FF-Aankhon Mein Teri-Updated. Check pg.3

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi KS-ians,

I am starting a new FF called "Aankhon Mein Teri". It is about two buisness rivals who are husband and wife and how they manage to live together.

Characters
Jai Walia: The main male protagonist of the story. An intelligent businessman who always tries to reach the top. His company is "Walia Industries". His business is doing well but not his marriage. He is married to Bani. Bani works in the rival company "Dixit Industries" in honour for her late grandfather. Their marriage is always on the rocks.

Bani Dixit Walia: The main female protagonist of the story. A cleaver businesswoman who has high expectations. Her company is "Dixit Industries". Even though she is married to Jai, she always tries to beat his company. In spite of that, she loves him dearly. She always tries to save her marriage, but nothing works.

Rano: Bani's best friend. She is in love with Nachiket. She always defends Bani. Basically, she is very smart.

Nachiket: Jai's best friend. He's not very smart but he always makes points with the girls. He is deeply in love with Piya.

Piya: Bani's sister. Always likes to talk with Bani. She is not too fond of Jai though. She is in love with Nachiket as well.

Ranvir: Bani's co-worker. He is in love with Bani. Hates Jai. Ranvir always tries to break Jai and Bani's marriage.

Meera: Jai's secretary. A very busy lady. Jai doesn't notice her much. Meera is in love with Jai.

Ganga: Jai and Bani's daughter. She is very cute. She always tries to keep them together.

Aditya: Rano's dying father. Is paralyzed from a car accident. Rano always takes care of him.

That's it folks. I will post the first part next Friday as I am busy with exams. I will try and update ASAP. Post all your comments below.


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momtajbegum1 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey sounds very interesting 😉 really different
aww Aditya is paralyzed and dying 😭 really sad

Taj
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great characters sketch
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great sketches..
cant wait for the first update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh man

this is going to be interesting!!!!!!!!

plz cont soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#6
really interesting and funny
how every KS character is so much different from what they actually are
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great intro!!!

CANT wait to see what will happen next!!!
thanks
sanju

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for all your support guys! I'm happy you guys like it. Wait until you read the first part...
*Eva* thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Any suggestions for the first part?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds interesting, waiting 4 the first part 😳

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