FF-Aankhon Mein Teri-Updated. Check pg.3 - Page 2

Hi guys, I'll probably post the first part by tonight or tomorrow morning. I'm sorry I couldn't do it yesterday. I-F wasn't working. 😭

hey love ur intro.
wow..
why is jb's marriage always on the rock..
is it beacause of them being rivals'
i hope not.
or is it because of ran
continue sooon please

very very interesting, waiting for the 1st part. Ganga's character seems to be interesting too.

Meera is also here 😡? and she's in love with Jai 😡? This woman 😡 😡 .........hope that she will only remain as his secretary.

will be waiting for ur next update

hey
dont worry about it u sort what u need to and then update 😉

Taj

Part 1:

(In a meeting)

Jai: Okay, so the manager of our new project is Nachiket.

(Bani Calls)

Bani: Jai, you forgot your lunch at home phir se.

Jai: Bani, I'm in a meeting right now.

Bani: Oops, sorry.

Jai smiles and says: It's okay, I'll come home and pick it up. Don't you have a meeting today?

Bani: Oh my god! I forgot. I also have to pick up Ganga from school.

Jai: Do this: Go to your meeting and I'll come home early and pick Ganga up.

Bani: Okay. Piya's coming back from London today! Can you pick her up?

Jai: Alright. I have to go now.

Bani: Okay. Bye.

Jai: Bye.

(Later...)

Jai: Okay guys. I have to go home now.

Nachiket & Meera: Oh come on Jai! We're having a party for Nachiket! Stay for 10 minutes!

Jai: Okay, but only for 10 minutes.

(Nachiket offers Jai a drink)

Jai: Nachiket, I can't.

Nachiket: Please Jai. Only one!

Jai: Fine, only one though.

(Jai drinks it and gets drunk)

Jai: Meera, you're looking HAWT!

Meera: Oh, Jai.

(Two hours later)

Ganga: Why isn't Papa or Mamma here yet? Everybody's gone. It's 6:00.

(Bani gets home)

Bani: Where's Jai and Ganga?

(She looks around and calls Jai's cell)

Bani: No answer...

(Ganga's principal calls)

Bani: Hello?

Principal: Hello. Mrs. Walia?

Bani: Yes, speaking.

Priincipal: Is Ganga getting picked up or not?

Bani: WHAT? She's still at school? My husband was supposed to pick her up two hours ago.

Principal: Well, no one's here.

Bani: Okay. I'm coming right now. Thanks for calling!

Principal: Okay.

(Bani is on the way)

Bani: Why didn't Jai pick Ganga up? Poor Ganga. I'm going to kill him when he gets home.

(Bani is furious and she's getting out of control)

Bani: I must've tried at least 8 times. Why isn't Jai picking up. That means, he hasn't picked up Piya yet. She must be waiting! I'll go pick up Ganga and then go straight to the airport.

(At the airport)

Piya: Why hasn't Di come yet? She was supposed to come three hours ago. Maybe I'll try to call her.

(Piya calls)

Bani: Hello?

Piya: Di, what's taking so long?

Bani: I'm coming, its a long story. I'm sorry. I'm going to pick up Ganga, then I'll be coming straight to you.

(A truck is coming and Bani is too busy talking on the phone with Piya)

Bani: Well, I'm coming s....

Piya: Di? DI? Oh my god, kya ho gaya?

(Bani has got into a car crash, she is bleeding loads)

Random guy: Oh my gosh! A woman is bleeding a lot in her car. Wait...that's Bani Walia!

Another guy: Let's take her to the hospital now!

(At the airport)

Piya: I've tried Di's cell so many times! I'm getting worried!

(At the hospital, Bani is in strecher.)

Doctor: She has gone into a coma.

(At school)

Ganga: Where is Mamma? I'm getting worried.

(At hospital, police are looking for evidence.)

Officer: Hey! I found something in Mrs.Walia's pocket? Its a...mobile!

Another Officer: Call the last recieved call.

(Officer calls Piya)

Piya: hello?

Officer: Hello.

Piya: Yes, who is speaking?

Officer: Officer Khanna.

Piya: Officer Khanna? Why have you called?

Officer: To tell you that your sister, Mrs. Bani Walia is in a coma.

Piya: WHAT!

Thats all folks. I will try to update soon. post your comments below!

wow
great part....
poor bani 1st chapter main hi coma main chali gayi..
plzzzzzzz continue soon.


nim.