FF: Please..help me: LAST PART 10 page 23

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello all you lovely people,
Wow...okay I have no idea what I have gotten myself into by writing this, but I couldn't resist. After all I am human😉. The first two parts of the story is written up, but we shall see where this "dahling" fiction of mine goes! The scarcity of time on my hands is an amusing reality, considering I wrote this when I should be working😆😕. Temptation is my only excuse, therefore I ask you all humbly to forgive me for this ff.


Synopsis: J and B are best friends, but what happens when they are brought together to deal with a one month fake shaddi? Will J play tricks on her mind and woo her heart...or is this really just a bit of fun for him? Has B been secretly besotted by J from the start of their friendship and is her heart only doomed for heartache by this fake alliance? Read on to find out dahlings!

Hope you will like it😛
Lots of love
Sweetu.❤️


part 1 (edited): page 4
part 2: page 4

part 3: page 6
Part 4: page 8
Part 5: page 10
Part 6: Page 12
Part 7: Page 15
Part 8: Page 18
part9: page 21
part10:page23

PREVIEW: page 13

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I have edited the first part...please see page four!





Edited by sweetu144 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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moiiiii 1stttttttttt!!!!! 😃

Sweetuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu,

Wat a fabulousssss beginning really really really loved it n it was soooooo hot in the beginning heheehehhe….really coooooool👏

N ur story sounds really cute n exciting cant wait to find wat happens nxt although I can picture it lol

Bani is really sweet that she is helping him out even though it means 1 month of fake marriage which I hope turns out to be foreverrrrr n everrrrrrrrrr……n jai sounds interesting n hotttttt heheheehheeh

N one more thinggg this time I hopeeee u'll finish writing this ff nahi toh tum bahut pitne wali ho n I mean it lol

So when r u updating nxttt?????? Cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooon.

Luv ya lodsss

Mahima

Edited by minks - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey gr8 part. WOW they're so many new ffs! Loved it n plz cont.. Ooooh shaadi ka natak hmmm nice storyline! If possible could you PM wen u upd8!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwwwwwwww
that was sooooo good..fantabulous 👏 👏 👏 ...JB 😳 😳 😳
continue asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice beginning.....

Jai didn't want to marry Meera 😃 👏...you know, I was so happy to read this.....

I'm looking forward for this fake shaddi drama....do continue please...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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interesting...and da first part was so... 😳 ... 😆
gud concept..and would love to read more!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start....I specially liked the title...😆



But it was sooo very short...😛



Continue soon with longer parts...😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like this ff jai is doign to escape the weddign ffrom emera isliey i am sure.. this ff will make us all laugh akir ye ff jb ka hai.. it is funny too pls contionue soon
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davia
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sizzzlling! 😆

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