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Posted: 17 years ago
My, my I am suprised and happy at the response my tiny preview got. Quite a lot of people commenting all of a sudden...perhaps I should write more "such" parts 😆 😉

Part 7 is coming up...but a word of WARNING. Please read this at your own risk, it is quite an "open" part. If you get offended reading such things than I reccomend that you skip this part and wait for part 8. I refuse to except any complaints if you read on at your own whim. I am a sensitive little thing, so please have mercy on my heart and read because you want to...not beacuse you want to get me into trouble.

If any of you have a problem with this update, or would like me to edit anything out please speak to me about this personally...a pm would be good! I prefer being bashed privately 😛
p.s. do tell me whether you like or not!!😳

Happy reading...you have been WARNED.
WARNING READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.
Scroll down😆.


Part 7


Quench my desire.
I am thirsty for you.
Just come my lover, I have need for you.



Zara zara bahekta hai, mahekta hai
Aaj to mera tan badan, main pyaasi hoon
Mujhe bharle apne bahon meh
Aaja re aa re
Tadpaaye mujhe teri sabhi baatein
Ek baar ae deewane jhootha hi sahi pyaar to kar
Main bhooli nahin haseen mulaaqaatein
Bechain karke mujhko mujhse yun na pher nazar
Roothega na mujhse, mere saathiya yeh vaada kar
Tere bina mushkil hai jeena mera mere dil mein
(Zara Zara music lyrics)






Bani felt a hot fire pulse through her and ignite her skin, sending tiny spasms of pleasure rushing through her spine. She didn't protest when he loosened the thin strings holding her blouse, allowing it to slip past her shoulders and fall in a crumpled heap on the floor.



Jai's lips sought hers like a hungry man, his mouth moving to the hollow of her neck and then her shoulder, placing soft butterfly kisses. He suckled softly on her lobe before rasping huskily "I want to make love to you…please Bani"


His words startled her, such kind affection she did not expect. There was a desperate plea to his voice, urgency in his touch. Did he not realize that she wanted him more than he did her, perhaps even more? She groaned suddenly, feeling his fingers brush at her bra, cupping softly at the br**st moulds.



The raging fire inside her intensified. If only for one night, he would be hers and hers alone.


"J...Jai, to*ch me" she whimpered, unable to keep a hold of the lustful desire swirling within her stomach.



Her fingernails dug mercilessly into his shirt, scrapping at his buttons to loosen. In an innocent act, overcome with need, she stood on her tiptoes placing a hungry kiss on his neck, nibbling softly at the tender area. Vibrant shivers ran through his spine like an electric current and he groaned. Jai opened his eyes and took her hand pressing it to his lips, his stormy grey eyes looking deep into her glazed almond ones. Slowly he led her to the bed, shedding his shirt and the rest of his clothing, and gently pushed her down upon it.



Their bodies touched.
Oh how the fire burnt.



Her bra loosened in a fit of hurry and he carelessly threw it to the side. Instead of soft cotton, two warm hands cupped her moulds, stroking and kissing the delicate flesh, enticing groans.



So innocent, so pure like an angel.



"You're so innocent Baneeeeee" he laughed kindly placing soft kisses over her face "and so beautiful, so sensual"



Bani felt her cheeks enflame, her eyes opening to meet his. If she weren't mistake, they were laughing. Her cheeks grew redder, blazing crimson.



"Why are you red angel" he muttered, his fingers moving to her chin, forcing their gaze to meet "Hmmm…?"



She turned to look at him, and sucked in her breath. Bani couldn't help but admire his masculine frame, devouring him with her eyes, watching the hard muscles that played under his skin. She raised her fingers touching his muscles, awed at the strength they possessed. Jai watched her watch him, it amused him to see her eyes dilate with excitement.



He wanted to please her, hear her moan his name… only his name. No one else's.
In a sudden fit of possessiveness he caught her lips, his fingers pinching softly at her buds, as her body arched to touch his.



Their skins burned.




