FF Illicit love: end part 40 p136 note139 - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ranjana when r going to update
waiting 4 ur update eagerly
plzz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
The story is really wonderful. My mom and I love it. We are wondering what is going to happen next espeacially my mom.
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Posted: 17 years ago
g8 story, read all the parts today, please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
please continue soon
mr. walia and his mysterious wife
it was so funny how u made it seem like ranveer is proposing to bani ,, mr.walia is obviously drooling over bani now please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi guys

Sorry I could not update yesterday. Had a few guests visiting.
But I promise I'll make it up to you. Thanks for the lovely comments.It seens like you all had to take deep breaths. Everybody fine now? No high BP, no faintings. All cool? RR are going to get married. Happy it's not RB? Or should I change it?😉

Moonlitnight

Ofcourse he is going to act strange. Dil pe koi zor nahin, dimaag par control nahin, anyone else would freak out, he is just acting strange.

Ajaznita

Jippie, I made you smile.🤡 Mission accomplished!!

Jeenal20

Thanks for the compliment.

Hipreet

Sorry I scared you. Are you fine now? Thanks for the compliment

Abhilashasharma
you are right, uptill now I have a lot of Bani. Jai has taken a backseat in the story,

I want to show the bonding Bani has with the family. Hope I haven't bored you with just Bani.

The_rain

Glad you liked it. Are you still restless?

Bktr

Sorry, can't answer the question, Mazaa kharaab ho jaayega. But Bani is like that. Lots of guys (with a bit of a brain) will fall at her feet.

Phool527

What a connection you have with moonlitnight. Great.

Thanks for commenting.

Ridhijai

Ranveer ka style hi alag hai. Who kya hai na, ki madaari tak pahochne ke liye Bandar ko pataana parta hai (or was it the other way? , don't know for sure)

Taj

Why are you reading the ending first😡? Start at the top na. A bit of tension is good for your BP!!!!!😆

Siumi

Cool! So I surprised you!

Parveen

Hi Jaan. Ofccourse I made it look like R was popping the question to B. Had to scare you guys na?😉

Janu_2006

Thanks for the compliment

Divan

Hope I did not bore you. Was it a lot to read at once?

Thanks for the commenting on the London part. Was really nervous about it. Don't know if it was as sensitive and emotional as I had I visualised.

Nir_jaanu

Nope, I won't tell you she is looking for a job

Sadsunzarsum

Are you ok now?

Auditi.

No problems, I know you guys get to busy to comment sometimes. But I'm happy when you do give your POV. Thanks for the compliments and glad you likes it.🤗

Kiranc

Thanks for commenting

Jeevikagurl88

Thank you.😳😳😳 Your making me blush, big time. Hope I won't disappoint you and your mom. Say Namaste to your mum for me.

Swatinarang

Will continue soon. Thanks for posting

Ragamthalam0

Mysterious wife. You make it sound like his wife is a bhoot.😆 Mr. Walia is drooling big time for Bani (it's not a new thing right?!)

update coming soon!!!!!!!!!

Edited by RANJANA_RRJ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

HI,

This part did not really turn out the way I wanted it to. Hope you won't be mad.. Please ignore spelling mistakes and all.

I want to dedicate this part to tam2 who is busy with her exams. I wish you all the best!!!

Enjoy and like always: please comment,

Ranjana

p.s if I'm done with part 13 today I'll post it otherwise you will get an extra long update tommorow

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She had to muster courage before she went home on Friday. Bani was expecting a huge scene after she would tell everybody what she had in her mind, and it was not going to be pretty.

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Part 12

'Are Bani, tum aagayi?'

'Haan mausi, main abhi aayi.main zara fresh hokar aati hu'. And Bani ran up to her room, to be stopped midway by Ranveer.

Ranveer hugged her tightly.

'Ranveer when did you arrive?'

'Abhi abhi Bani. Turns out the project finished of sooner than we thought, so I came home. But why are you tensed? Anything wrong?' How he did that, not even Bani knew, but like always he has guessed that something was on her mind. Just for now she lied, and said she was fine. Bani did not want to break the news before dinner otherwise it would spoil the entire evening. And Ranveer's arrival did not make things easy for her. Now she feared his reaction the most.

Finally everybody had their dinner. Bani took a deep breath and like she always did, walked with the tray with cups of tea and coffee for everybody towards the living area. The whole family was gathered there. Bani gave everybody their cup and said:

'Mujhe aap logon se kuch kehna hai.'

At once she had all the eyes looking at her. By the expression on Bani's face they knew it was serious. Startled Aditya said; 'Kya huwa Bani, is everything alright, tell na, kya huwa?'

O boy, this was not going to be easy.

Bani licked her lips. Her mouth suddenly seemed dry.

'uhmmm……………..woh……..uhm…………..'

Aditya: 'Kaho beta, hamari jaan ja rahi hai.'

The only thing that came out of Bani's mouth was uhmmmmmmmmm………………………

Until she finally blurted out: I'm moving out after the wedding!!!!!!!!

The whole family had their eyes wide opened. You could hear a pin drop in the whole house. Even Tony looked up at Bani with questioning eyes. Rano almost had tears in her eyes.

Finally Ranveer broke the silence and said:

'Great! Need help in packing? Why after the wedding, I'll drop you now.

