FF Ajab Si....last part pg 75....21Jan - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey...........

lovely part.................

so wat bani's past??????????????/

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part
plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was a gr8 update...wonder what bani's past is all about!?!

do cont soon..... 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice part 😉
cant wait for jai to confess his feeling for bani 😆
some how i have a feeling she wont take this news too happily

plz cont soon

Taj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx everyone......the next part will be up by tonight
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Posted: 17 years ago
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haila jaani!!!!!!!!!!! (hope u dont mind i call everyone that)😉


omg!! me soo loving this FF!!!!!!!!!!

i jus read all 6 parts!!

now me soooo waiting for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i give you 2 thumbs up
👍🏼 👍🏼.. u kno wat.... never mind.. u get many 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼


cant wait for next part


wonder wats bugging bani?? whats her past? me soo wanna know!!!!😳😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Bani has a past? That means I don't think she will accept Jai,s proposal. Please continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Guli*

haila jaani!!!!!!!!!!! (hope u dont mind i call everyone that)😉 i don't mind and thanx for reading my ff


omg!! me soo loving this FF!!!!!!!!!! thanx

i jus read all 6 parts!!

now me soooo waiting for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!it will be up soon

i give you 2 thumbs up
👍🏼 👍🏼.. u kno wat.... never mind.. u get many 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
its always feels nice when what u do is appreciated

cant wait for next part


wonder wats bugging bani?? whats her past? me soo wanna know!!!!😳😳😳 her past will be reavealed soon maybe in the next two parts

Originally posted by: niruba

Bani has a past? That means I don't think she will accept Jai,s proposal. Please continue.

Maybe u r rite and maybe not........the next part will be up soon.......thanx 4 reading


Edited by *Piku* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will like to thank
davia389, culgal86, swati_bhatia, janu_2006, tam2, momtajbegum1, *Guli*, niruba
for reading and commenting.

Everyone is eager to know Baniz past.......u will get to know her past soon maybe in the next two parts.

Thanx again for reading.
Harpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Here is the next part.........hope u like it

Part 7

Bani was standing out in the garden cause all the rasam in godh bharai are done by married woman and she had no business there and she felt lonely there even amongst so many people so she decided to come here to get some fresh air.

She was lost in her thoughts that she didn't even fell someone coming towards her and only realized when she heard her name being called. She turned around and saw Jai standing just few inches away from her. He was wearing a black shirt with jeans and not his usual business suit, he was looking handsome and relax in his attire. Bani always felt a pull towards him eventhough she try to stay far from him.

When Jai came out to find Bani he saw her standing and looking lost in her thoughts, she was looking even more beautiful as the light from the moon was shinning on her and the cool breeze was making her hair fly. She was looking like an angel send just for him. He wanted to just stand there and watch her but he had more important thing to do before that. So he went behind her called her, when she turned he caught his breath cause she was looking so beautiful.

He came out of his daze when he heard Bani saying something

Bani : Jai how come u r here…..u should be inside enjoying

Jai : I could ask u the same question

Bani : Oh me its nothing…I just came for some fresh air and on top of it I'm not really needed there

Jai : Why do u say that…of course u needed…after all is ur sisters special day

Bani sighed and said : Its not that…its just that the ceremony is conducted by the married woman so u know I got bored

Jai : Oh I see……forget it and tell me where were u lost

Bani : Lost she asked confused till she realize what he was asking…………kuch nahi bas asahi kuch yaad agaya tha jise mein bhulana chati ho……kher meri choro aur tum batao tum yaha kaise

Jai : Actually to tell u the truth……mein tumhe dund raha tha……mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Bani : Mujhse…..theek hai kaho

Jai was now very nervous as he was trying to find the right words to tell his feeling and with Bani standing in front of him….he just couldn't find the words until he composed and told himself that this is the best time and maybe if he cant tell her now he will never be able to tell her forever…..so he with enough courage decided to tell her

Jai : Bani jabse maine tumhe pehle bar airport mein dekha hai……mein tumhe bhula nehi paya aur jab tum hamare ghar pehle bar aithi mein tumse baat karna chatha tha…….par sab ke samne himmat nehi hui aur uska baat hum roz office mein milta tha aur hum dost ban chuka hai……..par jo baat mein kehna chatha tha who nehi keh paya…….aur aaj mein tumhe yeh batana chahata ho ka mein tumse pyaar karta ho…….I love u aur kya tum hume ek mauka daogi

Bani who was listening to Jai all this while got shock to hear him confessing his feelings for her….she also felt something for him but she couldn't accept it and moreover her experience in the past wont allow her to trust anyone anymore…….she just didn't know what to do and what she did next surprised both her and Jai.

She slapped him on the face and ran from there and left the house……Jai was shocked when Bani slapped him cause he didn't accepted such response…….he was still in daze and confuse state when he felt someone's hand on his shoulder. When he turned he saw……………


Sorry for mistakes.......pls do commment

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