to eachother 😆 😆 😆


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
Fantistic ending
loved it.
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
yayyyyyyyy JB marriage 😃 😃 😃
UD is a clever guy eh? 😆 😆

😳 😳 😳

lovely ending 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
brilliant ending! now u can put all ur energy in to ur new fanfic! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
Just caught up with all parts.....Uday understands his son better than Jai himself...nice ending......
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Posted: 17 years ago
I read all the parts on one go, was so addticted when I read the 1st part.
Very good end.
Keep up the writing.
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 👏 👏 ..great ff..read some parts twice 😳 😳

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