Jai's tongue trailed down her body, torturing her with sensual delight. His hands loosened and removed the rest of her clothing, till she lay like a n*ked beauty. To him she looked like an angel from heaven, so pure and unaware of the ecstasy that waited.



"I...I love youuu" bani whispered huskily, dazed by his gentles.



The confession raged his mind, his breathing heavy as her hands explored his muscled back. Her declaration was lulling to his soul; he wanted to hear those three words over and over again, his movements suddenly becoming more and more er*tic. He pushed her to the edge, till her mouth opened and she whimpered helplessly her words of love. This only encouraged his torrid movements…till her every word was his name.



Jai Walia had enslaved her love and heart, chaining her to him.



"Princess" he whispered, the huskiness in his voice as sweet to hear as sweet nothings. He lowered his head, her arms moving around his neck, and kissed her, his tongue sliding across her lips, urging them to part for his probing tongue. Instead of submitting to the intimate kiss she drew his tongue to her mouth...their bodies finally meeting.



He held her to him, teasing her gently, whispering against her neck, trying hard to soothe the dull pain in her loins. Her ache slowly gave way to heated excitement.


A sudden shivering ecstasy pierced Bani's body as they became one over and over again, sending streaks of pleasure surging through her that became faster and faster until it tore a scream from her throat "JAI".



You are my devil...mine and mine alone my darling.

Edited by sweetu144 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
FIRST!!! 😃

HAILA, SWEETU!!!! 😳 I have just died and gone straight to heaven!!!!!😆 What an intense scene!!!!😳 I can't stop blushing!☺️ This part was amazing!👏 Very well done jaan!👍🏼 absolutely enjoyed it!😳 but too short.😭 i wanted to read more. (and no, not of *ahem ahem*, dear god i swear i'm no pervert.😆😆😆 meaning just more of the story in general.😃) But oh gosh, this part was real good.😳 Bani even told him the three magical words!😳 and Jai definitely like hearing them!😆 Update soon hun! I can't wait to read the next update!😃

Love,
Dil

p.s. Jai has gray eyes!!!!!!!!--- I am officially a goner!😆
Edited by Indian_Goddess - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg sweetu.. 😳 😳 😳 ..awwwwnnn.. i just hope he doesnt regrett it later on..he better marry her and only her now.. sc*w meera.. JB forever yaar..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Sweetu
wow that was really hot 😳 😳
i hope jai dosnt say his sorry for what happend 😡 they should get together and tell Uday so that he will stop forcing him to marry Meera 🤢

Plz cont soon


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey sweetu..
that was really good.
continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow, it was intense 😳 , but in a good way 😉. But, why such a short update?

Bani finally told Jai how she felt and Jai loved hearing it. Please let them be together. Hope Jai expresses his feelings too and tells his dad that he wants to marry Bani and not Meera. I am hoping that secretly Uday Walia wanted Jai to step up, which is why he confronted him in the first place. 😃

BD
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi Sweetu,

Lovely part...very 😳.

Please continue soon. I wonder how Jai will feel after knowing that Bani loves him.

Nikita
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz cont soon
gr88 part
that was too hot
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hello my lovely dahlings!
Hope your week has been great so far 😛 ! I am very sorry for the late reply, but I have been sooo busy! I cannot tell you the amount of stress on my plate . Instead of eating it all up, it's eating me 😆 !

I am overjoyed that you all liked this part, but am tiny bit dissapointed in the number of replys?! Come on you silent readers I know you exist...will you not dare show yourself? At least once?

Ah well...I shall not desapair! The show must go on, as many say!

The next update will come by the end of this week...sorry my dears. Do stay with me....don't give up on me! 😳 Have hope in my writing!

Lots of love and a billion hugs and kisses
Sweetu 🤗
Edited by sweetu144 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwwwwww sweetu don't worry update can wait.....see finally I am here 😃 ....and enjoyed reading this FF of yours a lot 😳

👏 👏 👏

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