Judging by the sarcasm in his voice Bani knew he was royally mad.

'Ranveer, don't do this to me.' Bani pleaded.

Suddenly she heard a cacophony of questions hitting her.

'Why are you moving out?'

'Humse koi galati huwi hai?'

'Tum rahogi kaha?'

'Have you lost your mind?'

Bani laughed. She knew Ranveer must have asked her the last question.

She calmed everybody done. Well, she tried to and started explaining.

'Maine ek apartment dhoondh liya hai, aur mai shaadi ke baad waha shift ho rahi hoon.'

Tarun stood up from his seat and walked up to Bani. He held her hand.

'Bani, tum jaana kyu chaahto ho? Did we do something wrong? Did we say something to you you did not like?

'No uncle, nothing like that, it's just that….uhmmmm.' Bani took a deep breath and continued.

'Woh mai shaadi ke baad yahaan nahin reh sakti, isilye. Mai jaanti hoon ki aap sab ko bura lagega, but I can't live in both my sisters' sasural. That is why I am moving out after the wedding. I just can't……'

Before Bani could finish her phrase Ranveer stormed off to the garden. Bani tried to call hoim back but he did not listen. Rano followed Ranveer to the garden.

The rest of the family just sat in the living area silently. Till Karuna asked Bani: 'You have made up your mind na?'

Bani nodded. 'Aunty I know I am hurting all of you by doing this, but I don't want to. You are my family. But the truth is that I need to start living on my own and take care of myself. Learn how to deal with my own responsibilities.'

'Bani that is not true and you know that!' Aditya yelled.

'You took care of yourself and your sisters all these years, so don't give me cr*p about wanting learn how to live on your own and all that. You are afraid of what people might say when you live here after the wedding. You are afraid people might gossip about the family and appear in a sleazy tabloid as headline, because that happened a few times. They wrote something about you guys.'

Jigyasa put down her hand on Aditya's knee.

'Calm down Aditya, don't yell at the poor girl. Bani, we want you to stay, but you will have to decide. We won't force you.'

Bani looked at Jigyasa with gratitude.

Bani knew she could handle the rest of the family. They would come around, but Ranveer was a tough nut to crack. Jigyasa indicated with her eyes to the garden. Bani knew she had to talk to Ranveer, thus she went into the garden, preparing herself to be ignored, or yelled at.

Bani felt guilty when she saw Ranveer. He was sitting in the white swing, holding Rano by her waist who was standing in front of him. She knew both of them were crying.

Bani sat down next to Ranveer, on the swing.

'Ranveer, I have to do this. I have to live my own life, and discover who I am. To do that I have to move out. I love you guys, but this is one of the things I just have to do.'

Ranveer looked up started screeming

Bani I know that is not the reason! The gossiping has finally got to you! Why do you even care about what they say about us, or about your relationship to the family Bani?!! If you really care about our friendship you won't go!'

Bani was trying hard to control her tears. Was the reason that visible?

'Ranveer, you are marrying my baby sister, and I don't want anything to go wrong. Pia and Rano are getting married in this house, they will form a bond with the family, and I can't live in their sasural. Sooner or later problems might arise and I don't want that to happen. I don't want them to be unhappy because of me. Plus I want to give them a proper maayka. Don't they deserve that? Earlier I was given the position of daughter of the house by the familymembers, so it did not matter a lot what outsiders said. But now I am also a relative of this house where my sisters are getting married. Mujhe kuch niyamo ka paalan karna hai, jo samaaj na tey kiye hai.'

Ranveer averted his gaze. Bani stood up and said: 'I am moving out Ranveer, I'm sorry I am hurting you, but it will happen.' Bani walked into the house.

Rano was gently caressing his back when she whispered: 'Let Didi go. She has taken care of us maybe half her life, ever since mama got sick. Her life revolved around Pia and me. Let her live her life for a change. Jaane ki wajah jo bhi ho, lekin woh khush rahegi. I know you are scared of losing your friend, that is why you never made friends. And I am scared of losing Di, but she deserves a life of her own. She needs your blessings Ranveer, warna woh khushi se apni zindagi ki shuruwaat nahin kar paayegi. Let her go Ranveer.'

Rano made him look up to her. She wiped his tears. Ranveer smiled. He made her sit next to him on the swing.
'You are right Rano, she deserves her own life.'
Ranveer wiped Rano's tears and kissed her.

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Posted: 17 years ago
okay I just love the relationship ranveer and bani share its just superb....!

But no JB... 😭

Thanks for the update yaar kafi intizar kariya tumne humia well I guess it was worth it....!

Next update should be loooonnnngggeeerrr....
Edited by Heartbreak - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww liked the way bani tried to make Ranveer understand her situation 😉 so sweet
she is right in a way she needs to move out and live her life for a change 😆 in a way get moer closer to JW 😆 😆 😆

plz cont


Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey

love the bond.. that bani shares.. with everyone

it is so great to see.. that.. even now.. u can find a family like that

that is not cool at all..

it was really.. short
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Ranjana,

Great update.
Looks like Bani has made the decision to leave WM and go.
Feft bad for Ranveer and Rano. I hope Bani gets convinced to stay.
Wonder what Jai will have to say about Bani leaving?

Pls cont soon.

Kiran

PS: thanks for the PM
Edited by kiranc - 17 years ago

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