FF: Please..help me: LAST PART 10 page 23 - Page 10

hey ...........

lovely part................

jai is so rude to bani...............

wat happens next?????????????

update soon

Hey that was a brilliant update
im glad its all out in the open and why is UW forcing his son to get married to someone 😡




oh hope u get well soon 😉

Taj

Finally I'm here! 😃

See you're getting there, one step at the time!

I thought I'll be happy after reading the udate! and I'm.... but a little sad too... because of UW!

Good job sweetie....keep it up! 👏 👏👏

Um, any chance for another update, now?

Lots of love,

Jojo

Hey Sweetu, that was one dhamakedar update..but me very upset ki you just had to stop it there...the last part was intense..So Jai has finally said it that "she is a devil who makes him insane" SO its in open..

But damn 😡 that UW is going to force Jai to marry Meera? That just cannot happen..

Pls jaldi abhi update kardo..eagerly waiting to see how Bani reacts to this..
Rama

Hey there! I love your writing and like the way the story is heading... a lot of drama and emotions!

Sweetu,
That was another beautiful part! 👏 Loved it! 👏 So Jai is mad at her ! UW is forcing him to marry Meera. Poor Bani is madly in love with him...Hope he loves his 'lovely devil' 😃 their emotions were beautifully portayed.... 👏 Hope she doesn't regret it later. 😕 Totally love your writing style... 👏 Can't wait for the next part.
Luv,
Ammu.

My dears you will have to wait a little bit longer for part 7. I am still writing it, and am afraid that it might have to be edited, as it might not be suitable. So patience my dears 😆

I will instead give you a preview...in the hope that it will suffice and soothe your anger towards me 😆

I would like to thank my faithful readers who have continued reading this "boring" ff and stood with me. Yet I refuse to give up, I have abandoned too many of my other fictions and will not any longer! I will finish this...no matter how many parts it has! I just hope time walks with me, I seem to be having less and less of it!

THANK YOU!
p.s. once I have time, will thank you all personally!

😆I must thank Jojo dearest, as it was from her that I learnt how to be a devil in making people wait ! Naah am just kidding, I hope😕😃.😉
btw: If any of you speak french, ignore the mistakes in the sentence below...am so very tired😆.


PREVIEW-PART 7







Bani felt a hot fire burn through her and ignite her skin, sending tiny spasms of pleasure rushing through her spine. She didn't protest when he loosened the thin strings holding her blouse, allowing it to slip past her shoulders and fall in a crumpled heap on the floor.


Jai's lips sought hers like a hungry man, his mouth slowly moving to the hollow of her neck and then her shoulder placing soft butterfly kisses. He suckled softly on her lobe before rasping huskily "I want to make love to you…please Bani"

Hey
wow preview sound good 😳 😳

plz update soon


Taj

Originally posted by: momtajbegum1

Hey
wow preview sound good 😳 😳

plz update soon


Taj

My dear you are always reading my updates! It means a lot.
Thank you a million times for not giving up on me and my writing

A billion hugs just for you🤗


❤️

Don't forget the fire extinguisher